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Posted: 16 years ago
sounds like an awesome FF yaar...thanks for PMing me..!!
Mayank and Gunjan are siblings...!
hmm...I read the first part yet....soo looks like they're going to be neighbourrs with Nupur and samrat! I'm curious to read more now!
I'll def read the other parts and comment again....do add me to the PM list!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: utfracks

awww lipsa....i ad already read all ur parts but had forgotten to comment...

Awww!! Rachna !! It' s ok !! It happens 😉

okay so here's my comment....simply loooooving your ff yaaar...its just awesomeee....

Awww!!So thanks !! Luv ur comments!!

loooving nups playful char and gunjan's nervous char.....its just awesome!!!

Thanks !! reading ur comment i'm on cloud 9..
please update soon and dont forget to pm me haa... and can't wait till mayur meet!

Don't worry I won't !! I'll add ur name in da pm list okies??
Hahahaha !! They meet t the dinner abt a update later!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hgrhr

sounds like an awesome FF yaar...thanks for PMing me..!!

Thanks nidhi!! Don't mention it !!

Mayank and Gunjan are siblings...!

Ya!! Luved them as siblings!!
hmm...I read the first part yet....soo looks like they're going to be neighbourrs with Nupur and samrat! I'm curious to read more now!
Read all the parts u'll know !! but ur guesses are right,though!!😉

I'll def read the other parts and comment again....do add me to the PM list!!

okie !! will be waiting for ur comment!! Done,sweetie!!
Luv
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Posted: 16 years ago


Part 5

Thoda masti,thoda fun

"ok bhai saheb,Yehi rok dijiye",Gunjan tells the auto driver

The auto driver stops and gunjan goes out of the auto..

Settling the dues of the auto'.She turns

Gunjan's POV

I stand on the building chosen by me..It's not bad..Rather its quite nice....

She then goes To the building climbs up the steps..and having a spare key of the flat..she opens her flat'goes inside and seeing the flat she gasps with pure joy..
"Wow this is so beautiful"

She sees a pinkish white tiled flat with no trace of dirt on it..4 visible rooms.She went around the rooms to see 2 cupboards kept in the corners ,two beautiful beds with decorative bordering and all beautiful new furniture which gave the room a very classy,tidy look..She shakes her head in disbelief and as she was going round,she comes across a sweet family photo of her,mayank and their mom.She felt choked up with emotions.She was happy & sad both at the same time..Tears began flowing on her cheek

Mayank's voice sounds from behind, "Gunjan,tum kab ayee??"

Gunjan brushes away her tears,turns and smilingly faces mayank, "Mayank,tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya??..tears began to form again..

Manyank,"shhh gunjan..Agar tumhare liye nahi karunga to kiske liye.."

Gunjan is speechless by the gesture and buries her head into his chest and thinks how lucky she was to have a brother so caring towards her who took care of her slightest needs also

Mayank says to gunjan, "Shh gunjan!!ab mujhe yeh batao tumhara interview kese gaya??

"Accha tha,"Wo kafi impress lag rahe the !!Answer kal tak mil jayega!!,with a hint of nervousness in her voice as she shuddered

"accha",says mayank teasingly.."

Gunjan gives a slight thump on his back and says,"So'How was your day??"

"Din to accha jatapar tumne jo ye safai ka kaam de dia than a isiliye'",Mayank answers grining

Gunjan grins'

"weses gunjan,maine ek bahut acche ladke,Samrat hamare flat mein bulaya he..Hamara padosi he'.Ok!!!"

Gunjan's eyes flicker and then she goes into thinking,"Kahin yeh wo to nahi"

"Sure,Why not",gunjan replies after thinking'

"Ok fine then"
*****
"oof samrat tum samjhte kyun nahi!!mein kal raat tumhare saath nahi jaongi!!",
Nupur rattles off with an irritated face.She was irittated because samrat had been following her since god knows when and attempting to make her agree.Firstly she was angry tat her plan did not work and secondly she was afraid that the girl would tell deodhar and the last thing she needed was samrat following her like a trained puppy.
"Magar kyun nupur?",Samrat says with a persistent tone.

