MY FF~ ATUT BANDHAN~note on pg 11 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update.loved it.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for sharing dear!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow guys
thanks sinnie and shruja
lovly update guys
i enjoyed reading the update....it was fab...loved the scene where the six couple leg out of class.....that was so hilarious...love rajats character.....and yeh disco wala part...that was sooo marvellous.......loved the song too
overall well written...it was wonderful and superb
thanks for the pm...thanks for sharing
plzzz post the next part guys
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry friends for keep waiting u so long and thanks for commenting n waiting posting next part please comment
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PART 15

Sanaya, Vikrant, Miley and Danny were still on the dance floor while Sunaina and Rajat comes and sits on the chair.

"excuse me"

"yes sir"

"two glass lime juice"

one another man comes and sits on the seat next to Sunaina.

"excuse me one vodka "

he placed two glass of lime juice and one glass vodka. Sunaina by mistake picks up the wrong glass and drinks it in one go. Now she was all gone???????. She picked up a bottle of wine placed there and with it she went outside. Rajat also followed her but as he came outside she was no where to be seen. He ran here and there and the finally saw her with few kids. He went there and holds her and brought her back to parking area. He makes her sit on the seat next to driver and he himself goes and sits on the driver seat. He started his car and moved out.

"rajat gaadi roko mujhe jana hai" she said sweetly.

"nahi kahin nahi jaana chup chap baithi rahi" Rajat scolded her.

"nahi mujhe jana jana hai"

"Sunaina chup chap baithi raho yahin"

she starts making faces.

And then suddenly Rajat stopped the car the road was blocked due to a landslide as it was a very bad weather outside. Then his cell starts ringing.
It was Vikrant.

"hello"

"kahaan hai Rajat tu hum sab yahaan kabse tujhe dhund rahe hai"

"me yaar yahaan phas gaya hu????..vo yahaan raste me landslide hua hai to rasta block ho gaya hai"

"ok aur Sunaina kahaan hai"

"Sunaina vo mere saath hi hai????? acha tum log meri fikar mat karo tum log dusre raste se chale jao me jaise hi rasta khulega aa jaonga"

"theek hai but Take care of yourself"

"you too"

he cuts the call and turns to Sunaina but he gets shocked Sunaina was not there and the door to of her side was open. He got tensed and then came out of the car and starts looking for her here and there. She was standing on a stone at a height and was all in masti mood.


araa Sa Jhoom Lu Maein, Are Na Re Na Re Na
Zaraa Sa Ghoom Lu Maein, Are Na Re Na Re Na
Aa Tujhe Choom Lu Maein, Are Na Re Baba Na
Maein Chali Banke Hawaa, Rabba Mere Menu Bachaa

Mausam Yeh Beimaan, Masti Ka Yeh Samaa
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe Girne Lagaa Aasmaan
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhulungi
Mein Udke Gagan Ko Chhu Lungi
Maein Chali Banke Hawaa

Thandi Thandi Pawan, Jalta Hai Yeh Badan
Ji Chaahta Hai Bana Loon, Tujhko Apna Sajan
Hua Nahin Yeh Pehle Kabhi

Meri Chaal Badal Gayi Abhi, Abhi
Maein Chali Banke Hawaa

she still had the bottle in her hands so Rajat when got fad up of her activities he takes it from her and drinks the remaining wine.

Jati Hai Tu Kahan, Jaaneman Jan-E-Jaan
Ladki Hai Tu Khubsoorat, Ladka Mein Naujawan
Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa
Palkon Mein Tujhe Basaa Loon Aa
Ho Gaya Mujhe Nashaa
Rabba Mere Menu Bachaa

And then finally he lifts her on his shoulders and takes to a house which was made up of wood and no one lived there. There was dry grass all around so he made her sit there. Sunaina was sitting just behind him. so she gets up and comes to him and hugs him from behind.

"Rajat I love you so much"

he holds her hand and stands up. She was looking at him he very sweetly placed his hand on her face.

"I love you too"

and then kissed on her forehead. It starts raining outside so it was getting colder. Sunaina was shivering due to cold. Rajat takes out his shirt and placed it on her. Then suddenly Sunaina got in masti mood again and pushed him due to which he falls down on the ground but while he was falling he was holding her hand so she too falls over him. both had an eye lock. Then after few min she gets up and sits beside him he too gets up.

