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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Pehle mujhe ye bata ki sach me kya Raj ne Naina se i love u kaha hai ki nahi abhi, kahin tu hume sapna to nahi dikha rahi hai na? mujhe kya pata...yeh toh mera next ud batayega na...😆😆

Ok coming to the update, that was lnteresting. ab yeh bhi bata de...ke kya lag tujhe interesting...

Sab se jyada mai jis baat se khush hue hoon vo baat ye hai ki jis cheej se Raj sab se jyada dar raha tha ab us ko darne ki jaroorat nahi hai us se. Saara us ka dukh aur dard ek pal me khatam ho gaya jab Naveen ki maa ne us ko maaf kar diya. yeh baat toh hai...aur sachhi me yeh scene dream seq nahi tha...😆

Sach kaha unhone jab ek maa ka baccha dard me hota hai to us ko dekh kar sab se jyada dard maa ko hi hota hai. Shayad vo jo dua kar rahi thi Naveen k dukhon ko khatam karne k liye kahin na kahin bahgwaan ne bhi us ko manjoor kar liya. haan...par bhugta toh raj ne hi na...

Raj itne dino se jo bhi kuch apne andar chupa k baitha tha aaj vo sab saara dard bahar aa gaya aur ab vo bina kisi pareshaani se khule man se Naina ko accept kar sakta hai. Yahan Naina aur Raj ki to vahan Yudi ki bhi gaadi set ho rahi hai kuch had tak. pata nahi...matlab mujhe nahi pata ke Raj aur naina ka kya ho raha hai aur rahi baat yudi n shalini ki toh voh bhi mujhe nahi pata...!!! dekhte hain aage ke mujhe kya kya pata hai...😆

Naina ko pata chal hi gaya aakhir Doc Shalini ne thanks kyoun kaha tha us ko, aakhir Raj ne un ki life ka sab se bada problem jo solve kar diya tha na. Jis rishte ko Doc Shalini dho rahi thi us me kuch nahi bacha tha vaise bhi varna vo aadmi divorce k fauran baad hi kaise shaadi kar leta? kuch kuch aise unique praani hote hain is duniya me yaar...😆

Sab k liye itna karta hai Raj par apne liye jab kuch karne ki baari aati hai to peeche reh jaata hai vo. Accha kiya tha Huda aur Alekh ne Naina ko daata tha bina bataye yu hi Raj se milne jaane k liye. Ab Raj kam se har raat sukoon se so sakega, Naaz bhi khush hai apne bhai ki khushi k liye. yupe...raj bhi khush hai...naina bhi khush hai...aur naaz bhi...

Par ye kya hua? I mean ye Naina bhi na Raj se milne k baad bhi us ne apne parents ko nahi bataya ki vo Huda se shaadi nahi karegi Raj se karegi? Ye Huda to khush ho gaya ye jaan kar ki Naina us se shaadi karna chahta hai aur daud gaya. voh raj ko kharcha pani dene gaya tha...!!! aur naina ko sahi baat batane me tym lagegi hi na...

Naina k parents ko bhi ye baat poochne k liye Raj hi mila tha, us se pooch rahe hain Huda kaisa hai Naina us se shaadi karna chahti hai. Ab Raj vaise bhi kya bolta aur nahi hi bola us ne aur Naina ko thanks keh kar chale gaye janab aur jaa k ro rahe hain. haan...aur voh bhi bina glycerine ke...

Raj grow up dood, ye kya ladkiyoun ki tarah rona laga k rakha hai jaa k kehte kyoun nahi Naina se. Ab ye baat bhi Huda samajha raha hai apne sir ko, tab jaa k gaye janab. Yahan finally Naina ne rote rote poori raam kahani bata di apne parents ko aur vo bhi gayi.

Song was perfect and one of my favorite, but is it true? le ab bhi tu vohi puch rahi hai...kaha na maine ke yeh ek dream seq hai...😆😆 yakeen na aaye na next part padh le...

I am still in doubt aur mujhe ye bata ki kahin ye fic bhi to khatam nahi hone jaa raha hai na? 😕 😕 😕 sayad..........😆haan...yaaaaaa

Update soon.

Thanxxxxxxxxx Vertika...😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: psrn
any scene to update????????????????

Originally posted by: psrn
ven wil u update?😕

Originally posted by: psrn
y r u nt updaing????????????????????

Originally posted by: psrn
ven wil u update??????????

Originally posted by: psrn
yaar kya huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

kahan honnnnnnnnn??

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
continue soon

Originally posted by: lallulal2010
Update sooon........

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
waiting for the update mam..........

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
jeena to barson hai lekin ud jaldi padhnaa hai😭😭😭

Originally posted by: lallulal2010
PLz Plz Plz............... update aaj kar do.....

sorryyyyyy...main kal raat ko hi Ud kar deti...!!! par late nyt kal se ek horror show start ho gaya...Colours par...aur main use dekhne chali gayi...aur kar nahi payi...ud...!!! sorryyyyyyy...abhi karne ja rahi hun ud...!!! 😃

abhi bhi confusion me hun ke RN ke rishte ko aage kaise badhayaun...isiliye kuch samajh me nahi aaya...aur jo bhi is dimagless dimag me kud raha hai use post karr rahi hun...plzzzz adjust kar lena...!!! aur mujhe maarna mat...!!! vaise bhi xams ki tension me weight loss kar ke baithi hui hun...😆

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

psruthi, shreyamathur_18, neha10.for.u, psrn, hinal60, vvdn, rajeev fann, lallulal2010, danish1, tina_1234, esha143, varshita, PrincessFlavia, Dhara_s, suhana.dixit, golu_1677, dazzling_glory, sumaiya wahid, ronojoy_ria, PrithviSanyo1, Mahak Sinha,

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
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tera reservation toh sayad ab kabhi khatam nahi honewala...isiliye ab main UD kar hi deti hun...

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shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

hua ki nahi update jaidi karo.i m waiting...........

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

EPISODE:-18

khud ke kuch kahne se pahle us ne suna...

