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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice update! 👍🏼

ROFL! 🤣 MN wer so very cute! Mayu is slowly falling for Nupur, YAY!! 😃
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PART -6

MM to N:- Beta tumhara admission ho gya na achche se. Koi problem to nhi aayi.

N to MM :- aunty yeh to aap mayank se hi pucho. Wo hi gaya tha mere se admission karwane.

MM to N :- kyun kya hua. Main tum se puch rhi hu. To tum hi btao.

N to MM :- arre aunty yeh to mayank zyada achche se btayaega.

MM to M :- kya kiya tune. Pakka kuch gadbad ki hogi. Tabhi nupur kuch nhi bta rhi hai

M to MM :- maa woh actual me hua aisa '''..

(Mayank apni maa ko sari college ki story batata hai )

MM to M :- yeh beta tune achcha nhi kiya. Agar sach me nupur ko kuch ho jaata

M to MM :- maa main apni galti maan chukka hu. Aur nupur ko sorry bhi bol diya. Aur mujhe punishment bhi mil chuki hai.

MM to M :- kaisi punishment.

( mayank nupur ko aur nupur mayank ko dekhte hai)

M to MM :- maa punishment nhi mafi. Main yeh keh rha tha

N to MM :- haan aunty. Abhi to hum mile hai main bhala mayank ko kaise punishment de sakti hu. Meri itni himmat k main aapke bete ko punishment du.

N to herself :- maine to isko music k siva aur kuch bhi life me hai yeh dikhane ki koshish ki aur isse yeh sab punishment lag rha hai. Waise to barish me bhig kar aankhen band karke pta nhi kis ke sapne dekh rha tha. aura b isse yeh sab punishment lag rha hai. Isko batati hu main.

M to himself :- beta mayank ab yeh fir se naraz ho jayegi. Aur fir se tujhe isse manana padega. But no problem mayank sharma se koi kab tak naraz reh sakta hai

MM to N :- kyun nhi beta. Galti ki hai to punishment bhi deni chahiye. Chaho to ab bhi punishment de sakti ho.

N to MM :- aunty sach me. By god aunty yeh to apne achchi baat kahi (in naughtiest way)

M to both :- yeh koi baat nhi huyi. Aur nupur tum mujhe maaf kar chuki ho.

N to M :- per baat bhuli nhi hu.

MM to both :- iss se pehle tum log ladna start karo jaake so jao. Gunjan kal subah aayegi. Uske samne hi ladna. Aur waise bhi raat bahut ho chuki hai.

N to MM :- ji aunty. Gud nite

M to MM :- gud nite maa.

M to N :- gud nite nupur

(nupur mayank ko koi reply nhi karti aur gunjan k room me chali jaati hai )

M to himself :- fir se naraz ho gyi yeh to. Lagta hai fir se baat nhi karegi.

(nupur apne room me)

N to herself :- iss sadu ko lagta hai k main jo kuch bhi karti hu wo isse punishment hi lagti hai. Ab lagti hai to main kya karu. Ab yeh sadu soch rha hoga k main iss se baat nhi karungi. Per main aisa bilkul nhi karungi. Kal subah mera wahi purana rang. Aur yeh koi punishment se kam hai k usse mujh se baat karni padegi. Waah nupur kya idea hai.

Next day In the Morning

(Nupur next morning uth kar taiyar ho kar jab bahar aati hai to dekhti hai k mayank ki mom kitchen me akele kam kar rhi hai)

N :- aunty gud morning. Aap akele hi kaam kar rhe ho. Mujhe bula lete

MM :- Gud morning beta.Arre mujhe to adat hai akele kaam karne ki. Main to gunjan ko bhi kitchen ka kaam nhi karne deti. Aur tum mere liye gunjan ya mayank se kam thode hi ho.

N :- arre aunty jab bachche hai to khud kaam karne ki kya zarurat hai. Aur aapko office bhi to jaana hai. Chaliye aap jaiye aur taiyar hokar aaiye. Itna bura b'fast nhi banati hu main.

