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Part 11

"he Vikrant tumne Rajat aur Sunaina ko dekha" Sanaya asked moving her eyes over the guest.

"nahi mene bhi nahi dekha……kyon koi kaam tha"

"haan vo mom ko kuch kaam tha shayad"

"chalo dhund kar aate hai"

Both of them start searching them in the whole house. Miley also left for her home as her mother called her (she was the only one who knew where they were). At last they headed towards terrace.

Vikrant opens the door and moves his eyes on the terrace.

"yahaan to koi nahi hai chalo neeche hi chalte hai"

"kya neeche chalte hai……… Vikrant dekho na kitni achi barish ho rahi hai chalo na masti karte hai" Sanaya said stretching her arm to feel the raindrops on her palm.

"barish……."Vikrant said with surprisingly.

"what…….. tum to aise behave kar rahe ho mano mene barish nahi bhut kaha ho" Sanaya said "ab chalo" she added and grabs his hand and takes out in rain.

She starts dancing with joy while Vikrant just stands and starts staring her and smiles…..

While on the other hand Rajat and Sunaina were lost in their own world away from this world where no one was there only they were there with love all around them.

Both gets apart Rajat also freed her from his grip. She lowers her eyes and moved two three steps forward.

yeh saazish hai buundon ki

koi khwaahish hai chup chup si

yeh saazish hai buundon ki

koi khwaahish hai chup chup si

dekho na...

hawaa kuchh haule haule

zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole

kyon duuri hai ab darmiyaan

dekho na...

phir na hawaayein hongi itni besharam

phir na dagmag dagmag honge ye qadam

haay

phir na hawaayein hongi itni besharam

phir na dag-mag dag-mag honge ye qadam

saawan yeh sidha nahin khufiyaa bara

kuchh to baraste huye kah rahaa

samjho na...

hawaa kuchh haule haule

zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole

kyon duuri hai ab darmiyaan

dekho na...

jugnuun jaisi chaahat dekho jale bujhe

mithi si mushkil hai koi kya kare

jugnuun jaisi chaahat dekho jale bujhe

mithi si mushkil hai koi kya kare

honthon ki arzi aisi thukaraaona

saanso.n ki marzi ko jhuthlaaona

chhu lo na...

hawaa kuchh haule haule

zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole

kyon duuri hai ab darmiyaan

dekho na...

Guyz I hope you all can imagine their performances…..

Both couples unaware each others presences were lost in their own dreamland. As the song gets finished Rajat and Sunaina comes out of the room and both were shocked. Their eyes widened and they continuously stared. They were trying to absorb what they were watching was reality or a dream.

"Vikrant was holding Sanaya in his arms and both of lost in one another's eyes."

Rajat Coughs

Gearing Rajat's voice both came back to reality and Vikrant just opened his rams Sanaya who was still in his arms fell down.

"I am sorry Sanaya" Vikrant said and then offered her his hand for support.

"rehne do mujhe tumhari madat ki jarurat nahi hai"Sanaya said angrily and gets up by her own..

"ye sab ho kya raha tha yahaan" Rajat inspected.

Although it was not raining now but still Rajat felt that he is getting wet.

"udho sapno ki duniya se bahar aao"

Rajat heard a faint voice. He opened his eyes and saw a blurred fig of someone standing beside him. as he opened his eyes completely he saw Vikrant standing there with  a empty bucket in his hands.

"kya bro subah 2 gila kar diya………. Aur kisi tareeke se nahi udha sakte tha" Rajat said getting up from his bed.

"1/2 ghanta ho gaya udhate 2 par tu hai ki apni Sunaina ko chod kar aana hi nahi chahta" Vikrant said in a bit angry tone and then dropped the bucket on the floor.

"Sunaina ……… kisne kahaa me Sunaina ka sapna dekh raha tha" he said hesitantly.

"rehne de mujhe pata hai aur vese bhi tujhe mujhse behtar aur koi nahi jaanta……………….. aur haan ab jaldi se ready ho jaa nahi to Sunaina tera kya haal karne wali hai ye to bhagwan bhi nahi jaanta" Vikrant leaves the room.

