RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
great part!!
thanks for the pm!!
please do continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
hey started reading ur fanfic 2day n loving it👍🏼..........
Poor rahul thinking muskaan maried to armaan n ontop of dat a DRUG ADDICT 😲.........*nice twist*
Hope muskaan clears his misunderstanding n helps him fight his addiction............
Thanku **GHOSIA**
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
Appu my shonu monu!!!! I was desperately waiting for you to update this! Kya hogaya? Itna time laga diya! Chalo chaddo!
The update was beautiful! Mera jaanu drug addict! OMG! My sweetu! 😭 I'm so glad Muskaan found him and brought him to Nikki's clinic. Jaldi se theek kar naa usse!
love u hamesha!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
as always a good part
but what a shok!
rahul an drug edict??
but how!!!
pls continue soon!!
want to know!!
see yaaa
love uuu!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
omg omg yeh kya ho gaya hai merey rahul ko daru and drug addict .....but ur story is proceeding beautifully ....every part has a shocker in it ....g8 going continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Part 7:

Muskaan sat down on the couch......
Rahul drugs leta hai??? Thats not possible.....Rahul aisa hai hi nahi........
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Flashback:

During thier internship days.....

RM were incharge of Arjun who was a drug addict had an accident so was admitted in Sanjeevani....

Arjun was unconcious......he got up slowly & looked around....

R- Hi Arjun....i am Dr.Rahul.....

A- Main kahan hu???

R- Tum Sanjeevani me ho aur bilkul theek ho.......

A- Mujeh ghar jaana hai...(slowly getting restless)

M- Aree abhi toh theek hue ho....abhi hafte bhar tumhe yaheen pe rehna hoga....

A- Hafta?? Nah..mujhe....mujhe jaana hai..mujhe ...mujhe.....

R- Arjun relax...tum itne hyper kyun ho rahe ho???

A- Mujhe woh chahiye.....woh....

M- Woh??? WOh kay??? Pani??

A(irritated)- Nahi....drugs....mujhe drugs chahiye.......

RM looked at him in shock.....DRUGS????

A- Plzz Dr.Rahul (folds his hands) Plzz mujhe drugs de dijye plzzz...

R- Arjun bt....

A- Mujhe pata hai Drugs r killing me bt...plzzzagar nahi lunga toh bhi mar jaunga..plzzzz........

R- Arjun..main kaise tumhe...i mean.....

A(falls on Rahuls' feet)- Plzz Doctor....last time plzz.....main badme nahi manguaga plzz mujhe...

R(makes him stand up & slaps him hard)- Shut up!!! Tum pagal ho kya??? Tumhe pata hai ki drugs tumhe maar arhe hai aur phir bhi tum unhe le arhe ho??? huH??? Aur kyun yeh le rahe ho??? Just coz exam me fail ho gaye ya phir GF chod ke chali gayi??? Inn stupid reasons ke wajahse??? ya phir fashion ke liye??? Sab lete hai isliye??? Bhagna bahut aasan hota hai bt probs face karna uthna hi mushkil hai......Life ko face karna sikho......Hamesha aacha waqt nahi hota u need to get thru everthing.....plzz Arjun tum apni zindagi khud apne haathse kharab kar rahe ho......

A- Toh kay karu??? Main pichle 2 saal se drugs le raha hu...agar mujhe woh nahi mile toh main pagal ho jata hu..mujhe kuch samja me nahui aata..main..mian kya karu......

R- Main jaanta hu ki tum ek din me nahi chod sakte...bt agar tum koshish karo toh na mumkin nahi hai....rehabilitation centers me jao....wahan profeesionals tumse drugs chudayenge.....

A- MAin..kasie???

R- Arjun...agar dil me chah ho toh hum har manzil paa sakte hai.....tumhe bas apni will power pe bharosa rakhna hoga......Goa me ek rehab hai jo bahut aacha hai......Tum wahan jaoge na???

Arjun nods....

A- Dr.Rahul main apni taraf se koshish karunga....Really.....

R- Thats good!!!!!!!!

Muskaan smiled....

M- Kya baat hai Rahul....tu ne toh usko mast samjhaya yaar......

R- Usse jarurat thi uski...u know sab sirf problem batate hai...aur jo uss problem ka solution bataye na log ussi ki baat mante hai....

M- AMtlab???

R- Dekh Arjun drugs leta hai toh sab usko kosenge ......gharwale dost...sab...woh khud usse bahut pareshaan ho jata hai...usse koi vishwas dilanewala chahiye jo usse bataye ki haan isse nikalne ka solution hai aur usse woh solution bataye......

M- Hmm...tu toh ek dum psycologist ho gaya yaar....

Both laugh................

End of flashback
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Muskaan still sitting on the couch....

Nikki came.....

N- Muskaan...tu.....

M-Mera Rahul aisa nahi hai Yaar,......

N(looked at her in surpirse she just said Mera Rahul)- Muskaan....

M- Nikki yaar...jo ladka apne ek paitent ko itni aansani se samjta hia drugs ki burai woh khud kaise.???,....matlab.....

N-Rahul doctor hai???

M- Haan...Dr.RAhul Garewal..........

N- NAam akhin sunna hua lag raha hai.....

M- Par woh drugs kaise???

N- Rahul ko hosh aaraha hai...tum khud usse baat kyun nahi karti???

