MY FF~ ATUT BANDHAN~note on pg 11 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shruja jiji
sorry yaar
i hav been a bit busy
v. well done loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shruja loved the update it was awesome
i jus love rajat's character is so adorable
anyways a lovely and a superb update
wonderful work
thanks for the pm
post da nxt part plzzz
love shona
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update.lovely.update soon.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u so much for reading n replying
sorry to disturb you all in urs busy schedule
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 17

All four entered the house everyone was sitting in the hall. As they saw them they came running towards them to welcome. Rajat and Vikrant were moving a little ahead of Sunaina and Sanaya. As they saw everyone coming towards them they passed a smile which soon disappeared as no one noticed them and just passed them. Sunaina and Sanaya touched Badi ma's feet to take her blessings.

"hmmmmmmm to ye hai meri hone wali bahu" she places her hands on Sunaina's face "bahut sundar hai bilkul pari jaisi" she added with a smile.

"haan ab to apko apni bahu mil gai hai beto ka ab kya kaam"

everyone turned back and saw Vikrant and Rajat standing there with their arms crossed.

"haan bahu ko sabne dekha aur jo use laya hai use kisi ne ni dekha" Rajat said making a angry face.

"o sorry bacho vo bahu ke samne kuch dikha hi nahi ab apni badi ma ke gale to lag jao" Badi ma said with her arms open.

"jaiye hume apse bat nahi karni hum jaa rahe hai humari nima di ke paas"

"oho mere chotu se bacho ko naraz bhi hona aata hai"

Both of them finally went and touched her feets and hugged her.

" mere bache to sach me bade ho gaye"

"badi maa mom dad kahan hai" Vikrant asked looking here and there.

"vo tumhe lagta hai yahaan rehne wale hai jabse aaye hai sabhi rishtedaro se milne mein lage hue hai to abhi bhi gaye honge kisi se milne"

"Badi ma anima di aur bhabhi kahaan hai dikhai ni de rahe" Rajat asked.

"vo dono room mein hai upar nima ke sasural se jewelry aai thi to wahi dekh rahi hai"

"ok badi ma hum unse milkar aate hai tab tak aap milo apni bahu se"

and both left the hall.

Inside the room

"bhabhi ye wala haar kitna sundar haina" namita said taking one necklace in her hands.

"haan ye to bahut pyara hai tum mehndi wale din yahi pehnana" Monisha replied.

Vikrant and Rajat entered the room without making any noise. Rajat placed his hands on Namita's eyes while Vikrant covered Monisha's eyes. Both didn't spoke a single word.

"kaun hai………" Nima asked and then touched Rajat's hands with her hands.

"Mera nonu" she said with excitement and joy.

"hmmmmmm agar vo nonu hai to ye Vikrant hai"

Both removes their hands from their eyes and sits on the bed.

"kya nima di aapko kaise pata chala ki me hu"

"are ise hi to kehte hai true bro sis love"

"batao na di aapko kaise pata laga ki hum hai"

"vo aise pata chala kyonki mene nonu ke haatho ke touch kiya aur use rings pehanane ka bahut shok hai to uski rings ne use fasa diya" Both namita and Monisha starts laughing.

"aur batao kaise ho tum dono aur Sunaina aur Sanaya nahi aayi kya tumare saath"

"vo dono neeche hai sab apni bahu se milna chahte hai to unhe gher kar bethe hue hai" Vikrant said

"hmmmm koi baat nahi me unse neeche jakar hi mil leti hu tab tak tum dono jaakar fresh ho jao"

"ok di ok babhi dinner pe milte hai" both got up and left the room Namita and Monisha too got up and went downstairs to meet Sanaya and Sunaina.

Rajat and Vikrant went to their respective rooms. Rajat took out his towel from his bag and went inside the washroom to have a shower.

On The Other hand Sunaina and Sanaya also got free finally and left for their rooms with Indra (maid).

"didi ek bat bole apko aap dono sach me bahut hi sundar ho" Indra said.

"thank you"

"are babre hum to badi ma ko dawa dena hi bhul gaye hume jana padega didi"

"theek hai tum jao hum apne kamro me khud hi chale jaenge"

"theek hai Sunaina didi vow ala aapka karma hai aur Sanaya didi vo wahaan apka"

"theek hai tum jao"

Indra left and Sunaina and Sanaya moved towards their rooms. Sanaya said good bye to Sunaina and went inside her room and Sunaina in her.

"mera saman kahaan hai" she thought "might be abhi tak servant laya hi nahi"

Then she just went towards the wardrobe and opened it. Meanwhile the washroom door opened and Rajat came out from it.( hehehehe Sunaina ko koi batao vo Rajat ke room mein aa gai hai)………


Ok guyz I know it's a very small one but rest in the next ud………..

I hope u all will like it……….

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwww..its perfect..luvd to read it..keep rocking dr...
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Posted: 15 years ago
well done as usual👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update. loved it.continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update shruja
update it soon yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 18

Rajat came out from the washroom. He was having one towel wrapped around his body and other one hanging around his neck. His hairs were still wet and water was dripping out from them. He was shaking them with his hand to make them dry when his eye fell on Sunaina who was busy searching something in her bag. Sunaina was still unaware that she was in Rajat's room. She was having her back facing Rajat. She wore a deep neck strap blouse. Rajat's eye fell on her fair back and got attracted towards her. He again looked at her and smiled naughtily. Something mischievous was going on in his mind. He made steps towards her and held her tightly in his arms.

