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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#401

Gussa aa raha hai....waise hgi 120 PMs hai.....aur upar se abhi abhi likha hua comment delete ho gaya....I am actually very fed up yaar....isiliye I am rushing up....I knw u understand!!

P.S. Iss fic par already do baar comment likha.🤢

I loved the imagination scene....Raj n Naina ko KHYALON me rehne do pls.....😆

And Raj ka smoking scene best tha....he was breathtaking.....I knw smoking is bad...but HE is so gud that even bad looks gud!!😳😳

Cadets reaction scene was gud.....wat Raj said abt Aalekh n Huda was cool!! And Raj ka wada nibhane wali baat achhi thi.

Par file me ye kya tha?? I knw tumne kuch hatke socha hoga....so I'll not waste tym thinking or guessing!!

Gud bye....continue soon....and am really sorry for this hurried comment!!😕

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#402

Superb!!! Excellent!!!Awesome!!! Raj naina ka yeh badla hua behaviour dekh kar shocked ho jata hai. Use dsamaj mein nahi aata ki who kya kare.

Naina ko sach mein bahut bhook lagti hai'.pehle toh Raj ko kahin se bhi khana lane ko keh diya aur phir bhutta khane ki zidd karli. Raj is surprised to see that naina can eat such spicy food.

Aur isse sub mein romance toh kahi piche reh gaya,. Dono ko romance ka maaza apne khayalon ke dreamland mein hi lena pada. The scene was very romantic'hope ke yeh sapna reality mein jaldi ho jaye.

Everyone is shocked to see their Rajveer Sir. Ali, Yudi and pooja cannot stop their tears and start crying. Whereas Alekh and Huda are angry with Raj for keeping them in the dark. Par Raj unhe mana hi leta hai.

Ab itne acche reunion mein yeh duty ka call kahan se aa gaya. Seiing Raj leave naina gets worried and Raj tries to reassure her that everything is fine.

Naina's friends are angry with her for hiding the truth from them...but in the end they forgive her because they are glad to see her happy. Alekh ne sahi pakda naina ko...akhir yeh kaise ho sakta tha ko Rajveer Sir apne favourite cadets se naa mile?

Col Gupta ne yeh kaisa mission Raj ko diya hai jiska sambandh Naina se hai. Hope that this will not take Raj away from Naina'Dono itni mehnat se mile hai'unhe dur maat kar na.

And where is Naaz going?

Waiting to know the answer to these question and the story ahead'.so please continue soon.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#403

awesome update.loved it.
loved the conversation between raj and naina ,loved the scene between raj and naina.
loved the conversation between raj and cadets.
alekh and rest understand naina janti thi iye baat pehele se.
lo uss file mein kya hain, naina ka pics kyuon , another suspense.
continue soon.

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#404

hi priya

jab mene itne dino baad if khol k recent posts me tumhari fic ko updated dekha na, to mann kiya k ek se ek galiya de maru tumhe, k mujhe pm kyu nahi kia.

magar ussey pehle mene apna inbox check kar lia

chalo comment baad me karungi kyki abhi mera dimag kharab ho raha hai

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#405

Hii Priya,

kaisi ho? m really sorry for such a late reply !

but update is wonderful.....simply gr8888.RN ke saare scene to fabulous the.waiting for next part...

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#406

oye too good yaar......👏👏

loved d way u narrated d whole part......👏👏

vaise dat sochne wala part was roamtic yet woh sochnewala tha...👏👏

njoyed d way cadets reacted on shalini's lecture thing....😆

n den wen raj came d emotional bonding was also excellent...👏👏👏

also luved d d last bit of rn convo...tooo cute.....😳

lets see wat follows next.😛

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sania_58

@sania_58

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#407

wow

wonderful update

too good

amazing

superb

loved it

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#408

Hey priya....

chooooo sorry for the late comment ...tu meri is galthi ke liye feel free to give galiyan ...main prasad samjhke khalungi 😆 😆 😆

Update to asusal awesome blossom dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina ko is tarah raj se baatein karte hue dekhke bahut accha laga yaar....loved nainas dialogues aur uska reasoning why raj should take care of her... raj ne tikh hi kaha apne aap se ....'bass sochtha hi rehtha hun ..aur kuch kar patha nahin hun"😆 😆 😆...sweet buddhu hain ye raj