(Nupur b'fast banati hai itne me mayank ki mom ready ho ke aa jati hai)

MM :- mayank kahaan hai.

N :- aunty mujhe kya pta. Usse mujh se ladne k siva dusra koi kaam nhi hai. Syad wo so rahaa hai.

MM :- tujhe ek cheez dikhati hu. Tum jaake k mayu ko chai deke aao tumhe bahut kuch dekhne ko milega.

N :- aunty aisa kya dekhne ko milega.

MM :- tum jao to. Tab tumhe pta chalega

(nupur mayank k liye bed tea leke jaati hai, Mayank hamesha ki tarah subah subah wahi dream dekh rha hota hai aur aaj bhi bed se gir jaata hai aur nupur zor zor se hasna start kar deti hai)

M :- tum??????? Yahaan kya kar rhi ho.

N :- Wo tumhe subah se dekha nhi tha to mann kar rha tha tumhe dekhne ka ( in naughties way)

M :- kyaaaaaaa??????

N :- arre sadu mazak kar rhi hu. Waise tumhare liye chai lekar aayi thi. Aur haan aunty ne kaha hai k jaldi taiyar ho kar aa jao tumhare band members aate hi honge aur aunty ko office bhi jaana hai.

M :- haan thik hai aata hu.

(nupur chali jaati hai)

M to himself :- mayank sharma tujhe kya ho rha hai. Sudhar jaa warna tujhe pachtana pad sakta hai.

(Mayank ready hoke aata hai. Jahaan nupur aur mayank ki mom uska b'fast k liye wait kar rhe hote hai)

MM :- gud morning beta

M :_ gud morning maa.

MM :- achcha aaj mujhe office me late ho sakta hai.

M :- maa office se nikalne se pehle phone kar dena. Main aa jaunga.

MM :- thik hai beta. Waise Gunjan bhi aati hi hogi.

N :- aunty gunjan aur samrat sath me hi aayenge na?

M to N :- tum fir shuru ho gyi

N to M :- main kya shuru ho gyi. Jab gunjan samrat k ghar hai to dono sath me hi aayenga na.

MM to M :- haan beta isme nupur per gussa hone wali kaun si baat hai. Tum jab dekho isse daat te rehte ho.

M to MM :- maa aapko pta bhi nhi hai yeh kya sochti hai.

MM to M :- haan. Kai baar mere dil me bhi yahi baat aati hai

M (surprisingly) :- kya ????? maa aap bhi.

MM to M :- to kya hua. Beta waise bhi samrat kaun sa bura ladka hai. Aur tum se zyada wo gunjan ka khayal rakhta hai yeh baat to tum already jaante ho. Firrrrr

M to MM :- maa lekin?????

MM to M :- dekh mayu. Wo dost hai isliye kuch nhi main. Bachpan se sath me hai. Agar unke dil me aisa kuch nhi hai isliye main bhi nhi sochti k aisa kuch hona chahiye. Per agar hua to mujhe koi problem nhi hogi. Aur tumhe nhi lagta k samrat gunjan ka achche se khayal rakhega. Bas wo dono khud mujhe aake bataye k wo dono bhi ye feel karte hai mujhe bas issi ka intzaar hai.

M to MM :- maa. Agar gunjan ko pta chala aap aisa sochte ho to wo to samrat se syad baat bhi na kare.

MM to M :- bas isliye main undono k aage kuch nhi bolti. Aur tu bhi na hi kabhi bolega aur batayega unhe. Jab tak dono khud nhi batate.

N to M :- dekha kaha tha na maine. Arre bahut sari hindi filme dekhi hai maine. Mujhe pta hai kya chal rha hai

M to N :- achcha tumhe sab pta hai to yeh btao k mere mann me kya chal rha hai.

N to M :- (soch kar) Yahi k ab tum kaun se bahane se mujh se jhadga karoge

M to N :- jhagda tum karti ho na ke main.

