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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys
i finally updated a part of my ff
im so sorry for the delay
but was extremely busy with exams
sorry dil se sorry

also for those who dont remember black parts r past n blue present hope u ol like it

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Part 20

M- nupur tum yaha kyu ho??

N- mayank tum mera pecha kab chodoge(agitated)

M- arre tum aisa kyu keh rahi ho

N- sorry yaar im pretty frustrated.....mere paas mat raho, won't be safe

She said it with a faint smile

M- too bad nupur, main toh rahunga

N- mayank get lost yaar

M- chalo nupur let reason out, tumhe aisa lag kyu raha hai???

N- mayank tumhe kya pata ki mujhe kaisa lag raha hai

M- shayad aisa ki tumhari body ki saari nerves, veins, capillaries mein kissi ne ek vibrating tuning fork rakh diya hai, n all ur body fluids are vibrating continuously n irritating ur brain...........hence causing a head ache, agitation n frustration together

N- mayank, give me a break, tum mujhe physics n bio se dur hi rakho

M- chalo cool daanto main sun raha hu

N- jao yaha se mayank

Mayank din't respond to that, some minutes later a tear rolled down nupur's cheek and nupur wiped it off.

N- mujhe morena ki yaad aa rahi hai mayank, bahut zyada

M- i knew it, ur unhappy........y don't u do something mujhe morena ke bare mein kuch batao, then u might feel ur in morena...........lets try, it might work........wat do u like best about morena??

N- the trees there, the greenery.....its a town but nature is at its best there, the parks for kids to play.......u know bui ke chole bhature, chachi ka aam ka acha, bauji ka ginger tea, gunjan ke bhajiye, sagarji ke samose, kalkatta walo ki tikki chaat, nani ka banaya sweater, tumhe paata hai nana aur nani ka romance was so cute, duniya ki sabse romantic movie ke romance ko bhi beat karta hai......woh ghar hai, mayank, waha sab apne hai.......i mean yaha bhi hai ......but i just feel so lost here in mumbai.

M- Yea nupur i understand....main bhi kuch din ke liye hostel mein tha.......par tumhari family toh bahut badi hai......line se sab ko yaad karogi toh din beet jayenge

N- arre nai nai mayank its like, mere upar waale ghar pe jo budha couple rehta hai, woh nana nani, as in sab muh bole mouhale ke log hai, humari sabki chhaat joining hai toh hum sab wahi se ek dusre ke ghar ja sakte hai.....toh basically humara pura mouhala family hai

M- oh ok

N- pata hai, mujhe kabhi laga hi nai ki hum padosi hai, hum sab humesha se itne ek saath rahe hai, hum sab bacche ek saath school jaate the.............school bus mein n u kno rahul bhaiya aur pinky dee unka toh affair tha na, hum bus mein jab bhi khelte rahul bhaiya jan much kar pinky dee pe girne ki koshish karte aur woh hat jaati, aur bechare bhaiya girte girte bachte

M- toh ab kaha hai woh??

N- unki shaadi ho gayi, u know in-spite of the fact unki cast different thi unke families ne razi khushi shaadi karwa di. Yaar chotte sher waalo ke dil bade hote hai, aur yaha dekho mere pados waali aunty mujhe dekhke tarah tarah ki shaqale banati hai

M- hmmm

N- pata hai mayank morena ke sabse achi jagah...........woh jheel, sunder jheel.....pata sham ke waqt waha baitho toh waha se sunset hote hue dikhega......but ye toh normal haina.......isse bhi special hai u kno kuch 5 mins ke liye sun ki saari rays mata rani ke mandir pe padti hai n ussi waqt panditji sham ki maha arti karte hai, jiski awaz uss jheel tak aati hai......n u kno wat? it feels...

M- awesome

N- yeah

That was the first time nupur felt something for mayank, who no matter wat perfectly understood her. The feeling of love was so nice.......it always brings a smile to her face......

M- nupur chale.....

