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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was very nice part
lovely lovely
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52

part 20

kar= kripa when are u gonna get ur exam results

k=tomorrow but why

kar= because i thought if u do good in ur exams than i will send u to the uk and usa for a holiday of 2 weeks

k= really bhaiya 😃

kar= ha magar only if u do good

kripa was really happy she needed a holiday from all the stress in life

the phone rang and kripa picked it up

k= hello

r= kripa

k= ha rani bhol

r= i thought why dont we go shopping coz its prom night the day after tomorrow.

k= i completly forgot

r= hey kripa angads coming to mumbai

k= what? when? why? he didn't tell me 😕

r= calm down kripa.he hassome shows in mumbai he should be coming tomorrow or the day after

k= angad didnt tell me anything

r= i guess he wanted to give u a suprise

k= rani i have a suprise for u also

r= really tell me

k= bhaiya said if i do good in my exams i will go to the uk and us for holiday

r= wowhey if bhaiya lets me than i will go aswell

k=okay

than kripa hangs up and goes to her room

the next morning......

k= good morning ma good morning bhaiya

g= good morning beta

kar= good morning kripa

g= kripa have ur breakfas i have made ur fav parata's

k= really i will have 2 there my fav thanks mum

kar= ha kripa keep on eating ur gonna get fat n if u get fat who will marry u

k= mere to shaadi ho jaye gi magar bhaiya aap shaadi kyon nahi karte mujhe to ek bhabi chaye.

kar= kripa ur getting late go to collage

k= bye bhaiya bye mum 😉

g/kar=bye

kripa goes to collage class hadn't started so she came a bit early she saw rani talking to some of her friends.

k= hey rani come lets bunk school and go shopping

r= but we are gonna get our results today

k= so what we will get our resuls in first period than after that we wil bunk okay

r= ha magar..why are we going shopping

k= tomorrow it prom ur the one who told me

r= chal

kripa and rani went to there class and there exam results were given to them kripa was nervous and she didnt open her envolope.

k= rani aab chale shopping

r= chal

kripa and rani got inside kripas car and kripa started driving to the shopping center they both went inside there fav shop there kripa and rani saw mishti.

r= oh....no what is pritvi bhaiya doing here if he knows that i buncked collage he is gonna kill me.😕

k= chill rani come lets tell him that u passed.

r= are u mad come lets go to another shop i dont know what he is doing here anyways

k= rani in this shop there are clothes for boys aswell he might be buying clothes for him self and if he sees u he wont kill u.😆

r= kripa come lets go

k=okay

Edited by tangina r - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
i will con later in the day
😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
part 21

kripa and rani went to another shop

r= hey kripa open ur envolope ANd see what results u have got

k= no yaar i am very nervouse i couldnt even consentrate when doing the exams i must hav go bad results

r= let me open it than i want to see what u got

kripa got an envolope out of her hand bag and gave it to rani, rani opened it and stared at kripa blankly

k= kya hua rani

rani gave no responce kripa snached the results from ranis han and read it

k= wow i haev got the best results in the collage

r= yeah kripa congrats

k= thanks

r= call ur house to tell them about ur results and tell them to get ur tickets ready 😃

kripa called her house

k= hello ma

g= ha kripa beta

k= mum i havw got the best results in the whole collage

g= really 😛

k= ha mum

g= congrats beta

k= thanks mum

kripa hang up and called her brothers mobile

k= bhaiya

kar= ha kripa bolo

k= bhaiya mere london aur new york ke tickets ready karo

kar= matlab

k= mera matlab that i have done good in my exams

kar= really

k= ha i dont know why its so hard for everyone to beleive that i done good even mum was suprised

kar= okay kripa u come home now and i will fix the tickets

kripa hang up and brought a dress for the party and on the way she droped rani
Edited by tangina r - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
part 22

karthik was in his office although he told kripa to go home and meet him. kripa knew that he would be in his office in the office when she went in all the people working got up kripa told them to sit and she went to her brothers cabin.

k= hi bhaiya

kar= hi kripa beto

k= thanks

kar= show me ur results

k= kya bhaiya u dont trust me

kar= no show me ur results than i will fix the tickets

kripa gave karthik the results and he smiled

kar= 😊

karthik called the travel agency and told them to fix her ticket

kripa was happy and she went home and called rani and told her to ask pritvi if she could come with her pritvi was okay with it but he wanted mishti to come t=with them because they need a grown up kripa said okay

the next day it was friday and kripa's flight was on sunday so she didn't go to collage because she was busy packing angad was gonna come aswell to mumbai on friday but she didnt know when angad had a concert on saturday.

kar= kripa i have fixed ur tickets and visa and what hotels ur gonna stay in at london and new york

k= thanks bhaiya

rani came over in the evening to kripas place and they both got ready together for the party.

