MayUr FF _A Brilliant Tragedy|Part 18\Page118|NEW - Page 80

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update.. loved it....
i think da 2nd one is tru..
do cont soon janni...:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovelyy wrkk sonzz!! 👏👏 aaj finally i red it alll!!!! i never realisedd bt ur ff has a wonderful story linee n u r relly good ryter by godd!!! 😉 mujhse to do line b nhi likhe jatey yaar 😆 bt u r..... i dun hav wrk at present to need to search a nu wrk frm a dictionary now 😆 sooperbbb sonzz!! 🤗 n howz yaa??? long tym yar!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
didd i telll u urrr insaneeeee snuzzz!!!! awshh caughtt upp widd d partsds!! anddd franklyyy!! UPDATEEEEEE OYEE!! jhappis-shappis cindy
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey sonia.
How have you been, so glad to know that you would be free for sometime, have a great time wherever you plan to go man.
About the update, i knowwwwwww how it feels to lose a best friend, i know what nups must be undergoing, its really hard to deal with such a loss and even more harder when one is alone and i am so happy to see that mayank is there for her.
More happier that they realised about their hidden love, mayank is everything and certainly perfect for her. I loveddddddddddddddd the way they kissed, got embarrased, but didn't run and got ready to face the music.
keep it up.
i am bad at guessing games na sonia.
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part soniaaa
that elly story was very sad
but im happy that now mayur r a couple
so 1 of those 2 incidents happen 2 u?
oooh i think is the 2nd!!...
aniway cute part
loved it
cant wait 4 next
see yaaa
love uuuuu
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Posted: 15 years ago
so sorry for the late reply.......
but i wasnt there at home......
well u have written agrt part!
finally they r together......
what stories......
i think that award one happened with u......
loved the update!
do continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
*Please read the note at the END OF THE PART!
Part 17:

"No, you need to put the star at the end, jeez Mayank, have you never decorated a Christmas Tree before?" asked Nupur, as she reached up and pulled the star down from the tip of the tree. Shilpa and Shekhar had brought the tree, and as Shekhar and Mayank brought it in, the rest of the gang; Dia, Gunjan, Samrat and CJ all made their way back home.

"I've never had to." he replied, she rolled her eyes and handed him some lights to go and untangle while she helped the girls put the tinsel around the tree. The sky let the snow fell, as the sky turned grey and let the clouds roll in.

It was her first white Christmas, ever since she was young, Christmas would be spent Aussie style, picnic at the beach with a cricket and of course Indian style with the parents playing cards and the car loads of food, then followed with the new years parties at peoples houses, she really did miss her childhood friends and the events of back then.

"Nupur?" called Dia from the other side of the room, walking over she asked what had happened, "Shilpa aunty is setting up the guest room for us girls, tell her she shouldn't." Nupur bit her lip and nodded and went into the kitchen where Shilpa was with Samrat,

"Aunty?."

"Haan Nupur?."

"Aunty, Samrat, don't set the room up for us."

"But, its Christmas eve, we're not letting you go back to the hotel."

"Of course we will, it's just we don't want you to go through so much effort. Really Aunty, leave it all." Nupur had put on her pleading voice and her big eyes, made anyone agree to her.

"Fine then, you guys can stay for dinner though, I'm planning something western instead of Indian, scallop potatoes and lasagne sound good?." Shilpa asked, Nupur nodded and headed back to the lounge room.

"Nupur, come help me with the lights." called Mayank from the wall, she smiled and went over,

"Are you able to do anything without me Mr Sharma? I wonder how you have lasted these 9 months at work?."

"Well, that's why I have you back now, Miss Nupur Sharma." he said pulling her in with the lights as she tried to untangle it, she looked up at him and he winked at her.

"oi the two of you, step away from each other." called Samrat from the tree, CJ and Dia laughed as a light crimson red lit up Nupur's cheeks.

"Let them be Samrat!" said Gunjan, playfully throwing a snow ball ornament at him.

As they untangled the lights and with the occasional hand brush or the stare session, they made it through to decorating the tree right to adding the star on the top. Mayank smiled and remembered the past Christmas's hadn't been this fun, they had obviously put the tree up, but it was for the sake of it, this year their family was happier, tighter and most of all; a new addition.

Shilpa without the need of a word from Nupur or Mayank, knew that there was something between the two of them, and of course Dia had spoken to Gunjan, Samrat and CJ about Mayank and Nupur but to their misfortune they didn't have to take the plan of getting them together into action. Mayank and Nupur did it themselves.

"You guys aren't Christian, then why do you still celebrate Christmas?" CJ asked Gunjan,

"Ma likes to use Christmas as an oppurunity to give back to the community, to the less fortunate, that's why you'll see tomorrow, we go down to the local orphanage and give some gifts to the kids and spend time with them," she gave a smile and looked at the Christmas tree, "The orphanage doesn't get enough funds to have christmas presents for the kids, so mum and dad help out." CJ nodded and looked at Shilpa,

"It's a great thing, if you don't mind I'll come along too"

"CJ, you don't have to ask such things, you're welcome to come along." said Gunjan with a warm smile, she gave CJ a side hug and then walked away. CJ realised, that even though Mayank's family was dysfunctional it had all the qualities of a loving and caring family, all the things that she didn't have in her years ever since she moved to Mumbai.

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"May this Christmas bring happiness, and laughter, may it fill our stomachs with more than just food, may it bring a smile to last us to the new year and beyond, and most of all may our family always stay like this." said Shekhar as everyone sat on the table to begin the feast. The tree had gone up, and the lights lit up the lounge room, even though it stayed empty at the stump, shilpa knew exactly what was going to be waiting under there the next morning.

"Lets eat! I'm starving." said Samrat as he reached for the scallop potatoes.

Mayank slid his fingers through Nupurs as they sat on the table, he leaned to her and whispered in her ear;

"now, only if we had mistle toe, this Christmas would have been much brighter." she looked at him and giggled,

"In your dreams Sharma." she replied,

"Oh you know it." he said back with a cheeky smile and a wink.

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2 things on the Agenda.
1. The embarassing moments, surprisingly no one guessed right! 😆 My embarassing moment was ACTUALLY the first one 😆😆
2. I know this is a short part and i apologise for that, but i'm going overseas tomorrow for exactly a month, hence me not being able to update and i've come down with a throat infection thats why today was mostly spent packing and resting instead of updating... a little christmas-y but it's December, and Christmas is soon though i wont be there to put up our Tree this year.
Wishing all the readers and EARLY Merry Christmas and Happy Prosperous New Year...
Enjoy!
Love always,
Sonia
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Posted: 15 years ago
me first to comment???
Great going Soni!!
i just loved it!!!
Amzing!!!
As usual...it rocks!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow sonia
great part
loved the mayur scenes
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyy sonia
That was a really nice part
Well have fun there and get well soon
Will be waiting for ur update

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