ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 89

Originally posted by: myownarea

I loved it mads 😊
mujhe ye thoda thoda pyaar pe bohot bohot pyaar aa raha hai!1

u write v well!! 🤗

cheers!! 🤗

Originally posted by: nikki028

tht ws such a sweet n lovely update dear.............lovd mayur convo in d garden n d bike ride.....plzz continue sooooooon.........😳😳😳

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice update....loved it...

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Hey Madhvi Hon me likey this part very much mujhe tere aFF se thora thora pyaar ho raha hai


LOVELY UPDT Madhu ...... mai mar gayii
Entry with smiley waala comment

luv ya for updating







hawwwwww
mayu jaalinggggggg oyye hoyyeee☺️☺️





mujhe bhi practical nai pasand the...kabhi ans nai nikalte the toh kabhi galat experiments k ans yaad kar leti thi
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pushpindner jii



haayye re...nupus n mayu ka convo in 1 word...... cuteee

Luv is the gud thing here
mayu ko har cheej jald se jald pata chal jaati hai


winds flowing aww..soooo romantic...






Maa ki toh ma-hi-ma hai....lollzzz😃😃
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shollyy I did not comment earlier parts







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Awesome part









Love Lekha

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

hey madhvi

really nice ff and really awsome update

plzzz continue soon

n plzzz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: Bushra Javeria

really loved it.. it's gr8

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

hayye mayur! they are awesome! but even they drive me insane
waise toh dono itna bolte hai, par ek simple sa i love you nahi bola jata by god
3 words, a simple phrase n they can't say that!
hmm mayu doesnt say it coz he is guilty n nupz coz she doesnt wanna be heart broken once agn
samrat said he'll grow old by the time nupur marries, he will b old by the time they confess too
unless of coarse we have a cupid, in this case that better be sajan, or akash or archi or cj etc, there r so many ppl to bcum cupids!😛
well i dont think mayur will require cupids any longer
i hv decided for a weird, nice, lovely and cute confession
just dunno where to place it
anyways with exams coming in
u guys will hv to wait for long
btw where r akash n archi? ❓im missing akash n his awesome dance moves! 😉😳
well akash archi n every1 will be back dont worry
when u say mayur missing i give them
n then u say akash misssing
yaar ye mujh bechaari pe atyachar hai😆
another thing, thanks! for the extra scene, im sucker for bonding b/w ppl, n the scene was just that!😊
i loved the small mayur plus gunjan scene, as i said b4 jiju n saali have to bond😉😉
n the small sajan scene was too cute! 😳
hmmm yeah i jan much ke put jija saali scene n bonding coz u said that was missing😆
btw u read the entire thing agn??
the bike n the shawl, all wonderful! hey wait i thot u said u can't write romantic scenes, that was some what romantic! too technical (which i expect after all u r going to bcum an engineer) but romantic n sweet at the same time😳😳
lol im terrible with romance
n i plan to end the ff soon
becoz of this reason only
but seems like it will continue for long..........thnx my exams
baaki sab that i want to say u knw, so i'll (try to) summarize it
amazing work madhvi (it takes effort writing out ur name!🤔)
lol u can write madzz now
every1 does that😆
n thank u for that😆
i love how u write!! but then i have to, ur my jwb😉
jokes apart, u do write dangerously good stuff
have u noticed u stopped using dangerously so much? 😲😲
i just realized that!😎
yeah i kno
dont worry
im planning dangerously dangerous scenes ahead😆
all the best coz ur gonna read them😆
im waiting for vaishu's comment now, i wonder if she likes bonding stuff as much as i do
we do have a tendency of thinking alike at times😛
yeah her post is so long im avoiding commenting on it
coz of lack of time
anyways continue soon (n study too, atb w/ the aghzams)
thank u😳

edit - i forgot to mention, i loooooooved the fb! (as always)
i love nautanki nupur n jealous mayank!! they r too cute!
yeah i kno
lub ya
madzz😳

Originally posted by: Anthara

Madhvi.. Awesome yaar... Mayank convo, bathroom scene,

shawl especially... tooooooooooo goooooooood..........

Love ti

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

awesome part