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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: lovejuhi91

AARRGGHH..!!🤢🤢

First of alll...super frustrated..!! that was soo small!! not enuff tu satisfy our big appetites for ur super story..!!! 😆
Secondly...I want want want AR..!!! But still..RM roked..!!
Keep it goin!!
I still think Sapna is his SISTER..for sure...
Btww...Ur update was still amazing, No matter how small , i know how difficult it is to write anything..
So thanx a lot for it..!!
Waitingg now..U know for what!! =D =D
Tc
Lotsa Luv
Juhi
P.S. I dint gett a PM..!! 😭
Try and send one..!! 😃
Alsooo...sorry for being soo super-demanding..!! But m in Luv wid ur FF..!! Need a Daily proper Fix..!! :D:D

hey juhi dear!!!!!!!!!!
i am sorry........... i really am... promise to update longer parts... i mean more longer parts 😆😆
thank u so much dear........
sister hmmm??? hold that thought......
thank u so much juhi.... yes, it is a bit difficult but what the heck as long as i get to read such lovely comments...........
yes, i know... i'll surely try my best to fulfill ur appetite........
i'll try to send u a PM.........
take care
love rabu
juhi: Alsooo...sorry for being soo super-demanding..!! But m in Luv wid ur FF..!! Need a Daily proper Fix..!! :D:D 😆😆 THANK U (thats all that i can say.. love ya dear)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: shristi sarda

hey,congrats on the 2nd thread......
gr8 update..........
cont. soon...................

hey shristi!!!!!!!!!!
thank u so much dear........
take care
love rabu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
hey, congrats 4 da 2nd thread
gr8 part
armaan will be armaan- flirty
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: KSG4lyf

hey, congrats 4 da 2nd thread

gr8 part
armaan will be armaan- flirty
continue soon

hey!!!!!!!!!
thank u dear!!!!!!!!!
take care
love rabu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Part 40

Sanjeevani caf

Atul: I am already missing rahul… (looking at his coffee mug)

Anji: yeah, me too… wait a sec, why aren't we at the airport?

Atul: yeah… (looking up suddenly)

Ridz: because di, rahul will be leaving in 2 hours & we have work here

Muskaan: why 2 hours? He just left (hearing bits of the convo)

Ridz: he has gone to the hotel to meet sapna… they both will be leaving together…

Muskaan: oh ok… right…

Atul: I know what we should do now… we should go to the airport… (suddenly all woken-up)

Anji: yeah, sounds fun… lets surprise him… he must already be feeling low

Muskaan: low??

Ridz: don't you know? He is going coz his dad is ill…

Muskaan: what? (shocked)

Airport

The gang together: SURPRISE!!!!!!

Rahul: hey guys!!! You all here? Hi!!! (suprised but very happy)

Atul: I was missing you rahul so thought of suprising you… (hugging him)

Rahul: that's great… guys this is sapna… sapna this is atul, anji his fianc, riddhima…

Armaan: Sap she is the lucky one, my fianc (putting his arm around her)

Sapna: oh, right… nice to meet you riddhima (hugging her)

Ridz: nice to meet you too…

Rahul: & she is mus… muskaan… & muskaan she is…

Muskaan: sapna, hi… we already met in the hospital…

Rahul: yeah we did...

Sapna: yes, what a meeting… I know… hi… thanx once again for your help…

Muskaan: its ok…

The whole gang except rahul & muskaan are standing together & talking…

Muskaan: rahul, I… I wanted to talk to you… (looking down)

Rahul: yeah, tell me

Muskaan: umm, I… I just heard that your dad is unwell…

Rahul: yeah, that's why sapna came down…

Muskaan: oh… I am sorry, I should have heard you out… its just that I was not in the condition to… to talk to you… (trying to hold back her tears) I was… a bit hurt that you… you were leaving… &

Rahul: muskaan? (making her look at him)

Muskaan: I dunno what this accounts to rahul… but… but I think… I…

Rahul: I love you… (completing her sentence for her)

Muskaan's head shots up quickly

Rahul: that's what I wanted to tell you & that's why I had come to the fire-escape… to tell you that… that I love you too…

Muskaan: but how did you?

