MayUr FF:- Together...Forever [Updt Chp 1-Pg 11] - Page 16

Originally posted by: kavya.b

kanika, this part wasn't short n i already feel i love with nupur
waiting for the nxt part

but dont worry, u beetr concentrate more on ur studies
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ayushma30

Hey Kanika,

I am so sorry for the late comment...I just read your FF....firstly congrats on your new FF and I must say the story so far is awesome dear! loved the way you wrote Nupur's POV and she named him Sadu...😆...do update soon...can't wait to read Mayank's POV...great job!!! and please please please add me to your PM list....I don't want to miss any part...

Ayushma

Originally posted by: KHJL

OMG kanika darling...

that was superb!!!!👏👏
but then again i can never expect anything less from you..😊

u always leave me wanting more from ur writing...
and this time it was no different...
i want more hun...more..more..MORE😳😳

now about this first part of ur...toooooooooooo good!👏👏👏
loved how you've decided to continue this FF in both NPOV n MPOV...good idea...😛
would be so much fun reading both of their thought process as the story progresses..

as for NPOV...loved it!❤️
i was completely able to imagine her character...head strong, determined, stylish, short tempered
and an absolutely sweetheart...😳😛

very well written⭐️

that first part where u introduce her or rather where nupur introduces herself to the readers and then the story goes bak and continues from her point of view...fab-ly done...it blended in so well....👏👏👏

and the lil' sneak peeks you gave us...on mayank...
and his akdu+sadu paan...adorable!😳😳
can't wait to read MPOV on the next part...😉

like i always say hun...i'm a fan of ur writing style...
and always look forward to reading ur ffs/one shots😳
continue soon...me hungry for more of ur writing...
can't wait....😛

oh! and i totally forgot to mention...
i loved how it was similar to MJHT storyline with ur own twists to it😉...👏👏
once again it was a fantastic read⭐️😊....looking forward to the next part...and mayur nokh jhok in the upcomming part...😳

luv ya...🤗

~*LiSa*~

Originally posted by: shruthinair

Wow.. you started a mini serial.. Thats so nice of you 😊
Its a good start with Nupur.. Waiting for Mayank's view...
Do post soon..

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi!

really nice part. loved it very much. continue soon.

one more thing, my college is gonna start from next week. so I cannot come to IF often. but I will try to visit IF once a week. but you dont stop pming me. I may not be regular in commenting. but whenever I will come here, I will read your updates and comment.

luv ya

nishi

Originally posted by: angelwingz04

heyyyy this luks really gud ... i love sadu mayank .. hehehe
hey add me on ur pm list !! =)
plz update it soon ...
TC

Plzzzzz can u Quate that update on last pg or pm me