"Kyunki mujhe bahut kaam he",Nupur says in a irritated tone'

"Wah wah ! Tum aur kaam bahut ajeeb combination he!! Wese tumhe kaam mei interest ka baa gaya madam",Samrat raises an eyebrow, "Wese bhi maharani sahiba Aapko apni tasrif ki tokri lekar anna hi padega.Wo hamare padosi he..Tumhare bare mein kya sochenge .Shame shame",Samrat says giving a grin..

"Samrat !! No means no",Nupur says firmly

Samrat makes a puppy dog face and goes and sits in a corner pretending to be angry and then in his most cute and innocent voice he says, "Phil to meh tumshe Katti", And makes the katti symbol in his hand

Nupur stares at him for her moment.Seeing his cute puppy dog face,she melts like butter and grinning says, "Ok baba I'll go" "Happy"

Samrat says in a mogambo style, "Samrat khush hua",And then starts grinning

Maybe his grin was contagious because nupur started grinning too!!
******

The next day:-

"Gunjan uth jao",Mayank says gently shaking her arm

"uth rahi hoon",Gunjan answers sleepily.

Gunjan wakes up,Takes a sigh and have her bath and dresses up.Then she slowly turns the door of there flat to check if any letter particularly the interview letter has come???

"Shucks!!!".There is nothing here",Gunjan says in Exparation.

She dedjectedly walks over the table..

Gunjan's POV

Gunjan,didn't they choose you??Did you do some mistake which make them not to choose you?? Are you not qualified enough??Why did this happen to you gunjan?? Why to You??Why?..Ok,Now calm down Gunjan..It's just a dumb job.Many more will come and better than it!!I have got More thinks to do like to see why is mayank smiling holding a letter in his hand..Hold it ! He has a letter in his hand!!!

****

Overjoyed,She snatches the letter from his hand to which he retorts "Gunjan!! Kya kar rahi ho mein letter padh raha tha!! Mujhe do",With this tries to snatch letter but is stopped by gunjan's hand blocking his view.

"Mayank tum bohut bure ho,tum jaante ho na mein yaha baitthke kya kya soch rahi hoongi aur tum mujhe mera interview letter nahi deke mjhe aur pareshan kar rahe ho", Gunjan says while scanning the letter..Her eyes stick on one Line in bold

Ms.Gunjan sharma,We loved your frankness and your also very much qualified so thereby you are selected...

-from your to-be bosses Deodhar patel and shukla rai ?

She jumps up in joy, "Yippeee I'm selected"

Mayank answers grinning nd a huge smile posted on his face,"Kya !! Tum akeli candidate thi kya??"

Gunjan stares at him her eyes flashing with anger, "You,You"!!!

And then she picks up a pillow and throws it at mayank.

Mayank not to be left behind respond by throwing another pillow at her..

Thus the great pillow fight starts'

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Hey there !! Hope to get your support in the ff section too !! sorry for short update but next update gonna be way too long 😉


Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oho! lipsa tumko kitni baar samjhaya hai ke update lmba hona zaroori nahi hai par woh acha hona chahiyye....... I loved it as always........I loved d way u ve portrayed d bonding of majan as bro-sis nd sanu r toh mashallah!( hope dats how its spelled LOL).......ab nxt update kab karegi............
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy awesome update yaaarrr! fab...lovveed the majan bonding....and sanu were superb!!!!!!! can't wait till mayur meet! do update soon and pm me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyyyy lipsi !! what an adorable update !! awwww i loved manjan and sanu scene !! 😆 awwwww loved how sammy keept persisting nups to go to dinner with him !!😆 i could imagine him saying 'mein tumse katti' with the puppy dog look !! haiiii nups was the only one who melted !! 😳 mayank is such a darling to have everything ready for gunjan at their new flat !! but he is very naughty too !! bugging gunjan like that !! keeping her aapointment letter like that from her when she has been waiting for it ! lol !! u just keep getting amazing with each chapter swetheart !!! loved it so much !!! brilliant work yet again !! 😃
lots of love,
Naveen
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Posted: 16 years ago
Very good update dear... brother sister love was good..
waiting for the next part.. and do pm me when you update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwwwwwww..........wht an adorable n sweeeeeeet update...lovd it to d core dear....plzz continue soon...n plzz make it lenghty yaar.......

nywz nevr 4get to pm me dear....coz i dnt wanna miss ny update of this beautiful ff....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

awesooommmeeee !!!!

too good
i am in hostel so culdnt reply to ur pm regularly....!!
but keep pming me :)

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