Rahul: muskaan? I have always liked you, since… since the first time I saw you in…

Sapna: rahul? I guess we should leave… (interrupting their talks)

Rahul: yeah, just a bit… muskaan? I'll talk to you when I come back…

Muskaan: I… I thought you & sapna…

Rahul: what? (laughing) really? (controlling his laughter) muskaan? Sapna is my sister…

Muskaan: sister?? (embarresed, confused all at the same time)

Rahul: yes, come here… guys… I am sorry, i didnt introduce sapna properly if anyone of you doesn't know then this is Sapna… Sapna Rai my elder sister from Canada happily married to Amit Rai

Atul: oh… nice to meet you sapna… (holding out his hand)

Sapna gives a confused smile while shaking atul's hand…

Rahul: sapna? May I introduce you again to Dr. Muskaan Chaddha… my girlfriend…

AR: what? When? (together)

Rahul: (smiling) right now… right there (pointing to the place they were standing earlier)

Armaan hugs rahul & Ridz hugs muskaan, leaving everyone confused

Atul: can someone please explain to us illiterates whats going on? (pointing to himself, anji & sapna)

Armaan: champ, its simple rahul & muskaan love each other & they have confessed it…

Rahul: uh-huh, (nodding in a no) its only me who has confessed for both of us… muskaan has still not completed it…

Muskaan: I am not going to till you come back…

The gang starts hooting…

Rahul: don't do this to me please… (pleading her)

Muskaan: you come back then we'll see… (with one brow up)

The gang now laugh heartily on rahul's condition…

Sapna: ok, now can we go? Otherwise we'll miss our flight

Rahul: ok, bye guys… will miss you all too

Atul: too matlab?

Armaan: champ ab samajh… rahul sabse jyada muskaan ko miss karega phir time milega toh hume bhi miss kar lega, right? (smiling devilishly)

Rahul: bro?

Armaan: tune mere expense pe bahot maaze kiye hai mere bhai, ab meri baari hai, saari kasar nikalunga main, jitna tune mujhe riddhima ka naam le lekar taang kiya hai utna hi main karunga…

Rahul: (hugging him seriously) willl miss you, take care

Armaan: (becoming a bit serious) me too, tubhi apna khayal rakhna & call me as soon as you meet uncle…

Rahul: sure…

Rahul meets the whole gang & the gang proceeds forward leaving rahul & muskaan alone

Rahul: bye…

Muskaan: bye…

Rahul: abhi bhi nahi kahogi? (holding her hand)

Muskaan: uh-huh… I want to give you a reason to come back soon… I hope this one is enough… (looking at him with eyes full of love)

Rahul: enough? Its huge… I'll miss you… (hugging her & kissing her forehead) take care of yourself & I love you…

Muskaan: yes I will… you also take care of yourself… bye… & I'll miss you too…

Rahul smiles & leaves…

Armaan: chalo guys…

Ridz: muskaan are you ok?

Muskaan: yup…

Atul: guys… I & anjali have got some shopping to do we'll leave…

Armaan: sure, bye… enjoy

Ridz & muskaan : enjoy guys…

Armaan: chalo ladies… aapka driver tayyar hai…

Ridz: oh… nice… driver hum dono ko bahot bhuk lag rahi hai… koi ache restraunt main chalo…

Armaan: yes ma'am… oh by the way aapki coffee baaki hai Dr. gupta

Ridz: thanx for reminding me Dr mallik… I almost forgot…

Muskaan smiling at both of them : ok… guyss… you both carry on… I'll just go home…

Armaan: come on muskaan… chal na tp karenge…

Muskaan: no seriously guyss… you both go… I'll be fine…

Armaan: chal we'll drop you…

Outside muskaan' house

Ridz: bye muskaan…

Armaan: bye bhabhi… (grinning)

Muskaan blushed at the word 'bhabhi'

Armaan: wah wah… rahul hota toh aur maaza aata… (grinning)

Muskaan: bye… enjoy…

In the car

Armaan: riddhima? Kya hua? (probing her)

Ridz: armaan? Ab rahul yaha nahi hai so its better that we don't keep reminding her about him… (sadly)

Armaan: arre remind nahi karaenge toh kabhi bhul jayegi muskaan… (jokingly)

Ridz: I am serious armaan… (strictly)

Armaan: ok fine… I am sorry… I am sure muskaan will be enjoying it… atleast I enjoyed it when I was in delhi…

Ridz: really? (smiling)

Armaan: absolutely… it always made me think about you, about us, about our future… (finishing it with a cute smile)

Ridz: armaan? Ek baat poochu? (cutely)

Armaan: anything baccha…

Ridz: you never told me… sorry… wrongly put… I never asked you why you agreed to us getting married after di…

Armaan: its simple baccha… she is elder to you… &…

Ridz: and? (cocking up her brow)

Armaan: and… you wanted it that way…

Ridz: (smiles) I love you armaan (lovingly)

Armaan: I know…

Ridz: armaan? (mock anger)

Armaan: I love you more… (smiling sweetl)

Ridz: I know… (smiling back)

Coffee shop

Armaan: 2 cappucino please… thank you…

Ridz: armaan? Aur batao na… delhi main kya kya yaad aata tha tumhe?

Armaan: umm, delhi main? Umm… tumhare haath ka khana…

Ridz: khana? (unbelievably)

Armaan: ha… after mom… you are the best cook in this world

Ridz blushes on this: thank you…

Ridz: aur?

