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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Nadz.. lovely part. enjoyed it.. do continue soon..



Hey dear😊

Thank you for reading and commenting🤗

Awww i'm just glad that u njoyed it😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: j44a

Wow dear... Awesome .. Wonderful part...

Totalli great ...
Oh Shabd likes Kirpa aka Mahi ...
RM are realli funny ...
Hope Ridzi gives Armaan another chance. ..
SO as per the promo AS will get engaged...
But it will be real sad foa Sam when she reads the sms later..
Hope all goes well..
N AK getz together soon...
Thx foa the loveli part.. n the pm..
Continue soon soon soon.. =)



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awww thanks for saying that and liking the part😳 everything will go well... but in the part after his one😳 u're alwasy welcome😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aarora

hey loved the update honey..amazing as always..continue soon..
thanks for PM..
love ya..



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Thank you for reading and commenting🤗

Awww just glad u liked it and Thanks for sayin that😳😳 U're always welcome😉 and Next part on its way😉

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Originally posted by: Muski_Aly

Hey Nadz! 😊Ur simply gr8 yaar. I read all the parts frm the beginning 2day. And i must say i enjoyed every bit of it.

All the couples are doing gr8 But dont mind im a bit biased to ❤️RM. ❤️What 2 do? They are my favourite frm the begining n wil alwayz remain so. I really love the way u have portrayed their characters in the story. Theyre just toooooooooo cute even when their at loggerheads😆. Also the awkwardness they feel when their too close is soooo😍 .
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful ff. Never read anythin like it b4. Cant wait for the next part. Pls do PM me as well.
Thanks again!!!!!!!



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Welcome to ~Tumse hi~~ Thank you for reading and commenting🤗

awww thanks for saying that😳 i'm glad u liked it😳 i love them too will try and put in more scenes of them in the part after since the next is mainly on the broken hearts😭 but there is RM 😳😃

aww thats such a sweet comment😳😳 thanks for saying that😊 will do😉

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hey awesum update
so shabd likes kripa...interestin...
cont soon...



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I'm glad u liked it😳😳 yup he does😳
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yyi6dx9hiYI[/YOUTUBE]

Recap: muskaan finds out that rahul told her parents that they are in love and they agreed, he told her that he wanted to hurt her and she feels bad' kripa is with sam and angad comes, he looks at her stunned and then tries to tell sam what he feels but fails, naina tells him not to do anything to hurt sam' armaan tries to talk with ridzi but she's too upset, muskaan consoles armaan and kripa consoles ridzi' rahul enters and troubles muskaan and calls her chipkali' kripa's childhood friends shabd comes and she hugs him making angad burn'

Ab aage

Part 14

Shabd goes to kripa and sam'

"Hey sam" shabd hugs her.

"hi shabd' kripa ne bataya' how we met ages ago" she smiles.

"well congrats' tumhe akhir tumhaara pyaar mil hi gaya" he says.

"Thanks waise tum kab propose kar rahe ho apni dream girl ko" she raises her eyebrows and he blushes, while kripa looks at him with questioning gaze.

"wo' uh' main"

"bolo bhi, waise net pe to saara din uski hi baat karte ho aur ab?" she teases and kripa still looks at him with that gaze making him nervous.

"hmmm shabd yeh kya keh rahi hai sam??? Mujhe bataya bhi nahi??? Hun? Kaun hai wo khush naseeb?" she asks with a smile while Sam-Kripa tease him a little he just blushes.

"will you guys stop now" he says cutely "bataaoonga, usse bhi aur tum dono ko bhi ke wo kaun hai' aaj engagement ke baad okay" he says and kripa looks surprised.

"so you mean wo yahan hai?" she asks excited "wow kaun hai batao na' please" she says and he just smiles.

"soon you'll know my love'" he tells her and she just looks at him'

"chalo ab naina, engagement ceremony shuru nahi karni?" ranjana asks [sams mom]

"haan chalo'" she says happily and they srrange all the stuff' sameera is super excited.. she's blushing too' she goes near angad and holds his hand, angad really felt awkward while kripa felt hurt but just smiled.

Abhimanyu also felt a little awkward' he felt a prick in his heart' sam just notices his presense and waves him with a smile on her face, he smiles back and waves'

"Wo kaun hai??" angad asks surprised.

"mera dost hai' abhi maine tumhe bataya to tha" she says and it clicks.

"oh ya' tumhaara london waala friend right?" he says, and she nodds.

"okay enough baatein ab ring ceremony start karte hain" ranjana says.

Kripa keeps asking shabd but he keeps refusing.

