Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey i just read the part one of ur story n this was really cool.😊 😊 😊😭 😭 😭 This is the problem of our society that people never think using their minds. Naina was alone walking on the road in this late night when that goons spotted her n she tried to almost run away from there. Naina was punished for the crime which she didn't do neither his bro.
But her misfortune was with her n they started chasing her n trapped her.😡 😡 😡 Naveen also felt her pain being her bro but by the grace of God Raj came there on perfect timing 👏 👏 👏 otherwise whatever happens we can never think of that. Raj saved her n gave lift too her too. 😊 😊 😊 But y did Naina not tell her real name to Raj? 😕 😕 😕 When Raj told her that he is Rajveer Singh Shekhawat? 😕 😕 😕
nice story, n good part. 👏 👏 👏

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Now i read the third part n the thing which is confusing me the most is Raj's condition.😕 😕 😕 People around him wrongly assume that she is his wife but she is not but y Raj wanted her to act as his wife?😕 😕 😕 What's the need of it? 😕 😕 😕
Shewta Tiwari is a good selection in the role of massi. 👏 👏 👏 I like her so much.😃 😃 😃 So she is Raj's massi good. Naveen is missing his sweet sis. 😭 😭 😭
Flashback was cute.😃 😃 😃
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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
I read all the parts and they were just wonderful.U r great writer.
Waiting for next part.

Thank you for the encouragement....

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: nisha1984
awesome part................
please continue soon....................

Thank you for the encouragement....

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sweet_shona
nice part...
naina did shopping n raj paid for it...so sweet...
raj asked naina to put on mangalshutra n shindoor which reminds her old convo with her bro..😒
so finally raj-naina reached to kma.... navin felt naina's presence...!!!!
naina also felt something...
so raj will meet his old friends again..cool..except navin...!!maybe soon he will meet him too...
naina bumps into someone... hmm..ritu???....
nice update..waiting for the next part... 😊

Yep, Naina wears Rajveer's name of sindoor and mangalsutra...

Thank you

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Cool...Raj n Naina are at KMA. I luved Raj's ans to Rahul-"To stay away from her n I luv my wife" Very nice part. Pls continue soon.

Yep, Naina and Rajveer have arrived at KMA and now the real story starts between the main protagonists... thank you

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

I liked the third part of ur fic as well.
Raj feels that Naina doesn't trust him but that's not true. Naina trusts him but it's only her awkwardness. GM is really very good she said Naina to put on sindoor n mangalsutra as well but how can Naina do this?
Naina would b surely sucessful in her aim.
update soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

sorry yaar galti se double post ho gaya 😆 😆 😆

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Fourth part was good too.
Raj finally Naina ko mangalsutra aur Sindoor laga deta hai. I liked the combination of emotions u shown in Naveen n Naina case. The way Naveen was feeling Naina arround her was so good. Raj bought two main things for his wife which soon would be his wife i know. Naina fainted while entering in KMA n Shalu n her sweet nature she always helps ppl.
Raj is understanding Naina so well ahaaaaaaaaaaan. That's y he paid her bills n bought idols for her.So i think Raj did it to be safe with Dr. Ritu Mishra. He took a good step. Atul is helping her n that's nice. Naina looked gorgeous in that color. But with whom Naina bumped? Does she know that person? Flashback was good too where Naina was imagining about her Sajan.
update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago