Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj took Naina to his friend's house!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He told her he is leaving the next day as he is posted at KMA!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj smiled as he thought of KMA days but the name KMA made her caused Naina to faint!!!!!!

Raj caught Naina from behind and carried her in his arms!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

This is just like Veer-Zaara and also in the serial!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when he accidentaly hi sahi but rubs his blood on Naina's forehead!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The moment Gayatri Masi saw them she thought Naina was Raj's wife!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina is looking at Raj for answers and his eyes were saying something which Naina understood and nodded!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Inhe toh abhi se ek dusre ki ankhon ki bhasa samajh mein aane lagi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin is thinking about Naina who is the angel of his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin had missed Naina's birthday and she was angry!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑He was not giving her her gift!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Navin said he would not think of giving her away to anyone!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar ek na ek din toh he has to give away Naina to Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

GM is angry at Raj for not telling her and pulled his ear!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Atleast Naina laughed at this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj asked Naina to pretend to be his wife here and in KMA!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊But why??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Naina needed to get inside KMA to start her personal mission about her brother toh she also agreed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina will act as Raj's wife and live with him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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My god why is it that i Miss every RN Stories, Kaash we still had our own forum opened atleast we would know about New fics .. anyways i'll stop my Rambling πŸ˜† and say that this Fic is really good and interesting .. Love the story line and feel so sorry for Naina and Navin, the Two are going through a rough patch 😭 But Rajveer hain Na for both of them ...

Loved the last update .. How Rajveer came and saved Naina from the Goons, Really Filmy 😳 And todays update where he accidently hee sahi but rubs his blood on her head .. Hai!! 😳 It's funny how GM thought that she was his wife the Moment he entered ..

But i don't understand why does he want Naina to pretend that she's his wife ... and i really hoped you would use Naina 'ah' Singh here .. But Anyways your the Writer, and so Far your doing a Great job πŸ‘

Waiting for them to Reach KMA, and for their Love to Blossom 😳

Take Care πŸ€— and PM me when you Update

Yasmin

P.S your doing a Great Job posting pics in the Laadli forum πŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thank you

Raj took Naina to his friend's house!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He told her he is leaving the next day as he is posted at KMA!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yep, he's being honest...

Raj smiled as he thought of KMA days but the name KMA made her caused Naina to faint!!!!!! Because KMA is the place which took Navin away from her and her parents.

Raj caught Naina from behind and carried her in his arms!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Thought of adding a mini romantic scene...

This is just like Veer-Zaara and also in the serial!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Indeed happened in film VeerZaara but I didn't copy the idea from it.... πŸ˜‰

I loved it when he accidentaly hi sahi but rubs his blood on Naina's forehead!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Destiny desire Raj and Naina to be together forever, but their many barriers in their life which they have to cross together and individualy.

The moment Gayatri Masi saw them she thought Naina was Raj's wife!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Anyone can have misunderstanding by the blood rubbed on Naina's forehead.

Naina is looking at Raj for answers and his eyes were saying something which Naina understood and nodded!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Inhe toh abhi se ek dusre ki ankhon ki bhasa samajh mein aane lagi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 Their eye-talking will be a comman factor between those two which no-one can read other than themselves or each other.

Navin is thinking about Naina who is the angel of his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Yes... Naina is the angel of his eyes and always will be.

Navin had missed Naina's birthday and she was angry!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑He was not giving her her gift!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Common thing between brothers and sisters.

Navin said he would not think of giving her away to anyone!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 Can't blame Navin who loves his sister more than anything in this world.

Magar ek na ek din toh he has to give away Naina to Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Can happen or not!

GM is angry at Raj for not telling her and pulled his ear!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Atleast Naina laughed at this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 I needed to lighten the mood for awhile...

Raj asked Naina to pretend to be his wife here and in KMA!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊But why??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• Leave the guy alone! He has his reason and it will be revealed soon or later.

Naina needed to get inside KMA to start her personal mission about her brother toh she also agreed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Yep

Naina will act as Raj's wife and live with him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Thank you for the encouragement....


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

My god why is it that i Miss every RN Stories, Kaash we still had our own forum opened atleast we would know about New fics .. anyways i'll stop my Rambling πŸ˜† Frankly, I agree with you. I wished the forum was open than it would be easy to atract Rajveer and Naina's fan and people can also read new fanfiction with being confused. and say that this Fic is really good and interesting .. Love the story line and feel so sorry for Naina and Navin, the Two are going through a rough patch 😭 But Rajveer hain Na for both of them ... Yes... Rajveer is there for both siblings after much problems he and Naina face together and individualy.

