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Posted: 16 years ago
Brilliant part yaar keep it up!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey just now i read the first part of ur fic n this is really awesome dear. Noops is still waiting for Mayu's i love u n i think it will take some time when he would say these three magical words to her.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Second part is too sweet n a bit funny too.
FB recalled me about Noops dance in party where she danced so funnily. Mayu is so much concerned about Noops n now he is unable to study as well.
Is se accha hai ki jaa k mil hi aaye vo Noopur se, vaise bhi madam palkein bichaye intezaar kar rahin hain apne Raj Kumar ka.
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Posted: 16 years ago
finally i read it
good job honey

keep it up!!

WAY TO GO
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow gud work dear.... cant wait 4 more...update so0o0on. loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was very good cont soon..pm me wen u update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys im back with another update for my FF😊
Guys thank you so much for the excitement u all showed for the coming updates i hope i do justice to them😊
Also this time its a double update, hope u like it.
The double update is my treat on becoming a dazzler😃
Although i hv worked hard, but i am not happy with this part, I hope i dont dissappoint u guys too
Plz do comment or criticise
love
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Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Part 5- Thoda Thoda Ikraar


At the bus stand.

Nupur: Hi Mayank

Mayank: Hi Nupur

Nupur: Mayank kya hua? Tum itne gusse mein kyu ho?

Mayank: Nupur maine tumhe 430 aane kaha tha

Abhi 4 45 ho rahe hai

Nupur: Sorry Mayank woh packing karne mein late ho gayi..........

Bus chali gayi kya?

Mayank: Nahi bus paanch baaje ki hai

Nupur: Matlab bus bhi late??

Mayank: Nahi maine time galat bataya tha tumhe

Nupur: Kya?? Aur phir bhi gussa ho rahe ho??

Mayank: Arre main gussa isliye ho raha hu kyuki tum late ho

Nupur: Sorry Mayank (cutely)

Mayank Thik hai ab aise cutely bolne ki zarurat nahi

Nupur is taken aback. She wonders dusri baar Mayank ne meri tareef ki. Kuch toh gadbad hai.

The bus arrives'''.Mayank and Nupur board it

After they settle down''.

Nupur: Mayank tum mujhe kitne ache se jaante ho By god

Mayank: Nupur woh sab chodo..........Abhi ye note padho nupur

Nupur is shocked *thinks* " isse ho kya raha hai ''''..pehle meri tareef ki.........aur ab phir rukha"

Mayank: Zyada confuse mat ho Nupur, jo tumhe un aurto ko batana hai usske notes hai'''''tumne toh tayaar kiye nahi honge'..

Nupur takes the notes: Lagta hai tumne mujhpe Phd ki hai'''..

Mayank: Haan ki hai.......toh?

Nupur: Toh kya kuch nai tum apna kam karo

Nupur starts reading the notes and in a while dozes off.

Some hours later the bus shrieks and stops. This breaks Nupur's honey sleep.

Nupur: Hum kaha hai Mayank?

Mayank: Yeh pisar gao hai'''''chalo utar kar khana kha le.

Nupur: Arre main khana layi hu na'''''''Mayank Sharma agar tumhe pata hai ki main notes nahi laungi; toh mujhe bhi pata hai ki tum; aunty ke lakh kehne ke bawajud; khana nahi laoge

Then she gives a naughty smile to Mayank and continues: Pata hai Mayank ghar ka khana ghar ka hota hai'''''..aur agar gunjan ne banaya ho toh yummy bhi hota hai.

Nupur goes on talking bout that how lucky is samrat to hv a gf like her''''''..and in the mean while taking out the food too. The bus gains momentum again.

Nupur: Mayank pata hai Gunjan ne aloo bhajiya''''..baingan ka bhaadta ''''paneer butter masala''.banaya hai.

Mayank sees all the things and says: Issme toh paneer hai hi nahi.

Nupur: Haan main toh laayi nahi''.(Mayank gives her a questioning look)''Mayank tumhe toh paneer nahi pasand hai na'..

Mayank: Par paneer butter masala tumhara favourite hai..

Nupur: Haan par woh bana isliye tha kyuki woh Samrat ka favourite hai''.Pyaar kya hogaya gunjan toh mujhe bhool hi gayi .......