"I LOVE YOU NAINA.........

cut to Huda...

us ki ankhen bhar aayi thi...!!! chahe voh kitna bhi dikhawa kar le...voh dil se chahta tha Naina ko...!!! aur aaj se...Naina... hamesha hamesha ke liye Rajveer ki ho jayegi...!!!

Huda halke se mushkuraya aur khud se pucha:-"Naina...Rajveer sir ki kab thi hi nahi...!!! hamesha se voh un ki hi toh thi...par kabhi maine toh kabhi aas pas ke mahual ne unhe milne nahi diya...!!! par Naina...aaj main baht khush hun tere liye...!!! teri wajah se...aur thoda sa Rajveer sir ke liye bhi...!!! main koi bhagwan nahi hun...jo tujhe kisi aur ke sath dekh kar khush ho jayun...!!! pyar toh maine bhi kiya tha tujh se...!!! par main tere layak nahi...vaise dekha jaye toh...tu meri thi hi kab...tu toh hamesha se hi Rajveer sir ki hi thi...aur paheli baar kuch khote hue bhi...tum dono ko yun dekh kar khushi ho rahi hai...

apne kandhe par kisi ka hath dekh kar Huda ne turn kiya toh dekha...Alekh khada tha...

Alekh ne dhire se kaha:- "chal...ab apun dono ka yahan par koi kaam nahi hai...!!! yeh dono ek dushre ko sambhal lenge...!!!"

Huda ne ek badi si smile dete hue kaha:-"toh is khushi me aaj tu peelayega...kyoun...

Alekh ne Huda ka hath thaam kar use kheench kar le jate hue kaha:-"kya peeyega...deshi ya vohi tere army wala...

Huda:-"kuch bhi peela de...!!! matlab toh khushi manane ka hai na...

Alekh ne turn kar ke dekha...kafi piche chod aaye the voh Rajveer aur Naina ko...

Alekh ne sidha Huda ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"tu thik hai...

Huda:- "mujhe kya hua hai...???"

Alekh ne kuch nahi kaha...bass use gaur se dekhta raha......

Huda ne fiki si hassi hasste hue kaha:-"thoda sa dard hua yaar... yahan (us ne apne dil par hath rakh kar kaha) ...!!! finally Rajveer sir ne Naina ko apne dil ki baat jo kah di...!!! par sach kahun... toh maine bhi Naina se pyar kiya tha yaar...toh thoooooda sa dard hua...jyada nahi...haan...!!! kyoun ke Naina... hamesha se... Rajveer sir se hi pyar karti thi...main hi un dono ke bich taang adata rahta tha...!!! par ab aisa nahi hoga...!!!"

Alekh :- "tu badal gaya hai Huda...aur sach kahun toh apna yeh Huda...us Hude se baht jyada achha hai...jise humain bardast karna padta tha...

Huda hassa aur bola:- "tum logon ko toh ab bhi mujhe bardast hi karna padega...!!! aur haan main bilkul nahi badla...!!! maine bas yeh jana ke...hum jis se pyar karte hain...us ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain...!!! aur Naina ki khushi Rajveer sir me hai...!!! aur main koi mahatma nahi hun...jo mujhe dukh nahi hoga...!!! yeh toh Naina ki badkishmati thi...jo voh KMA me sab se pahle Rajveer sir se mili...agar voh sab se pahle mere se mili hoti na toh vohin flat ho jati...!!! arre yaar...Huda ka charm hi aisa hai...!!! aur rahi Rajveer sir ki baat...toh...unhone baht kuch saha hai yaar...kabhi hamare wajah se...toh kabhi halat aise ban gaye...!!! aur voh ek aisa inshan hai jo khud ke alwa sab ke bare me sochta hai...!!! tujhe nahi pata...par ek aisi galati hui thi mujh se jis se mujhe bhi terrorist maan liya jata...!!! par tabhi Rajveer sir ne mujhe bachaya tha...aur sab se is baat ko chupayi bhi thi...!!! voh inshan kafi accha hai yaar...toh use bhi khush rahne ka haq hai...!!! aur ek baat jani maine ke...hum jis se pyar karte hain...us ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain...aur Naina ki khushi Rajveer sir ke sath hai...mere sath nahi...!!! aur vaise bhi...Huda...akhir Huda...use koi khubshurat janani toh mil hi jayegi...jaldi...

Alekh:-"vaise man na padega...is Huda me akal hai...!!! kyoun ke pahlewale Hude me jo akal thi...voh ghaash charne jati thi...aur kabhi kabhi bhainshe...ghash ke sath sath us ka akal bhi kha jate the...

tabhi ek orderly ek khane ka tiffin box le kar Alekh ke qtr ki taraf ja raha tha...!!!

Huda ne use pakad liya:- "kahan ja rahe ho...

orderly:-"jee...roz ki tarah aaj bhi dinner dene ja raha hun... left Sharma ke qtr me...!!! late ho jayunga toh madam daantengi...

yeh kahta hua orderly jaldi me chala gaya...

Huda ne Alekh ki taraf dekh kar bola:- "tu toh kahta tha ke... khana Neelu banati hai roz...aur yeh kya...

alekh ne beparwah ho kar kaha:-" haan...khana chahe kahin se bhi gaya ho...roz garam kar ke...Neelu hi toh mujhe deti hai...

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Naina ki ankhon me anshun the...par voh gaur se maj Rajveer ka chehra dekh rahi thi...jo us ne abhi abhi suna us par yakeen karne ki koshish karr rahi thi...

"haan...maine sayad sahi suna...unhone mujhe kaha ke voh mujh se......

Naina ki saansh ruki...apne thake hue kadmon ko ghaseet te hue voh maj Rajveer ke kareeb pahunchi...dekha gaur se un ke chehre ko...

barish se bheege hue un ke chehre me apne liye anshun bhi dekhe...aur ankhon me us ke liye ek tadap bhi...

