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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

wow..its soooo good yaar...u r rly genius...
luvd this part....



thanx so much............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
thanx so much guyz for ur luvely comments thanx............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 9

When Sunaina left Rajat and Vikrant had their dinner which Mrs Roy prepared before going to Mrs Malhotra and goes to their rooms.

Rajat entered the room still lost in thoughts of Sunaina then his eyes fell on her photograph placed on the table near his bed. He goes and picks up that frame. She was looking very beautiful then he gets lost in his memories????

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Sunaina and Rajat ~ in college corridors~

"Sunaina I want to talk you it's really very important"

"But I don't want to talk with you???.. Why don't you just go to your so called Angelina"

"He plz atleast listen to me"

"Rajat I am getting late for my lecture" with this Sunaina enters her class while Rajat remained outside and goes to canteen where Sanaya and Vikrant were waiting for him.

"kya hua maan gayi kya" Vikrant asked with excitement.

"are yaar kahaan maani hai???.. Sanaya ye tumhari behen ko aakhir ho kya jaata hai baar baar"

"Sunaina mujhe kya pata tum khud puch lo"

"haan par vo mujhse baat kare tab na????.. aur meine aisa kahaa bhi kya bas yahi ki me kal Angelina ke saath tha yahaan canteen me aur coffee pe raha tha bas ab isme itna bura manane wali kaunsi baat thi"

"vo sab mujhe nahi pata chalo me chalti hu lecture time ho gaya" Sanaya says standing up from her chair.

"ok we will wait for both of you here in the canteen" Vikrant said.

"no we are not going to come we will directly go to home today" Sanaya replied.

"he we don't know anything tum dono yahaan hume mil rahi ho that's it otherwise we will not talk with you guyz" Vikrant said.

"whatever we are not going to come" and with this Sanaya left for her class.

After lecture Rajat and Vikrant waited for Sanaya and Sunaina in the canteen but they didn't came and directly went to their home. They didn't knew this that Sunaina and Sanaya were already gone so they were still sitting in the canteen.

"ye dono aayi kyon nahi"Rajat asked.

"mujhe kya pata ??..kahin chali to nahi gayi"

"nahi yaar aise kaise jaa sakti hai"

"he miley wats up"

"nothing yaar" she replied.

"acha tumne Sunaina aur Sanaya ko dekha kya" Vikrant enquired.

"haan vo dono to ghar chali gayi hai"

"kya ghar chali gayi hai?????." Rajat said with a shock "anyways thanks" he added.

"ok guyz then see you tomorrow??.bye?." and she leaves.

Rajat and Vikrant also comes outside to parking area and takes out their bikes.

"ab to in dono ko maza chakhana hi padega" Rajat said with a naughty smile on his face.

"haan theek keh raha hai"

and both of them wears their helmets and speeds up their bikes.

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next day

Sunaina and Sanaya were waiting for both of them but they didn't came so finally Sunaina called on their cells but no reply then she tries at basic.

"hello may I know who's speaking" marie said

"marie aunty it's me Sunaina rajat hai kya"

"haan vo apne kamre me rest kar rahe hai"

"rest" Sunaina said in a confused tone.

"haan vo kal college se aate time rajat baba ka accident ho gaya tha"

"accident??" Sunaina said in a very shocked tone. "vo theek to hai use jayada chot to nahi aayi na" she added.

"vo unke per me fracture hua hai".

"me abhi wahaan aa rahi hu"

she was about to cut the call when she heard Rajat's voice so she stopped. In hurry marie placed the receiver such that Sunaina was able to hear every thing.

"rajat baba aap humko Sunaina baby ko jhuth bolne ko kyon bola" she asked .

rajat comes to her and holds her shoulders and says " aunty un dono ko maza chakhana jaruri tha na isliye".

Marie gets confused "maza chakhana" then finally she leaves for kitchen "in dono ki baate meri samajh se bahar hai" she murmured.

Rajat also runs towards his room where Vikrant was waiting for him. Rajat lies down on his bed.

