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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: gr8_mms

madhvi bohat acha part tha thx ye part jaldi post karne k liye i was waiting for it..it was quite touchy part but lil bit confusing also i mean shuro mujhe mujhe samjh nahi aa raha tha k story kya chal rahi hai neways post the next part soon


pm ill solve ur doubts😛


thnx

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice n touching update....loved nups...


thnx

Originally posted by: annie07

oh such a sweet and touching part...............i think mayank's mom had chosen nupur for her................lol


thats a probability
ill think bout it😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

u knw when u said u'll copy everything word by word i didn't really think that u will literally do just that!! my mouth fell open when i read familiar words.
i knew im doing that
dont u feel nice😕 main jo bolti hu karti hu😆😉

n for the first time some thing that i wrote sounded beautiful to me, kinda stupid too but it still was beautiful, but then u make everything seem beautiful, thats y ur hatke, so i guess its not me, its u!
lol mishu, kuch bhi😆
tera mood hai kya, meri tareef karne ka😆
it u who r a beautiful person😊

this was such an emotional updt!
the flashback were as usual amazing, poor shilpa aunty. i wonder what girl she was talking abt in the diary, was it nupur?? prolly cuz that is the only girl mayank will say yes to
hmmm not really.......but ill think bout it😆
n the sunrise! i c them almost everyday n they r gorgeous but over a cliff it wud b breathtaking (i'd b kinda scared tho)
hmm i had scene one........u wont be scared........ull feel awesome😳
lol lalitha the car?? lawyer kaafi nahi thi kya?? anyways u suggest a good name for my future car too, ok?
wat?? lalitha??😆
ok u want another one.......let ur future car come😆

i cud imaging akaash giving a prep talk to himself n reciting the hanuman chalisa b4 going to nupur, it was hilarious
ok that happened with my frnd when she went to say no to a guys proposal😛
n gosh its shocking nupur doesn't believe in love??!!
u knw too much now, u need to patch mayur asap!! nupur doesn't believe in love!!
yeah jab all her loved ones left her how can she
she hasnt grown out off those shocks
n it was soo sweet akaash talking abt his mystery (not to me) girl!
can't wait for her entry
well, u kno the girl.......he never named her.......but he will soon
her entry will be later😳 at some esp time

the mishu mayank fight was nice yaar, that sounded like one of the stupid excuses i wud use lol
i feel good tho, im a cupid for mayur!! i didn't even dream of something like that
yeah, i knew, u wud love to play a cupid😊
but the reason had to be stupid😛

now samrat's parents! how can they b soo......ugh!!!
down-to-earth-ness naam ki cheez hoti hai iss duniya me!
hmmm ill tell them😆
good thing sammy is not like that!
😊 i kno
what i cudn't believe even more is nupur just accepted it!
nupur has changed soo much!
ya, she changed for every one elses happiness
and she said yes.......coz if she wudnt, the marriage wud hv been cancelled
and gunji loves samrat

ok dil mein chubhi suyi?? this is something rabbia myt say! lol
when vaishu added the uyi uyi uyi part, i was reminded of roshesh sarabhai, this deffo something like his poems ( i love his poems lol)
lol
but thats original😆
hayye rabbia's advice is soo true! thats y im rarely sad, cuz that advice does wonders
ya i kno, that works, i hv been using it lately😉😆
its so sad nupur has to sell her mom's gold! i hope some one sees her n stops her, that is the limit for me! i wud never sell something that some one very close to me gave me
wudnt u do it for some1 who is close??
ull not give up??😕

i have this teddy bear that my parents gave me on my 8th b'day i still have it, everyone keeps telling me to throw it but i just can't its emotionally attached to me. same way w/ nupur's gold, she must really feel burdened/responsible if she is taking a step like that but as i said i really wish some one stops her
anyways plz plz continue soon
eagerly waiting to read more
ya i hope i can think of some1 who can stop her
but the fact is ki, she has no other options
n u r not throwing it away........but she is using it for gunjan's happiness to whom she is a mother
throwing away is different
btw now ill ask mw parents for a teddy😛😆


P.S. - gosh my comment got long! vaishu ka asar!! lol
hmm but i like the asar
i hope it goes on for long
lub ya😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik

nice work..update so0o0n




thnx all😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Bewafa_Behan

madz..........!!!!

ahh..!! awsome... update.. lubed it..!!
ur FF goin on full speed...thnx finaally u guys r liking it😛😆
ahh..! stupid samrat parents...!!! ya😡
n poor nupur..!!
lubed akash..!! uff bechara rehershing his lines...!! haye..!! lol😆
n nuour dont believe in luv.. agh..!! nupur madz kyu ban rahi hai...???hmmm kyuki all her loved ones hv betrayed her, thats wat she feels......but woh madz nai ban rahi😛
well gud nupur is not jealous ov rabbia...phew...!!!
ya wont u ask y??
haaye.. plan execute hogaya ya fail..???
hmm guess??
asususal lubed the flash backs...!! hayye..!!
lub
RAbbia
thnx rabbo😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

awesome blossom 🤗

Loving the FB and krankky 4..lekin unke present ka kuch karo :)


yes dee kar hi rahi hu dee
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

Omg madhavi ! Awesome update :)]

I was not ol so coudn't comment just caught up :)


thnx lipsa
thnx lots😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

you may be just a little bit deewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one
tum jaisi hai na koyi dewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one
abb aur kise na chaahata hoon, aur kise na chaahunga
tu jo taarein maang le toh woh bhi tod laayunga
kehake toh dekho na karata rahunga main pyaar
you may be just a little bit deewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one




hey thnx
thts for me ryt??😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Oho Madz loved it

I didnt knew aakash culd say so much on love
its mishu who said it, exactly this😊
Loved the way th trio irritated Mayu😆
Waise i wish Mayu helps Nups som how
i dont think so........usse kuch pata hi nahi hai
Sam ke parents ka toh mein na Gala daba doon
main bhi......chal milke kare😆
Meri Nups ki insult ki hai
Waise hop Gun also realises wat her sis is doing for her
hmmm she will.....w8
Aur Mayu jaldi soory bole and Mayur be back toghther
its not that easy
thnx😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
aww huni....
thanxs for updatinggg!!!!
hehehhe.....
acha onto the ff....

how touching... poor nupur... she must be so stressed out... trying to arrange such a grand sagai for her sis in morena... awwww

ohhh soo this is the reason why he broke up wiv nupur? he thot his mum had chosen someone else! ohhh dammn.... misunderstandinggs....

i really liked this partt... like someone else sed, it was very touching and emotional yaar....

reallly lovedd it...
looking fwd to the next update...
love lots
xxxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

aww huni....
thanxs for updatinggg!!!!
hehehhe.....
acha onto the ff....

how touching... poor nupur... she must be so stressed out... trying to arrange such a grand sagai for her sis in morena... awwww

ohhh soo this is the reason why he broke up wiv nupur? he thot his mum had chosen someone else! ohhh dammn.... misunderstandinggs....

i really liked this partt... like someone else sed, it was very touching and emotional yaar....

reallly lovedd it...
looking fwd to the next update...
love lots
xxxxx


yes nupur is very stressed, plus ye toh sirf sagai hai
ya misunderstandings😡
well i guess u need to w8 for update

Edited by -madhvi- - 15 years ago

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