Maslow's hierarchy of needs #3 pt 40 page 56 - Page 21

JUST READ UR REPLY 2 my prev comment & OH MY GOSH u lyk my name?! THANKU SOOOOOOO MUCH SAM!! UR A SWEETHEART REALLY!! & YEAH I DID GET THE PM THANX SOOO MUCH DEARY!! LOV YA LOADZ!!

u tc alot!

PS: T

hat last scene was OUTSTANDING!! plz update jaldi! wanna know really wat happens....!!

updated comments on page 20...finally :D

twing...:)

You better remember and know who.

Loved it, Loved it, LOVED IT... 😆😆😆

reserved :D

hey sam
u know what the beginning was funny
poor armaan caught between the ladies n shashank his only supporter deserted him hahahaha
im soo glad that padma is happy with AR being together n im sure sash will also have no objections
but here the big time kabab mein haddi's are there naa
seriously anjali is becoming one along with ankit
why cant they just stay away from AR????
but atul gives me some relief coz truly speaking hes the most sensible n sweetest of all
just love his character
n yea u better dont end it soon
give us some nice AR moments like the enternity ring scene
that was choooo cute n romantic
loved it dear
please please pleaseeeee clear angie's n ankit's misunderstandings soon
update soon

HeySam,
The part was really great, I loved it.
AR were too good.
So Padma kind of know about Ridhima and Armaan, I am happy she is ok with that.
I am glad to know Armaan and Shashank have liked each other.
So I guess Anjali will get to know in the next part that Armaan and Ridhima are truly together.
I hope Anjali will be able to manage herself.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

Hi Sam....

Well nice surprise with the update... With you guys, NJ, Kirzz and you, I'd started expecting no update at all in the coming days, or should I rephrase that one, months!!... Hehehehehe 😆 😆
Thanks for updating yaar, was really wanting to read something about AR since days... ;))

Ok to boot, it was a nice overall part, perhaps not one of the most liked, but as they say, a writer always gets better and better with each patch of work, so definitely one of the best recently, and also, I would add, one of my favourites for a whole lot of reasons...

I really thought a lot about the Padma part after I read it.. It says out a lot actually you know... I am far from being a mother yet, that too of such a grown girl, but it clearly reflects a mum's thinking, because I do see those expressions sometimes in mine one's too actually!! Lol... Thumbs up on that part, truly precisely shows how well a mother knows her daughter dot to dot, whether the latter speaks out about things or not...👏 👏

The AR bit was cool, not one of the best romance scenes you've given, but I loved the fact that you didn't try to make it so either... Let's be realistic, serial romance is NOT real life romance as much as people try to assume or want it to be... Romance doesn't mean holding hands or kissing each other quite so very often... Love means simply being there and understanding the person you are in love with... Also, I love, really love the fact that Armaan does not force her into divulging anything, and I really dislike Riddhima for taking advantage of it from a reader's point of view... I understand her compulsions and the essence of her character, and that of many like her in real life as well... I do believe you do not need to tell each of the happening in your life to your partner, but if it concerns him/her, and in such a huge way, Riddhima is definitely making a mistake, and a rather big one in my opinion... But that's what the story is all about nah?? 😉 😉

Btw, I love this one... Something many people in love call possession or overprotection or so many other things, but I simply call it love.. " He who is not jealous is not in love"

Anjali... Hmmm I for one, don't feel it is dragging AT ALL, ok I know, I seem to go on a different pathway from other readers... But I truly feel it... In fact, Anjali decovering about Ankit all the more is something unpredictable... A nice turn in the story, and my favourite part of the update... The Atul-Anjali convo is the best of the lot... I like it even more than the AR one... It was so real, so human... 👏 Wanting to be like the one your love loves... Something so many of us wish at a point in life do they have to lose their love due to unforeseen situations... Ankit's words have such a great impact on the reader... or at least it has had on me... "I could never be an Armaan Anjali, not to you never to her..." That's so beautiful actually... And for the first time, I actually felt sorry for the both of them together... I actually wished, even though for a fraction o a second, if Anjali could have Armaan and Ankit, Riddima... Because they both seem so alone, and for both of them, losing their first love is definitely a hard one... You don't forget your first love... Ever... Or so I believe cause I haven't as yet fallen in love... Hehehehehe...