"Sunaina ab tum so jao"

"nahi mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai"

"offo Sunaina bahut raat ho gai hai so jao"

"tumhe sona hai to so jao me to jaa rahi hu"

she gets and starts moving outside but then Rajat too gets up and comes and stands in front of her blocking her way.

"nahi Sunaina tum bahar nahi jaogi bahar bearish ho rahi hai"

"nahi tum hato yahaan se hume jana hai"

"Sunaina mene kahaa na nahi"

"vo dekho"

Rajat turns his face where she was pointing and meanwhile she came out in the rain. It was a house in the forest and both of them were all alone there. Rajat also comes out Sunaina was dancing with joy and was enjoying a lot while he only remained standing and smiled at her innocence ness. Then finally both of them comes inside the house again.

"tum yahin par ruko me andar dekh kar aata hu agar koi kapde hai kya."

She nodes her head

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Rajat comes out with a lehenga of red colour.

"ye lo tum ye pehen lo shayad tumhari hi size ka hai"

Sunaina takes it from him and goes inside to change. While he changed his clothes in that room only. He wore a black vest with a jean pent.

He waited for Sunaina to come out and was cont. looking at the door of that room. Finally it opened and Sunaina came out wearing a red lehenga. She looked dam beautiful in it almost like a bride. He just couldn't move his away from her. The lehenga which she wore didn't had any dupatta so it appeared as if she was wearing a short top with a long skirt. He moved closer to her. So close that he could hear her heart beats clearly. She was looking into his eyes. He slowly raised his hand and touched her beautiful rosy lips. She simply closed her eyes. And then she just moves a little forward.


Raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin - 2
Tera nasheela badan baahon ne chhoda nahin
Aankhen to kholi magar sapna voh toda nahin
Haan, vohi voh vohi
Saanson pe rakha hua tere honton ka
Sapna abhi hai vahin
Oh, raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
(Tere bina bhi kabhi tujhse machal leti hoon
Karvat badalti hoon to sapna badal leti hoon) - 2
Tera khayaal aaye to balkhaake pal jaata hai
Paani ke chaadar tale tan mera jal jaata hai
Haan, vohi voh vohi
Saanson pe rakha hua tere honton ka
Sapna abhi hai vahin
Oh, raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Tere gale milne ke mausam bade hote hain
Janmon ka vaada koi yeh gham bade chhote hain
Ho, tere gale milne ke mausam bade hote hain
Janmon ka vaada koi yeh gham bade chhote hain
Lambi si ek raat ho, lamba sa ek din mile
Bas itna sa jeena ho milan ki ghadi jab mile
Haan, vohi, bas vohi
Saanson pe rakha hua tere honton ka
Sapna abhi hai vahin
Ho, raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin


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Next day (morning)

Rajat and Sunaina were still sleeping. Sunaina's head was on his chest while Rajat was holding her by her waist. Both of them were very close to each other. Then sun rays hits her face. She slowly opened her eyes. Due to drink her head was paining. She then looked around and saw Rajat there without shirt. His shirt lying on the floor and her clothes????..then she gets up and then she realized that Rajat was holding her tightly. She tried remembering what all happened last night but she only remembered that Rajat lifted her in his arms and made her lie down there. Many thoughts came in her mind.

"o god ye mene kya kar diya"

then Rajat also gets up and freed her from his grip.

"good morning Sunaina"

she was lost in her thoughts and didn't replied. Rajat looked at her tears were rolling down her cheeks.

"Sunaina kya hua why are you crying.

She just turned to him.

"Rajat kal raat kya hua tha mujhe sab sach 2 batao"

"kal raat??? kal raat kuch bhi nahi hua tha Sunaina"

"Rajat please sach-2 batao"

"haan Sunaina me sach keh raha hu kal Raat kuch nahi hua"

"tum jhuth keh rahe ho"

and she started crying badly.

Rajat holds her arms and jerks her.

"Sunaina hosh me aao" she shouted "meri taraf dekho Sunaina meri ankho me dekho"

she looked into his eyes.

"me sach keh raha hu kal raat kuch nahi hua tha??????????? mujh par bharosa haina"

he looked at her with hope.

She nods her head and then hugs him tightly and burst out crying.