(itne me door bell bajti hai)

N to M:- tumhe to main dekh lungi.

M to N :- anytime

N to MM :- aunty main dekhti hu

(Nupur gusse me wahaan se chali jaati hai. Gunjan aur samrat aate hai. Nupur gunjan ko dekh kar khus hoti hai aur usse gale laga leti hai )

N to G, S :- Unke aane se aa jaati hai chehre pe raunak, K bimar ka hall ek dum achcha hai.

S to N :- Nupur tum to gunjan se aise mil rhi ko k kitne dino baad mili ho. Bas kuch ghante hi huye hai.

N to S :- hamre morena me kehte hai jab bhi kisi se milo to dil khol k milo taki samne wale ko lage k sach me khushi huyi mil ke

S to N :- ok. Waise achcha tarika hai.

MM to all :- bacho tum aaye per mujhe jaana hai. Office k liye late ho rha hai.

(sab mayank ki mom k bye karte hai)

S to M :- aaj baki band k members kahaan hai

M to S :- samrat aaj tum jaldi ho. Sab aate hi honge.

(thodi derr me dia, benji aur uday aa jate hai)

G to S :- lo aa gye sab. Tumhara intzaar pura ho gya. Ab tum log apni practice kar sakte ho.

S to G :- aapke bina hum to adhure hai. Kaise karenge practice

(Nupur aankhon k ishare se gunjan se puchti hai yeh sab kya hai. But jawab samrat deta hai)

S to N :- wo aisa hai k gunjan hamare band k liye lucky hai. Isliye iske bina hum practice bhi nhi karte.

N to S :- to yeh baat hai.

S to N :- haan sari yahi baat hai

N to S :- waise tumhare band ne kabhi ko ramantic song bhi gya hai ya fir'''..

S to N :- haye kya puch liya aapne. Myank sabse achcha romantic songs gaata hai tabhi to college ki sari ladkiya mayank per fida hai.

N to S :- lagta to nhi hai

M to N :- lagne se kya hota hai. Aur kyun main romantic song kyun nhi gaa sakta.

N to M :- kyun tumhe romance ka R bhi nhi pta. Jis insan ko barish me bhigne se irritation ho. Usse romance k bare me kya pta hoga

S to M :- mayank aaj to fir ho jaye. Nupur ko bhi pta chalna chahiye k mayank per college ki ladkiya kyun fida hai.

M to all :- haan bilkul aur waise bhi romantic gaane meri strength hai main unhe aaram se gaa sakta hu. Chalo gunjan bhi hai yahaan. Sab apni position lo.

(sab apni position lete hai aur mayank gaana gaana start karta hai )

Mm Hmm Hmm Hmm, Eh Hey, La La La
Mujhe Raat Din, Bas Mujhe Chaahti Ho - 2
Kaho Na Kaho Mujhko Sab Kuch Pataa Hai
Haan, Karoon Kya Mujhe Tum Bataati Nahin Ho
Chhupaati Ho Mujhse Yeh Tumhaari Khataa Hai
Aa Mujhe Raat Din, Bas Mujhe Chaahti Ho

Meri Beqaraari Ko Had Se Badhaana
Tumhe Khoob Aata Hai Baatein Banaana
Nigaahein Milaake Yun Mera Chain Lena
Sataake Mohabbat Mein Yun Dard Dena
Mujhe Dekhke Aise Palkein Jhukaana
Sharaarat Nahin Hai To Phir Aur Kya Hai
Aa Mujhe Raat Din, Bas Mujhe Chaahti Ho

(Mayank ko pichli raat ki saari baatein si yaad aane lagti hai, nupur ka balance khone kaise dono ko girna, nupur ko bina baat k bolte jaana, mayank ki jhuti ice-cream khana, achanak mayank ko realize hota hai wo kya soch rha hai aur wo song per dyan dena karna shuru kar deta hai)

