Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

Again wonderful update.I lved conversation between rajveer (I guess) and Dr.Keerti.

I loved scene between dr.Shalini and cadets.

Naina is too much pain.U wrote very well the emotion of naina.

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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful part mana
nair ne bahut try kiya hamari cadets ko resticate karne ki........accha hua wo kamyab nahi ho paya
ali ne kitni koshish kiya ke wo naina ko inform kare jo kuch bhi un hone suna.......par koi na koi aake unko distrub kiya.......ab wo ye info alekh ko batanewala hai.....sahi socha
dr.kirthi ko kyun raj jana pehchansa lag raha hain.......kahi ye dono bachpan mein mele mein bichadgaye bhai behen to nahi..........ya bachpan mein dost jo lost in touch
the convo between kirti n raj is so sweet........raj naina ka naam sunte hi ekdam calm hogaya aur waha pe rehne ke liye bhi maan gaye
aur dr.kirthi ne sahi naam rakha.........veer.....cutie sweety veer
bechari naina kitna miss kar rahi hain raj ko........thoda taras kha yaar us pe.......aur usko kuch to clues dede jaise hum ko diya hain raj kaise hain kaha hain
really wonderful part
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice UD
hope ali ko naina se jaldi hi baat karni mil jaaye
and also rajveer jaldi hi hospital se chut jaaye
Edited by hinal60 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!! Thanks...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Naina ke pukarne se Raj ko kitna fark padhta hai aur Raj ko hosh aa gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊RAJ????πŸ˜•

Naina pukare aur Raj ne sune aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Dekha Naina ki pukar Raj ko coma mein se bahar le aaya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Only Naina can do this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Agar cross connection lag gaya toh???matlab pukare Naina aur jaage koi aur??πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Dr.Keerti is taking care of this patient aur usse yeh ajnabi insaan koi apna sa lagta hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊hmmmm...

Keerti informs about the patient to Shubhankar!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shubhankar ne kaha Dr.Modi ko bulane ke liye and even though she did not want to she called him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh yeh City hospital hai in Chandigrarh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Thank God yeh Sanjeevani nahi hai kyunki waha ke doctors toh ilaaj kam aur romance zyada karte hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Exactly!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Unka toh ek hi narah hai loveology mein first baaki sab mein fail humko toh aata hai bas yeh dil se dil ka mail!!!! Very true! Mr.Beans ke baad dat serial was a stress buster our prof. suggested us...he said u will laugh ur heart out and forget all the stress when u will see woh log medical proffession ka kaise band bajate hai!πŸ˜†

Keerti is hoping there will be no amnesia!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊nahi toh aur problem!😲

Keerti rightly thinks they need to keep his existence in their hospital a secret as she feels revealing him will put his life in danger!!!!! πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Abhimanyu first got Naina excited and now he is unable to handle it aur Aalekh ko bol raha hai sambhalne ke liye!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 well....this is Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan...for you!πŸ˜†

Aalekh ne accha kiya jo usne Abhimanyu ko wahan se jaane ke liye kaha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Aalekh comforted Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Ab wahi ek hai, jo yeh kar sakta hai.

Ali got alert and heard ke koi saboot nahi hai jo yeh sabit kar sake that Raj is dead!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Isse Raj ke zinda hone ke chances aur bhi solid ho gaye hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ obviously!!! main maarungi kya Raj ko??? kabhieeeeeeeeeee bhiiiiiiiiiiii nahiiiiiiiiiiii ...!!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Too bad the terrorist are dead!!!!! They could have gotten important information out of them!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Unhe toh marna hi tha akhir woh insaan sach itni jaldi sab ke saamne thode hi aane dega!!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌRight!

Sab cadets wapas aa gaye hai KMA mein aur academy mein sab ne milkar kya entry maari!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ tumhe achchi lagi??? thanks!πŸ˜ƒ

Their reunion with Shalini and Suriji was so emotional and even Lolita ma'am couldn't hide her tears!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh Nair phir se cadets ke saath kuch bura karne li planning kar raha hai!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Iski toh main!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Pata nahi ab woh kya karega in sab ke saath kyunki ab toh inhe bachane ke liye Raj bhi yahan nahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”arey....don't underestimate our cadets! Aur phir thoda bahot prayaschit ka mauka Abhi ko bhi dehi dete hai!


