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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
awww the flash back was so cute ....hmmm interesting twist really want to read more ...waiting to knw k achanak yeh rahul ko kya hogaya hai ❓
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
that was a nice part!

it was soo sad what happened to Rahul...

now i am really desperately waiting for next part...

please update soon

and thanks for the om!!

😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Sooo sad but it's amazing...
I am really looking forward to what happens next...
Where has Rahul been? I expected him to be thsi amazing doctor...
Life is so unexpected...Can't wait for more of your FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Great part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
amazing part yaaar..but it was very sad too...feell reallly bad for rahul..i wonder y is he living in some dirty place..he's supposed to be one of the best doctors...but loved that taxi driver's confusion..it was hilarious..lol..welll i can't wait to read wat happens next...thank u sooo much for the pm and please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

Part 5:

Rahul comes in his ""HOME"" & sat on his bed........

Muskaan.......yahan London me ??? Kyun meri kismat ,mere saath khel khel rahi hai...maine MUSkaan ko bhulaya dia hai.......Woh kissi aur ki amanat hai kisi aur ki patni hai...main uske baare me aisa nahi soch sakta..............

He closes his eyes.................

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Flashback:

All interns had completed their internship & were doctors now....

RAhul was sitting in the libray of Sanjeevani........

HE was focusing on his case

Muskaan comes....

M- Rahul sunna....

R- Muskaan kya hua??? Main jara iss case ki additional info dekh raha hu...agar koi complications ho toh issiliye-----

M- Haiyoo Rabba....Rahul tujhe ek important baat batani hai...

R- Muskii plzz baadme.....

Yaar Rahul kya kar raha hai...tujhe Dr.Shubankar bula rahe hai...

Enter Armaan.....

R- haan main wahi case ke-----

Ar- Jaldi jaa dude....

Ar(looks at Muskii)- Hey Beautiful...tum bhi yahan ho??? KAhan thi tum?? Break me tumhe coffee pite hue kinna miss kia.....

Muskii blushes....Rahul notices Muskii blushing & doesnt know why bt usko gussa aata hai....

R- Armaan chal jara mere saath .....Muskaan main badme milta hu...ok?????

M- hmm.....

Rahul & Armaan are walking towards Dr.Shubankar's cabin...

R- Abhi kya kar raha tha???

Ar- Kya??

R- Muskaan ke saath flirt kar raha tha na???

Ar- Oye huye...tujhe badi jalan ho rahi hai.....

R- Aisi koi baat nahi hai.....Bt main tujhe bol du woh uss type ki ladki nahi hai.....

Ar- Aree Rahul relax yaar..main bhi waise type ka nahi hu...one woman man hu.....main teri dost ka dil nahi dukhaunga....Ok???

R- Hmm..thats good....(smiles)

Armaan goes....RAhul is relived ki Armaan wont hurt Muskaan bt He wasnt feeling happy....usko bura lag raha tha....

Dr.Shubankar came.....

S- Dr.Rahul...aapne woh case ki study kar li hai???

R- yess sir.............


Few days later...........

Muskaan was sitting in the canteen drinking coffee...Rahul comes...

R- Hey Muskaan......

M- Hi....

R- Sorry Muskaan pichle kuch dino me tujhse thek se baat nahi ho payi....woh main Dr.Shubankar ke saath case me busy tha so..

M- Aree koi baat nahi yaar...waise Rahul tere paas abhi time hai kya???

R- Haan....abhi toh break hai.....so time hai....

M- Rahul....i am in Love............

R- Kya??????????? Muskaan....tu...

M(blushes)- Rahul....mujhe Armaan se pyaar ho gaya hai.....

R(didnt know how to react)- Kya??Armaan??

M- Haan....pata hi nahi chala Rahul...jab hum dono jhagda karte the ya woh meri help karta tha...silly chezze karke hamesha khud ko problem me dalta tha woh bachpana woh dosti kab pyaar me nadal gayi pata hi nahi chala........main ...maine kabhi nahi socha ki mujhe Armaan se pyaar ho jayega......I mean..main....(looks at Rahul who is simply staring at her)Oye...aise kya aankhe dikha raha hai??? Kya hua??

R(finding words)- NAhi...woh..a....b....main...mujhe....

M(laughs)- Tujhe kuch samaj me nahi aa raha..hai na??

Rahul nodds...he actually should be happy 4 his friend...Armaan was a nice guy.....Muskaan uske saath khush rahegi bt...na jane kyun woh khush nahi tha......par kyun????????

M- Rahul....tujhe kya lagta hai ki Armaan mujhe pasand karta hoga?????

Before RAhul could answer his pager rang.....

R- Shit....Muskaan i have to go..emergency in ICU........

M- Koi baat nahi...see u later..all the best..........

R- Thanks yaar..........

Rahul goes to attend his paitent...bt Muskaan's words were moving in his head....
I am in love with Armaan............

Next day:

Rahul was going in the Sanjeevani canteen.........

R(thinking)- Muksaan ko Armaan se pyaar kaise ho sakta hai???? I mean....Armaan aacha ahi bt.....bt mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai...main....Shut up Rahul...focus...focus on ur career.......Armaan bahut aacha ladka hai aur teri dost uske saaath khush rahegi.........DOST???????

