Rahul-Muskaan/Atul-Anjali FF: Rishta IMP NOTE PG30 - Page 22

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Komz!!! lol i am going to comment now cus I feel bad and I should comment actually!! loved the update!! It was shoooo cute!! I love the gym flashback lol and especially the dialouges...raining punjabi insults were the best....and awww Atul is such a sweet heart...love him!

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Awsome! Awesome! Awesome part! ...just enjoyed reading AA KK and RM in "Rishta" after so long

Atul-Kunal scene was soo nice ,specially loved it when kunal said tat Muskaan decision did matter to him .

aww atul is super cute yaar and caring and both the RM scene were so much fun to read ...lovely FBs ..

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OMG , kunal kisses her good night was like ....was like.........ohhhhhhhh i just loved tat part read tat bit so many times hehe...so now she realized tat she is in love with kunal ☺️

The ICU part was very beautifully written ....perfect descriptions given for muskaan's and Kushi's feelings

this bit was soo touching

Khushi- (smiles with tears in her eyes) Mainnu pata si tussi khush hojaaoge. Lekin main aapse bohot naraaz hoon. Abhi main kisi ko bulaoongi aur boloongi ki aapne mera haath squeeze kiya toh tab tak aap chod doge. Kisi ke saamne kyun nahi karte ho Mummy? Bas bohot hogaya. (childish pout) Uttho naa. (smiles)

Fab update!

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Hey Saba! Thank you so much. Yeah I know how you feel... I wasn't expecting so many comments so soon. I came on here and thought that no one would have read it because I hadn't updated in so long. LOL. I'm so relieved with the response to this part and again thanks a lot for the lovely comments!

love ya!

Originally posted by: arvanu

Awwwww.......Komal!!!!!!!!

It was fabulous,dear.....amazingly written!!!!

Kunal-Khushi's scenes were beautiful...I always imagine them as RM whenever I read their scenes.......but most of all I loved two scenes the most..first the converstion between Atul-Kunal and second was between Muskaan-Khushi...both were depicting perfect emotions!!

Btw,are u doing something related to medical stuff?? No,asking because I am myself a MBBS student and u mentioned synapses in this FF..so thought of asking!!

Anyway,outstanding writings!!

Continue soon and thanks aton for the PM!!!!

-surbhi😊

Hey Sur! Long time yaar! KK are built to be very much like RM but at the same time they have their own individuality. The 2 scenes that you mentioned were definitely the more difficult ones to write because when you write stuff like that, you really need to dig into the essence of the character. No matter, I thank you just the same.

To answer your question, yes, indeed I am studying med. I'm in my second year, which will be over in early May. Currently I'm off for winter break since Dec 17 until Jan 19.

You're welcome babe, and thank you again.

love u!

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Komal.......this was simply BEAUTIFUL!! Wow. Im over RM as I told you..but ur updates..do you ever think I can ignore them? They are so tempting and blah blah...lol.

Aww....Im in love with them al over again. The reason Atul gave Kunal was a bit surprising..coz I expected something more serious. But itna hi reason tha na..thats good. =]

The AA and RM flash-back. That was soooooooooooo chweeeeeet!!!!! More than RM I loved AA in the chapter. The caring Atul and 'sighing' Anjali is so cute. How hes so bothered and loving. Thats eternal.

RM....hayeee!! Lol. How she calls him the perfect man..and then says what if their child is like 'him'. Haha!! The same running embrace and kisses were too sweet:)

And the good night kiss :) ; Muskaan's thoughts..how KK are just like younger RM. I really wish YuNa were like that. No offence..i know they are RM replica..but I just cant tolerate them...RM were the best..and I know its tuff to re-create. Sorry i know ur a fan. Just my opinion.

Muskaan's memory...LOL. My sis is sleeping..and im covering my mouth and laughing. 😆

Rahul- (looks down real quick at his bare chest and holds the shirt up to him immediately) Toh tu' dekhna bandh kar! (taunts her) Tereko sharam nahi aati? Jawaan ladke ko ghoor ghoor ke dekhte hue. Woh bhi aise.
Muskaan- (rolls her eyes) Toh teri kaunsi izzat lut gayee. Lutne ke liye izzat honi bhi chahiye! Lekin tere iss (points to his bare upper body) exhibition ke baad, meri aankhein phat jaayengi!