"ab rona band karo nahi to ab jarur kuch kar dunga me"

she gets apart and starts smiling.

"that's like my Sunaina"
Edited by shruja - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for sharing its lovely dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. too good.
romantic also.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shruja and sinne
a fabulous and a lovely update
loved all the scenes
they were well written and beautifully described
thanks for an awesome and a superb update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 16

Both of them reached Nandini mansion. Every gets very happy to see them.

"thank god tum dono bikul theek ho hum to dar gaye the" Sanaya said.

Sunaina and Rajat just smiled Vikrant comes to them and hugs both of them. First he hugs Rajat and then Sunaina. When he hugged her he found that she was having high temperature.

"Sunaina tumhe to bahut tez fever hai"

"nahi Vikrant me theek hu aur fever thodi der me theek ho jayega don't worry"

"kya??  Sunaina tumne mujhe kyon nahi bataya" Rajat comes to her and placed his hand on her forehead to check "puri body almost jal rahi hai aur tum keh rahi ho sab theek hai" he scolds her.

"Sunaina chalo room me chalo aur Rajat tum doc uncle ko bulao" Sanaya holds her hands and takes her to the room.

"are Rajat tum aa gaye Sunaina kahaa hai" Mrs Roy comes out from her room.

"haan maa aur Sunaina apne kamre me hai vo use kafi tez fever hai isliye …………… bas me abhi doc uncle ko hi call kar raha tha"

"Sunaina ko fever hai" she gets shocked. "haan theek hai tum unhe bulao tab tak me uske liye adrak wali chai bana kar laati hu"

Mrs Roy goes to the kitchen to prepare tea for her while Rajat calls doctor and then goes to her room. As he enters the room Sanaya and Vikrant moves out of the room leaving them alone in the room. Rajat goes and sits beside her.

"Sunaina tumne mujhe bataya kyon nahi tumhe fever hai"

"vo mujhe laga tum pareshan ho jaoge isliye nahi bataya"

"pareshan vo to me ab bhi ho gaya hu na aur shayad naraz bhi"

"I am sorry Rajat but please don't get angry with me" and tears starts floating in her eyes.

"ok I am not angry with you but please don't cry"

and then he kissed her on her forehead meanwhile Mrs Roy also comes there with ginger tea.

"Sunaina beta ise pi lo acha lagega"

she gives her the cup of tea and then placed her hand on her head and smiles and moves out.

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around 3:00 pm

Sunaina wakes up now she was perfectly fine. Rajat, Sanaya and Vikrant were sitting there.

"Sunaina ab kaisa lag raha hai" Sanaya asked her.

"di me ab bikul theek hu infact mera to kahin bahar jaane ka man kar raha hai subah se bed par lete 2 back me pain start ho gaya hai"

"hmmmmmmm to shopping par chale vese bhi kal to hume India ke liye nikalna hai humare paas sirf aaj ka din bacha hai" Sanaya said getting very excited.

"ok so sab ready ho jao" Vikrant gets up from his seat.

All four gets ready and leaves.

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At Omex Shopping Mall

"Rajat kyon na hum sabke liye gifts le le" Sunaina got very excited.

Rajat smiles and nods his head.

"Naitik jiju ke liye meine ek sherwani design ki he vo pehnenge na" Sanaya looked at Vikrant  and Rajat with hope.

"of course pehnenege yaar afterall itni achi fashion designer ne design kiye he" Vikrant said with a wide smile on his face.

In 2 hours they were through with their shopping. While they were coming out of the shopping mall they saw few children playing there. So Sunaina also goes and joins them.

"hello" Sunaina said.

"hi" all the children replied in one tone.

She played with them for some time.
"Sunaina we are getting late lets go" Sanaya called her.

"ya di coming in a min" she got up and waved her hand to say goodbye to children and then came back where Sanaya Rajat and Vikrant were standing.

All four headed towards the parking area.

"di vo bache kitne cute aur pyaare the na" Sunaina said still thinking about them.

"haan vo to the but don't worry tere aur Rajat ke bache unse bhi jyada cute honge" Sanaya replied in teasing tone.

"are par honge kab" Rajat said getting restless.

All turned towards him and started laughing then he realized what he said and then he too joined them and started laughing with them.


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Next Day all four left for India

In the plane Sunaina was sitting on the seat next to Rajat while Sanaya and Vikrant were on the back seat.