Naina apne pairon me kamzori mehshsush karne lagi thi...

us ne apna hath aage badhaya...chune ki koshish ki Rajveer ke chehre ko...par us ke hath kaamp rahe the...KYOUN...use nahi pata...

us ne apne kampte hue hath ki taraf dekha...

kyoun voh khud me kamzori mehshush karne lagi thi...

kyoun aaj voh baht kamzor mehshsh kar rahi hai...

kyoun...use lagta hai ke us me itni bhi taqat nahi hai ke voh Rajveer ke samne khadi bhi ho paye...

us ke pair lad-khadaye...voh halke se apne ghutno par baithi zameen par...

use rona tha...baht rona tha...aaj voh jee bhar ke...tut kar rona chahti thi...!!! kyoun...is ke jawab use pata hai....

apne hathon me apne chehre ko chupaye rone lagi...Naina...

maj Rajveer ke ankhon me abhi tak sawal tha...voh abhi tak samajh nahi paye the...Naina kyoun ro rahi hai...'kya voh un ke liye voh feel nahi karti...jo voh us ke liye karte hain...!!'

unhone khud se kaha...'nahi...maine us ki ankhen padhi hai...us ke dil ki dhadkan ko suni hai...!!! phir kyoun Naina....????????

maj Rajveer apne ghutno par baithe...Naina ke kareeb hi..."unhe aaj jann na tha...Naina ke dil ki baat...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye... voh Naina ke honthon se sun na chahte hain...jo un ka dil chahta hai...'

Rajveer ne...Naina ke hath thame...us ke chehre se us ke hathon ko hataya...dekha...Naina ro rahi thi...

aaj voh Naina ki anshuyon ko samajh nahi pa rahe the...!!! ya phir yun kaha jaye ki voh samajhna chahte hi nahi the...voh sirf jann na chahte the...sunn na chahte the...Naina ke honthon se khud ke liye...vohi baat jo abhi abhi unhone us se kahi hai...

unhone...Naina ka hath chod kar us ke chehre ki taraf apna hath badhaya...

Naina:-"aap ne Naveen bhaya ko maara tha...

Rajveer ke hath ruke...pal bhar ke liye kaampe bhi...us ne wapas khinch liye apne hath...

Naina ne is baar Rajveer ke ankhon me dekha phir kaha:- "haan... aap ne Naveen bhaiya ko mara tha....

phir be-tahasha rone lagi...!!! thoda sa jhuki...aur Rajveer ke seene par apna sar rakhte hue kaha:-"main kyoun nahi samajh payi thi voh sari batain jo maa ne aap se kahi...!!! main kyoun nahi samajh payi thi ke aap ne kis halat me bhaiya par goli chalayi...ek fauji kabhi bhi khudkushi nahi kar sakta...chahe halat kaise bhi ho...aur bhaiya kayar nahi the...!!! isiliye unhone aap ko goli chalane ke liye kahi thi...kyoun ke voh sab se jyada trust aap par karte the...!!! voh aap se pyar karte the...tabhi unhone aap se kahi thi voh baat...!!! voh jante the ke aap kis dard ke sath jeeyenge...phir bhi unhone kahi thi yeh baat...!!! aur main voh samajh hi nahi payi...!!! main kaise bhul jayun...main kaise khud ko maaf karu...kyoun ke maine aap ko marne ki koshish ki thi...goli chalayi thi aap par...yeh kahte hue ke aap ne mara tha naveen bhaiya ko...jab ki yeh sach nahi tha...!!! kabhi samajh hi nahi payi aap ko....

us ne apne hathon se Rajveer ko tightly cuddle kiya...dhire se kaha:-" voh sayad pyar hi tha...jo un dino main aap ke liye mehshsush karti thi...!!! kisi aur ke sath aap ko dekhne me taklif hoti thi...jab bhi kuch prob mere sath hoti toh is baat ka bharosha hota tha ke aap mere sath ho...aur mujhe kuch nahi hoga...!!! valentines day par jab Huda ne mujh se kuch kaha toh...meri nazar aap tak daud gayi thi...!!! main nahi samajh payi thi tab ke...yeh kya hai...!!! sach kahun toh samjha hi nahi kabhi bhi aap ko...

Naina thodi der ruki...maj Rajveer se alag hui...phir un ke ankhon me dekha...nazrain jhukayi dhire se kaha:-"jab aap chale gaye...toh tab ehsaash hua ke aap kya ban gaye the mere liye...!!! tab main chilla chilla kar yeh kahna chahti thi ke...

Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...use yaad aaya voh sab nazara...vohi bada sa dhamaka...vohi jalti hui jeep...voh Rajveer ka jane se pahle use hug karna...aur kahna ke...us ne sab kuch kho diya... yahan tak ki apne pya...

'pyar'...shabd ko voh pura nahi bol paye the...kuch roka tha tab sayad unhe...

Naina:- "main kehna chahti thi ke...main 'aap se pyar karti hun...baht pyar karti hun...aur bhagwan ko koi haq nahi banta...har baar mujh se meri har ek khaash chiz cheen ne ki...

Rajveer ne Naina ko aur kuch kahne diya hi nahi...ek jhatke me us ne use apne kareeb khinch liya...Naina ko apne majbut bahon me samete use rone ka mauka diya...

is anshun me voh khud ke liye pyar hi mehshush karr rahe the... dher sara pyar...

Naina khud ko un ke bahon me khote hue kah rahi thi:-"aap nahi hai bhaiya ke katil...maine jo kuch bhi kiya...us ke liye mujhe maaf kar dijiye...

Naina ne kafi tightly Rajveer ko hug karte hue kaha...Rajveer ke ankhon se halke se do boond anshun gire...honthon par halki si mushkan thi aur dhire se unhone khud se kaha...'haan...main nahi hun Naveen ka katil...'

Rajveer ne Naina ko khud se alag kiya...aur us ke ankhon me dekhte hue dhire se kaha:-"thanxxx Naina...mujhe yeh jatane ke liye ke...main nahi hun hathyara...!!! sab se jyada taklif hui thi jab tumhare honthon se suni thi yeh baat...aaj main khud ko be-kasoor mehshush karr raha hun...tumhare honthon se yeh sun kar...

Naina ne un ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"main na-samajh thi...jo jan nahi payi thi haqiqat ko...samajh hi nahi payi thi...par aaj jana...toh...yeh jana ke aap sahi the...

Rajveer kuch der ruka phir Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"tumhe kuch aur nahi kahna...