Waise kya dream tha...when i started reading that part ...mujhe pakka yakeen hogaya tha.... this is a dream ...kyunki we know our RN na ye donon sirf sochthe hi rehthe hain ..really kuch karte nahin haina 😆 😆 😆

pata hain in this dream naina ka dialogue ...aap ne meri bhutta kyun khali...mujhe bahut hasi aayi aur bahut cute bhi laga ......hum sab us dream ko kitna enjoy kar ke padhrahe the aur tumse wo nahin dekhagaya...bhejdiya ek idiot ko waha pe...usne itna accha dream ka satyanash kardiya...iski biwi ne ek galthi ki hain isko dhamki dene ke bhajaye seedha kayi main dakeldethi to kitna accha hota .....

raj how many times kaha naina se raj kehke pukarne ke liye ...lekin naina ki excuses..ab wo itna pyar se kehraha hain to naina uska baat manjao aur pyar se raj boldo yaar

Naina ne kitni sweetly poocha rajse to give her the watch back ...lovely scene yaar n raj ne jo kaha ..jo tumhara hain wo kisi aur ki kismat nahin bansakthi....loved it

Inthe party shalini ki bashan ,sunke huda ko laga ki wo nair ya bhargav ki baat kar rahi thi 😆 😆

raj ko dehkne ke baadh sab ki emotions tune bahut acchi tarah se describe kiya 👏 👏 👏

Alekh,raj n hudas scene is so nice...in short the whole partyscene is fabulous yaar

ab ye col.gupta kaunsa file diya tha jis main naina ka photo hain??? n ye naaz ye toothi phooti ghar ke pass apne taxi kyun rukwadi??

chal b jaldi update karo nahin to ....

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
dekha??? jab bhi tu pm bhejegi na, main sabse pehle reserve karungi ! 😛 issliye bheja kar ! 😆 😆 😆tune kabhi kisi doc ki peetai hote hue dekhi hai...!!! nahi na...!!! toh phir tu thodi der k liye rukkk...main teri voh halat karti hun kiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😆 😆 😆

*** runs away to avoid priya's beating ***** par mujh se bach kar kahan jayegi....jahan jayegi...bass mujhe payegi...😆

Heylo priya !!! haiiii...'heylo' bhi kitna pyar se bolti hai yeh doc...varna baki k doc toh mujhe dekh kar...hi bhaag jate hain...!!! kyoun...??? meri aaj tak samajh me nahi aayi😆

Update kaisa tha yeh main tumhe nahi bataungi....this is your PUNISHMENT.... aare maine aisa kya karr diya jo mujhe saza mil rahi hai...hun...😲

kisliye??? WOh baadmein bataungi ! achha thik hai...😃

So....start pe aate hai.... matlab khinchai chalu...bhagwan jee wait...main aa rahi hun...😆

MAJOR (😆 😆 hass issliye rahi hoon kyunki jitni baar bhi tumne issmein Raj ka naam likha hai na, utni baar EK AGYAAKARI junior ki tarah ki tarah tumne uske aage MAJOR likha hai...😆 😆 😆) ab tu mere feelings nahi samjhegi...isiliye main nahi batayungi ...is k piche kya RAAZ hai...😆 😆 😆

haan....MAJOR Rajveer pooch rahe hai ki kya waqai mein Naina naveen ki behen hai??? Goli khane ke baad bhi Majorsaab ko doubt hai iss baareimein !😛 doubt toh hoga hi na...!!! bhai kahta hai 'goli maar'...behn ko kuch kahne ki jarurat hi nahi padti...voh khud goli maar deti hai...!!! dono hi taraf se Rajveer sir ko hi toh suffer karna padta hai na...😆

Aur keh rahe hai ki kitna majese time katt raha tha !!!

Helooo !! Major saab !!! Aapka sapne dekhne mein time kat raha tha...aap dono ko chup dekhkar HAMEIN bore ho raha tha....kamse kam kuch change toh milega !😛 chalo achha hai...aaj tere muh par sach baat aa hi gayi ki mere fics tujhe bore karte hain...

I enjoyed Naina's dial and her reasons about why Raj should get her something to eat and should take care of her ! 😛 naina ka dimag kabhi kabhi jaag jata hai toh voh aisi bakwaas bhi karti hai...😆

Naina gussa hogayi ki MAJOR Rajveer phirse kisi soch mein doob gaye Aur MAJOR Raj keh rahe ki sirf sochta hi toh rehta hoon...*** sigh ***

Toh Major kuch karo !!! Be a man !! 😆 😆 😆 main toh kab se kah rahi hun...par raj toh meri baat maanta hi nahi hai...!!! tu bol k dekh...sayad teri baat maan jaye...