r= wow kripa u look really good in that dress

k= thanks same 2 u shall we go coz its 7.30 already

r=chal

than rani n kripa went to the prom but they didn't know that they would find a suprise after they arrive.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
part 23

k= wow the decorations are really nice na

r= ha

k= i am thirsty i am gonna get a drink

r=okay

while kripa went to get a drink a boy asked rani for a dance he was ranis friend

k= 😊

than the host started talking......
good evening everyone and thank u for coming to the prom tonight now we all are gonna play a game i will play some music and put the lights off than i will off the music and put the lights on and u have to dance with the person in fron of u okay hase everyone understood the rules.

than th music was on and lights of rani and kripa were excited about who they are gonna dance with.

the music got off and everyone froze the lights got on and kripa was siprised to see angad in front of her.

k= angad tum yahaan

a=kyon can't i come her

k= ha....magar

a= rani ne bola ke aaj prom hai so i came here lets go somewhere else and talk everyone is dancing and were in the middle of the dance floor.

k=chalo

angad and kripa went and sat down near a table while rani was dancing she didnt realize that angad had come.

a= kal mera ek show hai

k= well angad an sunday i am going to london with rani and mishti

a= mujhe pata hai

k= who told u

a=mujhe sab pata hai aur yeh bhi pata hai ke ur gonnago to the us after london and ur holiday is for 2 weeks

k= okay

a= waise kripa i am going to london and new york aswel but after u i will go next week and by that time u will be in us

k= but why are u going

a= well i have a few shows here in mumbai so i will stay here for a few days than i have some shows in hydrabad, delhi and kolkata i will go to london after the kolkata shows.

rani was looking for kripa and she saw kripa with angad

r= arre angad tum yahaan

a= tum ne to pataya tha ke aaj prom hai

r= oh yeah i forgot

a=waise u all have to come to my show tomorrow

r= we will

than the host called angad on the stage to sing a song while singing kripa got a call on her phone

k= hello

kar= kripa enjoying ur self

k= ha bhaiya

kar= i can hear angads voice have they played his song

k= nahi bhaiya angad aya hai

kar= really

k= ha aur he is singing

kar= than kripa invite him for lunch in our house tomorrow

k= ha i will magar kyon?

kar= u know i am a fan of his so i wanna meet him

k= okay bhaiya

and kripa hang up

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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
please continue.. 👏

Does Kartik knows about Angad and kripa????
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
karthik doesbt know about angad and kripa he is just angads fan
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59

part 24

angad droped kripa home and rani went bye herself coz she had some work with her other friends.
in the car.................

a= so kripa how is ur mum and brother

k= there doin good and how is aaliya, unce and aunt i really miss them especialy aaliya

a= there all good they always talk about u and kripa i forgot heres ur phone

angad gave kripa her phone

a= hey tell me the way to ur house i dont know the streets of mumbai really well

kripa told angad the direction to her house they went half way when angad saide something

a= u know kripa i love u alot

k=hmmmmmmmmm

a=and we hardly get to meet each other

k=ha woh to hai

a= come lets have some coffee

k=now

a=why any problem

k=no no but why now

a= look now i have come to mumabai so i thought we will be able to meet each other and get to know each other better but when i came here i found out that ur going abroad so lets talk now to now each other better

k= okay there is a nice cafe near my house lets go there

a= okay

angad took kripa to the cafe near kripas house there were lots of peole in the cafe coz it was one of the most popular cafes in mumbai since angad was a rockstar everyone recodnised him and aske for autographs he was given a special tabvle where he could sit next to kripa and talk.

k= angad bhaiya ne tumhe kal lunch pe bolaya hai

a= kya mera matlab kyon

k=arre dont get soo scared he is just a fan of urs and he wants to meet u thta all

a= ur bro is a fan of mine i thought ur bro would be those serious business man types i never thought he even listens to music

k= u havent even seen my brother and u have made a image of him in ur mind

a= well thats how i am

than a waiter came and asked for there order

a= kripa what do u want

k=hmmmm

kripa fliped through the menue

k=one coffee thats all

a= a coffee for me aswell

the waiter said it will be ready in 2 min and he went away

a= kripa do u come here often

k= yeah its my fav place i always come here when i am bored or sad or even in the mood of having fun me and rani really like it here.

a= do u know rani always used to talk about u and a cafe i think its this cafe coz she said u 2 always used to have lots of fun in a cafe coz u guys used to chill

k= what do u meen used to we still do when i was a little kid this cafe was made n now i have grown up and its still here

than the waiter came with the coffees and put them down on the table

waiter= any thing else sir and ma'am

k= no thanks

a= nothing else

k= angad is everything okay between u mishti and pritvi

a= yeah everything is fine but why

k= no i am just asking

kripa had some of her coffe and looked at her watch it was 10.30pm

k= angad i need to go home now coz it getting late

a= okay come

k= where are u staying

a= hotel

k= okay but will u b able to go by your self coz u dont know the way

a= it okay i will manage

than angad droped kripa home

k=hey dont forget to come for lunch tomorrow

a= how can i

k= bye

a= i love u and bye

k= 😊

Edited by tangina r - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
i am sorry guys when i started the fan-fic i would write about 2 times a day but than it was my school holidays but now scholl has opened so i might not be able to post my parts on some days or some days i will only post one part coz i have my exams coming up so i have to consentrate thanks.

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