Naina ne un ke chehre ko dekha...voh samajh rahi thi ke Rajveer kya kahna chahta hai...

Naina ne halke se mushkurate hue...apne sar hila kar mana kar diya...hala ke us ke chehre ki us mushkurahat se samajh pa rahe the... maj Rajveer...

voh halke se mushkuraye...voh samajh chuke the...jaan chuke the Naina ke dil ki baaton ko...

Naina ko un ka is tarah se mushkurana achha lag raha tha...sath hi voh samajh chuki thi ke...maj Rajveer ne use ke dil ki baat bina kahe hi sun liya tha...

us ne nazrain jhukayi...halke se mushkaan ke sath...phir se maj Rajveer ke seene me khud ko kho diya...

Tu Bin Bataye

Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen

Jahan Tu Muskuraye

Meri Manzil Wahin

Tu Bin Bataye

Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen

Jahan Tu Muskuraye

Meri Manzil Wahin

"kuch toh ajeeb ehsaash tha...jo mere dil ko sukun de raha tha...!!! janta hun ke pyar karta hun main Naina se...siddat se chahta hun main use...dil ki gehrayiyon se...par aaj yeh ehsaash anokha hai...!!! us ne bin kahe...mujh se sab kuch kah diya tha...!!! main yun hi use seene me samaye...sadiyon tak khoya hua rahna chahta tha..."

maj Rajveer ka hath...Naina...us ke back par mehshsuh kar rahi thi...!!! use lag raha tha ke...ab koi bhi taqat... koi bhi ghum un dono ko alag nahi kar sakti hai...khud ko voh Rajveer ke bahon me baht mehfuz mehshush karr rahi thi...

Meethi Lagi,

Chakh Ke Dekhi

Abhi Mishri Ki Dali,

Zindagi Ho Chali

Jahan Hain Teri Baahein

Mera Sahil Wahin

Tu Bin Bataye

Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen

Jahan Tu Muskuraye

Meri Manzil Wahin

Rajveer ne Naina ko apne seene se lagaye... kaha:-"duriyan pyar ko aur badha deti hai...!!! main tum se hamesha dur raha yeh soch kar ke main tumhe sayad bhul jayun... par mumkin nahi tha...!!! jitna khud ko tum se dur karta...khud ko tumhare utne hi kareeb pata...!!! chah kar bhi tumhe pyar karne se main khud ko rok nahi paya Naina...kabhi bhi rok nahi paya...!!! sach kahun toh...us din mujhe baht taklif hui thi...jab maine tumhare samne sachhai bayan ki thi aur tum ne mujhe galat samjha...!!! phir maine socha...ke sahi aur galat samajhne me abhi bhi tum bachhi ho... (ek halki si mushkan ke sath bole) ...tum ne mujhe shoot kiya...par main tumhe tab bhi khud se alag soch hi nahi paya...!!! jo pyar tab tha mere dil me aaj voh aur bhi jyada gehra ho chuka hai...!!! aur aaj jab tumhari aur Huda ke shadi ke bare me suna toh laga...ke main hamesha hamesha ke liye haar gaya... aur hamesha ke liye tumhe kho baitha...

Naina ne khud ko Rajveer se alag kiya...thoda aur kareeb gayi...un ke face ke ek dam kareeb...un ke cheeks ko touch karte hue kaha:-"aap mujhe na toh kabhi khoye hain aur na hi kabhi khoyenge...!!! main hamesha se aap ki hi thi...aur aaj bhi...

Rajveer ne Naina ko phir se apne seene se lagaya...is baar us ka tight hug se Naina...mehsush karr rahi thi ke kya mayne bann gaya hai us ka maj Rajveer ki zindagi me...!!! us ke chehre par ek khubshurat si smile thi...

Mann Ki Gali

Tu Phuharoon Si

Aa Bheeg Jaye

Mere Khwabon Ka Kafila
Jise Tu Gungunaye

Meri Dhun Hai Wahin

Tu Bin Bataye

Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen

Jahan Tu Muskuraye

Meri Manzil Wahin (Movie:-Rang De Basanti)

12:00 a:m

Akcheeeeeeeeeeen.....

Naaz gusse se boli:-"aap ko army officer kis ne banaya... zara bulaye unhe...!!! aqal toh hai hi nahi aap me...!!! batayiye koun sa aag bujhane gaye the...is barish me jo yeh halat bana kar laute ho...???ya phir Naina ko bachane dal jheel me kude the..."

gusse se kahte hue us ne boiled pani la kar rakha rajveer ke samne...aur kaha:-"is me maine nilgiri ka tel dala hai...aur kuch aur herbals bhi dale hain...!!! towels se achhe se dhaank kar saansh lijiye...!!!"

Rajveer utha vahan se :-"mujh se na teri yeh deshi nushkhe samajh me nahi aate...!!! tu inhe rehne de...main kuch tablet le leta hun...!!!"

Naaz ne ek knief un ke samne dikhate hue boli:-"aap baithte ho ke...main apna dushra rup dikhyun...???"

Rajveer ne apna hath thoda upar uthate hue bola:-"vaise yehi rup tera kafi hai...aur dushra tishra mat dikha...mujhe...

voh chup chap baith gaye...aur Naaz ne jaisa kaha tha...vaise karne lage...!!! achanak Naaz ne pucha:-"vaise bhaiya...aap barish me bheeg ke...kar kya rahe the...??? aap toh Naina se milne gaye the na...phir kya hua...??? matlab kahin Naina ko sath le kar aap barish me gana-wana toh ga nahi rahte na...!!!

phir us ne apne sar par halke se marte hue kaha:-"main bhi kitni buddhu hun...gana aur aap aur voh bhi Naina ke sath... barshat me...huh...!!! yeh toh is janam me possible nahi hai...!!! kyoun ke gana aap ga bhi lo...toh bhi us se pahle aap ko Naina se apne pyar ka izhar karna padega...jo aap pata nahi is janam me kar payoge ya nahi...