Armaan: tum bahot yaad aati thi… (sipping his cappucino)

Ridz: (blushing) aur? (looking at him expectantly)

Armaan: umm…

Ridz: humare late night calls? (shaking her head with a frown)

Armaan: yeah, right… kitna mazaa aata tha na tabhi? (smiling)

Ridz: ha… (smiling)

Armaan: hum abhi bhi waise baat kyu nahi karte?

Ridz: kyuki hum roz milte hai… thoda time toh freedom mile ek dusre se…

Armaan: freedom? Sochlo Dr. riddhima gupta… ek baar shaadi ho jayegi toh tumhe akela main nahi chodne wala… you still have time… think it over… (saying it confidently)

Ridz: yeah I'll do that… thank you for keeping my options open… (she is trying to irritate him)

Armaan: riddhima? Tum kabse mujhe itne seriously lene lag gaye… baccha main toh maazak kar raha tha… (tensed)

Ridz starts laughing loudly…

Armaan has a confused expession on his face…

Ridz: (controlling her laugh) I am sorry armaan… I am so sorry… baby… tumhara face… oh god… hmmm… armaan? I love you… you know that right?

Armaan nods

Ridz: then how can I think of not getting married to the person almost close to my dream guy??

Armaan: ohh… your dream guy?

Ridz: yeah, you are quite close…

Armaan: nice… well miss gupta how is your dream guy like?

Ridz: umm… he is sweet, cute, superbly handsome, has dimples, is a Dr. & has a great sense of style…

Armaan: wow… nice… but… I think I am not close but I acctually AM your dream guy…

Ridz: no… I am sure of it… you are just close bcoz… y dream guy is 6 ft tall… (smiling at his face)

Armaan: oh… well I am… 5ft 9…

Ridz: right…

Armaan: its ok… no one is perfect… wait a minute… are you getting married to me bcoz I am quite like your dream guy?

Ridz: umm… yes… I mean no… I … I dunno armaan… never really thought about it… i… I liked you the way your are & that's that…

Armaan smiles at her cute face trying to string the right words…

Ridz: what? Now you tell me about your dream girl…

Armaan: I never dreamed of a dream girl…

Ridz: really?? Boys toh jyada sochte hai apne wifes, gf's etc ke baare main…

Armaan: well yeah they do… but I don't think they must be so serious…

Ridz: whatever bolo na… I want to hear…

Armaan: umm, I wanted a girl who would respect my parents & love them the way I do… umm… looks descent… not overly fashionable… has a sweet smile & who has the ability to take care of me, handle me when I am in stress, cradle me when I have any fears… talk to me about anything & everything… love me most importantly… & at times jhelofy me… (laughing) umm, yeah most importantly… smile even when she doesn't like a person… because I have a really hard time doing that… I just cant make myself fake a smile or a conversation with the person I don't like… I guess that's it…

Ridz: woah… that was one long list…

Armaan nods in a yes…

Ridz: so how many thoughts of yours have I filled?

Armaan: umm, I guess all…

Ridz: you think so?

Armaan: I can answer this question well after we start staying together…

Ridz: ok… I'll be waiting for the answer…

Armaan: sure…

Ridz: armaan? That faking smile thing?? (confused)

Armaan: oh yeah… you know… I had this habit of locking myself in the bathroom… jab koi aise log ghar pe aate the jo mujhe pasand nahi hai toh I used to just say hi & lock myself in the loo or bathroom…

Ridz: what?

Armaan: yes, I used to do that & not come out till they used to leave… I used to find it very difficult to talk to such people…

Ridz: & now? You still do that?
armaan: no, not really… acctually I used to do this till I was in college then I got busy with my internship & everything… so I hardly used to be at home…

Ridz laughs : you are unbelieveable armaan…

Armaan smiles at her…

Ridz: chalo lets go…

Armaan: lets take a walk on the beach, shall we?

Ridz looking at the watch : 5 mins

Armaan & ridz hold hands & walk in silence as the sun went down…
hello guys!!!!
well thats a loooooooong update
i dunno if u'll like AR in this part 😕coz i found it to be a bit stupid but well it was long due so..... this was all that i could think & write... hope no one went to sleep while reading this😆
lemme know...
i hope i have fulfilled all ur expectations..........
comment , criticise or both
PMz will be sent later i am sorry............
take care
love rabu
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66

hai dear😊

nice part😊so finally u cleared Sapna as Rahul's sister😊continue soooooooon😍
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

so sorry for the double post . .

Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
heyyy dear,
it was nice part
AR part was cute
continue sooon


love
Riddss
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
nice part..
loved it n thanks a lot for d pm
continue soon
luv
deepu :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Wow lovely update.. Rahul confessing was nice.. Armi pulling his leg was fun.. enjoyed AR convo.. esp abt the dream guy n gal.... Armaan hiding in the bathroom to avoid speaking to people.. man thts really hilarious.. plzz continue soon..

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