Muskaan smiles & nods......

Rahul slowly gets up & looks around.....

R- Main kahan hu????

N- Mere clinic me.....Hi i am Dr.Nikkita......

R- MAin....

N- Ab aap kaisa feel kar rahe hai DR.RAhul?????

R(looked at her surpiringly)- Aapko kaise pata ki main doctot hu???

M- Maine bataya...........

R- Muskaan???????? Tu yahan kaise??? Aur main yahan kasie???

N- Dr.rahul Muskaan hi toh aapko yaha lekar aayi hai.....Aap ko tex bukhar tha ur behosh ho gaye the.....

rahul looked at Muskaan who was smiling at him.........


BAckground music:
Kabhi an sukun aaya...
kabhi na karrar aaya...
jab se hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya...........
pyaar aaya....

N- Ab aap aram kijiye...main badme aati hu....take care Muskaan....

M- ya..thanks again....

N- Any time........

Nikki goes away...RM alone...........

R- Muskaan...woh main...actually....

M- Rahul...tu theek hai na??? (concerned)

R- Haan...bilkul theek hu....viral fever hai chala jayega.....

M- Main bukhar ki baat nahi kar rahi.....

R- Toh???

M- Tujhe pata hai main kiss baare me baat kar rahi hu......

R- Nahi toh...(lies)

M(takes his hand in hers)- Rahul....main teri apni hu...tu mujhe bata na..kya baat hai..sab theek hai na???

R- Haan...tujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuch galat hai..???

M- Kyunki tu drugs lene laga hai.........

R(looked at her in disbelief)- Muskaan??????

M- Maine tere reports padhe ...aur tere ghar pe sharb ki bottles bhi dekhi.... Aur kal woh log kaun the jo tujh maar rahe the??? Tu unhi se drugs leta tha??? yeh sab kya hai Rahul????

R- Muskaan..main...main bahut akela ho gaya tha...mujhe...mujhe.....

M(smiels)- Tu kyun akela hoga??? Main hu na hamesha tere saath...always.......(hugs him)

**RM music**

R- Par Muskaan...tu...

M- Bas Rahul....ab kuch mat bol....Tu aaram kar...aur kal tak tu bilkul theek ho jayega phir tujhe mujhe London bhi ghuma na hai aur dher sarri shooponhg bhi karani hai...ok???

R- Muskaan mujhe......

M- Nhai....Main tujhe drugs nahi de sakti...no ways....

R- Muskaan plzz dekh na mere haath kaap rahe hai.....(shows her his shivering hands)

M- Toh mera haath thaam le Rahul.....(gives him her hand)

Rahul looks at her.....keeps his hand in hers & she holds his hand tightly.....After some time rahul's hand stops shivering.....She smiles...he looks at her.............

M- Dekha Rahul.....agar dil me chah ho toh hum har manzil paa sakte hai.......

R- Muskaan.......

M- Main hu tere saath Rahul..hamesha....tu kabhi akela nahi hai.....ok???

Rahul nods.......

Nikkita sitting in her cabin.....

Dr.Rahul Garewal.....yeh naam kahin sunna hua lag raha hai.....par kahan......

Her thoughts were interrupted by phone....

M- Dr.Niikita Mulhotra here....

Ab- Aur main Dr.Niikita Mulhotra ko sabse imp paitent.....

M- Abhi???

Ab- yess...Abhimanyu Modi....

M- Aree Abhi.....

Ab- Kya darling ..hume avoid kar rahi hai..kabse cell pe phone kar raha hu aap utha ti hi nahi....

M- Woh...(looks at her cell 25 missed calls)Mera cell silent pe tha toh pata hi nahi chala....

Ab- Hmm..main 100 baar phone kia....

N- Really??? Bt my cell says only 25!!!!!! (laughs)

Ab- Hmm..ab meri girlfriend mera mazzak uda rahi ahi....

N- Nhai yaar..main toh aise hi...

Ab- Kya kar rahi hao???

N- Nahi kuch nahi bas kuch soch rahi thi....

Ab- Mere baare me???

N- No....

Ab- TOh??????

N- Rahul ke baare me....

Ab- Kaun RHaul??????? Kahin mujhe dump karne ak irada toh nahi hai....

N- Journalist sahab aapka mujhse miche itne jaldi nahi chutega...ok??

Ab- Phir theek hai....Kaun Rahul??

N- Dr.Rahul Garewal.....

Ab- Yeh naam toh jaana pechna lagta hai....

N- Tumhe bhi???

Ab- Haan...Rahul Garewal...Indian Doctor..Cradiac surgeon hai????

N- Haan..........

Ab- Nikki..yeh toh wahi hai....

N- Kaun???

Ab- Wohi Indian doctor jiise 6 mahine ke liye jail hui thi ................

Hope u like it..........Plzz comment........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

awesome part!!

do continue soon!!
can't wait!!
Edited by lovebapu18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Awesome part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
Please continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
nice update!!

im still in shock... what did rahul go to jail for?? medical mistake??

thanks for the pm.. please continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
JAIL????!!!! NAHIIIII! Mera Rahul! Mera shona mona! Appu you b etter have a good explaination for this!
Haiye mera sweetu! I loved that scene where she tells him to hold her hand when his hand was shaking. Really, I could picture it from kuch khatti kuch meethi. very cute!
you always rock jaan.
komal di

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