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Posted: 15 years ago
THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiii mana'. Hi Yogitha! 😊

Lovely part dear''.u described the feelings of alekh ,shalini n huda after seeing raj really well Thanks yaar!
N I loved the way how raj spoke with pooja ali n yudi'..especially pooja saying '..sharukhhhhh n raj saying meri heer ro rahi hain''.its so funny. He he he!! Raj was trying to lighten the atmosphere 😃

Raj ne abhimanyu ko bhi call kiya'.n suriji bhi bahut khush hain raj ko dekhke. Everyone are bound to be happy! After all...it's Raj!! isn't it?😉

raj tho ek pal ke liye bhi naina ka haat nahi choda'. Sab kitne khush hain''aur aagaya musibat'..wo stupid rahul ka bhi kya timing thi'' aur koi kaam nahi tha kya''ek call karke sab gadhbhad kardi'.'naina is shivering out of fear'.accha hua alekh bhi us ke saath gaya phone attend karne ke liye'aur usne sahi kaha naina ko rahul ko sab kuch bata de aur raj n naina ke bich mein koi nahi aa saktha. Rahul ka timing to galat hai...par bechare ko pune mein baithe baithe kya pata chalega? ki waha Ambala mein kiski entry huyi hai aur woh kya disturb kar raha hai??? isn't it???😆 Naina is not afraid of Rahul....she is afraid of what Raj will think of her.....But she knows what she has to do now...!

shalini ne rahul ke bare mein raj ko batadiya '..ab raj kya karega. Wahi toh dekhna hai...😉

totally Awesome update yaar. Thanks...a lot!!😊

plz update soon. I will...😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Manali, Hi guglu!😊

Great part . The greatest thing is that Raj is back and everybody is happy about it. You described everybody's reaction very well. Pooja's stammering, Ali's silence, Yudi's blabbering, Aalekh's happiness, Huda's thoughts, Shalini's emotions and Abhimanyu's tears. Thanks a lot dear...😊
Now, Shalini has taken charge and has told Raj the truth. While Naina is worried,scared and probably close to devastation, what I'm waiting for is Raj's reaction. Yeah...Naina is scared...but she isn't close to devastation...coz she is sure about what she wants...just she is worried that Raj shouldn't misunderstand her...😊
And this time I dont want him to understand anything but to go and get Naina and break rahul's bone if required. He has sacrificed a lot and this time I dont want him tostart on his sacrificing spree once again. Yeah...This is what we all want...but is our Captain really that changed, has his sacrificing spree ended and what exactly he is gonna do....I guess, need to wait for finding out!😉 Whatever happens... Naina is not going to lose her life again, at any cost! 😊
Waiting for Raj's reaction.
Update soon.
Love
Guglu
luv ya 2,
mana.😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ye kaisa emotional attyachar hai???? Kaha chhor diya UD ko???? Raj kareaction bhi nahi dekh payi!!!! Hey Bhagwan!!! Log kitne nirdayi hai!!!!

Waise I loved every1's reaction to Raj....the cadets mostly....I cud feel the pride in myself as well.....pata nahi kaise....but I cud just feel it. And Abhimanyu....well....chahe Raj usse jitni baar bhi hara de wo manega nahi ki Raj usse better hai.....hehe.

Anyways, jaldi se continue karo Mana.....aise high points pe end karna chhor do pls....and continue soonest.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ye kaisa emotional attyachar hai???? Kaha chhor diya UD ko???? Raj kareaction bhi nahi dekh payi!!!! Hey Bhagwan!!! Log kitne nirdayi hai!!!!
Hieeee Sumiii!!!! kaha reh gayi thi tum???? pata hai kitna intezaar kiya maine tumhara!!!!! Aur na hi na hello seedha daantna shuru 😭
Par i expected it...waise bhi I know ki tum aur kuch dekhne main interested nahi hoti,siwaye Raj ke!! 😆 So, I kinda expected this!! 😉 Aur haan...nirdayi toh main hoon..😈.. Abhi tumne dekha hi kya hai?? 😛

Waise I loved every1's reaction to Raj .... Tumne notice kiya??? 😛 just kidding..😆
the cadets mostly....I cud feel the pride in myself as well.....pata nahi kaise....but I cud just feel it. hmmmm...Woh pride toh tum aise bhi feel karti ho uske liye...kyun??😉
And Abhimanyu....well....chahe Raj usse jitni baar bhi hara de wo manega nahi ki Raj usse better hai.....hehe. Haan...abhi kutte ki dum...aage pata hai na?😛