Tumhe Neend Aayegi Ab Na Mere Bin
Mujhe Hai Yakeen Aisa Aayega Ek Din
Khuli Teri Zulfon Mein Soya Rahoonga
Tere Hi Khayaalon Mein Khoya Rahoonga
Kabhi Gaur Se Meri Aankhon Mein Dekho
Meri Jaan Tumhaara Hi Chehraa Chhupaa Hai
Aa Mujhe Raat Din, Bas Mujhe Chaahti Ho
Kaho Na Kaho Mujhko Sab Kuch Pataa Hai
Haan, Karoon Kya Mujhe Tum Bataati Nahin Ho
Chhupaati Ho Mujhse Yeh Tumhaari Khataa Hai
Aa Mujhe Raat Din, Bas Mujhe Chaahti Ho
Mm, Hmm Hmm Hmm, Eh Hey, La La La

(ab Nupur imagine karne lagti hai wo pichli raat me kaise wo mayank k sath bhig rhi thi per iske sath hi uski imagination badh jaati hai barish me girne k baad jaise wo sambhalti hai mayank bahut ki romantic tarike se nupur k pass aane k liye aage badhta hai, maynak ek kadam aage badhta hai aur nupur ek kadam piche hat jati hai, iss tarike se kuch kadamo k baad nupur k piche piller hota hai to nupur stop ho jaati hai, jahaan mayank aur nupur ek dusre k aamne samne aur bahut kareeb hote hai aur nupur apni aankhen band kar leti hai, tabhi)

G to N :- kya hua nupur, Tumne aankhen kyun band kar li. Gaana khatam ho chukka hai

N to G :- kuch nhi.

N (thinking) :- nupur ki bachi yeh kya soch rhi thi tu. Aur aisa to kal raat ko kuch hua bhi nhi. Tera dimag to thik hai na. Aur tujhe sochne k liye bhi yahi sadu mila tha kya.

S to N :- kuch to soch rhi thi tum

M to all :- haan. Yeh apne raaj k bare me soch rhi thi.

All :- Raaj???????????

M to all :- haan. Tum logo ne bhi DDLJ nhi dekhi kya.

Everone :- oh .

G to M :- per mayank tumhe kaise pta raaj k bare me. Tumne to movie bhi nhi dekhi

M to G :- Ab nupur ki private property hai Raj. To itna to pta hoga hi k nupur kya soch rhi thi. Hain na nupur.

N to All :- Haan main raaj k bare me hi soch rhi thi.

N to herself :- Ab iss sadu ko tune raj bhi keh diya. Kya ho gya hai nupur tujhe. Kaisi kaisi baatein kar rhi hai.

N to M :- Mayank tum sach me bahut achcha gaate ho.

S to N :- achcha kiya bta diya. Hume to pta hi nhi tha. Waise tum kaisa gaati ho. Hume bhi to pta chale

N to S :- main aur gaana. Na baba na. Arre papa ne bachpan me classical music shikane ki koshish ki thi. Unhe lagta tha k meri achchi awaz hai aur main achcha gaa sakti hu. Per nhi kar payi. Iss baat ka hamesha dukh rahega mujhe.

M to N :- kya tumne classical music sikha hai. Per tumne btaya kyun nhi

N to M :- Jab main sikh hi nhi payi to kya batati. Aur kya fark padta hai iss se

S to N :- fark padta hai. Arre hamare band ko female singer milti hai iss se.

N to S :- bhul jao. Classical singing me singer ki awaz zyada hoti hai aur music kam. Main woh nhi kar payi to yeh kaise karungi rock music me to sirf music hi hota hai.

D to N :- nupur pls. Tumhe pta hai na k agar hume jaldi hi koi female singer nhi mili to hum uss contest me participate nhi kar payenge.

U to N :- Haan nupur. Warna wo sadu shukla apni beti ko zabardasti hamre band me shamil karwayega aur hamare band ki band bhi baj jayegi.