"kya hua dono aa rahi hai na" Vikrant asked excitedly.

"are yaar aayengi nahi kya"

On the other hand

Sunaina cuts the call

"ye dono samajhte kya hai apne aap ko" she shouts on anger throwing her cell inside the car.

"Sunaina akhir hua kya aur kiska accident ho gaya hai"

"kisika nahi"and she narrates everything to her.

"in dono ko me chodungi nahi" Sanaya said in angry tone and headed towards Nandini Mansion

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"rajat kahaan hai" Sunaina asked to Marie.

Marie point towards his room both of them rushes upstairs to his room.

Rajat was lying on his bed and acted as if he was sleeping. Sunaina goes towards him and sits beside him while Vikrant was sitting on sofa so Sanaya goes and sits beside him.

"rajat are u ok" Sunaina asked.

Slowly opens his eyes and tries to sit.

"Sunaina tum yahaan kab aayi"

"rajat tum udho mat lete raho"she said

Rajat starts acting as if he was in great pain while Sunaina anger was getting higher and higher.

"rajat jyada dard ho raha hai" she asked.

"haan bahut dard ho raha hai" he replied

Finally she was not able to control her anger and she hits rajat on his leg with her hand.

"jhuthe kahin ke" she shouts at him getting up from bed "tumhe pata hai hum kitna dar gaye the ????..par tumhe us se kya tumhe kya fark padta hai tum thode na humse???" she was on the verge of crying so she finally stops and then rushes out of the room.

"rajat ye tum don one acha nahi kiya" Sanaya said and with she also leaves the room

"I think rajat yaar mazak serious ho gaya" Vikrant said getting up from sofa he also leaves the room and moves to his.

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Next day in college

Sunaina was still angry with Rajat and Vikrant while Sanaya again got normal.

"Sunaina abhi bhi naraz hai mujhse" rajat asked to Sanaya

Sanaya nodded her head

"par vo hai kahaan" Vikrant asked.

"vo abhi classroom me hogi" Sanaya replied.

Rajat gets up from his chair and starts moving

"rajat tum kahaan jaa rahe ho" Sanaya asked.

"Sunaina ko manane" rajat replied and then headed towards the classroom.

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"sir may I come in please" rajat asked for the permission.

Mr cade was writing on the white board turns towards him.

"rajat can we solve your problems after this lecture gets over" Mr cade said.

"no sir actually I wanted to attend the lecture"

Mr cade was shocked and was continuously gazing at him.

"rajat are u alright u want to attend the lecture" he said in a very confused tone.

"yes sir now may I "

"yaa sure come inside"

Rajat goes and sits beside Sunaina. Sunaina didn't look at him and continued writing down notes.

"Sunaina mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai" rajat said in a very low tone.

"par mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni" she said still looking into her notebook.

"Sunaina I am sorry yaar" he pleaded.

"rajat please mujhe padne do tumhe nahi panda mat pado" she looked at him angrily and then again continued her work.

While both of them were talking Mr cade was looking at them

"both of u there stand up"

both Rajat and Sunaina gets up

"Both of you get out of my class"

Sunaina opens her mouth to say but then Rajat holds her hand takes her out. When they reached to the door Rajat turned towards Mr cade and says

"thank you sir"

both of them comes out of the class leaving totally confused Mr cade.

Rajat freed her hand she was walking in front him

"Sunaina ek baar meri baat to sun lo maana meine galti ki hai par sorry bhi to bol raha hu na"

"rajat mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni tum jao yahaan se"

then finally rajat comes towards her and pushes her inside a room which was their favorite places whenever they wanted to bunk their classes all four used to come there only. Then rajat closes the door (didn't locked)

"rajat akhir tumhara problem kya hai tum samjhte kya ho apne aap ko?."she started shouting at him.

"Sunaina I am sorry aage se aisa nahi karunga" he said softly.

"rajat ho gaya bas ab me jaa rahi hu"she moves towards the door.

