My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42 - Page 20

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Posted: 16 years ago
the best part of your ff is that you include a lot of romantic moments b/w mayur & it becomes a treat to read.expecting many such jubilant moments ahead😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey u forget to pm me
nice part
poor mayuu hamesha koi na koi interrupt kar he deta hai romance ko
or nupur balan se narri ke shkti ke ehsaas dilaya jayga bhola ko
lovely part
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESUM ROMANCE OF MAYUR!KEEP UPDATING!😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haha....love Bhola and Dodo....and ofcourse Mayur romance...do PM me next time you update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Chapter 9
"haa.. wahi batane aaya tha...tum log mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho..he asked looking at them confused
nupur(annoyed) "uday bhaiya aap abhi kyu bata rahe ho..pehle nahi bata sakte the kya.." she asked annoyingly
"maine kaha tha na ki yahi toh uday ki speciality hain, important baat bhool ne ki aur fhaalto baatein yaad rakhne
ki.." mayank said sardonically..
Dia was too excited to listen to their bickering.."oh ranvijay aa gaya..guys m going.." she said excitedly running out
to meet her fiance..(guys ranvijay came with the baaraat..he and samrat had become very gud friend so he came from his side).
After a while nupur felt something at her back "mayank.." she said after a pause "mujhe lagta hain meri blouse ki
dori khul gayi hain..zara......."motioning for him to tie it..

"uh nupur main baand do kya.."uday said helpfully coming forward
Mayank placed himself directly in front of nupur as if saying "You do that and i'll break your ten fingers..,"

One deadly glare from mayank changed his direction from nupur to the fridge..."uh..wa..waise mayank hain naa yeh
sab karne ke liye..aakhir woh tumhara pati hain u know.." he said opening the fridge and looking for something to satisfy his appetite as well as avoiding mayank poisonous glare...

"Yes, thank you for pointing that out, uday bhaiya," nupur sighed, rolling her eyes and turned around so that mayank
can tie her dori..
Mayank was still looking angrily at uday who still had his head inside the fridge..
"mayank..." nupur said gently motioning for him to tie her dori..

mayank scowlingly made his way towards her and moved her hair aside to tie her dori..he took his time tying it so
that he could touch her bare back..he lightly grazed her skin with his fingers and moved closer smelling her neck.she shivered..he had a sudden urge to kiss her creamy skin but he knew he couldnt because uday was still in the kitchen taking out all the things that his hands could carry..he groaned cursing uday..
Nupur was laughing silently..she knew mayank wanted to do more than tying but he couldnt because uday bhaiya was
there..
What?" he asked irritably...
"oh nothing.."Nupur wheezed..then "ho gaya kya..kitni der se ek dori baand rahe ho..bandh nahi rahi hain kya " she
asked mischievously
"kholne mein mujhe jaida experence hain, baandne mein nahi," he muttered , which drew a slap from his wife. "Ouch,"
he exclaimed, rubbing his arm.." ek minute bandh raha ho..seedhi khardi raho " he ordered impatiently

"mayank jaldi karo naa..baaraat aa gayi hain..samrat ki aarti bhi utaarni hain.." she said excitedly

"ho gaya.." he said setting her hair back in place..

" chalo chalte hain" grabbing his hand and dragging him out of the kitchen..

"ek minute" stopping her..turning around to see uday still busy raiding his fridge.."uday.." uday looked up " yeh mera
fridge hain koi supermarket nahi.." pointing the fridge.."agar tumhara peth bhar gaya ho toh chale?? he asked sarcastically..."aur by the way.." still holding nupur's hands.."shaadi mein khana bhi milega toh pls mere fridge mein kuch toh chord do.." he said gritting his teeth..

Before uday could give some silly anwser nupur intervened "pls chalo mayank..by god tum bhi naa jab shuru ho jaate ho
toh khatam hone na naam hi nahi lete ho."she muttered while dragging him out..

