ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 71

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Posted: 15 years ago
u knw when u said u'll copy everything word by word i didn't really think that u will literally do just that!! my mouth fell open when i read familiar words. n for the first time some thing that i wrote sounded beautiful to me, kinda stupid too but it still was beautiful, but then u make everything seem beautiful, thats y ur hatke, so i guess its not me, its u!
this was such an emotional updt!
the flashback were as usual amazing, poor shilpa aunty. i wonder what girl she was talking abt in the diary, was it nupur?? prolly cuz that is the only girl mayank will say yes to
n the sunrise! i c them almost everyday n they r gorgeous but over a cliff it wud b breathtaking (i'd b kinda scared tho)
lol lalitha the car?? lawyer kaafi nahi thi kya?? anyways u suggest a good name for my future car too, ok?
i cud imaging akaash giving a prep talk to himself n reciting the hanuman chalisa b4 going to nupur, it was hilarious
n gosh its shocking nupur doesn't believe in love??!!
u knw too much now, u need to patch mayur asap!! nupur doesn't believe in love!!
n it was soo sweet akaash talking abt his mystery (not to me) girl!
can't wait for her entry
the mishu mayank fight was nice yaar, that sounded like one of the stupid excuses i wud use lol
i feel good tho, im a cupid for mayur!! i didn't even dream of something like that
now samrat's parents! how can they b soo......ugh!!!
down-to-earth-ness naam ki cheez hoti hai iss duniya me!
good thing sammy is not like that!
what i cudn't believe even more is nupur just accepted it!
nupur has changed soo much!
ok dil mein chubhi suyi?? this is something rabbia myt say! lol
when vaishu added the uyi uyi uyi part, i was reminded of roshesh sarabhai, this deffo something like his poems ( i love his poems lol)
hayye rabbia's advice is soo true! thats y im rarely sad, cuz that advice does wonders
its so sad nupur has to sell her mom's gold! i hope some one sees her n stops her, that is the limit for me! i wud never sell something that some one very close to me gave me
i have this teddy bear that my parents gave me on my 8th b'day i still have it, everyone keeps telling me to throw it but i just can't its emotionally attached to me. same way w/ nupur's gold, she must really feel burdened/responsible if she is taking a step like that but as i said i really wish some one stops her
anyways plz plz continue soon
eagerly waiting to read more

P.S. - gosh my comment got long! vaishu ka asar!! lol
Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome blossom 🤗

Loving the FB and krankky 4..lekin unke present ka kuch karo :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Omg madhavi ! Awesome update :)]

I was not ol so coudn't comment just caught up :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
madz..........!!!!
ahh..!! awsome... update.. lubed it..!!
ur FF goin on full speed...
ahh..! stupid samrat parents...!!!
n poor nupur..!!
lubed akash..!! uff bechara rehershing his lines...!! haye..!!
n nuour dont believe in luv.. agh..!! nupur madz kyu ban rahi hai...???
well gud nupur is not jealous ov rabbia...phew...!!!
haaye.. plan execute hogaya ya fail..???
asususal lubed the flash backs...!! hayye..!!
lub
RAbbia
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Posted: 15 years ago
you may be just a little bit deewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one
tum jaisi hai na koyi dewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one
abb aur kise na chaahata hoon, aur kise na chaahunga
tu jo taarein maang le toh woh bhi tod laayunga
kehake toh dekho na karata rahunga main pyaar
you may be just a little bit deewaani
thodi thodi si crazy but baby you are the one



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Posted: 15 years ago
Oho Madz loved it
I didnt knew aakash culd say so much on love
Loved the way th trio irritated Mayu
Waise i wish Mayu helps Nups som how
Sam ke parents ka toh mein na Gala daba doon
Meri Nups ki insult ki hai
Waise hop Gun also realises wat her sis is doing for her
Aur Mayu jaldi soory bole and Mayur be back toghther
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

poor nupur yaar...
samrat 's parents are.....!!!..
please continue soon.please pm me😳


they are bad i kno
thnx😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zummi03

liked it.....it was bit emotional..update soon..


yes i will
thnx

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey dear waooooo
really touching
poor nupur. she is doing so much 4 gunjan
well now i can guess why mayank left nupur
bt who knows wat u write next exept u
btw post ur next sooooooon yaar
cant wait to read further
n thanks 4 pm


ya u kno wat even i dont kno, wat next
but watever it is not b4 saturday😛
thnx rose😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

hey madhvi, i just loveddddddddd the update, your ff just keeps getting more and more interesting, i loveeeeee the way you involve so many characters each with its own importance and distinct role to play.

i lovedddddddd the way you brought about the most wonderful and most touching flashbacks, awwwwwww the MN and the sunrise one was damn beautifull.
i am so looking forward to mayur patching up now na, it hurts to see them like this, both of them are suffering soooooo bad man.
Excellent work, keep it up madhvi.
hope your studies are going fine and all is really well at your end.


hey senny
u always make my updates sound better than they r
thnx😳

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