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on the other hand

Sanaya and Vikrant were waiting for both of them in canteen

"yaar ye dono aaye kyon nahi abhi tak" Vikrant asked

"pata nahi abhi tak to aa jana chahiye tha" Sanaya replied

"shayad mujhe pata hai dono kahaan honge chalo wahin chalte hai" Vikrant said getting up from his chair.

"chalo"

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"Sunaina ????" Rajat called her.

She was bout to open the door but then stopped.

"Sunaina I love you????? me tumse bahut pyaar karta hu???..tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta" Rajat said.

Sunaina's eyes gets filled with tears she turns towards him he was standing there with his arms open for her. She runs and hugs him both shares a passionate hug.

"hum bhi tumse bahut pyaar karte hai rajat??"she said

"kya"

both of them gets apart and to their surprise Vikrant and Sanaya were standing there on the door.

"tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho" Sanaya said coming towards them.

"Sanaya vo ???. Vo??haan??mera matlab nahi?.aaaaaaaaaaa haan me Sunaina se pyaar karta hu" rajat said.

"Sunaina tum abhi mere saath ghar chalo" Sanaya said and then holds Sunaina's hand tightly and takes her out of the room.

"Sanaya suno to??."

"aur tum ????tum bhi mere saath chalo" Vikrant said angrily.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

superb part and very sweet.Contiue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwww...its rly killing update dear...u r amazing.....its just wowwwwww..luvd to read it.....keep it up....i hv saved all ur updates...luv to read them again n again....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

awwwwww...its rly killing update dear...u r amazing.....its just wowwwwww..luvd to read it.....keep it up....i hv saved all ur updates...luv to read them again n again....



thanx so much for liking it....

mene ye story yahan post karna isliye band kar diya tha becoz i thought no one likes it but i was wrong i have such a nice reader here........

thanx a lot to all of u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the part is excelent...its awsome....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58


thanx.......😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: abira

the part is excelent...its awsome....



thanx i am sure u will like the next part too its my fav.........😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruja

Part 8

Rajat was standing there and was giving a very angry look to Raghav who was still holding Sunaina's hand

"Can't u hear properly I said leave her hand" rajat said angrily

"He dude u better keep yourself out of this matter" raghav replied.

Rajat moved towards him and holds his hands with which he was holding Sunaina's hand. He slowly tightened his grip around his hand when Raghav was not able to bear the pain he released Sunaina's hand. She moved from there and joined Sanaya and Vikrant.

Rajat first looked at the ground then closed his eyes and then a sound came?????. Rajat gave him a tight punch on his nose.

Vikrant placed his one hand on his eyes and other one on Sanaya's eyes

"Pad gaya" he murmured.

"he Vikrant haath hatao maza aa raha dekhne do" Sanaya said removing Vikrant's hand from her eyes.

There Raghav touched his nose which started bleeding. When he saw blood on his finger he just got up and raised his hand to hit rajat but missed. Now it was Rajat's turn he just holds him and gives him 2 3 punches on his stomach and then dragged him to the canteen.

" Rajat stop??..rajat plz for god sake stop" Sunaina was shouting as now Rajat's anger was on its final stage. "Vikrant plz rajat ko roko?????" she looked at Vikrant who also got tensed now. He ran towards them and just holds Rajat from back. Rajat was trying to release himself from Vikrant but failed finally he stopped and released Raghav.

"Vikrant chodo ???.."

"pehle bolo ab nahi ladoge"

"ok nahi ladunga".

He leaves him Raghav was lying unconscious on the floor. Few of his friends and took him to the hospital while all four of them were sitting in the canteen

"Rajat have some water" Vikrant said offering him a glass of water.

While Rajat was drinking water Sunaina started shouting at him.

"rajat ye sab kya tha aaj agar vo mar jata to"

Rajat didn't replied to her

"Rajat me tumse baat kar rahi hu aaj agar use kuch ho jaata to".

Now Rajat who was already disturbed got more frusteted due to Sunaina. He just throws that glass on the floor and gets up in anger.