Meanwhile-

Muskaan was walking all lost in Armaan's thoughts doesnt see Armaan coming in her direction...neither does Armaan see her coz he is lost in RIDHIMMA's thoughts.....Both bump.......& Armaan catches Muskaan in his arms................

Muskaan's smile widens looking at Armaan & Armaan thinks she is Ridz so he also smiles..............

Eye locking session..........

Rahul enters the scene at the same time..........he gets a bit upset seeing Muskan is Armaan's arms.........

HE goes in the locker room getting very angry........

Locker room:

As soon as he enters the locker room..atul comes & holds his collar....

Rahul is taken aback....

R- Oye champ kya hua??? Gala daba dega kya???

At- saale..teri himmat kaise hui Anjali ki taraf aankh utha ke dekhne ki???

R- Kya?????? MAine?? Aree Atul..maine kab Anjali ko???

At- Jhoote makaar..maine sab dekha...tu kya samjta hai Anjali mujhe ghaas nahi dalti toh tera raasta clear hai???

R(now seroiusly confused)- yaar champ main Rahul....tu kya bol raha hai?????

At(comes out of his trance)- Oye Rahul...tu????? Sorry yaar...mujhe laga ki woh kamina Sid hai.....

R- Kaun Sid???????

At- Anjali ka paitent hai....

R- Aur tu uska gala daba na chahta hai??????

At- Aur nahi toh kya??? Saala meri Anjali ke saath flrit karta hai.. SAmjta kya hai apne aap ko...aur Anjali bhi na uske saath bade aache se baat karti hai..smile karti hai... mujhe kitna gussa aata hai usse kissi aur ke saath dekhe ke.....main usse bahut pyaar karta hu yaar.......

R- Matlab agar hum usse kissi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakte toh kya hume usse pyaar hai?????

At- Haan.....

R(thinking)- Mujhe bhi abhi Armaan ka gala daabne ka maan kar raha tha..mujhe bilkul aacha nhi lagta jab woh Muskaan ke saath hota hai...toh...toh kya mujhe????? NAhi....Muskaan meri dost hai bachpan se...uske papaji ne mujhpe bharosa karke usse Mumabi bheja hai bas isiliye main possesive ho raha hu....haan....Ya shayad mujhe sach me MUSKaan se pyaar ho gaya hai????? Par woh toh Armaan se pyaar karti hai...PAr Kya Armaan bhi usse pyaar karta hai??? Mujhe pata lagana hoga..sahi mauka dekh ke Armaan se baat karni hogi..hm.....

Few days later:

Muskaan & Ridzi were talking near the nurse station & Armaan was standing at a distance looking at them specially ridzi & smilimg.....

Rahul sees this 4rm a distance & thinks Armaan is looking at Muskaan & thinks it is the rite time to ask him......so he goesnear him....

R- Hey Armaan......

No response...

R(keeps his hand on Amy's shoulder)- Oye!!!!!!

Ar- huh?? kya?? Kuch keh rahe the??

R(looking at Muskaan)- Bahut pyaar karte ho usse???

Ar- Nahi toh..main kahan..nahi main.....

R(smiles)- u can tell me....

Ar(smiles looks at Ridz)- Haan....bahut pyaar karta hu...mujhe toh pata hi nahi chala...ki internship ki woh masti woh mazzak akb pyaar me badal gaya....

R(tears forming in his eyes)- Good...very good...usse bataya???

Ar- KAhan yaar?? Jab bhi usse batane jaata hu...meri bolti hi band ho jati hai..main..pata nahi kay karunga...i mean....

R(couldnt listen any more further)- Armaan main abhi aaya..mujhe woh icu ke paitent ke reports lene the..ok????

Ar- YA..u carry on.......

RAhul goes & sits in the fire escape.......

R- Shit yaar.......Woh bhi Muskaan se uthna hi pyaar karta hai jitna Muskaan usse..unki kaahni me meri koi jagah nahi hai....koi jaga nahi hai....mujhe apni dost ke liye khush hona chahiye......woh khush rahe gi Armaan ke saath....par main.....NAHi RAHUL FOCUS ...focus on ur career...yeh pyaar-vyaar tere liye nahi hai...tu apne kaam pe focus kar..

End of flashback
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Rahul has tears in his eyes.....

Sambhal apne aap ko Rahul....na uss waqt unki kahani me tere liye jagah thi na aaj hai...usne teri madat ki sirf ek doat ke hasiyat se...

Ab uski shaadi ho gayi hai aur tera uske baare me yu sochna galat hai..woh apni zindagi me khush hai uar tu issi baat me khush reh ki woh khush hai.......

Hope u like it........Do comment..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
nice update!!

yeh rahul bhi na, ek gadha hai... poora kahani nahin janta hai... aur kuch soch leta hai.... 😆

thans for the pm!!

please continue soon!!!
Edited by ibdt2004 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
This is sad so sad again..
My poor Rahul..he thinks Muski ki married....
I hope he finds out the truth soon...
Great story and concept... Please continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
aww.. feel bad but he is like FOCUS on his career so where did the goons come from? i thought he'd be a big shot doctor.. or atleast a doctor if not big shot.. well great parrt.. really showed rahul's inner feeling abuot friendship/love
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
awesome part...feel bad for rahul...i hope he finds out soon that muski is not married..thank u soo much for the pm

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