Mayank smiles at her childishness

Mayank: Nupur tumne ek hi plate nikali?

Nupur: Haan Mayank, Dusri kyu waste karni'''.Waise bhi same plate se khaane se pyaar bhadhta hai

Nupur realizes wat she said'''but b4 she could cover up

Mayank: Toh humari kal waali baat adhuri reh gayi thi

Nupur: kounsi?

Mayank: Yehi ki tumhari meri dosti kab hui''..

Nupur: Uss din aunty se milke mujhe bahut acha laga tha

Mayank: Aur mujhe bahut bura

Nupur: Kya

Mayank: Kuch nahi continue'''

Nupur: Uske next day

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At college

Nupur: Ye Mayank ka bacha kaha gaya''''.kabse dhundh rahi hu''.ye report usse deni hai'''.kal sir report mangegein

Cj listens to this: Mayank ke bache ka toh pata nahi''par Mayank ghar gaya.

Nupur is irritated

Nupur takes Mayanks address from cj and goes to his place.

At the door she sees aunty talking to some1

MM: Hi beta, woh andar tumhe hi phone kar raha hai''.

Nupur greets her and goes in.

Nupur: Hi mayank ye notes''''.

Mayank: Thanks Nupur''..tum idhar aayi.......thnx lots....ok bbye

Nupur: Ok bbye

Nupur passes by MM and she stops her

MM: Beta ja rahi ho

Nupur: Jee aunty'''.mera kaam ho gaya na

MM: Hmmm, yeh Mayank bhi na....... Chalo toh thodi chaye shaye aur gup shup ho jaye


Nupur: Us din maine aur aunty ne teen ghaante baat ki

Mayank: Pata hai, itni late ho gayi thi ki mujhe tumhe ghar chodne jana pada tha''..Waise tum don one milke baatein kya ki

Nupur: Thodi tumhari burai ki aur shopping ki planning

Mayank: Toh issi liye tum aagle din college nahi aayi'''Aur deodhar sir mujhpe barse

Nupur: Haan who toh hai'''''par shopping mein bada maza aaya bye god Mayank'''..Aunty to mujhe jeans, skirts pehna rahi thi aur main suits pe hi atki thi bye god''''

Pata hai Mayank aunty jaisi saas paa ke toh koi bhi ladki dhanya ho jayegi

Mayank*thinks* : Kya tum dhanya hona chahogi Nupur

Nupur: Haan Mayank''..sachi mein'''Aunty is a sweet heart.

Mayank smiles thinking ki Nupur answered his question unknowingly''..

Mayank: Tum Toh aunty ka hi raag aalap rahi ho

Nupur: (teasing him)Kyu Mayank tumhe aapni tareef sunni hai

Mayank's smile vanishes '''.

Nupur: Ab gussa mat ho batati hu''''.Tumhe who din yaad hai jab bandh declare hua tha

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It was a bandh dat day. Pricipal had closed the college. But all the students had turned up coz they were unaware of the bandh. Seeing that the conditions in the city were bad the princi declared they shud stay in the canteen coz the college is closed.

The gang was there in the canteen '''Mayank had to be there too coz even the library was closed. They randomly decided to play truth and dare.

In the very first time the bottled stopped at mayank and Samrat was supposed to ask him a question.

Mayank: Dare

Samrat: Ab aisa kya hai jo Mayank Sharma nahi kar sakta

Nupur: Ab kuch entertainment related karke dikhaye''isse padhai karte toh hum sabne dekha hai.

Samrat: Tumhare dance ka pura college diwana hai'''.toh dance ho jaye

Mayank: Tumhare paas guitar hai?

Samrat: Kya?

Mayank: Guitar''

Samrat gives Mayank a guitar and Mayank moves towards Nupur

Mayank: Ganna bolo

Nupur: Tum gaoge''''.acha gana haa mere kaan zyada torture bardasht nahi kar payenge

Mayank: Ganna bolo ''Nupur

Nupur: Filmy koi bhi

Mayank starts singing''''


Nupur: Mayank tum kya gate ho by god''''.phir se kuch gaona

Mayank: Nupur??? Sab so rahe hai

Nupur: plz plz gaaona..........ab sab kuch na kuch toh karenge hi .........tum gao

Mayank sings mujhe raat din bas mujhe chahti ho(from sangharsh movie)

Nupur enjoys the song''''.