The climax was cool... although I didn't expect that reaction from Armaan in front of Anjali... But because he doesn't know I guess... Lol...

All in all, super update!! And I am sorry once again for the lateness... Just caught up in school work... and thanks for the PM as usual... Loveee yaa...


Hugs,
Sneha

Armaan holding Ridhhima's hand at the end... that's all that Anjali needed to confirm her worst nightmares... not sure if that was the best way to break the news to her.
And Padma's omniscience in matters related to her daughter... haven't we all experienced it with our own mothers in more than one instance. And now I smile to myself when my son wonders aloud how I know certain things about his life even without him telling me 😊
Hope you're able to continue sooner rather than later... altho' I'm a fine one to make that request... prone as I am to disappear for long periods 😳

Originally posted by: spln

right sam! here i am, kind of belated in terms of my usual prompt reading and replying habits... but... stuff! ...

its another one of your parts which by the same miracle as you have managed more times than the fingers on one each of my hands so far, you timed it as they say, 'just in time' :D

which implies, i was really up for reading something quite the way this part weaved out... when you make a mention of the pace of the fic, i have to admit i more than empathize... its not just once that i have encountered an issue where i wish to sit and describe one damn thing in my leisure of words and times... and have, in the process procrastinated events... however in retrospective re-reads, on the rare occasions that i manage to go back read something i worte myself, i have discovered i like reading things where i did just that... not to sound in a severe lack of modesty at all, this was barely my admiration for those diseases i accidentally seem to possess as well!

all the chars were well shaped, in good time, with the right lines... i would have said my usual missed rahul n muskaan thing, but i'll be honest, you didn't give me the chance to think of them...

my height for the update was the absolutely last bit... for some reason sam, that you may in terms of first and second hand experience be at a position to word better, it was the one gesture which for me took armaan several steps higher in terms of his dealings with relationships, every kind... for any and every thing he messed up with these two women in his life, this one move in my mind redeemed him from all of it... the conversation he was in the middle of, the interruption to it, both i believe even if the hardest this must be, are best resolved in exactly a confrontation such...

that he could do it with such an impulse, :) i don't know another time i thought SO extremely highly of this armaan of yours :D and i have held significantly good opinions of him on the whole!

padma and ridhima's conversation, with the right inputs from daddy shanks and 'keep-shush-about' beau armaan was a good read! another part, wherein i believe i can completely empathize... the existence and back up of a small close knit family where people own minds and heads that can think, can understand, and can be there for you as families ought to! :) ps: i have a home like that, and i guess, somewhere that must be the one thing i got far more than i could think or ask for! :)

all in all sam, i enjoyed reading the part tons! bits here and there, i really loved! :)

cheers,
nj

pps: the excitement in your life *ahem* good luck and all my hugs and love and wishes for!

Yu know what you said about the pace and what all one writes, I must agree, when I do go back and read sometimes, I feel the pace and the content was needed though not necessary that the viewer feels so too..., I guess it's like the blind faith, trust, admiration, belief that a mother has in its child!

I know what you mean about having a home like this...I always thank God for my blessings, for giving me the home and the parents that he did....my mom has been a mom when I needed one, a friend when I was lost, a confidant when I needed one and so has been my dad...in fact I suspect more my dad than my mom...though she has been far more astute when it comes to me...I suspect my dad is blinded by his love for me, lol...but that's the wonder of a warm loving family – it equips you to deal with anything and everything that life throws at you...so "amen" to having a wonderful family!

I would have been disappointed if Armaan had not reacted the way he did...after solemnly promising to be there through thick and thin, it would have been wretched of him to fail her at the first occasion that demanded him to be there for her....but I am glad that you liked him here...he has his weakness but so do we all – coloured by grey as we are – it's how we rise to certain occasions that makes us the people we are!

Shall update the next part soon....

Finally got to read your next update on "Adolescence " but shall comment on it at leisure...didn't realise how much I missed it till I read it,so a big HUG for the update!

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Hey thanks for the Pm Sam! Like i've always believed yours is the most literary well crafted FF of all. Proper thought flow and sentences. The Eternity Ring was so sweet, just do clear out the Anjali confusion soon.
Cool part.