Raj ne chewing gum diya parrrr woh kehte hai na NAZAR honi chahiye....sab kuch barabar dikh jaata hai...😛 Toh Naina ko bhutte dikh gaye ! (wowwwww !! well...errr....control mana ! 😆) vaise tu kis baat par control karr rahi hai...😛

Now that whole bhutte ka daana and THAT scene...😆

"apna chehra Naina k kareeb laye...apne honthon se Naina k honthon k kareeb laga hua bhutta unhone le liya..."

Jab yeh padha toh meri aankhein BADI hogayi...😲

aur jaise aage padhti gayi, toh main sochti rahi ki YEH ho kya raha hai...??? 😲 par maine jab yeh scene likha tha...toh meri ankhenbadi nahi hui thi....kya hai na...meri ankhen bachpan se hi badi hain...aur yakeen maan...jo bhi ho raha tha...sab ki sehat k liye achha hi ho raha tha...😆

Aur phir jab yeh padha...

"Maj Rajveer ruke aur khud Naina k kareeb aa gaye... Naina k honth apne honthon se choo liya...!!!

Toh my reaction was " HAILA !!! "😛 😛 'JAMAILA'...tujhe aisa laga...sachhi😛 😛

As i kept reading, MY MIND WAS SCREAMING at me 😆 😆 Ki NAHIIIII .....yeh sab sapna hai....yeh itniiii samajhdari waala kam nahi kar sakta 😛 😛 😛 Aur agar usse karna bhi raha toh PRIYA usse nahi karne degi 😆 😆 😆 le...ghum phir kar aa gayi na...mere pe...!!! meri khinchai kiye bina tera khna kahan hajam hota hai...😆

Aur maine apni KHAALI dimaag ki baat maani aur fayde me rahi ! 🤣 😆 😆 😆 😆

The Sweetest thing was Naina asking Raj to give her that watch back and the whole scene ! 😃 chalo...kuch toh tujhe sweet laga...😆

Bechare MAJOR Rajveer....kabse ek hi baat keh rahe hai...mujhe RAJ bulaaao !! Par yeh...iske excuses ki list toh khatam hi nahi hondi !! 😆 😆 ho jayega...jaldi hi...main hun na...!!! ab yeh mat bolna ki 'tu hai...isiliye jyada tension hai'😆 😆

The party scene was supeeeerrrrbbbbb !!! shukriya...😃

Aalekh and Huda ka gussa hona and Raj ka unko manana....was awesome blosssom !!! dhanyavaad...😃

And the SAHI thing was Aalekh ka Naina ki chori pakadna !!! 😛 ab Alekh se koi bacha hai...jo aaj bachega...😉

Naina ran behind Raj to ask him why has Col.Gupta called him...

PHIRSE??? 😲 😲 Naina !!! Plzzzzz !!! Hamare MAJOR saab ke patience ki limit mat dekho !! Ab toh unhe RAJ bol hi do yaar !!!

Ek baat kitni baar bolni padti hai iss ladki ko ! ab is ka jawab toh tujhe DJ'S hi de sakte hain...!!! tujhe sayad yaad ho ki LRL me bhi naina ko kuch bhi kaho...voh vohi karti thi...jo use achha lagta tha...😛

NOW AM VERRRYYYYYYYY VERRRRYYYYYY ANGRY with you !!!! ab yeh kis khushi me...😆

Uss file mein NAINA ki photo kya kar rahi hai.... shaadi se pahle...bakre ko bakri ki tashveer dikhate hain na...isiliye...!!! tu hamesha negetive hi kyoun sochti hai...yeh soch na...ki raj k liye Naina ka rishta aaya hai...aur Col Gupta ne isiliye' chai pe bulaya hai'😆 😆 😆

Kahi yeh uske PROMOTION ki toh baat nahi hai? 😆 😆 😆 Dekha...main RN ke liye kabhi bura soch hi nahi sakti !!! WOh toh sirf aur sirf tum karti ho....HAMESHA.😛 ( Mere Fic ki advertisement bhi hogayi ! 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆) main...aur un dono ka bura sochun...??? hey bhagwan...yeh sunn ne se pahle...main Mana k hospital kyoun nahi pahunch gayi...use torture karne...😆 😆 😆

Chal byeeeeeeeeee

Aur Update soon kehke koi faaida toh hai nahi....😉 kyoun...bol k toh dekh...ud kab ka taiyaar hai...tum me se kisi ne bhi nahi kaha ud soon k liye...isiliye kate ho rahi hun...