Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 37

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was mind blowing
waiting eagerly for next part
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi MAnali, how r u dear?? I'm fine dear ! what abt u?😊

part 12: Lovely lovely...awesome..loved RN scene..u hv described their feelings so well.. it ws the best scene of the whole ff.. 😉 ..ofcourse it hs to be na..afterall RN were meeting for the first time after so many months...n they confessed their feelings too...

thank you so much for all the beautiful words dear 😊 And I'm glad that you liked it !

Oh was it??? well the enthusiastic replies points the same that , all liked this UD more than other Uds.😉

And yes, it had to be....afterall...it's RN's first meet!!!

Part 13:
Superb update... 👏 Thanks😊

so all cadets talked to Raj.. n now they r coming to meet him soon... gr888..waiting for their meeting with their fav. sir...

ohh no..again Rahul.. i hate this man.. 😡 ..hope Naina use jald hi sab bata de.. jitni der karegi use batane mein utni hi mushkil hogi uske aur raj ke liye... Me too hope so. Ki naina jald se jald Rahul ko sab sach bata de...!

Raj pata anhi kaise react karega after knowing abt NAina's engagement.. tumne aise point pe lakar end kar diya na.. 😒 Well main sirf itna keh sakti hoon, ki Raj bhi ek insaan hai...bhagwaan nahi. So, lets hope for the positive reaction!

waiting for the next update....

there wsnt any RN scene..so want RN scene atleast in the next update n hope everything sort out soon...!!!

Ohk...😆 will try and put it in next UD for sure...arey yaar, agar RN scene nahi bhi raha toh kya??? Fic toh RN hai na??!!😉

Reply for part 12:-

nice update yaar,

u presented everyone's emotions very well.....of rajnaina's,of shalini's,of the cadets'.everyone held an important place in raj's life,so they r bound to be happy to see him back(just like US😉)

being the writer it is ur choice to continue the fic in ur way,but i do hope that now u r not going to seperate them for anything be it rahul or naina's parents.after all the hardships,they deserve to be with one another all the time.i hope raj understands naina and supports her thru this mess and rahul is mature enough to understand their bond and backs off.

pls yaar u have stopped the fic at such a point that i'm practically going mad thinking of ur next UD😍😭,so plz UD soooooooooooooooooon and plz don't take much time for it😭, plz,plz,plz.....................................😆

Nice twist and turn in story.

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for part 12:-

Sorry dear i was late in reading it. Come on yaar Vertika!!! No sorry, no worry ! Just 'Hurry' next time for your comment !😆 😆 dekha...main kitni pathetic poetry karne lagi hoon...! 😆

Good part. 👏 👏 👏 Thanks😃

Naina ko finally apne sapne ki hakeekat pata chal hi gayi ki Raj vapas aa gaya hai un ki zindgiyon me. Pehle sab khushi k maare kuch bhi bata nahi paa rahe the par Naina bhi acche se jaanti hai na ki sach kaise nikalwaate hain aur us ne Alekh ko kasam de k sach pata kar hi liya. Right ! Sabki khushi itni zyaada thi ki unse kuch kaha nahi jaa raha tha....par Naina jaanti thi, Aalekh uski kasam ko kabhi khali nahi jaane dega!

Shayad vo Naina hi hai jo Raj ko sab se acche se jaanti hai aur kisi ka bhi intezaar kiye bina vo Raj ko dhoondhne nikal gayi seedhe aur jab dekha to vahin paaya jahan us ne expect kiya tha. Itne saare emotions daal diye hain tum ne is chotu se update me ki kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai. Matlab???😲

I mean itne khoobsurati aur acche tarah se tum ne sab kuch explain kar diya hai kis shayad humare kehne k liye kuch nahi reh jaata hai yaar. Oh...ohk !😃

Perfect n brilliant one. 👏 👏 👏 Thanks !

Dono ne apna pyaar bhi confess kar liya hai ab to dono ko koi kabhi alag nahi kar sakta hai na. Raj ne bhi vada kiya hai ki vo ab kahin nahi jaayega.

Naina ko ek good news bhi mil gayi ki Raj ko saare proofs mil gaye hain aur jaldi hi Naveen begunaah sabit ho jaayega. Yes...ab undono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta!

Hiii mana….