Anyways, jaldi se continue karo Mana.....aise high points pe end karna chhor do pls....and continue soonest. okiee boss!! As you say!!!😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry yaar...phir se late. mujhe sardi ho gayi hai...cheenk cheenk k bura haal hai...!!! maine bass ice cream k 6 cones khaye the...!!!
ab Ud k bare me baat karte hain...!!!😃
ab kya batayun...kya batayun...chal bata hi deti hun...!!! JUST FANTASTIC...👏 👏 👏
pata hai tumne na sare emotions jaise ek hi dhaage me phiro diye ho...aisa laga...!!! shalini, alekh n huda k dil me aaye sare khayal...raj ko dekhne k baad...ek dam se sahi the...no doubt...!!! Huda sudhar gayela hai...😆 😆 😆
aur hum sab k pyare Raj...voh toh ek pal k liye naina ka hath hi nahi chod raha hai...lagta hai Favicol Ka Jod Hai😆 😆 😆
raj ka ali, pooja aur yudi se baat karna...ek damm mast tha...!!! Ali hai hi aisa khushi milti hai tab bhi rota hai aur ghum milta hai toh aise react karta hai ki jaise voh kuch janta hi nahi. aur pooja...voh toh unq piece hai whole world me...!!! par mujhe Yudi ka reaction padh kar hassi aayi...sach me use agar chutti nahi milti toh voh chup ke se bhaag aata...!!!😛 😛 😛
n at last 'baalonwale bhai sahab'...!!! Brahma jee ne Kutte k punch me 12 saal tak ek sidhi lakdi rakhi ki kahin us ki punch sidhi ho jaye...lekin kya hua...Brahma jee ko haar maan hi pada na...!!! vaise hi abhimanyu bhi usi catagory me aata hai...raj ne use haraya tha phir bhi aise react kar raha hai jaise voh hara nahi tha bal ke jaise raj par daya ki thi...!!! is k sar k upar baal hain ki baal k upar saar hai pata hi nahi chalta...!!!😛 😛 😛
kya baat hai...sahi tym par Rahul ne phone kar diya...!!! vaise mujhe lagta hai ki rahul ...naina aur raj k bich me nahi aayega...!!! kyoun ki rahul rajeev ka chota bhai jo hai...!!! tumhara dimag ghum raha hoga yeh sunn kar hai na...??? toh doc is ka matlab yeh hai ki actual me Rajeev Khandewal k younger bro ka naam Rahul hai...😆 😆 😆
toh shalini ne Raj ko rahul k bare me bata hi diya. use baht mehnat karni padi...!!! aur mujhe bhi...par mere itne mehnat karne par bhi mujhe Raj ka reaction dekhne ko nahi mila...
ab jaldi se cont karti ho ki main Dhara ko bulayun...😆 😆 😆
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sorry yaar...phir se late.Koi baat nahi!!

mujhe sardi ho gayi hai... Seacod lena shuru kiya kya??😉 😆 😆 😆 waise woh kya hai yeh pata chalne ke baad teri reaction dekhne layak thi! 😆 😆
cheenk cheenk k bura haal hai...!!! maine bass ice cream k 6 cones khaye the...!!! Baas??? Sirf 6 ice creams cone khaye aur sardi bhi hogayi???kitni weak ho yaar! Dabur chyawanprash khaya karo!! 😆 Arey arey...while sneezing, cover your nose!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
ab Ud k bare me baat karte hain...!!!😃UD???😕 oh! right !! UD!! 😃 haan...toh shuru karo!
ab kya batayun...kya batayun...chal bata hi deti hun...!!! JUST FANTASTIC...👏 👏 👏Thank you! 😃
pata hai tumne na sare emotions jaise ek hi dhaage me phiro diye ho...aisa laga...!!! shalini, alekh n huda k dil me aaye sare khayal...raj ko dekhne k baad...ek dam se sahi the...no doubt...!!! Huda sudhar gayela hai...😆 😆 😆Arey boss...apun neich toh saale ka bheja line pe laaya!😛 Aur rahi baat Shalini, aur apun ke bheedu aalekh ki, toh apun nahi toh kaun unki feelings ko ex..ex..ex.. woh kya bolte hai?? Chal tu samajh gayi na? phir khali phili dimaag ka dahi mat kar 😛
aur hum sab k pyare Raj...voh toh ek pal k liye naina ka hath hi nahi chod raha hai...lagta hai Favicol Ka Jod Hai😆 😆 😆 haaan!! Tootega nahi!!! 😃 Waise maine fevicol mein thodasa feviquick bhi mix kardiya hai...! Woh kya hai na, Raj bhaa... (😲)mera matlab hai Raj ko(😉) sacrifice ke jhatke aate hai beech beech mein! 😆
raj ka ali, pooja aur yudi se baat karna...ek damm mast tha...!!! Ali hai hi aisa khushi milti hai tab bhi rota hai aur ghum milta hai toh aise react karta hai ki jaise voh kuch janta hi nahi. aur pooja...voh toh unq piece hai whole world me...!!! par mujhe Yudi ka reaction padh kar hassi aayi...sach me use agar chutti nahi milti toh voh chup ke se bhaag aata...!!!😛 😛 😛 Thanks a ton dear! I'm glad that u liked it! 😃
n at last 'baalonwale bhai sahab'...!!! Brahma jee ne Kutte k punch me 12 saal tak ek sidhi lakdi rakhi ki kahin us ki punch sidhi ho jaye...lekin kya hua...Brahma jee ko haar maan hi pada na...!!! vaise hi abhimanyu bhi usi catagory me aata hai...raj ne use haraya tha phir bhi aise react kar raha hai jaise voh hara nahi tha bal ke jaise raj par daya ki thi...!!! is k sar k upar baal hain ki baal k upar saar hai pata hi nahi chalta...!!!😛 😛 😛 Tu kabhi galat ho sakti hai kya Pri??? tere doubts, tere assumptions aur tere conclusions, teeno bhi sahi hai Abhimanyu ke baaremein!😆 😆 😆
kya baat hai...sahi tym par Rahul ne phone kar diya...!!! vaise mujhe lagta hai ki rahul ...naina aur raj k bich me nahi aayega...!!! Chalo...kisiki toh positive soch hai!😛
kyoun ki rahul rajeev ka chota bhai jo hai...!!! Kya??? 😲 meri fic mein toh aisa kuch..
tumhara dimag ghum raha hoga yeh sunn kar hai na...??? toh doc is ka matlab yeh hai ki actual me Rajeev Khandewal k younger bro ka naam Rahul hai...😆 😆 😆 Oh!!! mera to sach mein...well thanx 4 the info! 😉
toh shalini ne Raj ko rahul k bare me bata hi diya. use baht mehnat karni padi...!!! aur mujhe bhi...par mere itne mehnat karne par bhi mujhe Raj ka reaction dekhne ko nahi mila... he he he...😆 In coming UD dear...i just hope ki mujhe tere joote na khaane pade!!
ab jaldi se cont karti ho ki main Dhara ko bulayun...😆 😆 😆 nahiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn!! Dhara ko nahi!! Woh mujhe daant degi na???main karti hoon na UD priya didi!!!😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! Thanks Shaina..😊