Mayank "ab maine kya kiya..phir se...." he started complaining
"chup.."nupur said puttng a finger on his lips..and dragged him out of the kitchen..

Uday gave a sigh of relief "thank god yeh lion chala gaya..warna aaj mujhe khaa jata..yaar isko hamesha mein hi mila
ho kya..? he asked scratching his head.."college ke din se hi mere piche parda hain..actually issko mujhe thank you kahna chahiye ki maine usse apni behan di hain lekin thank you toh dur mujhe ek glass pani bhi nahi pochta..:" he said sadly..then lightening up "anyways where was I.." looking into the fridge "aahh shilpa aunty kamaal ki cook hain..kitni saari cheeze rakhti hain fridge mein.." looking at all the sweets " pehle koun sa mithai khao..ahh(picking up jalebi's dish) yeh khata ho.."and sat down to eat..forgeting that mayank ordered come to come quickly

Meanwhile in the hall..samrat, benji and ranvijay were greeted warmly by Mayank..
Mayank(smiling at samrat) : so dude, ready for your big day" he asked teasily
Samrat(giving a huge smile) "you have no idea how ready I am...he said enthusiastically..After today his angel wil be
only his..he smiled
Benji:"dude uday kahi nazar nahi aa raha hain?" looking around
Mayank sighed "yaha hoga toh nazar aayega naa. waha hain jaha hamesha hota hain.." he said drily

Benji and samrat :"kitchen mein.." they said together and laughed..

mayank :"yeah..patani freeze mein kuch chordega bhi ya nahi.."he murmured.."yeh ma aur nupur ne usse sar par charda
kar rakha hain.." he said irritably

benji:"waise morena express hain kaha?" looking around for nupur
Mayank "woh hain na.."pointing where nupur was standing..she was talking to some ladies..she looked so beautiful in
red sari...mayank thought with smile..
Benji: "wow!! aaj toh nups kya lag rahi hain by god...log isse na dulhan samajh baithe.."he said laughing, but started
to cough when he saw mayank furious glare "relax mazaak kar raha tha..itne hyper kyu ho jate ho yaar.." inching closer to samrat incase mayank decides to give him a punch...

Samrat saw how mayank was glaring at benji so he decided to change the topic.."ah mayank...waise tumhara Goa wala
project kaisa chal raha hain...gunjan bata rahi thi ki 50% kaam ho chuka hain and you're very excited abt it.." smiling at mayank..
Shooting benji one last glare he turned to samrat
"yeh i'am very excited..this is one of our big project so thorda nervous bhi ho.." mayank replied half smiling..

"mayank sharma aur nervous, aisa kabhi hoi nahi sakta, zaroor mere kaan baj rahe hain...." benji said dramatically
mayank finally gave him a smile..

"hey samrat..."

they turned around and saw.....

To be continued...sorry for a short update..

i know i'am prolonging the wedding but my ff will end after the wedding..this is just a one day ff and of course epilogue...so pls no chappals and gaali

Love

Jaya

Edited by jayalal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wht?????????????????????ur ff is gonna end in next update?????????😭.......
will misssssssssssssssssss it vryyyyyyyyyyyyyy badly yaar...yeh abhi khatam karna zaruri tha kya?????????????nywz this update ws as usual mindblowin....superb....👏👏👏......

ab tumne decide kar hi liya hai to end...tooh plzzz last update ko ek lambaaaaa dhamaakedaar romantic update de dena....😉
Posted: 16 years ago
ur going to end it?😭
i'll miss it
anyways coming to the updt
it was awesome
loved mayur n uday n samrat n benji
thats everyone i think
i can't wait to knw who called samrat
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update....i totally loved the Mayank Dodo convo.....so funny....
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Posted: 16 years ago
unable to open pg 27...........plz pm me the part
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Posted: 16 years ago
why are you r going to end
it
i love this plz dont do this

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