Later

Nupur: Tumhe main kaise pasand aa gayi''''''.. I mean as a friend. (realizing wat she said)

Mayank: During aur project days do u remember ma bimar thi

Ma ko Office mein suddenly asthama attack aaya tha aur staff members unhe hospital le gaye the''''.main bhi wahi tha''''..college se direct gaya tha

Nupur: aur main us din tumhare ghar aane waali thi

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Nupur sees the house locked''''..she calls some1

Nupur: Uncle ye log kaha gaye hai

Uncle: Beta Shilpa ji ko hospital mein bharti kiya hai'''.shayad city hospital ''..mayank bhi wahi hoga

Nupur is worried and goes to the hospital

Aunty was in the ICU and Mayank was standing outside.

Nupur comes and stands behind Mayank'''''.Mayank is in conversation with a doc.

Doctor: The tests have been performed ''''.. Ill tell u more bout her when I get the results.

Nupur: Mayank

Mayank turns around: Nupur tum yaha

Nupur: Aunty ke bare mein pata chala toh aayi'''..mujhe laga tumhe help chahiye hogi''..isiliye

Mayank: Nahi Nupur its okay thanks'''bbye

Nupur sits down

Mayank:(angry) Tum yaha se jaati ho ki nahi

Nupur: Mayank ye public hospital hai yaha koi bhi aa sakta hai

Mayank irritated sits down beside her''''.after some time he seems scared and worried.

Nupur: Aunty ko kuch nahi hua hoga

Mayank: (angry): Maine tumse pucha??

Nupur: Arre ajeeb haal hai......... Main apne aap se keh rahi thi

Some time later both Mayank and Nupur sit beside aunty

MM: Nupur beta tum ghar chali jao'''.hum thik hai

Nupur: Haan aunty aap toh theek hai'''aur Mayank bhi perfect hai'''..Main toh hospital ke logo ko Mayank ke gusse se bachane aayi hu

Aunty smiles.

Mayank: Tum puri raat jagi us din mummy ki dekh bhal ki'''''.Shayad mujhse bhi achi dekh bhal

Not tu forget tumne hanuman chalisa bhi padhi thi

Mom ko ghar shift karne mein bhi bahut help ki

Nupur:(filmy) Ye toh mera farz tha'''..Waise Mayank tumhari tabiyat toh thik hai tumne sawere se teesri baar.............teesri baar.......tumne...........Mayank Sharma ne meri tareef ki

Nupur notices the entire bus is empty

Nupur: (yells): Mayank saari bus khali hai''''sab kaha gaye'''kahin hum wapas toh nahi ja rahe

Mayank: Relax Nupur'''Humara last stop hai 15 min mein aata hoga.

Nupur and mayank pick up their things and move towards the door.. Nupur takes her hand out to feel the cool morning breeze'''..

She was hanging out of the bus now.

Suddenly Mayank sees a truck coming''''he notices that the truck might hit Nupur''''''..Mayank pulls Nupur towards him'''Nupur moves towards him with so much force that he is about to loose his balance''..But he holds something''.wat mayank dint bother'''all he could notice that Nupur was tilted over him''''.he felt her hands resting on his chest''''.he slowly stood up and

Nupur: Ouch

Mayank: Kya hua Nupur?

Nupur shows him a hurt finger

Mayank takes it and sucks on it.

Nupur's pain vanishes she thinks wat she always wanted has happened''''..she is now convinced that mayank loves her she is more than happy today'''''.

Or she is dangerously happy today😉


Hope u liked it


Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Part 6- Something is amiss or something is perfect


At Jharia

Nupur and Mayank get down the bus and Mayank hires a bullock cart. Nupur is still blushing after the bus incidence and Mayank notices that.

Mayank: Nupur acha hai ki tum chup ho'''.Rat bhar tum bolti rahi ''tongue aur cheek muscles thaak gaye honge nahi?