They get up n start walking towards the road

M- Nupur well bade sheher walo ke dil chote nai hote.......bas dil dikhane ka time nai hota......ye saare log life ki race mein bhagte bhagte apna pan dikhana bhul jaate hai......waise dil bada hai......chahe toh aazma ke dekhlo

Mayank winked at nupur n she smiled.........he was kind right.....woh bhi toh bade sheher wala hai.....she thought.


she woke up smiling that day. But as soon as she saw her watch the smile vanished it was 12 and she had to leave the place by 7, mayank must hv forgotten too. While rushing she met gunjan, who was wanting to show her the dress she was wearing at the function.

G- dee meri dress toh dekho

N- gunjan abhi nai, main late ho gayi hu

G- nai dee samrat aur mayank nikal gaye hai

N- oh god!!!

G- dee they will cover up for u don't worry, dee meri dress kaisi hai

N- bahut achi

G- haan dee white mujhpe bahut acha lagega na

N- haan

G- dee!!! Main white nai pehen rahi ek bar toh meri dress dekh lo

N- ya

Nupur appreciated the dress, looked after the preparations at home n then left to help gunjan get ready. Unlike earlier nupur dint hv much idea of wat is 'in fashion', but her dressing sense was still nice.......she dressed gunjan up like the way mayank says........sachai achai aur imandari but 20% tolerance...nupur smiled at herself.........after finishing her work, she got it approved by dia. Nupur was then called by benji to c some work as he was about to get ready.

Nupur took a lot of time managing everything, the last thing to be done was arranging the the shagun thal........she was preparing that when she was called out. Every body asked her to get ready soon as they were about to leave.......instead nupur asked them all to leave n told them that she will join later as she still had preparations left.

Nupur opened her wardrobe to take her dress out........but....

N- Oh god main apni dress toh lana bhul hi gayi......hey bhagwaan ab main kya karu??????
the door bell rang, n nupur was surprized to c mayank.

M- nupur main kapde change karne aaya hu......n tumhe kya problem hai, tu tayiyar kyu nai hui??

N- woh main, mayank ........meri dress lana bhul gayi......

M- toh kuch acha sa wardrobe se pehen lo

N- nai hai :(

Mayank thot for a while....n went to his room to get a lehenga......perfect for nupur......n he gave it to nupur.

N- ye kaha se aaya??

M- woh bas ander ek pada tha......
.
Nupur din't think much, she quickly went inside her room......n so did mayank.
After a while mayank entered nupur's room to see whether she was ready to his surprize she was.....and they left for the venue
At the venue mayank n nupur entered together, to every1 there, they looked like a couple, made for each other.

Nupur's simple n somber blue n red lehenga with silver thread work on it.........complimented mayank's firozi blue sherwaani well.......many ppl turned to c them look stunning together.
But wat mayank n nupur noticed first wasn't really the reaction of other people, they noticed their friend aakash dancing right in the middle of girls performing gidda....... both of them burst into loads of laughter together....... PERFECT .......mm thought.
Nupur went to greet the guests already present, while mayank walked to c all the preparations........


The sagai was perfect, none of the guests left disheartened even samrat's parents were happy.......... during the party they said "we'll take our daughter in law n son to london for a special party for some dear ones" ..........most importantly they mentioned daughter in law.......which brought a smile on the entire bhushan gang's face.

Nupur was helping mm wrap up the food section, mayank was with srinivas for lights, but the others geared up for some thing else
Benji- time for truth n dare guys........

all of them joined in including samrat n gunjan.
First one to take up the dare was........UDAY!!!!!!

He had to convince mayank that, he (mayank) is gay, n uday performed the dare!!!!!
He begged mayank, mayank did not agree.... he begged further ....but of no use.....
finally mayank said it coz mm asked him too.

benji dia cj every1 followed......then came gunjan's turn..........
S- gunjan sing a song
B & D & cj & a- NO!!!!!
B- gunjan tell us something we don't kno
D- yea that might shock us
U- something bout samrat

After a long pause.......gunjan replied...
"Samrat will never tell me that his parents don't want to accept me as there daughter in law, they don't like me, coz im not upto their standards, or not fit for samrat"
S- chashmish thats not true, ur perfect
G- i kno, but wat i stated is a fact.