Sunaina who was unaware of his presence got shocked. Her purse fell down on the floor. Her heart almost stopped for a second due to shock.

"Rajat what was that…… pata hai hum kitna dar gae the"

"o meri jaan ko dar bhi lagta hai I didn't knew it" Rajat said while playing with her black long hairs which were hanging loose.

Sunaina turned her face towards him. But Rajat didn't loosen his grip around her waist.

"Rajat leave me………koi dekh lega please……." She said with a pleading voice.

"let me tell you one thing that room is locked so no one is going to come……..Ok I will let you go but I want something in return"

"What you want"

"I want a kiss………"

"no way………leave me Rajat otherwise I will call everyone and tell them that you entered my room without permission"

"o excuse me madam………. First of all this is my room and you entered my room without my permission yours is the adjacent one………. And secondly if you will not give me a kiss I will surely call everyone and will tell them that their so called sanskari bahu entered my room without permission"

"You are blackmailing me……."

"You can say………it's a golden chance for me how can I miss it"

"What if I say no?"

"BADI MAA….."

"Stop stop…… ok fine I am giving"

she moved close to him Rajat closed his eyes. She looked at him and then smiled naughtily.

"Ouch……"

Sunaina stepped on his toe and started running in the room with Rajat chasing her. She couldn't move out as the room was locked and she didn't have the lock code. So she was running in the room only but in no time Rajat caught her. She was standing in front the bed with Rajat holding her wrist a few steps away from her. He was wearing slippers which were also wet.

"ok fine me haar gai tum jeet gaye"

Rajat freed her hand on seeing that she gave up finally. But Sunaina had something else in her mind so she tried to run from there for the last time. But Rajat was also prepared for this he immediately made a step towards her and caught hold of her hand. But in all this he slipped his leg and fell over her. Both fell down on the bed with Sunaina on bed and Rajat over her. The towel which was around his neck covered their faces. Their faces were so close to each other that their noses were almost touching each others and they could feel the warm breath on their lips. For few moments there was complete silence in the room the only sound was of the beating of two young hearts. Rajat looked at the beautiful face and kept on looking for few min. then he brought his lips a little closer to her to kiss her. Sunaina closed her eyes and red color rushed through her face. Rajat stopped and smiled at her as she was looking very cute just like a innocent baby. Then he turned his face to her right and gave her a kiss on her cheeks which turned pink. She opened her eyes and looked into his eyes and both were lost in their own world. The beautiful and romantic scene came to an end by the knock made on the door. Both came back to the real world. Then Rajat realized where he was so he immediately got up Sunaina also got up adjusted her sari.

"tum dekho me to washroom me bhag rah u warna koi hume aise dekhega to jarur galat samjhega" Rajat said and hurried into the washroom.

"are par lock code to batao" she tried to stop him but he already entered the washroom and locked the door.

"0012" he said in loud voice from inside.

She went and opened the door it was Indra.

"didi aap yahaan Rajat bhaiya ke room me"

"haan vo hum galti se aa gaye the bas ab humare room me hi jaa rahe he"

"acha theek hai rajat bhaiya hai kya andar"

"haan vo shayad naha raha hai kyon koi kaam hai us se"

"haan badi maa ne aap sab ko neeche bulaya hai"

"theek hai me fresh ho jaati hu fir aa jaongi"

"theek hai didi"

indra left and Sunaina also went to her room.

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At 7:30 pm

"rajat bhaiya badi maa aap sab ko neeche bula rahi hai aap jaldi jaiye me baaki sab ko bhi bula kar laati hu"

"theek hai"

and Rajat went downstairs and Indra went to Vikrant's room to call him. And luckily Sanaya and Sunaina were also there.

"acha hua aap sab yahi mil gaye aap ko kabse badi maa neeche bula rahi hai aap sab aaye kyon nahi"

"oh no so sorry me to bhul hi gait hi ek kaam karo tum dono neeche jao me Rajat ko lekar aati hu"

"par badi maa hume neeche kyon bula rahi hai vo bhi is time par I mean abhi to dinner me to kafi time hai"

"badi maa chahti hai aaj aarti Sunaina didi aur Rajat bhaiya kare isliye aur Sunaina didi aap chinta mat karo Rajat bhaiya ko to mene bol diya hai vo to neeche bhi pahuch gaye honge"

"kya?? ?? ?? Rajat neeche chala gaya……."

All three stood there with complete shock their facial expressions changed and all looked a bit worried and frightened. Vikrant without wasting any time ran towards the stairs followed by Sunaina and Sanaya and completely surprised and confused Indra. When he reached downstairs he saw Rajat standing in front of badi maa who was a lamp in her hand.

Rajat looked at the lamp and in no time those unclear images again started flashing in fron of his eyes. A girl tied to a pole and surrounded with fire from all sides a boy lying towards him.on the floor badly injured trying his best to get up and calling out the girls name. Two dead bodies lying one of a girl and one of a boy. And then scene got blurred and finally Rajat went unconscious and fell down on the floor.

"Rajatttttttt" Sunaina ran towards him.

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