Lovely part dear…….u described the feelings of alekh ,shalini n huda after seeing raj really well

N I loved the way how raj spoke with pooja ali n yudi…..especially pooja saying …..sharukhhhhh n raj saying meri heer ro rahi hain…….its so funny

Raj ne abhimanyu ko bhi call kiya….n suriji bhi bahut khush hain raj ko dekhke

raj tho ek pal ke liye bhi naina ka haat nahi choda…. Sab kitne khush hain……aur aagaya musibat…..wo stupid rahul ka bhi kya timing thi…… aur koi kaam nahi tha kya……ek call karke sab gadhbhad kardi….…naina is shivering out of fear….accha hua alekh bhi us ke saath gaya phone attend karne ke liye…aur usne sahi kaha naina ko rahul ko sab kuch bata de aur raj n naina ke bich mein koi nahi aa saktha

shalini ne rahul ke bare mein raj ko batadiya …..ab raj kya karega

totally Awesome update yaar

plz update soon

Hi Manali,

Great part . The greatest thing is that Raj is back and everybody is happy about it. You described everybody's reaction very well. Pooja's stammering, Ali's silence, Yudi's blabbering, Aalekh's happiness, Huda's thoughts, Shalini's emotions and Abhimanyu's tears.

Now, Shalini has taken charge and has told Raj the truth. While Naina is worried,scared and probably close to devastation, what I'm waiting for is Raj's reaction. And this time I dont want him to understand anything but to go and get Naina and break rahul's bone if required. He has sacrificed a lot and this time I dont want him tostart on his sacrificing spree once again.

Originally posted by: esha143

nice update yaar, Thanks esha! 😊

u presented everyone's emotions very well.....of rajnaina's,of shalini's,of the cadets'.everyone held an important place in raj's life,so they r bound to be happy to see him back(just like US😉) Right!!! Thanks a lot,again! 😊

being the writer it is ur choice to continue the fic in ur way,but i do hope that now u r not going to seperate them for anything be it rahul or naina's parents.after all the hardships,they deserve to be with one another all the time.i hope raj understands naina and supports her thru this mess and rahul is mature enough to understand their bond and backs off. Well... U R right ! They are not going to be separated...not because of Rahul or Naina's parents...But to expect saintly behaviour from Raj...evrytime ...uh...well even he is a human being and that too deeply and madly in love...and well...Love brings insecurities.....And how much mature Rahul is...well time will show and also how much firm Naina is...😊

pls yaar u have stopped the fic at such a point that i'm practically going mad thinking of ur next UD😍😭,so plz UD soooooooooooooooooon and plz don't take much time for it😭, plz,plz,plz.....................................😆 Okay...we r bound to stop it at such point, or u people won't wait for next UD...ryt?😉 And I couldnt see you in tears and was about to plan a UD very fast...but then saw you laughing out aloud and realised you are faking tears..huh??? So...plan cancel !!! 😆 😆 just kiddin...will UD soon.😃

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Nice twist and turn in story. Thanks....

Rahul k baare me Naina ko batana chahiye tha Raj ko. Woh khud bhool gayi thi uske baare mein...

Anyways ye sach kisi ne kisi roop me Raj k saamne aana hi tha na. Mujhe lagta hai kabhi na kabhi ye hona hi tha, jitne jaldi ye baat Raj ko pata chalti utna hi dukh kam hota na us ko. Ab Raj Naina se jawaab maangenga par mujhe lagta hai vo Naina ki situation ko samajhne ki bhi koshish karega. You are right, Raj ko yeh baat pata chalni hi thi...par kya woh Naina se jawab mangega?? Aur kya woh uski situation ko samajhne ki koshish karega?

Rahul ka us ki zindagi me aana Naina ki nahi us k gharwaalon ki marzi se hua hai na, us ko koi rok bhi nahi sakta tha. Naina to pehle bhi ye sagai nahi karna chahti thi. Alekh hai na Naina k support k liye i think vo Naina ko is uljhan se bahar nikalne ka raasta bana lega. Par sab se jyada to Naina ki mental condition sahi nahi hai na abhi, vo kya kare samajh nahi paa rahi hogi. Aalekh is always there with her...and yes! Naina very well knows what she wants to do...!! She is not going to chose Rahul over Raj.... but...we have to see what Raj and Rahul are gonna do...

Cadets ka Raj se baat karna bahut hi accha laga, sab ab phir se vaise hi ho gaye hain jaise Raj k time the. Yahan Abhi ko bhi bahut khushi hai ki us ka one n only dost vapas aa gaya. Hmmm...

update soon. I will... 😊