Sajan (Raj-Naina) - Part 7A on Pg 24 - 09/08/09 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
Past few days... I was tense because of what my friend done by copying Tina's scene she wrote by using my own account anyways I've changed everything... my password and thinking of changing my ID name too... anywys enjoy this part...



Part 5 ~ Main Too Hoon Pagal

Naina: Tum

Person: Apun don't know you?

Naina: Mayank, why ae you talking in this language?

Person: Apun Aalekh hai... ain't no Mayank...Vayank.

Naina: Shut up Mayank... If you are playing some rubbish game with me then stop it.

Naina jumps into Aalekh's arms (thinking he is Mayank) and sobs.

Aalekh to himself: Apun ke saala book-worm judwa Bhai Mayank iss responsible for a girl sobbing in my arms.

Both cadet Huda and cadet Yudi passing by and makes funny face of jealously...

Uday spots Huda and Yudi starring at Aalekh... Uday also joins them and his facial expression changes to shock-ness. And begins panicking for Bebo (Naina is also known as Bebo by her friends... Only her close friends, but others only Sunaina or Naina).

Uday talking to himself: Only Sammy can save Bebo also clear some misunderstanding regarding who is who (meaning Mayank and his twin bro Aalekh)... but where is Bebo... no I mean Sammy?

Confused Uday looks for Sammy...

Naina continues sobbing in Aalekh's arms...

Motorbike comes fast then stops in front of female police officer...

Samrat: The Amalgimation Before The Fluctuation
And The Ramification Of The Constitutional
And The Gready And Judicial Paradoxical
Position Can Be A Verbal The Termoil


Random Guy: He's Right!...

Samrat: Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Kare Koi Hulchul
Hone De, Hone De


Aalekh tries to handle a crying person...

Random persons: Hone De, Hone De
Hone De, Hone De


Other Guy in his blue motorbike: Koi Deewangi...

Samrat: Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Kare Koi Hulchul
Hone De, Hone De


Random person: Hone De, Hone De
Hone De, Hone De


Uday stops chats with Prem then remembers Bebo with Aalekh and continues to look for Sammy...

Samrat: Ama Miyan, Sala Re Jamad Misra
Abdulah Ki Nagma Sanji Mein
Masroob Woh Mashoor Hain
Dawaqte Ke De Gaye Asrawe Jamad
Misra Asrani Ke Bakiya Akwan Ki
Ada Hi Farma Rahe Hain, Hain


Random person: Ye Kya Galib Ki Gazal Hai

Samrat: Reit Mein Tairna Seekh Le
Aur Samundar Ke Upar Tahel
Been Bhainsoon Ke Aage Bajaa
Aur Hawaa Mein Bana Le Mahal

Reit Mein Tairna Seekh Le
Aur Samundar Ke Upar Tahel
Been Bhainsoon Ke Aage Bajaa
Aur Hawaa Mein Bana Le Mahal

Suit Lohey Ki Silwa Le Tu
Aur Pairoon Pe Chashma Lagaa
Haath Mein Baand Le Woh Ghadi
Jis Mein Ho Sade Terah Bajaa


Samrat notice Uday

Uday: Aain

Samrat: Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Main To Hoon Pagal
Yeh Kahoon Har Pal
Kare Koi Hulchul
Hone De, Hone De


Uday dance with Samrat

Uday: Hone De, Hone De
Hone De, Hone De


Aalekh silently lets Naina cry in his arm... only for his twin bro Mayu...

End of the songs, Uday tells Samrat about Bebo rushes inside the academy also bumps into Major Nair.

Major Nair: What's the rush cadet?

Samrat made weird expression...

Samrat: I've heard our new teacher is arrived so I was in the rush in to meet him...

Major Nair: That's no explanation to be in rush, cadet.

Shalini spots cadet Samrat with Major Nair...

Shalini makes her way towards them...

Shalini: Major Nair... it's alright to break rules today. Cadet Samrat dismissed.

