Ishq Hua - {Part 12 Pg 35} - Nov 23rd - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpio95

great part!!!!!!!!!!!



Thank You SOO Much!!!!!!

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

hey shilpa...it was just great..everything was just amazing from the song to them in the cave..this part was soo goood..and loved how they tell eachother about their first meeting...tooo good yaaar..👏 thank u sooo much for the pm and do continue soon



Thank You!!! I am really happy that you enjoyed reading it!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow shilpa ...honestly ur a lovely writer ...this part was just mind blowing ❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi...nice update....thanx 4 the PM...continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy
awesome part.
liked it.....
n sryy 4r d late reply...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

sooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet..loved it...brilliant yaar.....Thanks 4 the pm..conitue soon...sorry 4 late reply mera pc kharab ho gaya tha.........

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Wow shilpa ...honestly ur a lovely writer ...this part was just mind blowing ❤️



Saba ur soo sweet!! Thank you very much!!! Im glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: tamanna17

hi...nice update....thanx 4 the PM...continue soon



Thank You! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: RM_lover

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.three

heyy

awesome part.
liked it.....
n sryy 4r d late reply...!!!



Hey Varsha!! Im happy that you liked it!! Np abt the late reply!! Happy that you replied!! Thank You!

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

sooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet..loved it...brilliant yaar.....Thanks 4 the pm..conitue soon...sorry 4 late reply mera pc kharab ho gaya tha.........



Thank You Soo Much!! Im glad you liked reading it!! Np abt late reply!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 8

Armaan Riddhima

Armaan comes to pick up Riddhima and takes her to a Italian Restaurant..once they are there..

Ri: Armaan.. ye resataurant.. zyaada mehanga hoga na'

A: Ridhimma.. kaise baatein kar rahe ho.. ek special lady ke liye ek special place!

They both take their seats.. The waiter comes to take their order

A: Toh batao.. what will it be?

Ri: um.. wo kya hai na.. mai in sab cheezon se zyaada familiar nahi hoon.. to tum hi order karlo..

Armaan makes the order.. and they settle to talk..

Rahul Muskaan

Coming out of their long passionate kiss..

R: (smiling mischieviously) wah.. yeh kya tha Muski??

Muskaan feeling really shy.. looks away..

Rahul takes her face in his hands..

R: Muskaan.. mai tumhe bohot pyar karta hoon.. aur mai chahta hoon ke jo bhi tu kare.. wo teri marzi se kare.. mere liye nahi..

M: (looks into his eyes.. she can see the truthfulness in them) mujhe pata hai Rahul..

Rahul gets up and goes and sets some hay he found on the other side.. so that Muskaan could sleep..

R: chalo Muskaan.. ab so jayo.. bohut raat ho gayi hai..

Rahul is about to get up and go sleep on the other side..

M: Rahul.. please yaha betho na.. mujhe.. wo..

R: (smiles knowingly) Pata hai Muskaan.. tujhe andhera se darr lagta hai.. subhe subhe Punjaab ki sherni raat ko bheegi billi banjati hai..

M: haha.. very funny Rahul.. mujhe kuch darr nahi lagta.. mai toh bus yuhi..

R: haan haan.. tu toh bas yuhi.. ab chup chap so jaa..

Muskaan rests her head in Rahul lap.. and drifts off to sleep while Rahul is softly caressing her hair..Rahul too soon drift off to sleep in that position..

Armaan Ridhimma

After their lovely dinner.. AR go for a walk in the moonlight.. After walking in silence for a long time..

A: Ridhimma.. kya baat hai.. aaj bohut quiet ho.. kuch baat hai kya?

Ri: wo.. Armaan.. wo Muskaan Rahul ke peeche gayi thi na.. abhi tak wapas nahi aaye dono..

A: o .. mai to batana hi bhool gaya.. Rahul ka phone aaya tha.. usne bataya ki sab theek ho gaya.. aur raat ko wapas aayenge..

Ri: Armaan pehle bataana chahiye tha na.. mei kitni darr gayi thi.. mujhe toh laga kuch bura ho gaya.. tum bhi na Armaan.. aise koi.. (she was just going on and on)

Armaan.. stands in front of Ridhimma and puts his hands on her shoulder..

A: Riddhima.. chill.. kuch nahi hua.. they are fine.. calm down..

Ri: wo mai.. I was just really worried.. ab theek hoon..

A: (puts his hands on either side of her face) You sure na?

Ri: Ya Armaan.. thanks for being there..

A: Always!

Ri: ek aur baat kehni thi tumse..

A: wo kya?

Ri: Armaan.. maine bohut socha.. aur mai bhi tumse..

A: mujhse?

Ri: Mai bhi tumse pyaar karne lagi hoon..

Armaan is too happy for words.. he pulls Riddhimma into a bear hug..

