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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

fabulous part soni...

loved it a lot.. great part...

continue soon friends..

the update was rocking

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

nice parts soniya liked them

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

okie..guys.. since no one is commenting or continueing... im closing this ff... i dont even know if u guys r gonna read this comment or not but i m closing this ff...

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bueaty

@bueaty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

no plz.. Dnt clos ths..
Sm1 plz cntinu..

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Swaminathan

@swamii92

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: jennykaran
okie..guys.. since no one is commenting or continueing... im closing this ff... i dont even know if u guys r gonna read this comment or not but i m closing this ff...

DON DO THIS THIS FAN FIC IS ROCKING SO PLS DON CLOSE THIS

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

hey dear,

please dont close this. i love this a lot.

i will try to continue if i find time. right now, i have my assignments and works going on. so, please dont close it.

luv

deepu :)

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Nina

@-Nina-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

PLZZ CONTINU SOOONN yaar soni i loove your post sooo muuch you are the BEST plzzz

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#98

dear soniya 😊
main ek part likh deti lekin mujhe muh dikhai ki rasam ke baare mein bilkul nahi maloom isliye 😕
SORRY!!! i cant continue now 😭😭
yeh ek part tum likhdo phir sab pehle jaise continue karne lagenge.😃
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Sangya Shrestha (Prefer to go by Soniya or Soni)

@kajenlover4ever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Sambhenwal
dear soniya 😊
main ek part likh deti lekin mujhe muh dikhai ki rasam ke baare mein bilkul nahi maloom isliye 😕
SORRY!!! i cant continue now 😭😭
yeh ek part tum likhdo phir sab pehle jaise continue karne lagenge.😃
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

its ok.. actually u can skip the muh dikhai rasam.. anyways.. it seems too traditional and all so.. jus write what ever comes to ur mind oke??

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#100

hey guys this fist time i am writing on this ff .SONIYA hope specially you like it.😊

recap:Annie just nods her head but she knows whats going on because while Armaan kicked Riddhima's leg, it hit hers a little as well. Armaan continues to hit Riddhima's leg and in response she moves a little away from the table. The third time Armaan hit Riddhima's leg, it wasn't Riddhima who reacted but it was Annie.

Annie: Armaan! Bas ho gaya! Kitna tang karoge bechari ko?

Billy, who was unaware of anything that was going on here says: Kya hua? Kya kar raha hain Armaan?

Annie: Arre, main bata ti hoon. Kabse Armaan Riddhima ka pair kick kar raha hai! (now talking to Armaan) Tu Riddhima ko kick karte karte mujhe bhi kick kar raha tha!

Riddhima and Armaan are bright red! Both are looking down. Armaan looked up and saw Riddhima really embarrased and smiled' (thinking: jab ye aisi laal laal hoti hai to kitni khoobsurat dikhti hai! Haye! Main to mar jawa!) Riddhima can feel Armaan staring at her as she got more and more red. She finally decided to look up and saw Armaan staring at her lovingly with a cute smile on his face. Riddhima was drowing in Armaan's eyes and couldn't help staring back. They had a cute eye lock session which was eventually broken by the bell on the door.
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Two days later
AR's bedroom
ar:basket kya hua ab kahan ja rahi ho.😭
ri:arre bab abhi aayi kaam hai.😊

after sometime she comes back.armaan is very sad sitting on the bed
ri:arre armaan kya hua itne udas kyun ho.😕
ar:(dramatically)udas nahi hoon toh aur kya hoon.😭
ri:ab drama band karo aur batao kya hua.koi problem,kuch hua kya?😡
ar:yehi toh problem hai ke kuch nahi hua hai.😭
ri:matlab.😲
ar:matlab ke aaj humari shaadi hue 3 din hogaye hain aur mujhe tumse shanti se baat bhi karne ko nahi mil raha.😭
ri:oh ...toh armaan ko yeh problem hai.😆
ar:aur nahi toh kya parso (day before yesterday)se kitne log ghar par aaye ja rahe hain tumhe dekhne mujhe koi time hi nahi deta hai tumhe dekhne.😭
ri:ooo...(pulling his cheeks)armaan ur chooo sweet.ab nayi nayi shaadi hui hai toh sab aayegi hi na dekhne.😆
😆😆😆ar:par aise thode hi chalta newly weds ko toh jyada tar akele time spend karne dena cahiye hai kyun 😉(winking at her)aur main bhi kitna pagal hoon mom-billy niche jhagada kar rahe hain aur koi aaj atleast tumhe dekhne ko aane wala nahi hai to romance karne ke bajaye main timepass kar raha hoon.😉😉
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downstairs IN HALL
annie:billy dekho mujhe irritate mat karo ek toh bechari riddhima abhi abhi upar gayi hai.😡
billy:haan toh kya hua main usse thode hi pareshan kar raha hoon main toh tumse lad raha hoon😃😆😆
😆annie:toh tum mujhe force kyun kar rahe ho unhe bulane ko😡
billy:maine kahan force kiya😡
annie:unh...dekho tum mujhe tang karoge toh main tumhe maarongi,main tumhe maarongi toh tum chilane lagoge,aur tum chilane lagoge toh un dono ko niche aana padega na fight rokne .😡
billy:haan toh😕
annie:toh armaan ko romance karne mein kitna disturb hoga u idiot.😡
billy:ohh...eh kya kaha tumne mujhe idiot kaha.😡
annie:haan haan haan.😡😆😆
😆they are about to start fighting when the whole intern ganag comes there.
ra:arre billy uncle aap dono lad rahe hai.😲
mu:nahi khote kabadi kar rahe hai,dekhai nahi deta ladne waale hain.😡😆😆
😆😡they stop them from fighting and ask about AR.annie and billy say they are up in their room.
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AR's bedroom
ridz got to know what he was going to do.😳
ri:uh...armaan mujhe niche jaana hai plllz😳
ar:na ...naah basket itne mushkil se tum free hui ho aur ab niche jaane ki baat kar rahi ho.😉
riddhima losses himself as she knew armaan is not going to listen her
armaan was about to kiss her when they hear a knock on the door.😡
ar:uff ..(shouts)kaun hai?😡
whole gang:hey guys hum log hain darwaaja kholo😃😃
😃ar:uff...yeh humare dost in sabko mujhse kya problem hai shaadi se pehle romance karne nahi dete the samajhmein aata hai lekin ab shaadi ke baad bhi romance karne nahi dete.😡😡
😡ri:😆
😆and opens the door.
GUYS THATS IT abhi aap sab continue karo and pllz do comment/criticize on this part.

LOVE
SAMMY.

Edited by Sambhenwal - 16 years ago

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