Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sweet_shona
woww... nice start.... thank you
so RN ki first meeting... with action packed scene.... woww... Yep, it worked well with my suggest...
navin is alive...gr8888... Yes, Naina needs one of her family members alive
waiting for the next part....

Thank you so much for the encouragement and I promise you will like the next generation too...

Love
Mickey P

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Nisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Nice part

So naina and rajveer have met. Those goons deserved a strong punch from Rajveer...after all naina ko ched rahe the.

Naina is right in trusting rajveer,

Its good that navin is alive...i hope that he is proven innocent this time.

Please continue soon

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Wow wat a cute part. Raj saved Naina from the goons. And they had mini eye-lock sessions. And it was gr8 to knw dat Raj wanted her name to be Naina. Thats a sweet connection.

And yes, I'm really happy dat Navin is alive. At least Raj wont becum his mercy-killer.

Anyways, pls continue soon.

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

that was really great

thank god Navin is alive

RN meeting was fab

plz continue soon

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thanks

Naina is forced to leave her house by the community members in her neighbourhood!!!!!! Very bad neighborhood!

Kisi ne sach ki kaha hai ke musibaat jab aati hai toh charo aur se aati hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 Absolutely right! Problems come from any direction.

The rain complimented the scene very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank you

Navin is alive but in such a condition!!!!! I hope he is proven innocent this time!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 He will be proved innocent with plenty of emotions.

I loved the heart to heart connection between Navin and Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 I think every sibling should share heart to heart connection because it makes their relationship unqiue as sibings.

Raj ne kya zabardast entry maari!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Saare gundo ka safaya kar diya!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏Navin also relaxed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Filmy very filmy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Indeed Raj's entry was mindblowing because he needed to impress Naina in a unqiue style. Yep, Navin is so relaxed now and always will be 😉

Raj and Naina have a mini eye locking session!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina watched Raj and felt hopeful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Well she is right in this case!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj pehli hi nazar mein silly ban gaya!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina ne apna naam Sunaina bataya but Raj prefers 'Naina' as it is sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Arre koi isse batao ke yeh toh Naina hi hai ............ uski Naina!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 Yep... Naina is already impress, but Rajveer needs to sofen a bit towards Naina to find her true identity.

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Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Friends... sorry for not posting yesterday the update since I've been dying with cold and a terrible fever since past few days.

Anyways enjoy this part...

Please do mind if it's boring cause before the main story start - lets get the boring parts over.

Love
Mickey P
PS: Next update will be on Friday - July 17, 2009

Part 2 ~ Naina accept Rajveer's offer

Naina stares at the building in front of her...

"Where am I?" Naina asked Rajveer "because it doesn't look like a girls' hostel by any angle or hotel."

"I know", Raj looks at Naina with a smile then says "this is my friend's house where I stay too until tomorrow morning."

Confused Naina asked "why?"

Rajveer stares at Naina... because she reminds him of his batch-mate and his close friend.

Raj: Sunaina, I was only five and half when I lost my mother and business drowned my father that he doesn't have time for me anymore that's why I live with my (Naina Interrupts Rajveer)

Naina: I didn't mean why you live here, but why you are leaving tomorrow morning.

Raj: Oh! (Raj hits himself on the head) Actually I'm posted at Kanchanjunga Military Academy after many years.

Rajveer smiles in the thought of KMA days.

Name KMA echoed into Naina's mind which caused her to faint, but two strong arms which belong to Rajveer caught her from behind and carried her inside the building and mistakenly rubbed his blood on Naina's forehead.

Rajveer kicked on the door instead of ringing the bell because he was carrying Naina in his arms.

(Inside the building)

Middle-age lady opens the door and stares at Rajveer who is carrying a person in his arm.

"Raj, who is the person in your arms?" Elderly lady asked.

Raj troubles with words "she's Sunaina and Sunaina is (Elderly Lady Interrupts Raj)

Lady: Your wife!

Rajveer shocked to his ears and words trouble him when he opens his mouth.

She ordered Rajveer to take Sunaina inside his room while she calls for a doctor.

Raj entered his room,

placed Naina carefully on the bed,

also notice the blood rubbed into Sunaina's forehead.

After some time Naina gained conscious and looked around to recall where she is...

and before she could ask any question (Elderly Lady) enters with a doctor.

Doctor examines Naina while she stares at Rajveer for answers.

Doctor interrupts their eye looking session.

"Captain your wife is absolutely fine, but needs plenty of rest." Rajveer nod his head.

Naina stared at Rajveer for answers, but his eyes were saying something which Naina understood and nods her head.

(Scene Changed)

Navin sat quiet in his dusty prison - thinking of the his family and mostly his sister who is angel of his eyes.