"Rajat I am so excited hum log finally India jaa rahe hai" Sunaina jumped on her seat with excitement.

"even I am so excited afterall its for the first time we are going to meet badi maa, Vickey bhaiya,monisha babhi and Dev. He Sunaina you know what jis din humari engagement thi na vo zid pakad ke beth gaya tha ki chachi se milna he. Badi mushkil se nima di ne use samjhaya"

"kitna maza aayega na wahaan sab ke saath"

after some time Sunaina went off to sleep. She placed her head on Rajat's shoulder and holds his hand tightly. Rajat covered her with the blanket. They had only one blanket which was shared by both of them and then he also placed his head on her head and holding her other hand he also went off to sleep.

On the back seat

Sanaya was sleeping with her head on Vikrant's shoulder with a cute smile on her face. She was looking very cute just like a fairy while sleeping in short sleeping beauty. Vikrant couldn't move his eyes away from her and kept on looking at her. Then suddenly she holds his arm tightly and her head on his chest. It looked as if she was hugging him. Vikrant just passed a smile and then took out his cell and started playing game.

After a long journey finally they landed on Mumbai Airport.

All four came out of the airport and looked around for the driver. Then two cars stopped in front of them. Drivers placed their luggage in the car.

"suno ek kaam karo tum ye saars samaan lekar chale jao hum car khud drive karke ghar aa jayenge" Rajat said to one of the driver.

"ok sir" and started moving towards the car.

"acha address to batao" Sanaya stopped the driver.

"oh sorry ma'am" and then handed him a piece of paper with address witten on it. "ma'am this is the address"

"ok now you can leave"

"Vikrant please aaj tum drive karoge mera man nahi he" Rajat looked at Vikrant

"ok par tera man nahi he vo bhi drive karne ka ku6 samajh nahi aaya chakkar kya hai" Vikrant looked at him suspiciously.

"Nothing yaar bas aaj mood nahi he"

"ok chal beth" Vikrant opened the door next to driver's seat.

"nahi me peeche bethunga Sanaya please tum aage beth jao" and he opened the back seat door.

Now finally Sanaya and Vikrant understood why he was not interested in driving today. Both of them gave a "hum samajh gaye" sort of look. Rajat didn't pay much attention to it and went and sat on the back seat beside Sunaina. Vikrant started the car and now they were on the Mumbai roads where driving car smoothly is almost impossible.

"damn it fir se jam abhi thodi der pehle to badi mushkil se jam se nikale the" Vikrant hits his hand on the steering.

Vikrant was now fade up of applying brakes again and again while on the other hand Rajat was enjoying it as he was getting more time to spend with Sunaina. He was sitting holding her hand which was one of those things which he loved. Finally they moved a little ahead and were now a road with few vehicles. Vikrant got happy to see that empty road as if someone got water in the desert on the hottest day. He speeded the car but then ……

"he Vikrant stop the car" Sunaina said.

Vikrant applied breaks and looked at her even Sanaya and Rajat looked at her with shock.

"now what Sunaina" Vikrant asked.

"he why you guyz are looking at me like this"

"bolo kya hua gadi kyon rukwa di" Sanaya asked.

"actually mujhe change karna he me aise thode na sabke samne jaongi"

"but what's wrong with this dress" Sanaya looked at her. She was wearing a white Capri with a blue off shoulder top.

"yaa you are looking really very pretty in this also" Rajat said.

"but I  want to change badi maa ke samne pehli baar ye pehen ke jaongi kya me"

"ok fine chalo" Vikrant unlocked the car.

All four came out of the car and went inside a showroom where she changed her dress and clad herself in a very beautiful pink color sari. She was very pretty and Rajat got more attracted towards her and just wanted kiss her and lift her in his arms but  stopped himself.

Finally after the payment was made they came out of the showroom and headed towards the bungalow.

They stopped in front of a beautiful bungalow surrounded by big trees from all sides. With a beautiful garden which had almost all species of flowers and other ornamental plants. With a beautiful fountain at the center it was a beach side bungalow which added to its beauty. All four just kept on looking at it without blinking their eyes.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shruja
sorry yaar
i hav been a bit busy
i wasn't reading pm's
i have seen ur pm's today and the story is going awesome
i hav read all the parts and its great
plz update it soon

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