mayur ff.....Courtship[part-14..pg-58]..updated!!! - Page 41

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow prerna yaar
this part is roking and awesome
thx yaar you take time frm your busy schedule and write this lovely parts ,wow yaaaar
hatttts of tou
no im addicted to this ff
so try to soon update
nice part and romantic too
yaar i feel heat in my room too
😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow prerna, this was a master blaster, mayank in nupz's room and hiding in the washroom and later hanging form the window is all sooo adorable, cute and exciting.
This dodo na, i won' leave him, but he is soo cute bhi na.
Excellent update, thanks alot for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb bechare Mayur cant romnace also😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
lol..pehle uday ab gunjan....bichare mayur k privacy ka koi khyal hi nahi.....was very cute...
hope vll get 2 c sum passionate mayur romance soon...???
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago

thanx a lot everybody......for ur wonderful and precious comments.....i feel really good by reading them......i'll try n update the next part as soon as possible!!!.....keep reading....luv ya!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
tk ur tym dear..we vl wait 4 ur magic prerna...tk cr... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx a lot dear.......i'll shortly update it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
We are waiting dear.... Jaldi update karo plsssssss
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi guys.....i'm extremely sorry i was not able to update my ff since a very long time.....i know i had told to update it a long time back but i couldn't......so plzz forgive me and keep enjoying the ff further.....here is the next update......and as usual plzz read n comment......critisisms are always welcomed!!....
Recap: uday n gunjan tell nupur bout the picnic....n mayank's quick escape....mayank hanging frm the window!!
Part-14
nupur saw mayank hanging down frm the window!!!
she was first surprised to see mayank like that, then she felt relieved that gunjan might not have seen him, then she suddenly felt afraid n started shouting-
N: mayank tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?? tumhe chot lag jayegi.....plzz upar aaaoo....
M: to tumhe kya lagta hai main yahan pe jhula jhul raha hoon??......haath do mujhe...
nupur extends her hand to pull mayank up...after a lot of troubles n tries....finally nupur succeeded in pulling mayank up and with a jerk both of them banged upon the wall behind -1st nupur then mayank after her!!!.....mayank's chest out of impulse pressed against her chest and lips almost touched....mayank extended out his hand to support himself preventing himself from going further ahead into nupur!!
both out of breath, were breathing deeply esp. nupur after doing the tedious job of pulling mayank up!!
mayank was looking into her eyes lovingly when she pushed him away and went outside into the room!!...mayank following her!!
M: kya hua nupur?
N: kya zaroorat thi tumhe yahan iss waqt aane ki??? agar abhi koi dekh leta to kal tak poore morena mein ye baat phail jaati.....
M: dekh leta to na...dekha to nahi na??
N: acchha to abhi bula deti hoon sabko...aao dekh....
suddenly mayank placed his finger on her lips and said-
M: ssshhhhhh....kitna bolti ho!!!......mere paas ek acchha plan hai.....
N: plan??kaisa plan??
M: kal sab log picnic jaa rahe hain na??
N: haan to....hum bhi jaa rahe hain!!!
M: nahi! hum nahi jaa rahe!!
N: kya??? p.p..par kyun??
M: sabko picnic pe jaane do.....hum kahin aur chalte hain...akele...ek saath....
N: par hum kahenge kya sabse???hume koi nahi jaane dega!!!
M: tum chinta kyun karti ho??
N: par tum karoge kya??
M: kuch bahana maaroonga!!
N: kabhi nahi chalega!!
M: tum mujh pe shak kar rahi ho??
nupur makes her nautanki face and says-
N: hhhmmm......haan....abhi to thoda thoda shak ho raha hai!!!
mayank gives her a "acchha bacchhu" look!!
M: theek hai to phir kal dekhna!!
N: hhhmmm!!
they exchange a small peck and a gud nyt and mayank goes back to his room!!
Next Morning:
everybody get ready and have their breakfast!!
they collect in the compound to decide how to go!!
U- main ek min mein aaya..
he went inside....
ND-apni jeepsy mein sab log nahi aa payenge!!