B to N :- yes nupur. Uday sahi keh rha hai. Aur hum 1st round me hi bahar ho jayenge.

N to all :- per maine wo bachpan me shikha hai abhi to mujhe kuch yaad bhi nhi hai. Aur main to waise bhi purane gaane sunti hu. Tum logo ko lag rha hai k main kar paungi

S to N :- thik hai Abhi tumhara test le lete hai. Jo song tumhe psnd ho wo gao. Sirf do lines hi sahi

M to N :- bilkul sahi. Gao nupur

N to all :- tumhe lagta hai gaa paungi.

M to N :- tum koshish to karo.

(nupur gaana gaana start karti hai)

Aaja aayi bahar dil hai beqraar

Oh mere rajkumar

Tere bin raha naa jaye

(sab taliya bajate hai)

M to N :- nupur tum to sach me achcha bahut achcha gaati ho. Itna achcha socha nhi tha k tum gaati ho.

S to N :- yes nupur. Ab to tumhe hamare band me gaana hi padega.

N to all :- tum logo k samne maine sirf 2 lines gayi hai. Aur bhid me to main 1 line bhi nahi gaa paungi. Yeh mujh se nhi hoga. Aur main Mumbai padhne aayi hu.

M to N:- tum padhai ki tension mat lo. Main tumhe padhaunga. Aur complusary nhi hai k tum hamare sath gao. Per ek baar koshish to karo. Taki hume bhi achcha lage

N to all :- thik hai main koshish karungi. Pakka nhi kehti

S to N :- tum koshish to karo. Pakka hum karwa lenge. Waise nupur ab sab itni derr se keh rhe the to tum maani nhi. Aur mayank k ek baar kehne per hi maan gyi.

N to S :- (kuch soch kar ) :- Wo mayank ne kaha k wo mujhe padhai me help karega isliye. Aur mere papa ka sapna tha main gau. Ab classical singer to bani nhi syad tum logo k kuch kaam aa jau. Aur tum log hi mujhe batane wale ho kya kaise karna hai.

M to N :- nupur bas tum tension mat lo. Na hi padhai ki aur na hi gaane ki. Main dono me tumhari help karunga.

U to all :- mayank aur ladki ki help???? Kamal hai na?????

D to U :- Shut up uday. Mayank nupur ki nhi, nupur hamari help kar rhi hai.

U to D :- ok di''..

S to All :- to tay rha kal se nupur bhi hamare sath practice karegi

M ( on the behalf of nupur ) :- bilkul. Kisi ko koi shak.

(Nupur surprisingly mayank ko dekhti hai k wo kaise bina uss se puche itne haq k sath uska reply kar rha hai. Per yeh baat nupur ko bahut achchi lagti hai )

TO BE CONTINUED'''''''


PART 7 - PG12

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
hi annu
just find ur update.
happy 2 see it after long time.
avitak nehi pari.
so comments on later.
plz keep it up .
thanx 4 ur PM
Faria

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
wonderful dear.... loved it.. waiting for next update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Good update yaar, Noops n Mayu ka jhagda padhe bina raha nahi jaata n they always fight. Loved the scene when Noops saw Mayu fallen from his bed n Mayu shocked at himself. Song slection was nice. Both has started thinking about each other now. But they will take some time to accept tha fact. Sammy is indeed so smart as usual.
continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Awesome Blossom! Update soon! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Hi annu
its really a great part.
i loved it.
i think now the concert wiil be rock bcoz nups join them
good going hunny.
keep it up
thanx 4 ur PM
Faria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeee..awesomeeeeeeeee...........superb upd8........issi upd8 ka mujhe intezaar thi.....ab finally nupsi bhi band join karli....n mayur ab singer couple bhi ho gaye.,..wowwwww.....thnx a ton for this brilliant awesomeeeee update yaar.........plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz continue soooooon..........😃
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#80
lovely update!! i really like th way this story is going 😃

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