FF: TUM SE HE (updated see PG 29) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks, Neetu Binky, Anjali and Priyanka for your comments, we will start posting soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks to everyone!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hie guys... sorrii i didn't post earlier... wait... i have a feeling i have alreay posted in this topic! well... if i have or not... i'll post again!!! =)
guys guys... i cant wait til the first part... i bet it will be amazing!!!! cant wait --*jumps around*--
OMG lups the character sketches!!! guess which character is my favourite????
wel... my fav character is...
--* DRUM ROLL *--
YUG!!!!! (i bet that was too easy for u guys to guess)
okay i need to stop talking... other wise im gonna get carried away and proberbly write a post longer that ur FF!!!! 🤣🤣🤣
bie bie.xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy!!!!!!!
i just love the character sketch!!!!!!!
plz plz PM me when u start!!!!
i m waiting eagerly!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Sadaf and zainab.A for your comments

Hope you enjoy the first part
Zainab.A are you a new memeber to the forum never seen you around before?
Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SCRIPT 1:

welcome Girls to our First Script!!! Its our first try so please be patient and give us any remarks you want to!!! would love to hear from you all.... Niki and I will be writing this together so its a joint effort. Enjoy and will be back with more Tommorrow
love Niki and Sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Script 1: Wakeup Call

"A one, two, a one, two, three, a one, two, three, four, five, a one, two"😆

A hand crawls through the sheets, switches of the alarm, and falls asleep again.

Twenty minutes later the same person jumps out of bed and panics! I AM LATE......NOOOOOOOOOOO! Inhale... exhale... inhale... exhale

Same time in London
you see:

A girl has just woken up and is taking her time to get ready, with a warm shower. She brushes her long black hair; she puts a thin layer of eye liner, and a dash of lip gloss, wearing a white skirt and a pink top. She is ready for her trip to Rishabh uncle's and Suhana aunt's house.

'Morning mom, morning dad'
'Morning beta, have a good night's sleep?' asked her father Kushal
'Yes dad'
'Ok, well me and your mum can't take you to the airport later on today. So the driver will drop you off just remember to give us a call before you take off and when you land. I have spoken to Rishabh and all the arrangements to pick you up have been sorted.'
'Why can't you and mum come and drop me off?'
'Cause, of your father and his silly meetings.'

Vrinda takes an apple and is about to leave the table
'Vrinda, sit back down and have a proper breakfast shouted Radhika, Vrindas mom, you know it's the most important meal of the day.'
'but mum' I am going out to meet my friends before I leave. I will eat with them plus I have taken an apple.'
'No you have to eat'
'Dad'
'Radhika she has said she will eat right, Vrinda go beta.'
'Thanks dad'
Vrinda smiles and leaves.

Back in the
USA:

'OH NO S***! I only have five minutes to get ready and go. Why do I do this to my self? Why Yug? Why? Please God- My Guru HELP me!'

Yug runs around his penthouse in New York. Grabs, the first pair of underwear he finds, which aren't his! S*** come on, finally he finds a clean pair of underwear, a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. He washes his face and rushes out of the house with his suitcase, which luckily was packed to find a taxi. He needs to get to the airport ASAP! He whistles loudly and gets in to the taxi.

Cab Driver: Where would you like to go sir?

Yug: Take me to the JFK airport also can you please hurry I am late and I can't miss this flight. My commander will kill me.

Cab driver: All confused by his talk, okay sir I will try

In London:

Vrinda also leaves to go to the airport.
'Madam, you ready to go?'
'Yes Fred, lets go!'

Vrinda makes a phone call to her parents but it goes straight to their voicemail. She leaves a message, "hello parents! I am on my way to the airport will talk to you when I get to Rishabh uncles house"." Love you dad and mum. Oh and please don't cry when you come back home to not see me there"

Back in the USA:

Yug runs to catch his flight and takes a seat in the airplane. Oh man what a close call it was! The best part of the flight is to sleep. He turns right to the passenger sitting next to him." Excuse me sir! When this plane arrives to India, can you please wake me up?" The passenger smiles and says okay sure.

Enjoy! 😳

Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahaa!! tht was soo sweet!!!
loved it!!!
underwear line was funny! ahahahha!!!
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow first of all thanks sana hun for letting me know about this FF.
next,the characters are well especially my fav 1 (from KS)
and what a start , it was fabulous hun👏
very well ,keep it up👏👏
and good luck to both of u and will keep loooking and waiitng for more
thnx huns
love u guyz😛

this is for u🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it. great going guys !!
will try and coment more later.

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