This is raising more and more curiosity in me. Please open up the story soon. Atleast tell where Rahul is=]

I have one tini-winy doubt. Umm..like Kunal-Khushi are almost of the same age right? So Angie is pregnant..so when will Muskaan be pregnant? Im reading after long..and you must have mentioned the age difference b4..can you jus clear it?

Thanku=]=] Loveeeeee youuuuuuuu ❤️ 🤗

Hiya Manu! Yeah babe, I know you're over RM. We had this discussion right before I posted the part, but I'm kinda surprised to see a comment from you. I wasn't sure if you were still going to read it. LOL. Atul had the same reason in the last part when he said no to Kunal. I didn't want the issue to be so extreme. 😊

Awww! You liked AA better than RM? Bless! me too! But then again, AA are my eternals. 😉

YuviNa were supposed to be a replica of RM, but they're really not. I don't compare them to DMG1. They have their own individuality and I'm happy with that. I respect your views though. 😃

The mystery will be revealed soon enough, don't worry. lol. Just be patient.

To answer your question, in the first part, I didn't give ages but I gave age differences. Khushi and Mehak (AA's daughter) are the same age. 22. Kunal is 1 1/2 years older than both of them. and Sid, (AN's son) is almost 2 1/2 years older than everyone so he's already a resident doc. That's why, ANji is pregnant with Kunal, but since Khushi is younger, when Anji will be pregnant with Mehak, Muskaan will be pregnant with Khushi. Does that make sense now?

love ya!

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Awesome part!!

i hope muskaan wakes up soon....

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!!

Hey Radhika! thank you so much jaan.

love you!

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

omg i was thinking about this ff just yesterday!
im soo glad u updted!
i looooved this part!!!
the lil flashback of rm n aa r always nice
n im soo happy that muskaan is happy w/ kushi n kunal, now if only she'll give a sign of approval to aa!
anyways di, continue soon

Hey Mishu! Well then I must have read your thoughts. 😉 Awww! I'm sooo glad you liked it. I'll update soon and drop u a PM. thanks bachha!

love u lots!

Originally posted by: princessuma

Komz!!! lol i am going to comment now cus I feel bad and I should comment actually!! loved the update!! It was shoooo cute!! I love the gym flashback lol and especially the dialouges...raining punjabi insults were the best....and awww Atul is such a sweet heart...love him!

and Khushi Kunal rock!!!

Hey Sumi! FINALLY WOMAN! you never comment! I should I taunt you more often so you feel bad and comment. Glad to know you liked it so much! Atul is ALWAYS a sweetheart! who doesn't love him? 😛 Thanks for the (finally) comments. I feel special now. rofl!

love u my Sumo wrestler! 😆

@Komal...Ohh 2nd year!! So,I guess I need some tips then for getting thru this tiring life....

oh my god! i'm so sorry. I didn't PM you did I. so sorry and thank you for the comments!

Komal!!! It was amazing!!! This FF of urs is my personal favorite and i Kunal-Khushi are like my favorite fictional characters!! Love how u incorporate the flashbacks, sometimes through Khushi telling Kunal and then at other times through Muskaan's eyes!! Your organization is simply amazing!!! Atul-Anjali were just tooo cute in the flashback, just loved them!!

and then from the second flashback,i just loved this part!!!

" Sharam kar! Khotte! Itna bada hogaya hai, par abhi tak mere saamne aadha nanga khada hai! CHI! Shirt pehen!"
Rahul- (looks down real quick at his bare chest and holds the shirt up to him immediately) "Toh tu… dekhna bandh kar! (taunts her) Tereko sharam nahi aati? Jawaan ladke ko ghoor ghoor ke dekhte hue. Woh bhi aise."

Too good yaar, hilarious 🤣!!! love ur writing, and thanks so much for giving such a long and fulfilling part!!! Hope things are good with u now!!!

FATI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG i'm so glad to hear from you... finally! How was your birthday? enjoy kiya naa?

Thanks for the lovely comment babe! mwah!

Awesum di...u rjust sooooo unbeleivable..........It was a LATE UPDATE!!!!! Bt an AWESUm update...........loved every bit of it............