MayurFF-MayurAfterMarriage[Part 12-LastPart-Pg 23] - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dear! i m fats! ths wz really very cute!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good ud.
Maa came back finally. Noopur welcomed her as if she was impatient to meet her from a long time.
Mayu ki shikaayatein to karni hi hain na us ko maa se. Poor Mayu us ko paani laana pada maa aur Noops k liye, clever Noops.
In night they were romancing so cute.
ud soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx for all the above comments...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow dear nice one... nupur still shy haan?? liked it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar
update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very cute part keep it up
bechara mayank ko pani lana pada & bedroom scene was very nice ibut if u add some romantic scenes it look good only just batein is look like normal thats y i hope u dont mind from my sugestion

wn u will update u r next part plz om me i m waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow soo sweet n cute really lovely spcially the end part just awesome pls upload more sometime soon👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: minalpink100

very cute part keep it up
bechara mayank ko pani lana pada & bedroom scene was very nice ibut if u add some romantic scenes it look good only just batein is look like normal thats y i hope u dont mind from my sugestion

wn u will update u r next part plz om me i m waiting


Next part is on WEDNESDAY....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for tellin that next part is on wednesday eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guyz...welcum me!!! i m back with part-6

Part-6

Next morning, Nupur got up through the alarm. She ran towards the bathroom to get ready. She got ready. Then she woke up Mayank.🥱

N- Mayank utho. Subah ho gayi hai.😊

M- Nupur, subah to har roz hoti hai. Aaj thodi der aur sone do.🥱

N- Mayank, Samrat aur Gunjan raaste mein honge, utho na.😉

M- (suddenly got up) Kya? Samrat, Gunjan, raaste mein? Par kaise?😛

N- Uffo Mayank, aaltu-faaltu ke sawaal karna band karo. Tum jaldi se tayiaar ho jao.😛

Mayank got ready.😊

M- Waise nupur, tumhe kaise pata chala ki Samrat aur gunjan raaste mein hain?😕

N- Tumhi ne to kaha tha ki wo aaj aa rahe hain.😕

M- Kya matlab? Maine tumhe time to bataya nahi tha.😛

N- Haan par jab maine kaha ki subah jaldi uthna hai tabhi tumhe Samrat aur gunjan key aha aane ki baat yaad aayi. To mujhe laga ki wo subah-subah yaha par aa rahe hain.

M- He bhagwan. Matlab mein faltoo mein itni jaldi utha. Wo subah nahi aa rahe hain. Wo sham ko aayenge.😃

N- Kya? By god Mayank, tum bhi na. Ek kaam thik se nahi kar sakte.😊

M- Achchha, maine kya kiya? Maine to tumhe time nahi bataya tha unke aane ka. Tumne apneap hi time guess kar liya.😉

N- To tum subah uthe hi kyo? Tab kyo nahi bataya ki wo dono abhi nahi aa rahe?👏

M- Tumne tab bola hi aise thi maano unhone tumhe phone karke bataya ho ki wo log subah aa rahe hain. To mein uth gaya.⭐️😲

N- Hu! Ab?😲

M- (Going closer to her) Ab, ab kya?⭐️

N- (Shifting back as Mayank approaching) Wo...ab...kuch nahi. Mein maa ke paas jaa rahi hu.😃

M- (Didn't let her go) Mere paas kyo nahi.😲

N- Mayank, mujhe jaane do, mein thodi der mein aati hu.😳

M- Kya tum sach mein aaogi?😛

N- Haan-haan mein aa jaungi.😆

M- Par mein tumhe jaane hi nahi dunga.😆😆

He approaches close to her. She closes her eyes. He holds her from her waist and pulls her with a jerk. Nupur's eyes suddenly open.😊

M- Tum itni khoobsurat kaise ho?😳

Mayank's grip lightens. Nupur feels that. She manages to run from there.