Rajat immediately runs into the washroom to have bath.

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Rajat comes down all ready in 20 min only. Vikrant was sitting on the dinning table just in front of Mr Roy while Mrs Roy was serving them the breakfast. Rajat comes and sits next to Vikrant.

"Good Morning dad……… Good morning mom" he said.

"good morning" both replied.

"vese Rajat don't you think aaj tum kaafi jaldi tayaar ho gaye ho Sunaina se milne ki itni jaldi hai kya" Vikrant said teasingly in very low voice.

Rajat pinches him on his hand.

"chup chap breakfast karo" he said with a artificially smile.

Mr Roy was reading Newspaper. Then he placed it aside.

"to Vikrant today You have your match with Brazil right" Mr Roy asked.

"yes dad aur agar aaj hum jeet jaate hai to our team will jump to 1st position" he replied confidently.

"ok Vikrant chal we are getting late" Rajat gets up from his chair followed by Vikrant. Both touched their parent's feet and took their blessings and then left.

Vikrant takes out his favorite car

while takes out his brand new car to his collection of his cars (it was gifted to him by Sanaya, Sunaina and Vikrant when he got the best singer award)

both as usual accelerated their cars and gets out of the house with full speed.

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Sunaina and Sanaya were as usual waiting outside the stadium in the parking area then two cars stopped in front of them with a screeching sound. Both just smiled

"ye dono kabhi nahi sudhar sakte" Sunaina said.

"sach me"

both gets out of there cars 

"he is baar winner kaun tha" both asked excitedly.

"puch to aise raho ho jaise har baar tum dono me se koi na koi jeetata hai …………. Well sorry again dono saath naa ek sec jyada na ek sec come." Sanaya said making a very fad up type of face.

"well koi baat nahi …………. Hiiiiii to kar lo" Rajat said

Both hugged them and then all four went inside. Sanaya, Sunaina and Rajat goes and takes their seats while Vikrant leaves for his changing room.

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Match starts and everyone eyes were on the ground. Both teams takes there position in the ground and here it goes…….

In the first min only Brazil team made a lead of 1 goal. Then for the next half time there was no goal made by any team. Sanaya was cont. looking at Vikrant and was enchanting some verses while Sunaina also couldn't move her eyes from the ground. On the other hand Rajat was all relaxed maybe he had full faith on his Brother. (yaar after all twins hai to ek dusre ko kuch jyada ache se samajhte hai ;d).

Only ten min were left and Australian team needed 2 goals to win this game. Then Vikrant got the ball he kicked it and moved in the direction of goal post then passed that ball to another team member as the players of the opp. Team blocked him from all the directions. As he passed the ball everyone moved to the player who was having the ball. He again passed it to Vikrant. Vikrant finally reached the goal post and he kicked the ball. The ball was in the air he simply looked at the ball and YES it was a goal……

Australian team still needed 1 more goal to win. Ball was with Vikrant he ran  and then passed to another player and then that player after moving a little again passed it to him. he headed towards the goal post. Stretched his leg high to kick the ball but…………… then he jumped high in the air and fell down on the ground with his face facing downwards.

Sanaya got up from her chair

"Vikrant ………" she screamed.

Rajat and Sunaina also got up from their chairs and then all three ran towards the ground but the security guard stopped them from entering.

Refree whistled and declared it a foul and the game was paused for few min. Doctors went inside and gave him some painkillers and placed the bandage on the injuries. Vikrant got injured on his head and his right ankle. He just looked in the direction where all three were standing and gave them " I am fine" type of look. Sanaya eyes were filled with tears but she didn't let them fall.

Match again started and now only 1 min was left and the ball was with the player of the opp. Team but then Australian team succeeded in getting the ball they took the ball to the goal post and passed it to Vikrant who was standing there and then the count down began……. 10………..9……………..8……………

And Vikrant stretched his leg. His leg muscles contracted and it was paining also very much but he gathered all his power and kicked the ball.

The whole stadium went mad everyone started shouting. Rajat along with Sunaina and Sanaya was shouting after all today his brother did what he wanted to do for so long. Australian team was now the no. one team of the world.