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey that was really good
and love the way Raj and Keerti converse with each other
i hope Ali will be able to tell Naina everything he heard
and sorry i am also not able to add you in my buddy list
plz continue soon

Edited by prerna1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice update n really long one this time na. thanksπŸ˜ƒ
Abhi ne Naina ko excite kiya aur Naina k excite hone se kahin na kahin abhi bhi Rajveer ko kitna fark padta hai ye baat saaf pata chalti hai hosh me aane se Naina k pukaarne par Rajveer k. parr...kya woh Rajveer hi hai???πŸ˜•
Bus Naina hi kar sakti thi aisa, i mean Naina ki hi pukaar bus Raj ko hosh me laa sakti thi. Agar cross connection lag gaya toh???πŸ˜† mera matlab, naina ki pukar sunke koi aur hi jaag gaya toh??πŸ˜†

Kirti ko liya hai tum ne from DMG n Shubhankar n Abhi too good. Vaise Nikki bhi honi chahiye na yahan.
hey...its not DMG yaar...i toh HATE dat serial....hamare profession ki waat laga di unhone....I wanted to include doctor.....ab apna naam toh likh nahi sakti naa?πŸ˜› Aur meri lil cousin DMG dekhti hai....toh woh ghar me story bolte waqt maine yeh naam sunliye....
At least Raj k zinda hone k chances aur bhi solid ho gaye hain ab jab Ali ne apne kaano se sun liya ki Raj k baare me confirm nahi hua hai ki is he really dead or not?...yeah...chances to sach mein strong hogaye hai..
Terrorists ko maarna to tha hi un logon ko kaise hi varna us insaan ka sach sab k saamne aa jaata na. KMA me cadets vapas aa gaye hain vapas.Sach ko itne jaldi saamne kaise aane dega woh insaan???
update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Very nice....!!!
Obviously its Rajveer...now stop confusing us .....!!1
Maj.Nair ko ache padi muh pe...!!!

Waiting for tomorrow's update.

Thanks for liking the update Dhara!πŸ˜ƒ
I'm not confusing yaar...main khud confused ho ki woh kaun hai, toh tumhe kya confuse karungi???πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Arey woh muchchad ko toh aur padni chahiye😑 Phir bhi...achcha hi hua!😑
yeah will update soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks a lot !😊

BC is sitting with the faculty members to decide the fate of the cadets!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Major Nair is trying hard to get the cadets rusticated!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑well...muchchad is muchchad!

Naina ne sahi kiya jo kaha ke woh koi maafi nahi maangenge!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ She has to be firm!

Seeing the petition BC said uska na toh koi faida hai na zaroorat and Nair smirked!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑bechare ko zor ka zatka jo lagna tha!

Magar uska chehra dekhne layak tha when BC readmitted them into the academy!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Waise too bad they are lagging by 5 months but I hope Raj aake iska bhi kuch solution nikal de!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”hmmm....

Keerti is taking very good care of her patient and is very affectionate towards him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...she is.😊

The patient first thought he was in heaven!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†ab woh khud ko mara hua samajh raha tha naa? par gaur karne ki baat hai, usse ek baar bhi nahi laga ki woh HELL me hosakta hai !πŸ˜†

Patient ke upar goli chali thi magar Raj ka toh jeep blast huya tha!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•hmmmm....