Raj and Naina came back to the academy hand in hand!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 well...that was the reaction I expected...😉

Aalekh was the happiest as his Rajveer Sir was back and he was no longer an orphan and now his sister will get her true love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini, Aalekh and Huda were overjoyed to see Raj and their feelings were described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks ton !😊

Raj was so happy to chat with his former cadets and told them everything!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja shrieking out Shahrukh to Raj was so funny!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆he he he! She was always like this! Always calling him Shahrukh first and then correcting herself..😆

When Pooja started crying Raj saying meri Heer roh rahi hai to her was soo cute!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thanks..😊
Pooja wants to come here as soon as possible and teased Raj by calling Naina his Zaara!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ali's silence spoke volumes and Raj understood what Ali spoke in silence!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 He understand his cadets just so well...

Ali also promised to take leave and come as soon as possible!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi toh aane ke liye itna betaab hai that he is even prepared to run away if they don't grant him leave!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆How cute!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 Thanks for liking it.

Raj teased Abhimanyu ke ish yug mein bhi Abhimanyu Chakravyuh bhed nahi kar paya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Sahi toh hai!
Abhimanyu said ke Raj haar jayega toh Raj reminded him ke pichli baar wahi jeeta tha!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Usse baar baar yaad dilana padta hai...😆
Yeh Abhimanyu ko kitni baar bhi harado woh manega nahi ke Raj usse better hai!!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 Afterall that's what Abhimanyu is like....
Abhimanyu is now teasing Raj ke Raj ka lucky charm referee hogi toh woh thode hi naa jeetega!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Suriji was so happy to see Raj back and hugged him tightly while crying!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is so happy to be with Naina once again ke woh ek pal ke liye bhi Naina ka haath hi nahi chhod raha!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is also stealing glances at her and everyone is teasing her a lot!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is brought back to reality when she gets a call from Rahul!!!!!!

Aalekh knew how Naina felt and went with her!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is crying and is afraid of losing Raj and doesn't know how to tell him this!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She is scared that what if Raj thinks that she did not wait for him!!!!!! bass ussse yahi baat ka darr hai ki Raj usse galat na samajh le...

Aalekh tries to assure her that everything will be fine and Naina should tell Rahul everything!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
No one can come between her and Raj now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Ish Rahul ki toh main ek pal mein sab kuch bigaad diya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Sab kitne khush thhe!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Ab usse kya pata tha yaar! Par haan...phone ka timing bada ghalat tha....
Shalini tells Raj that Rahul is Naina's fiance and is trying to explain why Naina had to agree for the engagement but cannot find words to do so!!!!!
Shalini shouldn't have done that and she should have left things to Naina to handle!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒yeah....
Pata nahi Raj kaise react karega!!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕I hope he doesn't go on a sacrificing spree!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡let's see....
He should go and break Rahul's bones if needed and get Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Why break his bones..???...yaa but if he's coming in their way, then raj should try this 😉

Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiii mana,
I just caught up ur this ff

Its beautifully written yaar.
I want to ask u one thing. Have u decided to make me cry in ur every ff?
I was cring while reading.

Now plz continue soon
luv preet

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