"mar jata to mar jaata I don't care??? me sirf itna jaanta hu usne tumhare saath misbehave kiya tha" he shouted at Sunaina and then just went out of the canteen.

"kya Sunaina naraz kar diya na use" Vikrant said

"are ab isme meine kya kiya aaj agar Raghav mar jata to kya hota tumne dekha than a Rajat kis tarah lad raha tha"

"aur kiske liye lad raha tha" Sanaya asked her softly.

"mere liye" Sunaina replied " me kitni idiot hu ??? pagal hu???..buddhu hu??.." she just starts cursing herself.

"ye lo isme kya hai Rajat to ye bachpan se kehta aa raha hai aur fir bhi vo??" Vikrant said.

"aur fir bhi vo is pagal se pyaar karta hai" she cuts him and then starts smiling.

"ab yahaan baithe kyon muskura rahi hai jaa aur jaakar mana use" Sanaya said hitting her on her head.

"par vo hoga kahaan"

" are yaar ghar par aur kahaan me use ache se janta hu vo ghar hi gaya hoga aur vese bhi vo yahaan lectures attend karne thode na aata hai aur aaj use koi problems puchni nahi thi".

Sunaina gets up and starts moving.

" Sunaina ruko" Vikrant called her.

She stopped and turned

"bolo"

"Sunaina please tum dono thoda???????????dur rehna vo aaj ghar par koi nahi hai saare servants chutti par hai aur mom to tumhare ghar gayi hui hongi"

she just comes to him and starts beating him with her books

"are Sunaina ruko bas ho gaya" Sanaya says and holds her hand "ab jaldi jao nahi to ??????????tum dono ko akele me time kam milega" she added.

"kya di tum bhi chalu ho gayi ab"

"acha ab jaa bhi mom ko me bata dungi"

"byeeee"

she leaves.

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At Nandini Mansion

Around 6:00 pm Rajat reaches the house and just kicks at the main door and then rushes to his room leaving the main door open. He enters his room throws his books on the bed and sits on the bed. After some time he gets up and goes to washroom to have a shower. At 7:00 he comes out wearing a white muscle T-shirt and black pajama. But he was still upset so he goes and sits on his study table and tries to study but was not able to concentrate on his studies.

Sunaina also reaches Nandini mansion at 7:30 pm and finds the main door open so she directly moves upstairs to Rajat's room. She knocks at his door but no reply comes from inside

"rajat please open the door" she again knocks at the door but this time also no one replied from inside so she went to Vikrant as there was a door in his room which opened in Rajat's room and that was the only door which Rajat locked very rarely especially when???( keep guessing I am sure sabne kar liya hoga saare intelligent jo hai).

Sunaina enters his room from that room Rajat was still sitting on his chair holding a book and pretending as if he is so much busy studying that he didn't heard the knock.

"me kabse door par knock kar rahi hu tumhe sunai nahi de raha tha kya"

Rajat don't reply and was continues looking into the book

" rajat me manti hu mujhse galti hui hai mujhe tum par aise nahi chillana chahiye tha par me sorry keh rahi hu na"she says coming towards his table she was standing just behind him.

"Tum yahaan se jaao mujhe koi baat nahi karni" this time he replied but flatly

"Rajat I am sorry" she pleads.

"ho gaya now you can leave"

"fine I am going agar mera yahaan rehna tumhe itna hi bura lag raha hai to me chali jaati"she said in chocked voice and her eyes gets filled with tears. She starts moving towards the door but then rajat holds her hand because from her vice he got to know that now she was crying and that was the only weakness of Rajat ?"sunaina's tears". He stands up and moves towards her she also turn her face. He wipes her tears which were rolling down her cheeks.

"Sunaina please stop crying tumhe pata hai na me tumhari aankkho me aansu nahi dekh sakta"

"to tum mujhe rulate kyon ho"

"acha baba sorry" he holds his ears she starts smiling and then hugs her.

