Ishq Hua - {Part 12 Pg 35} - Nov 23rd - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
~NOTE~

Sorry.. for no update yet.. but my car battery died today... and i was had to sit at a shop for very long... to replace it...so did not get to type up the update...

I am truly very sorry.... 😔

Will update this week for sure though!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 7

Rahul and Muskaan are really happy that they are finally together..They are walking around all the little stores hand-in-hand..


R: Muskaan tum mujhe kabse pyaar karti ho?

M: Pata nahi, shayad hamesha se.. pata hai jad wo driver ne bataaya that ke tum marr gaye.. to meri jaan nikal gayi thi..

Rahul stops walking, he stands in front of Muskaan and holds her face in his hands..

R: Sorry Muskaan..

M: Nahin Rahul.. tum kyun sorry bol rahe ho? Mujhe bolni chahiye' Im sorry ke maine esa ganda mazaak kiya (tears in her eyes)

R: Muskaan.. (wipes away Muskaan's tears and kisses her forehead)

M: oye ye kya kar raha ha.. sab dekh rahe hai' aur waise bhi main sorry bolne main bohut kanjoosi karti hoon.. isiliye jab bol diya to sun lo!

R: acha.. chal chod.. (notices Muskaan shivering a little) hum coffee peete hai, thand lag rahi hai..

M: (spots a ice cream stand) ' Rahul!!

R: arey kya hua.. aise kyun chilla rahi hai?

M: Mujhe wo chahiye!!

R: (seeing what Muskaan wants) Muskaan.. itni thandi main koi ice cream khata hai kya?

M: Mujhe nahi pata.. please Rahul ice cream khaate hai na (pouty face)

R: (smiling looking a how cute she looks) ok.. chal..

Rahul gets Muskaan a butterscotch and gets himself a chocolate icecream..they both continue walking not paying attentipon to where they are going..

Suddenly they hear loud noises, there are people running and screaming..

Some Man: Jaldi bhago.. uss pahad se pathar gir rahe hai.. lagta hai landslide hone waala hai..

Rahul grabs Muskaan's hand and starts running.. when suddenly Muskaan notices a small kid standing by himself and crying..

M: Rahul.. waha dekho wo bacha akela khada hai.. uske mama papa kaha hai..

Rahul and Muskaan run towards kid and Rahul picks upp kid in his arms..

R: beta tumhare mama papa kaha hai?

Kid: pata nahi.. wo ghum ho gaye.. (crying)

Lanslide is getting really bad..

M: Rahul chalo humein chalna chahiye.. nahi to yaha phas jayenge..

RM begin to start running.. Rahul with kid in hand.. Suddenly a woman comes up tpo them

Woman: apne mere bacche ko bachaya.. sada khush raho tum dono..

Woman takes kid and runs off..

RM beign running, but suddenly..

M: Rahul!!

Rahul turns around and sees Muskaan's leg stuck under a boulder..

Rahul lifts up the boulder and pulls out Muskaan's leg.. Muskaan tries to get up..

M: ow.. ow..

Rahul picks her up and runs into a nearby cave.. just as they enter.. huge boulders fall at the entrance.. blocking it off..

Rahul puts Muskaan down, he holds her ankle in his hands ans starts massaging it..

M: Rahul, ye kya kar rahe ho?

R: tumhe dard ho raha hai na.. isiliye dard ko bhaga raha hoon..

M: (smiles) dard utna nahi hai.. ab theek ho gaya hai..

R: (smiles) theek hai..

Rahul goes to check if there is any wof getting out..

M: Rahul.. chodo na usko.. jab takj koi bahar se aake usse nikal nahi.. humein yahan rehna padega..

R: tumhe bohut khushi ho rahi hai.. tumhe andhere se darr lagta hai na..

M: haan.. lagta to hai.. par tum saath main ho na.. toh koi baat nahi'

R: (evil smile) acha.. aisa hai kya..

Rahul moves towards Muskaan.. Muskaan gets up and starts backing away..

M: Rahul.. tum aise paas kyun aa rahe ho??