Rajveer zoron se khanshne laga...aur apna chehra towel se bahar laya...phir halke se mushkurate hue kaha:-"tera xperiment agar mujh par khatam ho gaya ho toh main sone jayun...!!!"

itna kah kar voh apne room ki taraf jate hue ruke...phir piche aa kar Naaz ke kandhe par hath dala aur kaha:-"tu apne bhai ko itna gaya-gujra samajhti hai...mujhe pata nahi tha...!!! vaise Naina se pyar ka izhaar karna itna mushkil kaam bhiiiii....

itna kah kar voh apne room ke ander gaye...aur darwaza bandh karne se pahle kaha:-"vaise Naina se pyar ka izhaar karna itna mushkil kaam bhi nahi tha...!!!"

aur unhone...darwaza jaldi se bandh kar diya...!!! aur un ki baat ko samajhte hue Naaz ko do min lag gaye...

Naaz...zor zor se un ke room ka darwaza peet rahi thi... "bhaiya...darwaza kholo...jaldi se...varna mujh se bura koi nahi hoga...

cut to Naina...

Naina so rahi thi...!!! dhire se us ne...turn kiya toh dekha... us ke kareeb hi us ki maa so rahi thi...!!! voh uthi...unhe blanket se achhe se odhaya ...phir voh khud bed se niche utri...shawal dala...apne upar...aur apne room ke khidki ke paas gayi...

barish bandh ho chuki thi...aur vaise bhi yahan par thand baht hoti thi...aur aaj barshat ki wajah se...thand aur bhi badh gayi hai...!!!

par Naina khush thi...baht khush...dhire se us ne khud se kaha:- "tujhe teri zindagi...teri mohabbat...teri khushiyan milne ke liye mubarakh ho Naina...!!! chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...kabhi bhi unhe khud se dur nahi rakhna...un ka sath hamesha dena...!!! jo khushiyan unhone khoyi hain...use tu wapas toh nahi la sakti... par un ki zindagi me itni khushiyan bhar dena ke...voh apni khoyi hui khushiyon ko bhi kabhi yaad na kar sake...

naina ne ankhen bandh ki...us ke chehre par ek smile thi...jaise voh kuch sunn ne ki koshish karr rahi thi...aur akhir us ne suna bhi vohi line phir se...jo us ke dil me bas gayi thi...

I LOVE YOU NAINA...

naina ke chehre ki hassi thodi aur badi ho gayi...us ne dhire se kaha:-LOVE YOU RAJ...

us ke kandhe par kisi ka hath us ne mehshsuhs kiya toh turn kar ke dekha...toh Meera jee khadi thi...

Naina:-"maa...aap soyi nahi...???"

Meera je mushkurate hue boli:-"nahi...mujhe laga...sayad mujhe meri beti kuch kahna chahti hai...!!!"

Naina mushkurayi...phir nazrain jhukate hue kaha:-"maa...aap ko aur baba ko humaire rishte se koi prob toh nahi hogi na...???"

Meera jee:-"agar prob hoti toh...main us waqt tujhe Rajveer ke paas jane ke liye nahi kaha hota...!!!"

Naina mushkurayi...aur unhe hug kiya dhire se kaha:-"thanks maa...

Meera jee:-"ab ja kar so ja...!!! baht raat ho chuki hai...kal baat karte hain...!!!"

cut to Rajveer...

Naaz ka darwaza peetna bandh nahi hua toh...Rajveer ne majburan darwaza khola...aur bina kuch kahe aa kar sofe par chup chap baithe...

Naaz aa kar un ke samne baithi...thodi si thaki hui lag rahi thi...!!! kafi der tak use darwaza peetna jo pada tha...

Rajveer ne ek baar use dekha...unhe hassi aa gayi...!!! itni sardi me bhi us ke mathe par paseena tha...

Naaz ne phir se knief dikha kar kaha:-"hassna bandh kijiye...aur mujhe puri baat batayiye...varna aap mujhe nahi jante...

Rajveer:-"main kaise tujhe nahi janta...tu toh meri achhi pyari... aur ladaku behn hai...

Naaz:-"mashka baad me...!!! pahle point par aayiye...!!! aap ne sach me Naina se kaha...???"

Naaz ka chehra harani se bhara hua tha...

Rajveer utha apne jagah se...ja kar kareeb baitha us ke aur kaha:- "haan...maine apne dil ki sari baat bata di...

Naaz xcited ho kar boli:- "aur Naina...us ne kaha aap ko...'i love u...'

Rajveer halke se mushkuraya aur kaha:-"nahi...

Naaz ka chehra murjha gaya...us ne kaha:-"kyoun...matlab...

Rajveer ne us ka hath thaama aur kaha:-"sirf 'i love u' kahne se hi pyar hota hai...aur kisi baat se nahi...!!! bhale hi Naina ne mujhe voh 3 words nahi kahe ho...par us ne jitna kaha...utna kafi tha mujhe yeh kahne ke liye ki...voh mere liye kya feel karti hai...!!!"

Naaz:-"matlab...huggy-shuggy...aur kiss toh pakka kiya hoga na...???"

Rajveer chaunke aur apni jagah se uthte hue kaha:-"chup...bhai se aise baat karte hain...???"

Naaz:-"bhai agar aisa mile jo 'munni badnam hui' gane ko classical tarike se ganewala inshan ho...toh us ki behn ko aise hi bann na padega...!!! ab batayo na bhai...

Rajveer:-"nahi aisa kuch bhi nahi hua...!!! aur tu na...aise sawal puchna bandh kar...!!! tujhe pata nahi sharam aati hai ya nahi... par mujhe...

itna kah kar Rajveer apne room ki taraf badhe toh Naaz bhagte hue un ke samne aa gayi aur kaha:-"ohooo...mere bhai ko sharam aa rahi hai...

Rajveer ne hath uthaya use marne ke liye aur kaha:-"tu sone jati hai ya dun ek...

Naaz bhaag gayi...apne room me...!!! maj Rajveer ke chehre par mushkaan thi...

next day...

cafeteria me Huda akele baitha hua tha...Alekh aa kar baitha us ke paas...

Huda ne hasste hue kaha:-"breakfast lene aaya hai Neelu aur tere liye...!!! taki voh use garam kar ke tujhe khila sake...

