FF: TUM SE HE (updated see PG 29) - Page 4

Originally posted by: zainab.A

hahaah!! loved it!!!!!
loving this cute fight! lol!!!
continue soon!
thanx for the pm!

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

Yugoria Island😆

That was too cute...an island named after our dear hero. Now, what was interesting was that Yug didn't fall head over heels over Vrinda. They started off fighting. Is that a good sign?😳I really hope one of them doesn't throw the other off the boat on their long journey to the island.😉

Originally posted by: shab83

right guys, now for my proper coment.

you guys have done an amazing job. so a big 🤗 , for cheering me up, and well done👏.

You welcome😃! Your comment, well everyone's comments cheered me up so its a two way thing, so keep on commenting! 😃

im sorry i didnt coment properly b4, i was just too depressed, didnt have the strength to.

Totally understand!

any way, wot can i say, it was brilliant. first of all the c harachter sketches are fantastic. love the arents you have chosen for yuvi !! good choice.

secondly love the jumpstart into their lives, totally shows what kinda of personality they have from the get go, from the way they were getting ready in the morning. loved the underwear part. cant belive he put on a pair that wasnt even his. 😆

😆😆 I hoped it had that effect! 😳

i also love the type of charachters you have made them. in the show, yuvi are simpole and sappy, and yes that was nice, but here its great to see them in this different light. its not depressing.

vrinda seems so much more confident, and shes finally not the poor damzel in distress. kinda sick of the poor gal, rich boy track. yug seems like a player, albeit a very lazy player (he sure does A LOTT of sleeping doesnt he😆) so,

alsdo theres no love at first sight, wich is different so im thuroghly enjoying it !

😆😆 He needs to time to rest before he can play 😉 I was tired with Vrinda being all depressed and unhappy with her life, most love stories aren't that tragic!

and another thing i love is the lovely collages you have used. it makes it so much more easier to imagine the type of place scene where they are. its like watching an american telenovela on tv. it reminds me of an american program i use to watch called SUNSET BEACH on tv. ur FF has the same kind of feel to it. so plz do keep posting the scene collages too, they are fab 👍🏼

I love the collages as well! So Sana 👏👏

and omg, YUGORIA ISLAND. that was hillarios, how original, its wicked guys. love that !!!!!!!!!!! he must be spoilt, if theres an island with his name.

Again Sana with the name I love it as well 👏👏

and just wanted to say, i know youl be posting on a weekly basis, but i cant wait for the next update. its a whole week away. but plz do try to make them a bit longer, its like im just getting into iyt, and its already ended. ur updateds only feel like a paragraph. but no preasure. wotever you can manage is great. its better than nothing.

Sorry it will have to be a weekly basis at least in July as I am really busy and I think Sana is as well for some parts, but we will try and make them longer!

so great going guys, you did good, keep it up !!!!

Thank you, keep reading and giving us awesome comments! 😃

Originally posted by: Ani-

wow,I enjoyed the 2nd script,but the fight had me a little sad
I taught they both would get along a little cutie and sweet but its going good
thanks and will b waiting soon!
and the YUGORIA ISLAND was the best part.wow what a name u came out with
very sweet
keep going!!!👏
and here's this for u both🤗🤗

Originally posted by: urmee

thanx thanx thanx u guys lighten up my mood.keep running this.😃

Originally posted by: Manayuv

YUGORIA ISLAND!

🤣

haha lovee everyoness attitudee in thiss scenee! noww i wonderr who's boat thiss iss!!

awesomee stuff girlss! what moree can i sayy? it kept mee intriguedd soo thatss a complimentt in itself!!😛

Vrindaa iss soo fun lovingg thatss what i most likeddd in urr scene because on thee showw shee alwayss seemss soo simpleee!

Greatt stuff guyss! pleaseee updatee soon!!!

Originally posted by: SweRav

lovely update and I have to say Yugoria Island and the yuvi mini argument were the best.
thanks and i am looking forward to the next update!

Originally posted by: sadaf.12

Guys... it was too short... oh well...

OMG luved the cute lil fite!!!! aww i bet yug is lukin hott in whatever he is wearing!!! cant wait til the next part... plz do update soon... weekly is tooo long!!!

Originally posted by: isranawaz

a very nice part though... shab r u also reading get going... and good work...