Rahul still moving forward.. catches Muskaan's waist.. and slowly pushes her into the wall behind her..

Meanwhile at Ridhimma's cottage..


Ridhimma is looking into her closet and choosing a dress to wear to her date with Armaan..

Ri: kya pehnu.. (looking at some chudidars).. nahi yeh nahi.. ye to main har waqt pehen ti hoon.. kuch different pehen na hoga.. kaash Muskaan yaha hoti mujhe madad karne ke liye'

Armaan was watching all this from the window..

A: main help kardu? (smiling)

Ri: (shocked) Armaan.. tum yaha.. khidki pe kaya kar rahe ho?

A: tumhe dekhna tha.. pooch ke aata toh tum mana karti' isliye aisa aa gaya!

Ri: (shy) wo main.. tayaar ho rahi thi..

A: wo to dikh raha hai.. humein impress karne ke liye itna soch rahi ho?? Well baby don't worry.. hum to already impressed hai!

Ridhimma blushes..

Back to RM..

Rahul.. slowly moving his hands in a circular motion on Muskaan's waist.. Muskaan is moaning silently with her eyes closed'

M: Rahuull.. (in her most seductive voice ever)

Rahul slowly moves his hands up her body and places it on either side of her face' he is slowly coming closer to Muskaan's face..

Muskaan lowers her face..

M: Rahul.. nahi yeh theek nahi..

R: (annoyed) kya Muskaan.. kyun.. tumhe mujh pe bharosa nahi hai??

Rahul walks away and sits down.. far away from Muskaan.. making a pouty face..

Armaan ' Ridhimma

A: shayad main tumhari madad kar sakta hoon.. ye lo..

Ri: yeh kya hai?

A: kholke to dekh lo.. acha phir main chalta hoon.. baad main aaunga.. tumhe pick up karne..

Ri: ok.. bye..

Ridhimma opens the bag Armaan handed her.. she finds this in the bag..


Ri: o wow.. ye kitna sona lag raha hai.. par main.. aise kapde.. kaise pehen sakti hoon.. mujh par ye acha nahi lage ga'

Phone rings.. Ridhimma..

Ri: hello..

A: kyun nahi acha lage ga.. bohut acha lage ga!

Ri: Armaan.. tum abhi tak yahan ho.. (looking around)

A: haan.. ab main jaa raha hoon..

Rahul ' Muskaan

M: (to herself) gussa ho gaya.. kaan khajura.. ab isse kaise manau'

Just then an idea strikes her.. Muskaan stand up.. and shakes her head around a little and makes her hair messy looking.. so it looks ravishing..

M: (starts singing a little silently then slowly increases voice) Churaliya hai tumne jo dil ko.. - Walking towards Rahul..

M: Nazar nahi churana sanam... (seductive voice) - Rahul gets up.. staring at Muskaan awed..

M: badal ke meri tum zindgaani.. - hand on Rahul's chest..

M: kahin badal na jaana sanam..

M: tum mere ho - pulls Rahul closer to herself

M: ho tum mere ho, aaj tum itna waada karte jaana.. - pushes Rahul down and sits in his lap and put her arm around his neck.. rubs her nose against his..

M: Churaliya hai tumne jo dil ko.. Nazar nahi churana sanam... - Muskaan stands up.. pulling Rahul up with her.. still has her hands around his neck.. and he has his hands around her waist..

M: Bahar ban ke aao.. kahi tumhari duniya main.. guzar na jaaye ye din kahin issi tamana main..

M: tum mere ho.. ho tum mere ho.. aaj tum itna waada karte jaana.. - pulls Rahul by his head and gives him a quick but passionate kiss..

Churaliya.. - Rahul is left stunned by this sudden gesture of affection.. but is smiling all the same.. Muskaan.. becomes shy and looks down..

R: ho. sajaonga lut kar bhi tere badan ki daali ko.. - goes towards Muskaan and lightly caresses her hair..

R: lahu jigar ka dunga.. haseen labon ki laali ko.. - moves his thumb outlining Muskaan's lips..