Goli toh Navin ke upar chali thi toh kya iska matlab yeh hai ke yeh Navin hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊hosakta hai!πŸ˜‰

He said he could not tell Keerti anything aur uski jaan ko khatra hai but Keerti assured him ke uske yahan hone ki khabar kisi ko nahi hai!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Why is Keerti feeling close to him??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Kahi yeh bachpan mein Kumbh ke Mele mein bichade bhai behen ya dost toh nahi??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Hey bhagwan Shaina !πŸ˜† yeh meri fic hai....70s ki film nahi jo kumbh ke mele main bichade huye bhaai!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† waise...idea achcha hai. πŸ˜›Sablog wahi guess kar rahe haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

He is behaving like a baby who is adament to move out of the hospital!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳You liked it? thanks!πŸ˜ƒ

Woh keh raha hai ke aajtak koi hospital nahi bana jo usse uski marzi ke against rok ke rakh sake!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†hmmm....

Naina ka naam sunte hi he calmed down instantly aur waha pe rehne ke liye bhi maan gaya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊ab Naina hai hi uske liye important!πŸ˜‰

Dr.Keerti ne apne patient ka sahi naam rakha Veer........ Cutie Sweety Veer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌglad that you liked it! hope you will like the character too.!

So I guess it's RajVEER!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 keep guessing....πŸ˜•

The cadets were looking into the flames and remembering Raj!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”They all miss him sooooo much!

I loved the way Raj had said Main hoon na!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳hai naa? me too!

It reminded me of Shahrukh in Main Hoon Na!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊uhh...better than that ! I don't like Shahrukh at all...( except when he cries....I firmly believe that nobody can cry as well as Shahrukh!)

Ali wanted to convey the information to Naina magar usse pehle hi Shalini aa gayi unhe routine checkup ke liye bulane ke liye!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Interview lene ke liye press reporters aaye hai ush baat se bhi Nair ko problem hai!!!!πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ kameena jo hai!

Ali said he would wait for Naina outside the infirmary!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ki haalat theek nahi hai aur Shalini ne usse samjhane ki koshish ki that she can't ignore her health like this!!!!!!

Shalini took Naina to her room and once again Ali could not talk to her!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Ali now decided to talk to Aalekh but he was once again interrupted!!!!!!

Naina is lost in memories of Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

She is missing him so much aur keh rahi hai woh haar chuki hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina's emotions were decribed very well!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thanks again....

Naina is crying and saying ke woh Raj ke bina nahi jee sakti!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Mujhse ab Naina ki yeh haalat dekhi nahi jaati!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I hope jaldi hi usse Raj ke zinda hone ki khabar mil jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Even I hope.....😭


Thanks a lot for commenting yaar!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....so guess its RajVEER....hehe. KEEP GUESSING!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Well....I luved the way he chatted wid Dr. Kirti....sumtyms he seemed like a true determined soldier while sumtyms he seemed like a baby....who is adamant to move out of the hospital.....awe....just so cute!!! Donno why Mana.....mujhe ye portion kuch zyada hi cute laga....but wats the bond??? Really? U liked it? I wanted to show the innocent side of the character....glad that you noticed it!πŸ˜ƒ Aur bond kya hai, woh pata chal jayega.

And Naina's memory scene was awesum.....u r brilliant in this....u always bring bak those wonderful memories wid utmost care n sweetness. Oh!! thank you!πŸ˜ƒ Thanks a lot!! Well...it always feel nice to get compliments....though i don't know whether i deserve them or not....

Well, now the cadets r again cadets....but Ali has failed to inform Naina abt anything....but Aalekh will be a better choice....I guess. Yeah...Aalekh's always a best choice...but lets see woh Aalekh tak kab pohochta hai..

W8ing for the next part tomorrow... Sorry couldn't update yesterday. Updating it now.

SUMI !!! Loadssssssssssssssss of thanks for commenting!πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Again wonderful update.I lved conversation between rajveer (I guess) and Dr.Keerti.

I loved scene between dr.Shalini and cadets.

Naina is too much pain.U wrote very well the emotion of naina.

Thank youuuuuuuuu soooooooooo much dear!!!
He he heπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† .... That's better!! RAJVEER( I GUESS)...hmmmm....interesting!πŸ˜‰
Thanks for liking the scene betn Shalu and Cadets.
Thanks a lot for liking the depiction of Naina's grief!

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