Sameera puts in the ring with a huge smile, abhi feels really awkward and bad' kripa just claps smiling and angad gets upset seeing her smile. The ring ceremony is over and everyone is celebrating' they decide to dance'

"Kripa tum jaanna chahti ho na? ke wo kaun hai? Just wait abhi tumhe pata chal jaayega" he says and leaves, she looks surprised and he starts singing.

The lights turn off and they see shabd dancing'

suno ek thi kaanch ki gudiya
suno ek thi pyaar ki pudiya
sadke us pyaar ke
He starts and kripa looks at him surprised
suno ek tha pind da shera
aaya kas ke baadh wo shehra
sadke us yaar ke
he goes to angad and tells him and sam smiles at him.
saji thi doli wo
chadha tha ghodi wo
khoya jana kahan inna sona pyaar baliye..
He starts dancing and kripa just smiles'
jogi mahi heer ranjana
sabnu jaake mei ye bolna
baat bolke raaz kholna
he pulls kripa with him and they both dance.

Dil thaame hue wo tha khada chupke se yun
door baithe hue umra gaiyaan jaane na tu
deewane ne di jawani
ke har gum tu bhula de
deta hi raha sadayein
ke dil se tu bula le
he gets emotional and she looks at him surprised.
Hooo chhad de be jid tu
chhaze pe aaja hun
dil toota sona pyaar mundiya

jogi mahi heer ranjana
sabnu jaake mei ye bolna
baat bolke raaj kholna
he gets back and starts dancing' kripa looks a little surprised and confused, angad was really getting annoyed.

Dholna Dholna Dholna...
Jind meri Jind meri hun te aa ja
Jind meri Jind meri hun te aa ja
They pull in the other' armaan, muskaan were dancing together, ridzi and abhi were dancing together. Rahul comes and pulls muskaan with him and does balle balle, she looks annoyed.
Wo jaane kahan gum ho gayi fir na mili
jo fuloon si thi isliye gayi fir na khili
pyaar manga tha meine rab se
tu jhad de jid
Armaan starts singing and ridzi looks sad, she walks away.
jogi mahi heer ranjana
sabnu jaake mei ye bolna
baat bolke raaj kholna
Shabd pulls her back in while singing, he pulls armaan aswell and there standing face to face but after a short eyelock ridzi goes away.
suno ek thi kaanch ki gudiya
suno ek thi pyaar ki pudiya
sadke us pyaar ke
suno ek tha pind da shera
aaya kas ke baadh wo shehra
sadke us yaar ke
saji thi doli wo
chadha tha ghodi wo
khoya jana kahan inna sona pyaar ree..
jogi mahi heera ranjana
sabnu jaake mei ye bolna
baat bolke raaj kholna
They all continue dancing, sameera was dancing with angad and she looks at them and feels bad, he also looks at her' then shabd comes to tell kripa "I Love u" but she was too lost' he tries to call her and she just goes out... she doesn't know what to do, she felt really awkward everyone sits to eat, kripa goes outside to the garden' she feels really awkward, she felt like crying'

"yeh sab kya ho raha hai?? Kyun mujhe itna dukh ho raha hai?? Maine to apne aap ko samjhaaliya tha na? ke main angad se pyar nahi karti, main nahi karti angad se pyar'" she tries to explain to herself, shabd stands behind her feeling hurt.

"kripa'" he calls and she turns, they both have tears in there eyes'

"kripa tum' ang'" he cant complete and she hugs him.

"haan shabd main usse pyar karti hoon' main kya karoon shabd maine apne aap ko kitna samjhaaya par yeh dil manta hi nahi' shabd main kya karoon??? Main usse bohot pyar karti hoon" she says hugging him tighter, he feels really hurt and hugs her back, he has tears in his eyes aswell and consoles her, angad was passing by looking for kripa and sees them' he gets really angry'

"You know kripa tum bilkul acchi nahi lagti when you cry" he tells her and she looks at him "dekha dekha u look like' um wo nahi tha billu' uske jaisi" he laughs and she looks annoyed.

"Kya kaha?" she runs behind him, angad cant hear anything he just saw them hug and now play, they run around a little and then stop, he hugs her again.

"tum haste huye bohot pyaari lagti ho' keep smiling" he says and she smiles, angad was really angry.

They both go back in laughing while angad hides.

***********

"muskaan beta chal yahan behet jaa, akhir rahull tera hone waala pati hai" her mother smiles and tells her, muskaan gets annoyed and sits next to him' rahul smirks.

"yeh lo, muskaan khaao na" rahul keeps saying annoying her to the core' now he starts kicking her feet, she looks at him angrily "teri shaanpati band kar warna" she says angrily and he smirks.

"kya hua beta?? Aise nahi karte" her mother interrupts'

"ji mummyji' rahul aap to kha hi nahi rahe' ye lijiye na" she says after deciding to play his game with him, rahul looks amused by her reactions.