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Rajat, Sunaina and Sanaya were waiting for Vikrant in the parking area. Vikrant came there holding a stick for support. As Sanaya saw him she just ran and hugged him while Vikrant was all surprised. Sanaya started crying.

"Sanaya me theek hu" Vikrant said very softly.

"haan janti hu theek ho….. ye sir pe chot to mujhe lagi hai haina". Sanaya said getting apart from. Rajat and Sunaina also came there and hugged him and congratulated him.

"ab tera match khatam ho gaya na ab tu mere saath hospital chal raha hai" Rajat said.

"hospital par kyon me bilkul theek hu" Vikrant said making a weird face.

"chup chap chal raha hai yaa maa ko bolu…… vese bhi maa ne match dekh liya oga aur phone try kar rahi hogi"

"try kar rahi hogi matlab" Vikrant all confused.

"haan vo mene switch off kar diya tha"

"acha theek hai me hospital chala jaonga Sanaya ke saath aur tu aur Sunaina ghar chale jao aur maa ko keh dena chinta na kare I am perfectly fine"

"haan me Vikrant ko hospital le jaati hut um dono ghar jao" Sanaya said.

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Sanaya and Vikrant left in her car while Rajat called his driver to come and take the car back. He just goes and opens the door of the car. Sunaina comes and sits and then he also goes and sits on the driver seat and looked at her with a naughty smile on his and said "ho jaye"

She also looked at him and then said confidently " ho jaye"

He pressed the accelerator and within no time they were on a empty road. It was the road which hardly had any vehicles and any cops. So whenever both of them wanted to go on a long drive they preferred that only.

Both were moving at a very fast speed we can almost full speed and then suddenly both were shocked there mouths opened and their eyes widened.

"COPS" Sunaina said shocked.

"ab kya Karen" rajat asked all confused as the cops were giving their hand to stop the car.

"don't stop keep on moving……. Me kuch sochti hu tab tak" she replied.

As she said he didn't stopped the car and kept on moving with same speed. The cops started chasing them with there cars. Sunaina was all scared and was biting her nails in tension. The cops car was slowly approaching them seeing this rajat increased his speed but then it was a speed breaker right in front of them. He didn't slowed the speed and then their car jumped high and a football came in Sunaina 's hands. She simply looked atvthe ball a big smile spreads on her face.

"got it" she said excitedly.

"what ……….. ball" rajat looked at her with eyebrows raised.

"no idiot . ….idea" she said with a naughty smile on her face and something …… in her mind.

The cops were still chasing them and then they turned to another road and they came out from another road and stopped their car right in front of Rajat's car. He immediately applied the breaks. The car came to rest just a feet away from the cop car. One inspector came out from the car and came towards them. He knocked at the window on Rajat's side. Rajat opened the window glass.

"your license please" cops said in a very angry tone.

He takes out his wallet from his pocket and gave him his license. He checked the license.

"so Mr Roy why you were driving with such a great speed" he asked him still looking in his license. Then he heard a voice of someone groaning. A female voice.

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa………aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa".

Rajat turned towards Sunaina she was groaning with pain he held her hand in his hand and placed another hand on her head.

"Sunaina just few more min dear….." he said softly and then turned to inspector.

"she is….." he pointed his finger on Sunaina.

"she is my wife sir" he replied with feeling of care in his voice " now may I sir" rajat pointed his finger to his license.

"o yes.." he gave him his license back "you must be searching for a hospital so just go straight and take a left and then a right…." He added.

"thank you sir" rajat replied with a smile and then he closed the window glass again and then pressed the accelerator.

Sunaina takes out the ball and throws it on the backseat and both started laughing like mad.their stomach started paining but they couldn't resist laughing. Then finally rajat got a bit serious

"Mrs Roy kya hua beta yaa beti….." he asked seriously.

At first Sunaina was shocked to hear this question but then she also controlled her laugh and said " dono"

Then both again burst out laughing………

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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
amazing updates lozl.....muahh..truly loved it..spc rajat's driving..heheee
and......i loved d last 2 lines...

"Mrs Roy kya hua beta yaa beti….." he asked seriously.