Nupur: Kaha Mayank ab toh main do char din aur continuously bol sakti hu

Both Mayank and Nupur smile at this and they rest for a little while

They get up around 10 in the morning

Nupur: Mayank kuch khaoge

Mayank says no

Nupur: Mayank ye sab kitna filmy haina

She gets down the cart and runs behind it skipping and hopping.

Nupur: Mayank ditto aisa hi Laagan mein hua tha''''o rey chori gaane mein

Mayank: Matlab he is the hero of ur story (pointing at the tanga wala) '''..dont tell me u like him'''''..is he ur nth crush??

Mayank said teasingly

Nupur sat back on the cart and blushed a little and said: Nahi hero toh koi aur hai

The rest of the way Nupur kept blushing and Mayank kept staring at her.

Nupur: Mayank tum''..

The tanga driver: Saabji kotlabama aa gaya

Mayank and Nupur get down. They receive a warm welcome by the sarpanch. Nupur and mayank were kept busy till 2. Then they were taken to a 1 room house.

Sarpanch(sp): Je lo betaji thara aur thari baani da kamra

Nupur: Kaka sa main inki banni hu na

Mayank: Par hum chalalenge main bahar so jaunga

Nupur smiles and blushes too.

Every1 leaves'.Nupur: Mayank bahar jao mujhe nahana hai

Mayank leaves instantly'''''''..After Nupur has a bath she comes out and says: Mayank jaao naha ke aao

Mayank goes in'''.he checks every door and window twice and then has a bath.

After the bath

Mayank: Nupur tum itne aaram se kaise nahai uss open bathroom mein''''I mean waha ek separating dewaar bhi nahi thi

Nupur: Mayank mujhe bharosa tha

Mayank: Kya? Kispe?

Nupur: Tumpe ''''''mujhe pura bharosa tha kit um mere saath kuch galat nahi hone doge'

She smiles and Mayank smiles back at her.

The Sp and his wife take mayank and Nupur around separately. Mayank Nupur keep on looking out for each other the entire day, but all in vain its only after dinner are they left alone.

But thru out the dinner they were eyeing each other


After dinner

Mayank gets a bedsheet out and is about to sleep.

Nupur: Yeh kya kar rahe ho mayank?

Mayank: (confused) so raha hu Nupur.

Nupur: yeh toh fair nahi hua tum bahar so, who bhi zameen par'''''saap bichu kuch bhi aasakta hai

She takes a cot and makes a bed

Mayank: Nupur ek hi bistar hai

Nupur: Mujhse jyada tumhe uski zaroorat hai aur maine machar maarne waala coil bhi lagaya hai

Nupur moves in

Mayank: Nupur darwaza laga lena

Nupur: Mayank mujhe tumpe bharosa hai

Mayank: Par ooro pe nahi

Nupur locks the door

Mayank at night: (smiling)

"Nupur mujhpe bharosa karti hai, teri parwah karti hai

that says it all Mayank sharma

ab bas mujhe hi usse puchna hai"

Nupur at night:

" Mayank kitna acha hai''''usse mera kitna khayal hai

Bhagwan bhi na ajeeb hai''''main jo kal chahti thi who aaj hua"

She looks at her finger and blushes

A sudden knock at the door

Nupur opens it ''''''its mayank der

Nupur: Kya hua mayank koi problem?

Mayank: Nahi '''..woh packing tumne ki hai kya?

Nupur: Kya?? tum itni raat ko ye puchne aaye ho?? Haan thodi maine aur thodi gunjan ne

Mayank: Matlab saara sensible stuff gunjan ne daala

Nupur: Haan toh?

Mayank thinks " what nonsense mujhe toh ilu kehna tha aur main yeh''"

Nupur: Mayank??

Mayank: Nupur maine zyada kha liya '''''toh tum mere saath walk pe chalogi

Nupur: Mayank churan du kya? Usse pet saaf hota hai'''.morena ke vaidji ka hai

Mayank: Nahi a walk will do

Nupur: Okay

They lock the door and move out

Nupur*thinks* : Ye Mayank ko hua kya hai? Itni raat gaye walk?

Mayank*thinks*: Arre ab walk pe kya karega''''ilu bolna hai '''Mayank ??"


I hope u like this😊

Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago

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