"lo na rahul" she says and accidently or purposely throws the drink on him, she smirks while he gets angry "what the' Kya kar rahi ho?" he says angrily and then realizes her parents looking shocked.

"sorry' im so sorry rahul, mujhe" she starts crying lie lie and rahul gets really annoyed but cant even scream' he leaves to the wash room and muskaan continues to cry, falsely'

***********

Armaan was trying to talk to riddhima but she was just ignoring, he finally gets her in a corner and pulls her away.

"kya kar rahe ho' just leave me armaan" she says angrily but he pins her to the wall, she tries to free herself and he holds her hand really tight.

"Meri baat sunno' kabse try kar raha hoon par tumhe interest hi nahi hai' I need to talk to you damn it" he says angrily and she has tears in her eyes, he realizes this and gets worried.

"riddhima please ro mat.. please maine kaha na sorry? Kyun ro rahi ho?" he asks.

"armaan mujhe dard ho raha hai" she says with tears and he realizes he was still holding her, he leaves her hand.

"I'm sorry' please riddhima ek baar mujhse baat karlo warna main paagal hojaaoonga' please riddhima" he breaks down and she feels bad, she wants to talk to him, hug him' but no she just couldn't' she had to let him forget her, she just runs out crying and armaan feels hurt.

***********

Kripa was walking upstairs looking for sameera' angad holds her and pulls her in a room and pins her to a wall angrily. She is shocked.

"Angad' yeh' yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?" she asks shocked'

"Wo kaun hai??? Tumhaara boyfriend hai?:" he asks getting aggressive, he was holding her very tightly.

"kaun??? Kya keh rahe ho?" she asks trying to free her hand.

"Main uss shabd ki baat kar raha hoon' tum usske saath'" he gets really angry and hits his hand on the wall' kripa gets really scared, she has tears in her eyes.

"angad please, mujhe jaane do yahan se" she says struggling, he gets hold of her hands again.

"Nahi.. batao mujhe kaun hai wo??" he says with eyes filled with anger.

"stop it angad' choro mujhe, aur job hi ho wo tumhe isse kya??? Wo mera dost hai mera sabse accha dost" she says and he gets angrier'

"dost??? Sirf dost?" he asks angrily making her angry aswell.

"angad' just stop this okay' wo mera boyfriend hai to kya karloge tum?? Hun? Just move, aur ab maafi matt maangna, samjhe" she says and leaves in tears, she cries and tells shabd, he consoles her.

*************

Shabd is really angry with angad but he cant do anything' the host tells everyone to dance and sam forces, ridzi-abhi, rahul-muskaan and kripa-shabd to also dance.

Theres a slow song going on and changing partners theme:

Guys I'm gonna write the actions of each couple below the song line'

Kahin to.. kahin to..
They all start moving slowly with there partners. Angad and sam are also dancing.
Hogi woh Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain
Angad- looks at kripa'
kripa looks at him with pain in her eyes'

Armaan was dancing with a random girl and feels hurt seeing ridzi with abhi' she see him and notices the pain in his eyes'

Rahul annoys muskaan by holding her tightly, she looks annoyed and moves his hand but he puts it back on her waist.

Jahan mein jahan tu

Aur jahan bas tere mere jazbaat hain

The partners switch and now AR are together.
Armaan looks into ridzi's eyes hopefully and she feels bad' they have ashort eyelock and change.
Hogi jahan subha teri

Palkon ki kirano mein

The boys push the girls and then pull them back' This causes muskaan to hit rahul's chest and get very close' they get lost in eachothers eyes' while dancing.

Lor
i jahan chand ki

Sune teri bahon mein...

Now kripa and angad were together' he looks at her feeling bad, maybe he over reacted' they both get flashbacks of angad shouting at her, kripa has tears in her eyes and wants to move away, angad feels bad, tears also form in his eyes.

Jaane na kahan woh duniya hai

Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahi

Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi
Rahul and muskaan were separate now, but they keep looking at eachother.

Angad looks in her eyes but she keeps looking away trying to keep distance' he feels really bad.

Armaan looks at ridzi hopefully' she feels bad aswell but she cant decide whether to forgive him or not' she gets flashbacks of him saying sorry and her being rude.
Partners change and She goes back to abhi- kripa to shabd and Rahul and muskaan together again.

Saasein kho gai hai kiski aahon mein

Mein kho gai hoon jane kiski baahon mein

Kripa looks at angad and then hugs shabd while dancing' she cries and moves on the tune, angad feels really bad.

Riddhima looks at armaan who was now just looking away, feeling bad' he realizes her gaze on him and looks at her' they both share a distanced eyelock.