"acha tum yahin ruko me coffee bana kar laata hu" he moves forward to go but then Sunaina stops him

"tumhara kitchen me jana mana hai bhul gaye"

"o no ab to me tumhare liye coffee bhi nahi bana sakta"

"koi baat nahi me bana kar laati hu vese bhi ek hi cheez to banana aati hai mujhe" she smiles and leaves for the kitchen.

In the kitchen she starts preparing the coffee but when she was pouring the coffee in cups one cup rolls down the platform and breaks. She accidentally places her leg on one piece and gets hurt.

"aaaaaaaaaaa"

Rajat who was sitting in his room heard sunaina's voice he came running down to the kitchen Sunaina was sitting on the floor and her left leg was bleeding.

"Sunaina tum bhi naa koi kaam theek se nahi kar sakti dekho kitna khoon aa raha hai" he says checking her injury.

"vo galti se is par per rakh diya"

"galti se dekho kitni chot lagi hai tumhe".

He then lifts her in his arms and then takes her to his room and makes her sit on the bed. Then he brings the first aid box and a bowl filled with water. He first cleans the wound and then takes out the antiseptic liquid.

"rajat nahi ye nahi is se jalta hai" she said making a innocent child.

Rajat looks at her and then smiles and says " nahi jalega me laga raha hu na ????. Tum ek kaam karo apni aankhe band kar lo".

She closes her eyes and then rajat applies antiseptic and he gets up and goes near to her.

"ho gaya" he says very softly in a romantic tone.

She opens her eyes and then looks into rajat's eyes and gets lost in them. She then stands up but she was still looking at him only (guys mana uske per me lagi hui hai par koi baat nahi pyaar me to log kya kya nahi she jaate Sunaina ne bhi apne per ka dard sah liya :d ) both of them were lost into each others eyes. Rajat came closer to her but she with Rajat's every step towards her she was moving backward but then finally there was no place left for her to move as now she was standing against the wall while Rajat was coming closer to her then she turned to her left to move but Rajat placed his hand then she turned to right but there also rajat placed his hand. Now there was no place for her to move. Rajat holds her and pulls her towards her.

There was complete silence in the whole house the sound made by wind could be heard clearly and there was no light switched on in the room and the only light in the room was moonlight which was directly falling on their faces.

Rajat was still looking into her eyes but Sunaina lowered her eyes. Then rajat's eyes dropped on her lips Sunaina closed her eyes while rajat was coming even closer to her. His lips were barely a cm apart from her when ????????????.. some one knocked at the door. Sunaina opens her eyes while rajat moves a few steps back.

"kaun hai" he asked

"he its me Vikrant ur bro" reply came.

"oh to bahar kyon ho andar aa jaao"

"aa to jaonga par lock to khol"

"lock? ? ? ? ? ? ?"

he goes and opens the door. As it was room was dark at first Vikrant couldn't watch Sunaina.

"kya hua andhere me kyon baith hua hai light to jala le" Vikrant says switching on the lights. As the he switched on the lights he saw Sunaina standing there in a dark corner.

"Sunaina tum abhi tak yahaan ho"

" aaaaaaaaa haan vo mein ???.. mein????" she said hesitatingly.

"haan bas vo jaa hi rahi thi vo me uske per me patti bandh raha tha"

"andhere mein" Vikrant said (shocked) " well I am sorry" he added.

"sorry kyon" both asked together.

"vo tum dono ko disturb kar diya na" he grinned.

"Vikrant tu ruk me tujhe chodunga nahi tu ruk??." And he started chasing Vikrant who was running in the whole room.

Then finally both of them gets tired so Vikrant goes and sits on the sofa and Rajat sits on the bed. Both of them were breathless.

"guyz I think I should leave now" Sunaina said.

"aao me ???. Tumhe neeche tak??????.chod deta hu" rajat said.

"me bhi chalta hu" Vikrant said.

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wow shruja ma sweet heart
a lovely update yaar
kya romance tha...well described
it was awesome
overall..a beautiful update
thanks for the pm....and sowi for the late comment

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