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Posted: 16 years ago
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chapter 4


Mayank groaned : saale ki timing ab bhi kharab hai...har waqt galat time pe entry maarta hain" he muttered..
Nupur hitting him lightly and moving away from him ; "mayank bas karo..hamesha uday bhaiya ke piche pad jaate ho..aao uday bhaiya.." gesturing uday to come inside..
Mayank still in angry young man mood " kyunki usski personality hi kuch ayesi hain nupur..looking at uday with narrowed eyes..
Uday came in giving his goofy smile : "oh hi nupur..then to mayank "hi brother in-law.."
Mayank smiled tightly: "Uday" as if speakingto a kid...."there's a reason why rooms have doors u know" sighing after looking at uday's confussing face " so that people can have some privacy..he contiuned..

Uday finally getting the msg :"oh yes..thanks for letting me know bro.." smiling at mayank.."but you know wat,i did knock..par shayad tum dono ne suna nahi hoga..as usual"..."seriously guys,kitna romance karte ho..aisa lagta hain jaise kal hi shaadi hoyi hain..whereas...he stopped talking when he saw mayank's stony face..mera matlab hain ki romance karte ho to achaa hain...sab ko karni chahiye..he kept rambling..

"Uday" Mayank barked out scaring Uday and Nupur..
"Mayank chilla kyun rahe ho"..nupur said holding his sleeve..
Uday : "ha mayank chilla kyun rahe ho..yaha koi behra nahi..pyar se bolo..mere kaan hain na, bahut hi senstive hain..fhat jaayega.."smiling sweetly at him.
"Ji karta hain tumhara kaan,naak,aakhen sab fhaad do" Jason mumbled almost under his breath.

Only nupur heard.."mayank tum kyu har waqt uday bhaiya ko daathte rahete ho...?she asked sternly..bas bahut hogaya.." going over to Uday and standing beside him..giving uday a reassuring smile...
seeing this mayank became jealous..
"nupur tum har waqt uday ki side kyun leti ho??Mayank asked sulkily.."issme meri kya galti hain ki agar usska dimaag kam hain..bewakoof khahika "looking angrily at him..

Both brother and sister's mouth fell open
"nupur" uday wailed..clutching nupur's arms..
Nupur looking furious.."Mayank sharma"...tum ne mere bhai ko bewakoof kaha..how could you ..khadoos kahike.."

mayank sighed heavily, his hand coming up to pinch the bridge of his nose. He could just feel a headache coming on...how could he forget that his wife loved her idiot brother and was very protective of him..not even dia can scold him in front of her now..she was taking her sisterly role very seriously.."i'am sorry nupur..pls maaf kardo.."holding his ears..
Nupur still looking angry "maafi mujse nahi uday bhaiya se maango.."she said pouting

"What"..main isse koi maafi waafi nahi maangoga..are you...stopped when he saw nupur fuming look.."ok ok maangta ho..

He looked at uday's grinning face..and nearly changes his mind but one look from nupur made him stop.."I am sorry.." he said grudgingly..

"Ah? the sweet taste of victory!" Nupur declared exultantly. "But that's not all"

"I already said i'am sorry what else do you want from me?" he asked
She faced him with her piercing sapphire eyes looking at him intently..Mayank recognized the special look in his wife's eyes and sighed..She wasn't about to leave him off the hook..he took a deep breath then finally gave his wife the warranted satisfaction of hearing him say "You were right; I? MAYANK SHARMA, former top student of excel college who never did anything wrong was? wrong."...happy??looking at her

A large beam appeared on her angelic face. "Don't you love that you married a very intelligent woman..shabaash mere sweetoo?" She reached up for a peck on his cheek..

Mayank looking confused "sweeto?"
Nupur giving him a quick hug.."haan mere sweeto..sirf mere.." she said softly

A full grin took over Mayank's lips. Nupur was a very clever woman? and he had been smart enough to make her his wife.
He smiled tenderly..nupur smiled back at him..
For a moment both got lost in each other's eyes..they forgot uday was still in the room looking weirdly at them..
finally he cleared his throat "hello laila aur majnu..main abhi bhi yahi ho.gaya nahi"..both looked up..again mayank gave him a deadly stare as if saying "one of these days i'll really kill you"...but he kept quite..


To be continued..

Dont forget to leave your comments. Jaya 😉
Edited by jayalal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
lolz sweeto hahaha nice name...n luv when bechare mayu ko nupur ke samne jukna pada....joru ka gulam lolz....really nice update...n made me laugh....uday heheheh...keep it up reallly gud work...n plz pm me whenever u update the next 1....really great update.....AWESOME...n thx 4 ur hard work.....
Edited by frndship_trust - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63

am enjoying ur ff dear....uday!am now controlling my breath...oh god how stupid he is...and nupur supports him ha ha ha...great...i need more...love reading it....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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BY GOD....idhar bhi 'Uday' kabaab mein haddi ban gaya!!!!!!!.....😆....hehe...........tht ws a vert sweeeeeeeeet update........had a gr8 time readin it....n thnxxxxx soooo much for d pm.....plzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooon.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
omgggg lolz nice line from mayank and dodo is sooo funny and cuteee
and it was a very entertaining updat .. gr8 work :)
update it soon
tc

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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
heyy awesome yaar.....yeh uday to kabab mein haddi banke hi rahega by god....but simply loooooved it..keep on adding aisa romantic mayur scenes...simply loooove them......plsss continue soon and do pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
hahaha...that was soo chweet !!
loved it yaar
i am really sorry..i didnt comment on previous parts as i was bit busy !!
it was the bstest !!..loved it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hey tat ws cute!! loved it
!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
lolz...!!
ahh luved it..!!
again i will saw bechara dodo..!!!
n thanx for the PM...
keep writing rocking partz..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
very nice update. loved mayur n dodo . plz update soon. m waiting for next part. thanx fpr pm.

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