R: sajaonga lut kar bhi tere badan ki daali ko .. lahu jigar ka dunga.. haseen labon ki laali ko.. - Muski runs away blushing..

R: Le liyaa.. dil. o hai mera dil.. - points at his heart.. and points to Muski..

R: aaj tum itna waada karte jaana...

R: Churaliya hai tumne jo dil ko.. Nazar nahi churana sanam... hmm.. hm hm.. - walks towards Muski and picks her up in his arms..

Rahul lays Muskaan on the ground.. and sits next to her.. Muskaan's face is as red a beet from all that blushing.. (she places her head in his lap)

M: Rahul.. aise kya dekh rahe ho?

R: Muskaan.. tumhari sundarta dekh raha hoon.. tum pe fida hoon!

M: (blushing) accha Rahul ek baat batao' jab hum bacche te.. to tu mujhe Muski bulata tha.. ab Muskaan kyun bula rahe ho?

R: (smiles) acha.. Muski.. meri Muski..

Muskaan smiles..

R: Muski tumhe pata hai.. maine pehli baar jab dekha tujhe mall mai.. tab se tujhse pyaar ho gaya tha mujhe..

M: mall main??

R: haan.. (remembering that day).. jis din hum aaye the tab maine tumhe maal mai dekha.. tum ek pink shirt pehni hui this, aur ek white skirt.. aur tumhare baal khule hue.. hawa mai udh rahe the'

M: Rahul.. tumhe ye sab yaad kaise?

R: (coming out of trace.. puts his hand on Muskaan cheek) Muski' tum hi batao.. koi ek pari zameen par dekhega to.. wo banda.. usse kaise bhoolega?

M: (blushing) Rahul'

R: (smiling) haan Muski..

M: pata hai jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha.. maine socha.. key eh ladka kitna hot hai.. aur kitni nashili aankhein hai..

R: (smiling) acha..

M: haan..

R: (moving closer) meri aankhein kya hai?

M: Nashili'

R: (only inches away from her.. caressing her hair and cheek lightly) aur main kaisa dikhta hoon?

M: Hot..

Rahul starts kissing her neck all over.. Muskaan starts monaning.. has her hands in his hair.. massaging it slowly..

Rahul kisses Muskaan all over her face'.

M: (seductively) Rahul'

Muskaan pulls him down towards her and they share a long passionate kiss'


Sorry not huge AR part.. but RM ka part itna lamba ho gaya tha 😛

Please do comment!! It means alot! 😊

Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Here is the churaliya song... it is the song.. with rm pics.. sorry not vm..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kmBpMBkvKKA[/YOUTUBE]

sorry... song audio quality is messed up for some reason...

Photos dont start till abt 10 secs. into the song..
Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
weow wow wow wow wow... ☺️
loved it shilpa ☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part!!!!!
Thanks for the PM........
The Vm was really good.........
Edited by Radhika Shah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey amazing part...
so cute..loved the RM and loved the AR!!
tooooooooooo cute and romantic
update soon! please
dying for the next part
Luv Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
Shilpa!!!!!!!!!!!
That was amazing yaar. Truly very good. I loved how Rahul was getting all seductive and then Muski turned him away.
Then Muski got all seductive and sang churaliya. It was soooooooooooo cute
Then they share that passionate kiss. Just amazing.
The romance between them is just hot.
Continue Soon. Amazing Part as Usual.
Thanks for the pm.
Siddhi
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Posted: 16 years ago
WONDERFUL part shilpz!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

It was AWESUM update hun!! 😳 😳

the last part was soo damn *hot* i soooo loved it !!!!☺️

Rahul starts kissing her neck all over.. Muskaan starts monaning.. has her hands in his hair.. massaging it slowly..😍

Rahul kisses Muskaan all over her face'. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

M: (seductively) Rahul' 😍

Muskaan pulls him down towards her and they share a long passionate kiss' 😍 😍 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Kash aiisa scene show main bhi dekne ko melie hayeeee!!! 😳 😳
thxxx for the pm !! waiiting for the nex part!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was lovely! Shilpa you rocked it yaar! Very sensual! I;m running out of words! But I honestly loved every bit of it!
komz

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