Rahul doesn't like the guy who was dancing with muskaan, he was getting too close so rahul leaves the girl he was dancing with and pushes the man out' muskaan looks at him surprised.. they start dancing together but muskaan is still dazed.
Manzilon se rahe dhondte chali
Aur kho gai hai manzil kahin rahon mein

Kahin to kahin to hai nasha

Teri meri har mulakat mein
Muskaan thinks about the old times' when they danced together etc.
Riddhima also gets flashbacks of good times she spent with armaan' the rain dance, the love they shared at the apartment.

Kripa also thinks about the first time they met and touched his hand then when she fell on him' when he carried her, when they almost kissed' she could feel angad also loved her but it wasn't right!

Hoton se hoton ko

Chumti o rehete hai hum har baat pe

Armaan remembers the time him and riddhima were in the apartment and he kissed her all over.

Angad remembers the moment when he almost kissed kripa.

Rahul and muskaan keep staring in eachothers eyes' muskaan feels awkward, so does rahul' was he really in love?
Kehti hain fiza jahan
Teri zaameen aasman

They change partners again and now kripa and angad were together.
Angad tries to say sorry but kripa just refuses to listen.
AR were together: armaan looks into riddhima's eyes and she looks back and smiles slightly' he gets really happy.

Rahul doesn't muskaan switch "koi zaroorat nahi hai' after all main tumhaara hone waala pati hoon, you have to dance with me" he says and winks at her, instead of getting angry she blushes and continues to dance.

Jahan hai tu
Meri hasi
meri khushi
Meri jaan....
Armaan also smiles and they both have tears in there eyes and a smile on the face'
When it says "Meri jaan" she quickly hugs him, and then smiles, he also smiles.
Kripa is really upset' he can feel it, he feels really guilty and wants to kill himself for hurting her again' "Kripa' plz ek baar meri baat sunlo"
"angad plz' mujhe yahan scene nahi create karma isliye dance kar rahi hoon' usse zyaada ki umeed bhi matt karma" she says feeling hurt and soon leaves.
Jane na kahan woh duniya hai

Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi

Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi
Angad thinks as kripa leaves the venue'

All the couples have to carry there partner, armaan carries ridzi with a huge smile and she is also smiling' they are both very happy to be back together again'.RM don't know why they are falling for eachother again and decide to stop it. Rahul has to carry her, he acts like he cant "god kitni bhaari hogayi ho' kya khaati ho??' he teases and she gets annoyed.
"Kya??? Main bhaari?? Main khaati hoon?? Teri to main" she says and he smirks "Mummyji" he says and she gives him a killer look."itna mat jalo poora ghar jal jaayega" he says laughing and she looks totally annoyed."Tumhe to' urggh" she says and leaves, he laughs and mimicks her.
***********

Kripa stands outside and cries, once again shabd consoles her and tells her to not loose hope.
"shabd' uski mangni hai aaj' main kya karoon?? Shabd main usse bohot pyar karti hoon aur uski aankhon mein apne liye pyar dekha hai maine' kaise unn aankhon ko bhulaaoon?? Kya karoon main shabd??" she cries."Tum worry mat karo' I think tumhe kolkatta laut jaana chahiye" he says and she looks at him and agrees."you are right' yahan reh kar main ghut ghut nahi mar sakhti" she says and rubs her tears.
************

Okay guys' yeh tha part 14' hope u liked it! And I hope it wasn't short'I know there was songs so it may have shortened but song mein bhi part tha' next part jaldhi update hojaayega but till then check out what next in store for you all' in the promo!


If you liked this update do hit the LIKE button and do leave a comment!
If you thought something wasn't right I will be delighted to get criticism as well'


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Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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~:~:~Promo~:~:~

Rahul and muskaan go to punjab and everyone there is all over rahul... feeding him mithaais etc... he gets irritated... they share some cute moments as well...
Will they realize the love?😳
Angad and kripa meet again and angad cries and tells her that he loves her and they are lost in eachother... will they go further???😕
Riddhima tells Armaan about her father etc... he decides to help her... ridzi meets armaans family and they share cute moments with armaan's nephew😳😳
will there love last forever😳😳 this time i guess it wil😉

I hope u liked the Promo... sorry but i'm trying to end the FF so just wanna gather all my thoughts and scenes i had decided when i started the FF as u can see the VM its made according to what i wanted the FF to end up with😉 hopefully next part will have more then this😳

If u liked the promo do hit the LIKE button!

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Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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interesting part.. and even more interesting promo..👏 would be waiting to see them in Punjab...😃
heading for an end.? lol never thought it'd be so soon.. 😛

btw, loved d picturization of d song..😳
Edited by rapi_c - 16 years ago
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hey dear awesome and great part
finally AR back together don't separate them
i hope angad and kripa get back together soon
rahul and muskaan r so cute
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal

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