Samrat: Yes Ma'am

Samrat leaves from one mess to another mess... Pooja finds Samrat who was trying to hide from her because right now Bebo needs him more then anyone else

Pooja: Why is your connection on/off today?

Samrat looks toward the other end of the mess door where Bebo is hugging Mayank's twin Aalekh.

Samrat: Pooja some other time for your riddle.

Samrat doesn't wait for Pooja's answer...

Samrat rush inside the mess to across the other side, but stopped by Rahul.

Rahul: Cadet Samrat meet your new teacher...

Samrat stares at Rajveer then say " nice to meet you Sir, but please excuse me at the moment".

Rahul: Cadet Samrat I think you can spare few moment from your time?

Raj: It's okay

Samrat: It's okay... I can spare few moments for Rahul Sir and his friend who is our new teacher.

Samrat sits beside them, but inside his mind "Bebo, i'm sorry for the delay at the moment".

Rahul explains Rajveer about Samrat's unique passion for his country.

Raj: Awesome passion

Samrat: Thank you sir

Naina stops sobbing and asked "Mayank, I'm hungry".

Aalekh takes Naina inside the mess...

Everyone stare at Aalekh with a female person... Aalekh made strange expressions, but Naina stops halfway in another shock.

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Love
Mickey P






Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

I am glad Mickey that you decided to take severe steps against your friend...!!!! Feeling bad for you...!!!! I am sure you will be forgiven by Tina and we all trust you...!!!!



Thank you

Love
Mickey P
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Posted: 16 years ago
tum mere ek bhi reply par comment nahi karti ho, so ab mai reply nahi karoongi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice...!!!! 😊
Can you PM me wen u update next...????
Edited by Dhara_s - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj took Naina shopping and paid her bills like a good husband!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊He is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj had asked Atul to keep an eye on Ritu!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I think Raj got Naina to be safe with Dr.Ritu Mishra!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊He took a good step!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is understanding Naina so well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Thats why he bought the idols for her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj bought the main thing for his wife and asked Naina to put on the mangalsutra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This reminded Naina of her old convo with Navin!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So Naina had asked Navin ke kaisa hoga uska sajan!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally we have the dialogue of the story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Navin ne bahut accha kaha tha ke jismein rab dikhe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally Naina Raj ke naam ka sindoor aur magalsutra laga leti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina reached KMA and Naina and Navin both felt each other's presence!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina fainted while entering KMA and Shalini with her sweet nature was there to help her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj met BC and both agree there are too many memories there which they cannot erase!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

BC is remembering Gunjan who had left him after Navin was arrested!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Gunjan had refused to believe that Navin was a traitor!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is happy that his old friends are here!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul was shocked to hear that Raj has a wife!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

I loved Raj's answer to Rahul that to stay away from Ritu and he loves his wife!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina looks beautiful in blue but the dress was not that nice!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Who did Naina bump into??😕 😕 😕 😕


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 to see u back in full form.....

it was awesome updt......

plzz pm me.....I'm not able to add u as buddy ders some error .......so plzz pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was toooo good
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina bumped into Aalekh and thought he is Mayank!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh denies being Mayank!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But why did he not tell Naina he is Mayank's twin??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina hugged him and sobbed letting her pain out from her heart!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Huda and Yudi gets jealous seeing this!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Uday is shocked to see Naina and began to panic!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Uday knew only Sammy can save Naina and clear up this misunderstanding now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Samrat ne kya entry maari!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

The song is very nice and hilarious!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Samrat hears about Naina from Uday!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He rushes inside the academy to be caught my Major Nair but luckily Shalini saves him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Samrat first encounters Pooja leaving whom he rushes only to be stopped by Rahul!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

He had to stop by to talk to Raj and is saying sorry to Naina inside his mind!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why is Naina shocked now??😕 😕 😕 😕Did she see Samrat??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi dear u write really well nd dis is for all d parts u hav written...u r just gr8..plz cont soon i m waitingggggggggggg
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Oh another part is updated.....donno y I never notice. Anyways, it was gr8 n interesting wid the entry of many characters. Pls continue soon.

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