Alekh:-"jyada apni khopdi mat ghuma...varna ek ghuma ke dunga na toh teri yeh jo battishi dikh rahi hai na...voh zameen par padi milegi...

Huda:-"hath toh laga ke dikha..tera voh halat karunga...ke Neelu is janam toh kya kisi bhi janam me tere ko nahi pehchanegi...

Alekh:-"apne aap ko jyada sayana mat samajh...tu nahi janta...

tabhi Pooja aa gayi:-"yeh kya...tum dono miss calls subah subah suru ho gaye...!!! uffo...tum dono ke pata nahi bettery kab charge honge...!!! mere paas tum dono ko dene ke liye kuch hai...

Alekh:-"dekh...tere ko jo kuch bhi dena ho na tu Ali ko ja kar de...!!! apun tere se kuch nahi le sakta...!!! ya phir Huda ko de...ise shakhat jarurat hai...

Huda:-"oye kaidi...tu kya subah subah mere sath jhagda karna chahta hai...aur sun...tu na yeh garam dimag kadai me rakh ke aa...mujhe nahi janta tu...

Alekh:-"bekar ke logon ko jann ne me apun ko koi dilchashpi nahi hai...aur tu na...

tabhi kisi ne dono ke kaan pakde...dono ne gusse se dekha toh Naina khadi thi:-"yeh kya subah subah...tum dono jhagda karr rahe the...??? aate jate log tumhe aise ghur rahe the...mano... Amrish puri aur Prem chopra jhagda karr rahe ho...

Huda:-"arre Phulan yeh toh apne dosti dikhane ke ek alag andaz tha...!!! khali baithe baithe bore hone se achha hai ke jhagda kiya jaye...!!! matlab kuch toh kaam karen...

Pooja ne gusse se kaha:-"tum logon ka bakwas khatam ho gaya ho toh main kuch bakun...???"

Huda ne khinch kar use apne kareeb bitha kar kaha:-"bakk na...

Pooja kafi khush ho kar zor se kaha:-"meri shadi tai ho gayi...

Alekh ne khush ho kar kaha:-"chalo achha hua Ali bichara bach gaya...!!! lekin teri shadi kis gadhe se ho rahi hai...

Huda aur Alekh ne high five kiya toh...

Pooja phir gusse se uthi apni jagah se aur kaha:-"mujhe nahi karni hai tum logon se baat...!!! meri thodi si parwah nahi hai tum logon ko...jab dekho mujhe pareshan karte rahte ho...!!! main kitne pyar se tum logon ko yeh kahne aayi thi...

Naina ne Huda aur Alekh ko gusse se dekhte hue...Pooja ko apne kareeb bithaya aur kaha:-"tu kyoun un ki baat ka bura maan rahi hai...!!! tu toh janti hai na...ek ke dimag me sirf gobar hai aur dushre ke dimag me sirf sharab...!!! tu mujhe bata...shadi ki date kab fix hui...

Pooja:-"May...me...

Alekh:-"apun ko thodi si prob hai...!!! matlab...apun kis ki taraf se jayega...teri ya Ali ki...

tabhi un ke piche se ali bola:-"aap aur Naina hamare taraf se hain...

Pooja ne gusse se kaha:-"kyoun...Naina teri taraf se kyoun jayegi...!!! voh best frnd meri hai...isiliye voh dulhan ke taraf se hogi...!!!"

Ali:- "dekhiye Pooja hum hamesha aap ki har baat mante hain... lekin is baar nahi...!!! Naina ne humain rakhi bandha hai...isiliye Naina hamare sath jayegi...aur Alekh bhai bhi...!!!"

Pooja ne do min use ghura phir kaha:-"thik hai le ja...mujhe kya faraq padta hai...!!! meri taraf se Huda, Shalini maam, Yudi, Naaz, Gunny aur Rajveer sir honge...!!! aur tu Naina ko jyada mujh se dur bhi nahi rakh payega...kyoun ke us ki dorr matlab Rajveer sir mere sath honge...!!! main jab chahun...dorr khinchte hue Naina ko apne pas khinch lungi...samjha...

Naina jan nahi pa rahi thi ke voh in dono ke jhagde se khush hoye ya dukhi...

cut to Naaz...

apne room me thi...tabhi us ka fone ring hua...

unknown no tha...!!! Naaz janti thi ke aise no par koun ho sakta hai...

Naaz:-"haan...bolo...

***:-"aap ko kuch kaam diya gaya tha...

Naaz:- "mujhe pata hai aur main use karne ki puri koshish karr rahi hun...

***:-"aur vahan aap ke Rajveer bhai...Naina singh k sath mohabbat ke kashide padh rahe hain...!!! aur aap kah rahi hain ke aap humara kaam karr rahe hain...!!! lagta hai...aap ko aap ke muh-bole bhai ki badi fiqar hai...par sagi behn ki nahi...!!!"

Naaz:- "main kaam apne tarike se karti hun...!!! aur agar aap ko koi prob hai toh aap yeh kaam khud kar lijiye...mujhe...dhamki mat dijiye...!!!"

***:-"hum sirf itna kah rahe hain ke...aap ko yeh kaam jald se jald karni hogi...varna aap ke behn ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai...!!! matlab aap mujhe janti hai...main aisa khud kuch karna nahi chahta...par aap jante hain JANAB aise kar sakte hain...!!!"

Naaz ne gusse se kaha:-"toh phir aap apne JANAB se kahiye... khud aa kar Naina ko maar de...!!! un ka kaam ho ajyega...!!! par mujhe pata hai aap aisa kuch nahi kar sakte...kyoun ke aap ko subut chahiye...aur us ke baad lft singh...hai na...!!! aur agar aap ko dono hi chiz chahiye aur aap chahate hain ke kaam hifazat ke sath ho...toh mujhe apne tarike se kaam karne dijiye...!!! aur mujhe is tarah se baar baar fone kar ke pareshan karna bandh kijiye...!!!"