N- Ye baat to tum bhagwan se hi poochna.😃

Nupur runs away out of the room. Mayank, first amazed, then smiled.😊

M- Ab mein tumhe nahi bhaagne dunga nupur, tum dekhna...😛

Nupur went to the kitchen where mayu's mom was also working.😊

MM- arre nupur, kaha thi tum itni der se?😉

N- maa, wo mein...mein karma thik kar rahi thi. Wo kya hai na aaj karma bahut faila-faila lag raha tha to use thik kar rahi thi.😳

MM-(Teasingly) Achchha, kamre mein to Mayank bhi than a, wo kya kar raha tha?👏

N- Maa wo to...wo kitaab padh raha tha.⭐️

MM- Hain...aaj bade dino baad suna ki Mayank ghar mein apne kamre mein kitaab padh raha tha. Kya sach mein?👏

N- Aur nahi to kya maa...sach mein, wo kal mall se laya tha na, wo waali kitaab padh raha tha.😳

Nupur starts making something in the kitchen, when Mayank comes to kitchen to take something. He sees nupur working and is stopped at the door and starts looking at nupur which is noticed by his mom. She goes towards him but he didn't look towards her. Nupur didn't know about his presence.😉👏

MM- (she starts her filmy dialogues) Mayank kash ki tere papa bhi mujhe aise hi dekha karte. (Mayank regians consciousness. Nupur looks what had happened and guessed what was happening) mein to taras jaati thi unka mujhe dekhta hua chehra dekhte hue. Bhagwan ne bhi tumhe kaisa pati diya hai nupur jo din bhar tumhe hi ghoorta rehta hai nupur.😆😆

Nupur was amazed.

M- maa, kaisa pati se aapka kya matlab hai? Aur mein nupur ko GHTOORTA nahi hu.😃

MM- kaise pati ka jo matlab tum samjho wohi matlab hai uska. Aur agar tu nupur ko ghoorta nahi hai to tu abhi kya kar raha tha?

Nupur blushes and starts doing her work again which is seen by Mayank.😳

M- maa, apne filmi dialogues band karo aur haan, mein abhi yaha par kuch dhoond raha tha.😊

MM- achchha, tu kuch dhoondh raha tha. Par kya?😉

M- (He watches nupur and forgets what he went there for) mein wo...maa mein wo...

MM- haan tu wo...kahi tu nupur ko to nahi dhoond raha tha?😆

M- (In a slow and cute voice) haan. (then with a sudden and loud voice) nahi, mein to kuch khaane ke liye lene aaya tha. Mujhe bhook lag rahi hai na.😕

MM- (she grins) achchha to tu nupur se apna naashta le le. Mein kamre mein jaa rahi hu. Mujhe apni almaari thik karni hai, kabada ho rahi hai.😃

Nupur suddenly looks to MM when she hears her saying to Mayank to take food from her. Then MM leaves. Mayank waits for her to go out of sight then he rushes inside and holds nupur from behind from her waist.😛

M- tab to chali gayi thi na, ab nahi jaane dunga.😊

MM suddenly returned and peeped.😲

MM- aur haan nupur(Mayank left nupur at once) mujhe bhi naashta bhej dena. (She went saying loudly>>)maine kuch nahi dekha...continue...maine kuch nahi dekha...continue!!!😆😆

N- by god Mayank. Tum bhi na. maa kya kahengi?😡

M- (he again hold her by her waist) kyo? Maa kya kahengi? Ki unka beta apni patni se kitna pyaar karta hai.😊

N- haan wo to hai.😉

M- kya?😛

N- ki tum mu…(she remembers what she was going to say and stops)😳

M- ki mein kya?😊

N-Mayank, kuch nahi

(He keeps his chin on her shoulder)

M- ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hu, haina?😊

N- haan.😳

N- Mayank, mujhe maa ko naashta dena hai, abhi chod do.

MM shouts from her room.😲

MM- Arre Nupur, mere naashta kaha gaya?👏

This helped Nupur get out of Mayank's hold as he eased his grip. She ran to give MM's breakfast. Mayank still stood amazed, trying to understand what actually happened.😆

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Hey guyz, i know that it was quiet big so sorry...i hope you liked it...next part may be near saturday...😊

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