NCD- to kya karein bhaisahab??
suddenly there was a "tring-tring" and everybody turned around to see uday coming with a cycle!!
U- mujhe aangan se ye cycle mili.....hum iss pe jayenge!!!!!
N- uday bhaiya hum is jeepsy mein nahi aa rahe hain....aur aapko lagta hai ki hum sab is cycle mein aa jayenge!!!!!
U- maine kab kaha ki hum sab ek hi cycle pe jaayenge??
NCD- haan beta pehli baar isne koi dhang ki baat ki hai!!
ND- haan chalo hum sab cycles pe chalte hain!...humaare paas 4 cycle hai....aur hum log 8....sab aa jayenge.....
NM- aur isi bahane excercise bhi ho jayegi!!
M(to himself)- ye to aur bhi acchha hai!!
G& N- haan...bohot maza aayega!!....bohot din ho gaye cycle chalaye!!
U- gunjan behana, cycle main chalaoonga...tum peeche baithna....
G- nahi main chalaoongi......ye meri cycle hai!!!
NM- acchha tum dono chala lena baari baari se......bacchhon ki tarah lad rahe ho bilkul....
G&U- ok!!
everybody got ready.....got the cycles ready.....and paired up....
ND & NM on 1 cycle, NCD & NCM on another, G & U on another n M & N on the last one!!
all were set to go when suddenly mayank's cell buzzed!!
M: sorry!!....and went to recieve the phone!!
few mins later he came back and said.....
M: mere boss ka phone tha...unhone ne mujhe kuch zaroori documents abhi mail karne ko bola hai.....aap log aage badh jaayiye...main aur nupur thodi der mein aa jayenge!!
mayank looked at nupur who was smiling while hiding her face frm others....
ND - aise kaise beta.....hum tum logon ko chod ke akele kaise jaa sakte hain?? aap apna kaam kar lijiye hum tab tak wait kar lete hain!!
mayank did not seem to like his answer and looked at nupur again....
this time nupur gave him a sly smile.....
but mayank went on to convince....
M- nahi nahi!! meri wajah se aap log apna programme kyun kharaab kar rahe hain??
ND- arre nahi nahi...ismein programme kharab karne ki baat kahan se aa gayi??hum wait karenge....
mayank helplessly went inside.....
after sometime-
N: mayank abhi tak aaya kyun nahi?? main dekh ke aati hoon!!
she also went inside into his room!!
M: kitani der laga di.....itani der se intezaar kar raha tha....
N: turant kaise aati???......haan to MR. INTELLIGENT......ab kya karenge aap??....apka super duper hit plan to flop ho gaya!!!!
M: pata hai mujhe....aise bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!
nupur was giggling...
M: ab hansana band karo aur batao kya karein!!
N: kya karein kya....ab romance bhool jaao....aur chup chap chalo....
she said pulling him outside, by his hands......mayank making faces went ouside...
ND: kaam ho gaya beta??
M: ji ho gaya!!
ND: chalo ab sab log chalte hain......picnic cum morena site-seeing par!!!
they start their journey......nupur sitting on the front rod and mayank surrouning her by his hands( like shahid-kareena cycle ride in the song "hum jo chalne lage")....
they stop at a bridge......on one side there was a waterfall and a lake/stream formed by it on both the sides......
a small staircase led the way dowm to the lake/stream......
everybody went down to the stream except mayank.....he said he doesn't like to get wet like this.....so he stayed back.....
after sometime everybody came back n were ready to proceed......
all mounted up their cycles.....when uday shouted...
U: arrey mayank tumhari cycle to puncture ho gayi hai!! tum chala kaise rahe ho??
M( surprisingly): arrey!! ye kaise hui?? kab hui?? tabhi mujhe itana zor lagana pad raha tha!!!!
ND: yahan to kahin aas paas mechanic bhi nahi milega!!!
U: yahan se thoda door ek mechanic hai.....
NCD: acchha to chalo chalte hain!!
M: arrey aap log aa ke kya karenge?? aap log picnic spot par pohonchiye hum log aa jayenge!!
U: haan hum log aa jayenge....