Naaz ne gusse me fone ki switch off ki...!!! use Naina ko bachana hai...aur sath hi apni behn Noor ko bhi...!!! par kahin na kahin is me Rajveer ki jaan ko bhi khatara hai...!!!

voh baithi...apne bed par...khud se kaha:-"jab tak Noor un ke kabze me hai...main yeh baat bhaiya ko bhi nahi bata sakti...!!! mujhe khud hi kuch karna padega...!!! lekin us se pahle...

thodi der sochne ke baad...us ne apne bed ke ander se vohi chota sa gun nikala...!!! thodi der tak gaur se dekhne ke baad...us ke chehre par ek mushkaan aayi...

Naaz is baat se anjan thi ke...koi us ki har ek baat ko sun raha tha...!!! jis ke chehre par pareshani thi...aur ankhon me baht sara uljhan...

Naina...ground me ja rahi thi...us ki nazar padi maj Rajveer par...!!! voh bhagti hui un ke piche se gayi...aur un ke left shoulder par hath rakha...

maj Rajveer ne turn kiya toh koi nahi tha...aur right side par koi tha...!!! dekha toh voh Naina thi...maj Rajveer hasse...

Naina:- "aap mujhe dhudh rahe the...

Rajveer ne chalte chalte jawab diya:-"nahi toh...

Naina ne thoda muh latka kar kaha:- "haan...kah dete toh kya farq padta aap ko...

Rajveer:-"jo har waqt aur har lamha mere paas hai...main bhala use kyoun dhundhunga...

Naina mushkurayi aur kaha:-"aap kahin bahar ja rahe the...???"

Rajveer:-"haan thoda sa kaam tha...isiliye bahar ja raha tha... town ki taraf...!!!"

Naina:-"main chalun aap ke sath...

Rajveer:-"nahi...!!! main official kaam se ja raha hun...

Naina ne dhire se sar jhuka kar kaha:-"thik hai...bye...

Rajveer thoda mushkurate hue kaha:-"arre...aise kaise... bye...!!! tumhe toh baht kuch sikhna hai Naina...!!! jaise... mere sath kaise jhagda karna hai...aur kaise apni baat manwani hai... sab kuch...!!!"

Naina:-"main aap ke sath kabhi jhagda nahi karungi...!!! aur rahi baat aap se apni baat manwane ki toh...mujhe us ki kabhi jarurat padti hi nahi hai...!!! pata nahi kaise par aap hamesha meri har baat mere kahne se pahle hi samajh bhi jate hain aur kar bhi lete hain...!!!"

maj Rajveer ke chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...!!! dono chalte chalte maj Rajveer ke jeep tak pahunch chuke the...

Naina ne dekha...maj Rajveer use abhi bhi dekh rahe the...!!! us ne apni nazrain jhukayi phir kaha:- "main chalti hun...

voh vahan se ja rahi thi...maj Rajveer ne us ka hath thama... Naina ne turn kiya toh maj Rajveer ne kaha:-"chalogi mere sath...

Naina:-"lekin aap toh official kaam se ja rahe hain na...!!!"

maj Rajveer:-"haan...bas 10 min ka kaam hai...!!! ek file pahunchani hai head qtr me...bass...!!! lekin tumhe inhi uniform me hi chalna padega mere sath...!!! kya hai na...mujhe jaldi pahunchana hai vahana par...aur tumhe abhi koi kaam toh nahi hai na...!!!"

Naina kafi khush lag rahi thi:- "nahi...meri duty khatam ho chuki hai...!!! bas main maa-baba ko fone kar ke bata deti hun...!!!"

tabhi un dono ne apne piche se kuch sunn kar chaunke...

"apun dono bata denge na...tu bindas ja sir ke sath...

dono ne turn kar ke dekha...paas hi ek paid ke piche se Alekh aur Huda khade the...

Rajveer thoda hairan ho kar kaha:-"tum dono yahan kya karr rahe the...

Alekh:-"aap ne hi toh bola tha sir ke...

voh chup raha...!!! maj Rajveer ka sar ghum raha tha...khud se bole..."matlab in kambakhton ne hamari puri baat sun li hai...!!! ab is me in dono ka bhi kya kasoor...inhe bhi toh Naina ke piche maine hi lagaya hai...!!! pata nahi yeh mission kab khatam hoga aur Naina aur main kabhi akele me bhi tym spend kar payenge...!!!"

maj Rajveer ne naina ki taraf dekha...jo ki kafi naraz lag rahi thi...!!!

maj Rajveer:-"main hun Naina ke sath...tum log jayo...!!! hum jaldi hi wapas aa jayenge...thik hai...!!! aur haan...kripa kar ke...Naina ke parents ko bata dena ke Naina mere sath town gayi hai...

Huda aur Alekh janewale the...phir dono ne ek dushre ko dekha... turn kar ke Rajveer ke paas aaye...

maj Rajveer ne apne gusse par control karte hue kaha:-" ab kya hai...???"

Huda:-"aap ne toh bataya hi nahi sir...

Rajveer:-"kya...

Huda:-"yeh kripa koun si janani hai...use kyoun aap ke aur Naina ke bare me hum batayen...???"

maj Rajveer ne apni gun nikali...toh dekha...voh bhaag gaye the...

aur Naina...badi mushkil se apni hassi daba rahi thi...

maj Rajveer:-"ab hassna bandh karo...aur jaldi se jeep me baitho...

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Hiiiii All...😃

last part par mujhe bahhhhhhhhhhhhht sara pyar...hugs aur tarifain mil gayi...main abhi bhi hawa me hi udd rahi hun...😆!!! aur udte udte hi ud kiya hai...so...agar kisi ko yeh ud confusing, boring ya apne xpectations se kamm lage toh maaf karna...!!! yeh sab aap sab ki galati hai...kitni tarif kar di meri...akkha lyf me apun ne itna nahi suna tha...jitna aap logon ne suna dala...😃

Love you all🤗

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#827

LRL JOKE:-1

Angry Nair:- Tumne kabhi Ullu dekha hai?

Yudi (sar jhukate hue):- Nahi sir.

Nair:- Niche kya dekh rahe ho ? Meri taraf dekho...

LRL JOKE:-2

Teacher-2 me se 2 gaye to kitne rahe?

Rajveer( 5 saal ka)-samjh me nahi aaya.

Teacher-Beta tumare pas 2 Roti hai,tumne do roti khali,tumare pas kya bacha?