Next Morning ' Rahul Muskaan

Rahul wakes up first.. he notices Muskaan.. sleeping.. she looks so peaceful while sleeping.. her curly locks are all over the place.. Rahul slowly moves her hair.. as to not awaken her.. Rahul is just lost in her simple yet ravishing beauty.. (RM background music)

Slowly the light rays start creeping in from the tiny apertures in the cave roof.. One of them crosses Muskaan's face causing her to wake.. As she slowly opens her eyes.. she sees Rahul looking at her with the utmost love in his eyes..

M: Good Morning jaan..

R: arey wah.. aaj bohut pyaar aa raha hai mujh par.. jaan

M: tumhe acha nahi laga kya? (Laughingly)

R: haan.. mujhe toh wo dusre waale naam ki aadat jo padh gayi hai..

M: acha.. phir Good Morning mere kaan khaajure'

R: haan.. yeh hui na Muskaan wali baat'

Just then they hear some sounds outside so they go closer to check.. as they go closer.. the hear people's voices..

Voice: Koi hai andar??

Rahul: haan hum hai.. please humein bahar aane mai madad ki jiye..

Soon the people outside get to work and after a long time they remove the boulder..

R: Bohut dhanyavaad ji..

Man: oye koi problem nahi..

Rahul and Muskaan. Make their way down the mountain.. they had to get down as soon as possible cause Armaan and Riddhimma would be worried about their long disappearance.. On the way..

M: Rahul mai aur nahi chal sakti.. (panting)

R: Muski chalna padega.. yaha koi gaadi nahi milne waali..

Muskaan sits down in the middle of the path..

M: nahi.. mai nahi chal sakti..

R: Muskaan drama band kar.. mujhe pata hai tu kitni nautanki hai.. ab utho..

M: Rahul.. mujhe uthao na.. pleeeaaase (making puppy dog face)

R: (not able to resist her cute request) Theek hai..

Rahul is about to pick her up.. but Muskaan jumps onto his back..

R: Muskaan tum bhi na..

M: chalo.. chalo'

R: oye.. mai koi ghoda nahi hoon..

Muskaan just giggle thouroughly enjoying all this..They continue talking..

After a long walk they finally reach the foot of the hill..

R: (panting) Muskaan.. ab toh niche utro.. mera kamar toot jayega..

M: (getting off his back).. Kya tumne mujhe moti bola?

R: haan.. saach bolne mei koi problem hai kya?

M: oye.. ye meri problem thodi hai.. problem hai ki tujme itni shakti nahi hai.. ullu de phatte (she goes on)

R: ye lo ek minute iski chappar chappar shuru hogayi toh phirse muh band karne ki naam hi nahi leti hai..

Rahul catches Muskaan's hand and takes her along with him.. towards the cottages..

When they reach the cottage.. they tell Armaan and Riddimma what happened with them.. later

A: So Lovebirds are finally together huh? So aaj ke liye kya plans?

Ri: Shopping jaate hai!

M: Haan.. shopping bohut mazza aayega..

R A: shopping.. nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.. shopping bilkul nahi..

M:Nahi common guys..

No matter how much the guys refused they were dragged into the shopping plan.. later on at the mall..In the clothes department..

Muskaan sees a cute dress..

M: Ridzi yeh kaisa hai?

Ri: o wow Muskaan yeh bohut cute lage gat um par.. Rahul toh gaya..

M: (blushes) chup.. mai try kar ke aati hoon..

Muskaan goes inside a trial room.. she puts on the dress.. but then realizes that she is not able to tie it up..

M: arey yaar.. yeh bhi na.. Ridzi..(loudly)

Meanwhile Rahul is walking by and comes towards the door hearing Muskaan's voice..

R: Muskaan.. tum?

M: Rahul.. tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Ye ek ladies trial room hai..

R: toh tum anadar kya kar rahi ho?

M: Kya matlab..

R: agar Ladies trial room hai toh Meri Jungli Billi kya kar rahi hai andar?

M: Kya kaha.. Rahul ke bache.. mai jungle billi hoon?(Muskaan comes out.. after she changed back into her normal attire)

R: haan Jungli billi toh aur kya.. jab dekho mujhe maar ne ko mauka nahi chodti ho..

Muskaan.. storms off .. she is enjoying this.. but thoda apna mazza bhi chakana tha!

Rahul follows after Muskaan..

R: Muskaan.. dikha tu kaunsi dress le rahi hai.. (M Ignored)

R: arey Muski.. baat to sun.. (Muskaan walks off ignoring Rahul.. but smiling to herself)

R: (to himself) ab isko kaise manau.. kuch to sochna padega Rahul.. isko manana.. assan nahi hoga..

Precap: Rahul Manaofy Muskaan..

Sorry abt no AR precap.. Im not sure myself..


Sorry abt boring part guys.. Hopefully it will get better...

To be continued'..


Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Finally you updated.
i was waiting..
Great part!!!
Continue soon.............
Thanks for the PM...
Edited by Radhika Shah - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
haha yes.. finally..

haha you really were waiting huh..

you read as soon as u got pm 😆

Thank You Radhika!!!

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