At first Sunaina was shocked to hear this question but then she also controlled her laugh and said " dono"

Then both again burst out laughing………

thnxx 4 such a nyc update!!tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Thanks for sharing dear!...Its lovely.....👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
superb,brilliant,mindblowing update.I loved it and specially last part.Rajat's driving then their conversation .omg. pls contiue soon dear.
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#95
thnxx 4 such a nyc update!!tc👏⭐️
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#96
beautifullllllll update dear.....just wowwwwwwwww....luvd it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
thanx for ur luvely comments............😊
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wow gals
first of all the cars are very nice..kya style hai
second a superb update
plzz post the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Part 12

At Nandini Mansion

Mrs. Roy was moving here n there tensely waiting for Vikrant and Rajat to come. Then door bell rings she immediately moved towards the door to open it. Her eyes got filled with tears as she saw Vikrant. He was holding Sanaya for support.

"tum dono na ek na ek din meri jaan nikal kar hi rahoge" Mrs Roy said angrily.

"maa me theek hu" Vikrant said with a smile on his face.

"haan dikh raha he kitna theek he"

"maa khel me aisi choti moti chot to lagti rehti he"

"ye choti moti chot he to badi chot kaisi hogi per to tod hi liya he ab kya haath bhi todna he" she got more angry.

As Vikrant got hurt on his leg he was finding it difficult to stand for long and finally it started paining very much.

"aaaaaaaaaaa" he groaned.

"kya hua" asked worriedly and gave her hand also for support "Sanaya ise andar le chalo beta" she added.

Both takes him inside and makes him sit on the sofa. Sanaya goes inside to get water for Mrs. Roy and Vikrant.

"dikhao to jyada chot to nahi aayi"

"are maa I am perfectly fine kuch nahi hua he mujhe"

she stands up turns her face to other side

"he bhagwan ye dono nalayak mere hi bete banakar paida karne the" she looked upwards.

"are maa nalayak se yaad aya dusra nalayak…… I mean Rajat kahaan he" he asked looking here and there for him.

"kya matlab kahaan he tum dono ke saath hi to gaya tha" she said in a bit tensed tone.

By the time Sanaya also comes out holding a tray with two glasses of water. She first offered it to Mrs Roy and then to Rajat.

"iska matlab dono abhi tak nahi aaye"Sanaya also got tensed.

"haan vo dono to humse pehle hi nikal gaye the aur uske baad hum to hospital bhi jaakar aa gaye" Vikrant said seriously.

"he bhagwan mere bacho ki raksha karna" Mrs Roy joined her hands and prayed to god.

"maa me abhi use phone karke puchta hu aap chinta mat karo dono theek honge" Vikrant picks up the phone placed on the near by table.

"Sanaya tum maa ko andar le jaao aur medicines de do"

"me kahin nahi jaa rahi hu pehle tum rajat ko phone karo aur pucho kahaan he vo"

"maa me puch raha hu na aur aap agar medicines nahi loge to sabse jyada gussa rajat hi hoga aapko pata he na"

"haan aunty aap chaliye aur medicines le lijiye"

Mrs Roy gets up and Sanaya takes her to her room. While Vikrant dialed Rajat's Number but of no use as his cell was switched of he tried on Sunaina's cell but it was in Sanaya purse.

Sanaya comes out of the room after giving Mrs Roy her medicines.

"kya hua kahaan he dono" she asked.

"don't know……….. rajat ka cell switched off he and Sunaina's cell is there in your purse.

"well dono ko bahut dino baad akele time mila he to kahin ghumne nikal gaye honge don't worry" Sanaya placed her hand on his shoulder.

"I think you are right" Vikrant said "acha maa ko medicine de di" he asked.

"haan aur aunty abhi abhi so gayi he aura b tum bhi kha lo aur apni medicines lo" Sanaya picked the tray placed on the table and turned.

"aaaaaaaaaaa" a sound came..

she turned. It was Vikrant as accidentally he got hit by that tray when she turned. It started bleeding as it hits him on the injury. she just dropped the tray and came to him.