Mayank listening to uday makes a face and looks at nupur who is trying to control her laughter!!!.....
ND: acchha theek hai....jaldi aa jana....
N: haan haan aap chinta mat kariye!!
gunjan n uday stayed back with mayur and the rest of them continued!!
all 4 of them walked to the mechanic...
M: ab tum log jaao....hum puncture banwa ke aate hain....
U: arrey theek hai na....saath mein chalte hain...zyada time nahi lagega!!
mayank widens his eyes.....and looks at uday!!
U: h h hum kyun apna time waste karein....hum jaate hain na.....c c chalo gunjan....
G: arrey par...
U: gunjan chalo isse pehle mayank ka dimaag gusse se phat jaaye...chalo yahan se....
before gunjan could say anything uday pulled her away and they went off!!
nupur was getting amused by mayank's expressions!!!
N: waah!! manana padega aapko.....
M: thank u thank u!!
by the time cycle was ok.....
they mounted the cycle and went to the same waterfall!!
they took the cycle down the staircase and rested it there!!
mayank took nupur's hand in his hand and pulled her into the stream....
nupur was soo happy that mayank went into the water only for her!!!
they both splashed water onto each other.....nupur ran here and there.....mayank tried to catch her......
she ran under the water fall.....thinking mayank would never come under it.....
he stood there looking at nupur jumping in the fall.....playing with the water.....enjoying the water falling on her.....splashing some of it on him from time to time.....mayank just stood there admiring his angel!!
then slowly he entered the waterfall......nupur was turning round n round....when she saw mayank coming in.....she stopped at a distance frm him....
but mayank went closer to her.....held her by the hand and pulled her to himself.....
she came bang on his chest.....he held her tightly by her waist......nupur also put her arms around his neck......
he came closer to her ......water was falling with gr8 speed....and was irritating their eyes.....so they both closed their eyes.....mayank came more closer to her face and kissed gently on her cheeks.......chills went down both of their spines......then kissed slowly on her neck....nupur was getting butterflies in her stomach.....then he kissed the bare part of her shoulder.....came back to the other cheek......then to the corner of her lips.......was about to capture her lips when nupur pushed him back and turned to run away......but mayank held her by her wrist......and pulled her back to himself........their lips brushed.......
nupur parted her lips and within no time mayank captured her lips into his own lips.......eating it away......he kissed her passionately.......nupur also responded in the same way n their kiss deepened......they kissed each other with extreme passion for almost 5 minutes......then broke apart to breathe under the water!!!!!
then nupur ran away under a tree with mayank following her.......
she took the support of the tree and stood there.....mayank looked at her with deep love.....she was blushing so hard that her cheeks had gone red....she did not see towards him but looked away smiling to herself!!!
mayank held her by the chin and slowly turned her face towards him....but she continued to look down...did not dare to meet his eyes!!.....
M: nupur!!
nupur slowly looked towards him......
he leaned towards her supporting himself with his hands on the tree trunk.....
they both looked into each other's eyes....
M: nupur tumhare gaal ek dum laal ho gaye hain!!...tum blush kyun kar rahi ho??
N(stammeringly): m m main k..k..kahan blush kar rahi hoon!!
M: acchha nahi kar rahi?
N: nahi!
mayank leaned forward and kissed her again on the cheeks!
M: abb?
N: nahi!
he again leaned forward to kiss her on the lips but nupur bent down and ran away and mayank kissed the tree trunk out of impulse!!!
he then turned back and ran after her!!.........caught her and tickled her in the stomach......she broke down laughing asking him to stop!!
they spent sometime like this waking hand in hand along the bank of the stream the on the other side of the waterfall........
nupur had started feeling cold.....
mayank's shirt being cotton had dries by this time....so he took off his shirt and wrapped it around her.....and decided to go back.....when they saw some fire at some distance.......!!!!!
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ok guys this was the update for today......since i did not update for so long so a long one for u all.......hope u like it........plzzzz do comment......ur comments really mean a lot to me!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh gosh i waited so much for you to update !!!
im so happy you came back..that too with a bang !!
great update
mayur under water fall..i could imagine them romancing so well !!

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