~ Flashback ~

Navin return from his academy (as a cadet). Navin walks inside his room... to freshen up, but he was attacked by his fifteen-year old sister Naina.

"Are you going to kill your brother?" Navin asked Naina who sat on top of him.

Naina: Why didn't you come home on my birthday?

Navin: I wanted too! But I couldn't come because exams were going on. So how could I come? Anyways I have a special gift for a special person in my life... my angel (Naina Interrupts her brother).

Naina: What kind of gift?

Navin begun teasing Naina by showing the surprise gift, but doesn't give it to her.

"Bhaiyya... stop it" Naina complained.

Navin: Why should I?

Naina: Because I am younger and it was you (Naina takes a mini pause before continuing) who missed my birthday.

Navin continued teasing Naina... but later on gives Naina her gift... but she doesn't take it.

Naina: I don't want your stupid gift.

Navin: Fine with me! I'll just give it to Nisha our next door neighbor.

Naina holds on to her brother's arm before he walks away.

Naina: Don't you dare - give - away my gift to anyone!

Naina made herself clear...

Navin winked at his mother then said "I would never think of giving you away to anyone or your things like gift and my love."

Naina hugs her brother with tears streaming down her face.

~ End of Flashback ~

Navin closed his watery eyes and lay down...

but Naina's innocent face blinking into his mind every second.

(Scene Changed)

Naina continued starring at Rajveer while the Elderly Lady kept on touching her forehead to make sure her temperature isn't rising.

Naina looked at Rajveer, "who is this kind lady because you said that you like with your friend?"

Elderly Lady stares at Raj...

Rajveer looks at Naina

Raj: Sunaina, she is my best friend more than my GM. Meaning my Gayarati Masi (Gayarati Masi is portrait by Shweta Twarri).

Naina gets nervous...

GM: Don't need to be nervous around me... but I should be mad at someone else... but not at you my child (looking at Naina)...

Raj: Why are you mad at me? What did I do, GM?

GM: You call me as your friend and where was? Why didn't you inform me?

Raj: It happened so fast that I personally don't know where I was or doing.

GM pulled his ear which Naina couldn't stop laughing and tear roll down her face.

Both Raj and GM looked at Naina who was sobbing a little... GM ran to Naina's side on the bed.

GM: What's wrong, Sunaina?

Naina: Nothing... just mummy aur papa ki yaad (Just missing Mom and dad badly).

GM hugged Naina and says "Every girls at your age have to leave their maayka at some point in their life... to move on in life with their husbands and his family members". Naina completely breaks down in her arms and mumbles "Mera maayka is destroyed by meaningless people who loves to laugh at others' pain".

GM looked at Rajveer for answers, but he himself is shocked about Sunaina's misery.

Rajveer placed his hand on top of his GM's shoulders and says "GM, let Sunaina rest for awhile and fresh up while I make dinner for us."

GM agrees with Rajveer, but not him cooking...

Raj: But GM

GM: No means no

Raj: Fine!

GM leaves the couples alone, but awkwardness takes over them. Naina keeps on starring at the blanket. Rajveer looks through his phone over and over.

Naina finally breaks the silent, "I'm sorry for the trouble I've put you through."

Raj looked at Naina eye to eye and says "Will you pretend to be my wife until we are here and also at KMA?"

Naina recalls all her painful moments her family went through... her parents committing suicide... also how she was forced to leave her own house, but she needed to get inside KMA to start her personal investigation about her brother so she accepts Rajveer's offer.

Rajveer excuse himself after showing Naina around the room and also told her "Sunaina, if there is a problem please call me."

Naina nods her head...

Raj most leaving when he hears Sunaina saying "Please can you send Masi inside your room?"

Rajveer nods his head and leaves asap...

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Please comment again to encourage me...

Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago

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prerna27

@prerna27

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Hey
how are doing dear...
the update was awesome..
naina should act as rajveer's wife.. sounds intresting..😊😊
😊
keep writing dear..

takecare ..
get well soon

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

that was awesome

Naina will act as Raj's wife gr8

plz continue soon

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hii

I caught up wid dis just now....

its too good....

loved d diff blends of charcter in here....

updt till 2day was amazing......

its brilliant.....

can u plzz pm me wen updted!!!!!

...
lipi

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: prerna27
Hey What's sup?
how are doing dear... Honestly... I feel like shit (heaving headache, running nose, craps, and on/off fevers) plus going to school when I just want to sleep.
the update was awesome.. Thank you
naina should act as rajveer's wife.. sounds intresting..😊😊
😊Indeed she accepted Rajveer's offer for her own selfish needs and only few cadets and two friends of Excel College helps her....
keep writing dear..

takecare ..
get well soon

Love
Mickey P

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