Loved the last update .. How Rajveer came and saved Naina from the Goons, Really Filmy 😳 And todays update where he accidently hee sahi but rubs his blood on her head .. Hai!! 😳 It's funny how GM thought that she was his wife the Moment he entered .. Thank you so much.... Indeed it was filmy very filmy but ideas are mine. πŸ˜†

But i don't understand why does he want Naina to pretend that she's his wife ... and i really hoped you would use Naina 'ah' Singh here .. I've thought about that track but then it won't work with the Rahul-Naina track and Rajveer has his own reason why he wanted Naina to accompy him in KMA. But Anyways your the Writer, and so Far your doing a Great job πŸ‘

Waiting for them to Reach KMA, and for their Love to Blossom 😳 That will take time to see love bloosom between them and first emotion will happen first is jealousy.

Take Care πŸ€— and PM me when you Update Surely will Pm you.

Yasmin

P.S your doing a Great Job posting pics in the Laadli forum πŸ‘ Thank you - I thought people wouldn't notice but I was wrong.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Welcome to the forum and thank you so much for the encouragement.

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I personally would like to thank everyone for encouraging me a-lot by their replies because it means a-lot to us writtens.

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Part 3 ~ Farewell GM

Naina explained her problem to GM about her monthly periods.

GM smiled

Also assures Naina everything will be fine and if you wanted you can sleep with me tonight instead of your husband.

Naina nods her head.

During dinner was quiet at Rajveer's place, but after dinner...

GM: So Raj beta, how did you meet Sunaina beti and when did you guys get married?

Both Naina and Rajveer stare at each other and chocked on their drinks.

GM: Are you guys okay?

Naina remembers her mini conversation with Samrat and Benji during their last year of Excel College. Which spreads a smile on Naina's face.

GM: Sunaina beti, why are you smiling?

Naina: I was remembering a friends of mine who always brings a smile on my face.

Rajveer coughed again...

GM rubbed Rajveer's back and said "be careful and now go and pack your bags after your dream is coming true. And I don't even know when I will see you again." GM controlled her tears in front of Raj and Sunaina.

Raj assures his GM that he will try to come every weekend or so.

GM smiled

Raj: That's like my GM.

Raj hugged GM

Naina smiled

Rajveer just finish packing his bags - when Naina entered his room with glass of milk.

Naina placed milk on side-table and said "GM told me to bring this milk for you and (Rajveer interrupts Naina)

Raj: Tell GM: I will drink the milk and I've completed my packing.

Naina nods her head.

Raj: Sunaina, aren't you going to pack your things... because we are leaving sharp at dawn?

Naina looked toward the ground and spoke "all my clothing are ruined because of the rain. Only few things are in good condition which I can not wear in public."

Raj: It's okay... we will go shopping before reaching KMA. Also you can sleep on the bed - I'll sleep on the ground.

Naina: It's okay... because I am sleeping with GM.

Raj: Are you afraid of me?

Naina shakes her head negatively (sightly doesn't trust him, but isn't lying about her periods).

Rajveer shakes his head positively.

Naina leaves from Rajveer's room.

Next day

GM does a mini aarti...

Both Rajveer and Naina takes blessing from GM...

Emotional moment during breakfast hour at Rajveer's place.

Naina watch GM feed Rajveer.

GM takes a piece of roti and feeds Naina.

Naina gets emotional and hugs GM...

Raj: What about me?

GM spread her arms open and Rajveer also joins the hug, but Naina feels awkward and moves away saying "I'll be right back",

Naina runs into mini god room and seek special blessing to prove her brother's innocent.

GM comes from behind and watches Naina praying.

GM taps Naina on the shoulder...

Naina turns around... looks confused a little...

GM: Sunaina, I know - you are a smart girl, but every married women should have sindoor in their forehead.

GM gave Naina sindoor box...

Naina continue looking at GM speak...

GM: I know Raj is crazy about his country; but he also loves you and you are special to us. Take good care of yourself and Raj.

Naina just nods her head and feels disgusted from inside about herself.

Raj comes to call Naina...

Raj: Sunaina, are you ready to leave?

Naina nods her head...

They take final blessing from GM and leaves within no time. GM waves from behind with a smile and tears running down her face.

***

Please do comment...

Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina explained her problem and GM said she could sleep with her if she wants!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When GM asked Raj and Naina about how they met and got married and they had no answer!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj and GM share a very special bond!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It is good that Raj has someone in his life who cares for him so much!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina Raj ke liye milk leke aayi jo GM ne bheja tha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Just like a wife!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is a little afraid of Raj but I hope this awkwardness goes away soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina should trust Raj because he can be trusted with anything!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

GM was feeding Raj and then she also feeds Naina!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats was soooo sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when GM hugged them both together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

GM Naina ko sindoor box deti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊I wonder wakai Naina sindoor lagayegi ya nahi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The parting scene was very emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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