Gunjan went away from there, followed by others.....
Nupur didn't go, she was scared she might weep............mayank didn't go either, he wanted to b with nupur. Nupur silently wept n kept on doing her work, mayank secretly saw her n kept on doing his work. By the time their work was done, all others had left, since gunjan was upset. Mayank walked upto nupur..........

M- nupur pata hai its good gunjan knows about it now
N- yea i kno
M- she has to live with it, im sure she'll do fine
N- yea
M- waise she is already doing well, god knows kabse she knows all this but still she is perfect.....
N- yea (nupur faintly smiled)
M- nupur tumhara kajal fail gaya hai
N- kaha??
M- waha (pointing), arrre nai waise aur fail jayega

Mayank cupped nupurs face n started removing the kajal frm her face, after him trying once or twice nupur got how to remove it, she opened her eyes n saw mayank keenly removing her kajal.........slowly mayank's eyes caught her gaze......she was looking at his eyes intently, as if too read them.
Mayank quickly left nupur, but nupur held his hand to stop him...............Mayank didn't give nupur a chance to speak.......he just placed her hand at his heart, this time he was rather sure of where to place it.
Nupur removed her hand n started walking towards the exit, n mayank followed her blankly........

Mayank n nupur reached home, still confused by the recent happening of the night.


Nupur entered her room, she saw gunjan n diya laughing over some weird topic.
D- hey nupur, kal main aur gunjan sammy ke parents ke saath jaa rahe hai, so we will spend the entire night chatting chalo dress badal lo jaldi........
G- dee tum aaj itni achi lag rahi thi, pari jaisi
D- yea nupz tumhari aur mayank ki jodi out of the world lag rahi thi.........seemed like
G- made for each other
D- yes!!!! arre nupur tumhare dress ka dupatta toh..........
G- haan dee aisa hi dupatta toh tum mere liye laai thi......woh social service trip se....
Gunjan n diya kept on blabbering bout something........n nupur was thinking bout the dress......how did mayank have a dress?? my size?? yea this type of work is done in those areas ......y did he keep it with him????

Nupur changed n walked to the balcony......it was comparatively quiet, but the noise inside her was too much to handle

after a while gunjan n dia dragged nupur to the conversation, dia was talking bout how morena had changed over the years n how much she loves morena n how well mayank described morena this morning.......the word mayank caught nupurs attention

D- mayank ne jheel waale mandir ki kya description di..............

N- ki jheel se the mandir looks awesome......divine

D- yea

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do tell me wat u feel bout it
madhvi


Posted: 15 years ago
how nice u liked my reserved post!! n don't u gav me the same answer i gave u!
so yea im early, im kinda chilled now, took a break from studying toh socha ki iss post to un-reserve kardoon
anyways fabulous part!!
im glad i didn't find any errors!! tho i was sure i wud! u wud knw y lol
so i again got the bonding thing i love, so yea loved that
now that i think about it, the fb is pretty good, infact its amazing, the whole description about the temple, gorgeous! divine! lol
im gonna cut this comment short (need to study!) n tell you that i absolutely loved the updt esp cuz akash was dancing again :D
n it was amazing, n that im eagerly waiting for the nxt updt now
so continue soon

P.s - i FINALLY GET GEOMETRY!!!!!!! lol

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowow tht was cool really love it
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey great chapter

Had so much fun reading it

Thanks a lot

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Posted: 15 years ago

Finally finally finally you have updated.............n that too an awesum part

thank you thank you sooo much madvi........i was eagerly waiting for this ff...........
i just loved it............engangement was great
n mayank n nupur scene was lovely..........
i really liked the update.........
n now please update soon with all mayur.........
ab jaldi se unko milwaoo..........
buhat wait karwa liya hai tum ne yaar.........
update next soooooooon now........ok
love you
Rabi.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update .loved it.
loved the scene between mayur and their conversation.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i was awesome..
simply amazing..
loved all the things in this part..
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome..
simply amazing..
loved all the things in this part..
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME PART
LOVED IT
TOO GOOD
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey madhvi! =] i read ur entire FF.. its really awesum! i really liked it! i m quite addicted to all da Mayur FFs here! and i really liked your! all da parts were amazing! please continue soon dear and add me on your PM list! =)
tc

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