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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
great part
the flashback was amazingly potrayed
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Chapter 17-

You see angad walking and then bumping into the guy

Guy- hey watch it

An- whatever you've got eyes so couldn't you see

Guy- no what about you, couldn't you see?

An- just shut up

Guy- why can't fight like a man?

An- oh no you jus did not go there

They both had angry looks on their faces, they got ready to punch each other, their fists where really close to each other's faces when both of them broke into a grin and hugged each other.

An- kavya man you know I can never hit you

k- yeh and you know I can never beat you!!

An- yeh that's true but where's that daffar has he thought of a dare to give me yet?

k- hmmmmmmm angad don't be so over confidant you never know this year you can lose

an- yeh yeh whatever just tell me where that idiot is

guy- right behind you

an- talk about the ullu and then he comes

guy- what's with the name calling yaar

an- well josh someone as stupid as you wouldn't know that I only came early for college for this stupid dare!!!!! You made me come early and you came late yourself!!!!!!! Anyways what's the stupid dare?

j- well you have to go out with the first person that comes through them gates. But not just for two or three days but for the whole year!!!!!!! But you have got to dump them before prom and that to in front of everyone!!!!!!

An- (cooly) is that all

j- just wait and watch

josh smirked he had it all planned, he had made sure that the first person to come through them gates was a big oversized bhenji with the most hideous looks in the world!!!!!!! Oh this was going to be fun he thought. Just as he thought his plan worked in came kripa talking to anjaly. He frowned but then smiled thinking she was just another typical bhenji. Oh this was going to be fun, angad had never come 2 feet near a bhenji forget going out with one. He noticed angad frowning then smirked thinking his plan worked but little did he know angad was frowning because of something els.

( Angad's thought's )O oh how the he** am I supposed to get kripa to go out with me? She is my best friend and I'm going to have to ask her out. Hmmm I'll just have to tell her the truth, yeh that way she knows I'm not playing with her and I can make sure I keep our friendship and win the bet!!!!!!!!!!!! But now how the f*** am I supposed to convince her? O oh this will take some time!

Preview- convincing kripa

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
wow... nice long part....
loved the way things developed between AK... the fight was 2 good....
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Chapter 18- sorry been busy

Josh- are you ready

Angad- huh?

Josh- uff I said are you ready?

An- for what

Jo- oh god!!!! For the bet of course, you have got to ask her out in no more than 2 days ok. Oh yeh you have got to act like proper girlfriend and boyfriend ok.

An- yeh whatever

j- it's not as easy as it sounds you know

k- yaar angad I told you not to be so over confident, she looks like the nice type but she won't fall for your tricks

an- yeh she's got one hell of a temper to

k- what???? How do you know?

An- well urmm… look at her she obviously will be the type that will probably give me a slap the second I try to flirt with her, can't you tell?

Ka and j – no

An- yeh whatever let's go were getting late

He purposely ignored the topic, as he only wanted to concentrate on kripa. He knew that once he reveals that kripa is his best mate, they will nag him and ask weird questions. Oh how he hated them and their questions at times. He entered the classroom to find there were only 2 spaces left which were one behind kripa and one next to her. He decided for the one next to her and approached her to stop when he saw a girl like kripa but with western clothes on sit next to her. Oh well he thought and just sat behind her. No sooner had he sat down the professor came and started teaching the lesson. All lesson he tried talking to her but it was no use, she was too busy talking to the girl in western clothes. Finally he caught he before she left for her next lesson,

An- KRIPA !! KRIPA RUKO!!

k- oh sorry angad , kya hua

an- nothing just came to say that before you go home come to my house ok, I've got to discuss something with you.

k- but…. Nishaant bhaiyyah

an- no ifs no buts you've got to come and that's it, we can phone him from my house ok!

k- ok now would you get out of my way so I can go join aliyah over there

an- aliyah?

k- yeh the girl I was sitting next to in class.

An- ooooooooooooh her

k- yeh now move

she shoved him out of the way and moved across to aliyah who was patiently waiting for her.