Rajveer-sabji...

LRL JOKE:-3

To,
The Principal (Maj Nair)
K.M.A
Ambala

salam sir,

Baat yeh hai ki...apun ke paas fee ke liye 500 rupay the...!!! 100 rupay ki doston ke saath Dabang film dekh li..100 rupay ke us Hude ke sath beer pee li...150 rupay se girl friend k sath pizza kha liya.

Aur 150 rupay shart main haar gaya ki Ritu madam ka chakkar Rajveer sir se chal raha hai..Main haar gaya, kyonki pata laga hai ki Ritu madam ka chakkar to aap se chal raha hai...aur subut bhi mil gaye...

Sir, ab aap ke samne sirf do hi raaste hain......Ya toh apun ka Fee Maaf, ya phir aap ka Raaz Faash. aage aap ki marzi...

Phir se salam

Alekh

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
hua ki nahi update jaidi karo.i m waiting...........

ho gaya...ab padho...aur mujhe galiyan dena start karo...😆

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#829

hi 😊

the up is good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

so rajveer ke aakhir kar aapne dil ke baat naina ko bata he diya that he loves her😳😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

but raj ke yeh baat sunkar naina who was waiting to hear those words for ages and after hearing the 3 magical words she just get lost 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

us ke ander jo rajveer ke liye pyaar jo ehsaas sab jaise ek saath ho gaye 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊she was so happy ke usse samajh mein nahin aa rahe the ke kya bole kunki she was also feeling guilty that she charged him as his brother's murderer😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

par aapne ma ke baat sunke ke bad aaj naina ko ehsaas bhi hua ke uske kitne baare galati 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊kiya woh rajveer se kahete haai that she was wroung and he is the killer of her brother😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

naina ke muh se yeh baat sunke aaj rajveer ke dil ke mein jo gilla tha jo guilt tha woh bhi dur ho jaata haai 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

aur is ke saath rajveer naina ke dil mein chuppe uske liye pyaar ko bhi jaan leeta haai 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

plz cont soon and pm me

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#830

Heyya.....main aa gayi...😆....waise abhi kuch der pehle TN wala comment un-reserve kiya...😆....waha ek bahut hi buri news ka disclosure kiya (buri news for me....tumhare liye hai ya nahi u decide huh😆).....ke main ek break le rahi hu....and I knw....how much I'll be missed...😆😆😆...waise much ya less....wo nahi pata....but I'll be missed for sure..😉😉

Achha...now coming to the part....achha hua pehle maine part padha phir apne last comment ka reply....warna mere Raj ke I love You ko jo tumne Huda wala bana diya tha....mujhe to tabhi heart attack aa jati....(coz that had to be an instant reaction)....and next....I wud realize tumne meri khinchayi ki thi....but then tab tak main to aatma ban chuki hoti.....so I wud haunt u always!! 😆😆 Samjhi kuch?? 😆😆 Thoda sa bakwas kiya maine....lekin mujhe pata hai....tum meri tarah hi dimagless ho....samajh gayi hogi...😆😆

Now seriously coming to the part....Raj n Naina ke do scenes the...the first emotional one....I loved the way it turned out....and of course she doesnt need to say those three 'magical' words...😆....coz not everything needs to be spelled..😆😉....waise kabhi kabhi.... 'I love you' kehne ke baad 'I love you too' kehna mujhe cheezy lagta hai....😆😆....now dont make faces....lagta hai to lagta hai....bas!! 😆 (but yeah its sumtyms😆) So I am happy yaha cheezy kuch nahi hua....😃😉.....and again meri ek aur fav song....😳😳😆...kabhi kabhi sochti hu 'do I have too many fav songs?' 🤣 But it was just perrfectt!! Naa kam naa zyada.....😉

Aalekh n Huda....nice scene....and of course Huda cant get over his love....thats never possible and that cant or rather shudnt be expected from him!! (bas itna hi humble ho sakti hu main) 😆 Waise wo Neelu ki khane wali baat....😆😆 that was a cool inclusion!!😆

And next....Raj n Naaz....gosh!! Thats sooooo sweet....Naaz jis tarah Raj ko dhamkati hai....thats adorable....but then wo bhi Rajveer hai....loved his darwaza bandh technique!! Kisiko allure karke bich me chhor dena....😈 cool hai yaar!! 🤣 😎

And yaha Naina n uski Mom ka chhota sa scene....actually ye chhoti chhoti baatein hi mujhe thodi badi tarike se yaad rehti hai...😉😆

But yaha Naaz ko kisne dekha?? Tell tell....😕 Now dont tell me to guess....wid YOU I am never gonna Guess!! 😆😆 Jo likhna ha likhti jaa....main padhti jaungi....yaha main apna dimagless dimag nahi lagane wali hu....fayda nahi hai....ur mind's acceleration is more than mine...😆😆

And now the last RN scene.... "jo har pal mere saath hai usse kyun dhundu"....😍....arre yaar my heart is again gone....to him!!❤️ Kitni mushkil se behla-fusla ke wapas bulaya tha (heart ko)....but phir se le gaya....😆...chalo ab wapas nahi bulaungi....waise bhi tumhara heart bhi wahi hai na.....gappe hi maarenge....😆😉 and of course....I knw...its safer there!! 😉😳

Last me Aalekh n Huda ka aana....and reason dena....😆 I was laughing.....Raj ke paas kehne ko bhi kuch nahi tha...😆...but again another best thing was Raj ka gun nikalna....haiiii....kitna awesum lag raha hai....😍....I love that look!! 😉

LRL jokes badhiya hai....1st one is veryyyyyyy cool...😎...Raj wala to smart hai hi.....😉😉....and Aalekh....fultooooo character me....I was thinking Aalekh ek request filled letter likh raha hai?? Does that go wid him?? Nahhhhh.....😉😆....so that was perrfecttt!! 😆

Loved it all....do continue soon....mujhe tym nahi milega so wat?? Bakiyon to padhna hai....and though I dont think aisa hoga....but still I hope to get a gr8 deal of parts from u....😉 (of ur all fics😃) Take care sweetie....and miss me...😆😉😆

Sumi. 😳

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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