"I am sorry Vikrant I am really sorry"

"its ok Sanaya"

she then gets up and runs to a room and comes out with a first aid box. She sat beside him and opened the bandage. Then she cleaned the wound and then again placed the bandage on it. While she was doing all this Vikrant was continuously looking at her without blinking his eyes. When she was done with everything she just looked at him and saw that he was continuously staring her. She also looked into his eyes and both had a eye lock.

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On the other hand Rajat and Sunaina also reached Nandini Mansion

He stopped the car in front of the main door. He comes out of the car and then went and opened the door of Sunaina's side also. He offered his hand to her she holds his hands and comes out of the car. Both of them were still had a smile on their faces. Then Rajat looked at a car parked just in front of his. It was Sanaya's car then he turned to Sunaina and gave her a naughty smile she also looked at the car and immediately understood what he wanted to say. She also smiled naughtily.

Both opened the door due to which Vikrant and Sanaya who were lost in their own world comes back to reality. Both looked at door Rajat and Sunaina entered Rajat was holding her from her shoulder. She looked very weak and ill. He just takes her to sofa and makes her sit there.

"he guyz tum dono kahaan the" Sanaya asked.

"we went to hospital" Rajat replied in a very low voice and he was a bit tensed also.

"kya hua sab theek to he na" Vikrant asked impatiently.

"hmmmmmmmmm" rajat replied.

"to phir tum dono hospital kyon gaye the" Sanaya got more confused.

"Sunaina ki tabiyat kuch kharab ho gayi thi isliye" Rajat replied.

"kya hua Sunaina ko …………… aur doctor ne kya kahaa…….." Sanaya asked.

"doctor ne kahaa ki Sunaina ………………vo doctor ne kahaa ki……………..

then Sunaina acted as if she will fall down from the sofa. Rajat immediately holds her.

"Sunaina sambhal ke………………… at least ab to apna dhyan rakha karo………" rajat said caringly.

"he hold on guyz…………….. What's this going on ……………… I mean Sunaina you………………." Sanaya just gets up from her seat. Her mouth was open due to shock and her eyes widened.

Even Vikrant was shocked and he first looked at Rajat who was sitting with his head in his hand and then turned to Sunaina who was also vvery tensed.

"tum dono jaante bhi ho tum kya keh rahe ho…………….." Vikrant also asked very surprisingly.

"yaar tum dono ki sagai huye abhi 15 din huye he aur shaadi abhi 1 saal baad he………………… how can you do this yaar………………….." Sanaya said getting a bit angry and tensed.

"hold on Sanaya ………….. and calm down…………………..Rajat ye sab kab hua………………" Vikrant said very seriously.

Rajat still looking at the carpet and he had a mild smile on his face although he tried his best to hide it but was not able to do so. then he got serious and replied " engagement night".

"what engagement night but us din to tum dono ……………… o noooooooooo" Sanaya almost shouted.

"he Sanaya dheere mom so rahi he ……………… aura b jo ho gaya so ho gaya ab ye socho aage kya karna he I mean mom dad ko kaise samjhayenge" Vikrant said.

Rajat then looked upwards and saw sanaya's and Vikrant face and now this time he couldn't control and burst out laughing and Sunaina too joined him. Whereas Sanaya and Vikrant were all blank then Rajat and Sunaina finally controlled themselves and then narrated the whole incident.

"you guyz are ultimate" Sanaya said and then she also started laughing.

All four were laughing madly and their stomach started paining but they continued laughing and Rajat even fell down from the sofa.

Finally all stopped.

"hmmmmmmmm Vikrant just look at them jab se engagement hui he inki dono ki shaitaniyan kuch badti hi jaa rahi he hume kuch karna chahiye" Sanaya said looking at them while both just hides their faces with their hands.

"haan dekh raha hu ………… vese rajat tumhare dono bache kahaan he………….. kahin us inspector paas to nahi chod aaye" Vikrant started teasing him.

"bache yaar mene khudne nahi dekhe tumhe kya batao …………… ab tum ye sab to Sunaina se hi pucho kahaan he mere beta beti…………."

all four again started laughing…………..

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow..nyc ud yaa..me 2 laughing like rajat😎

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