An- god sometimes it makes me feel we're not friends but enemies!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
promo:
you see a school where lots of kids are gathered around a person kneeling down infront of a girl,
Angad: so will you miss kripa sharma go out with me?😕
kripa smiled really big and exclaimed
kripa: YES!!!!!!!!😉
she slipped her hand into his whilst kavya and josh look towards them shocked.😲😲😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
nice update n promo...
cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
sorry guys but my friend is in serious trouble, she's in the middle of a breakdwn, and in this time she really needed me. sorry i will post a really long part on saturday ok. it will most likely have 3 seperate parts included in ok.
i'm really very sorry. please wait till monday to get the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
nice part & nice promo....
so AK to doupe their friends....
good going....
conitnue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Chapter 19-

Angad patiently waited for kripa, where the hell was she!!!!!!! Oh god!!!!! Please help me. Just as he was about to stand up kripa came in looking all horrible and muddy. Huh where the hell did she get mud from? It was a beautifully bright day today and here she's covered in mud????? What the''. He snapped out of his thoughts when kripa snapped her fingers in front of his face.

An- kripa what the''.

k- don't say a word!!

An- bu

k- not a word!! This all because of that alliyah. Oh god!!!!

An- what did she do

k- we were at the mandir after school I was walking back but I when I got to my car it wouldn't move. So alliyah made me fix it.

An- that all

k- No she told me that I can go wash up next to the water so I did up until she pushed me into the big pile of dirt instead of in the water. Oh how I'm sooooo going to get her.

An- (thinking) she looks like she's in a bad mood what should I do. How should I tell her?

k- angad? Angad? ANGAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An- WHAT??????

k- where did you go? Oh yeh what did you call me here for?

An- I'll tell you once you've had a bath! You stink

K- WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Angaaaaaaaaaaaad come back here now!!!!!!!!

An- no!!!!! first go have a bath whilst I get you some of mukti's clothes

k- whose clothes? (thinking) I swear he just said mukti. Oh well I'm probably hearing things. He can't possibly be related to mukti. Could he? NAH!!!

And with that she walked into the bathroom to get rid of the mucky stuff on her.

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kripa looked out to see if anyone was there. Good no one was. She quietly stepped out of the bathroom dressed in just angad's bathrobe. As she looked at herself in the mirror she noticed that it covered her completely. She smiled thinking how big and bulky he is until she noticed a pile of clothes lying on the bed. Funny how come she never noticed it before? Oh well someone just couldn't of come and put it there as she saw no one coming in. she decided to get changed in the bathroom because angad might come in looking for her soon and that might a bit embarrassing. She came out a while later in a salwar kameez which was purple and pink in colour. she saw angad sitting on the bed deeply emerged in his laptop. Typical she thought, men and their laptops.

k- angad

an---------------

k- angad!!!!

an- oh you're ready

k- yeh no what was it you were going to tell me?

An- oh'.erm'it's just'.erm

k- angad say it now!!!!!!! It's not that hard. You sound like you're going to ask me out and don't know how to!!!!!!!!!

An- what!!!!!!! How do you know?

k- huh? What did you say?

An- oh nothing just promise you won't get mad

k- ok

after 5 minutes of explaining angad looked up to see kripa deeply immersed in her thought. He closed his eyes expecting a big lecture about betting but, nothing. He opened one eye to see kripa smirking at him. He quickly opened them both and sat there with a confused look on his face.

k- is that all?

An- well yeh (he scratched the back of his head)

k- well I say yes

an- yes to what?

k- that I kripa Sharma will go out with you

an- (amiles really big!!!!!!!!!) REALLY!!!!!!!!!

k- 1 condition

an- (frowns now) what?

k- you do exactly as I say, whatever or whenever I say it. Ok

an- (thinks) ok

k- ok now are you just go in tomorrow and say (imitating angad) oh hi kavya I'm going out with that girl kripa. Or are you going to do something to make it real?

An- I go for real (thinks) I've got an idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

k- come on then tell me!

An- ok here it goes --------------------mute------------------------------------

Preview- next day at college

Edited by forever_always - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
that was the first part guys the second one is going to be tomorrow and the third on monday ok!!!!!!!!!

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