Taming the Unknown (AR) Mini~ Epilogue - Page 95

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#521

WOW amazing part! i sooo loved the confession, it was passionate and beautiful! cant believe what sakshi did, hate her so much! hope armaan helps riddhima get her sisters back!
awww last part :( well i would definitely want another mini ff from u!
looking forward to it :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#522

Reserved

shall be back :)))))

*Edit:

Hi Swancy,

I knew I had to come back here😳 a little late but I found my way eventually😃 - if it hadn't been for your timely PM though(Thank you for the PM)- I would have forgottn for sure😳 since I am terrible at comments, I tend to shy away from them. Eventhough I wait for my fav. ffs to be updated like an obsessed soul. But when it comes to writing about it, my mind goes blank, all words evaporate from my mind's dictionary😆 and all I can think of is- it was great, and about AR😆 moral of this confession, please don't mind my short comment 😳Boy you can write, the last part is like the longesttttt part ever👏

Coming to your ff- it was a real sweet love story and you did a great job with it. I liked the flow of the story as well as the suspense that you maintained. Very own Cinderella DMG style, all that confusion, the evil mother and her sisterswho finally found out about the truth, thank god they did and the way in which the truth came out- good that Juliet found her Romeo (her knight in shining armour who climbs pipes like our very Armaan ala DMG style hun you reminded me of the early latoo Armaan who climbed pipes to reach Riddhima's room only to get a slap most of the time😆 *ouch*) or was it the other way around😆. Either way they were destined to find the other😉..Wonderful.. Loved the ending, a perfect one.

Hope to read more of your creative work.

take care,

Aria

Edited by olive_green - 16 years ago

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#523

hy swancy dear gosh yaar it ws jst mindblowing nd emotional tooooo much omgggg yaar i knw somwhre tht sakshi ws gonna be responsible shit man nd she ws torturing her soo much but armaan is alwys der fr her it ws sooo emotional yaar evn i had also tears yaar gosh sad story of her nd so ormantic she needs some 1 to support her nd armaan been der fr her it ws sooooooooo romantic i jst lvd their emotional attachment hmmmmmmmm ell lts wait n wait how he wll bring all 3 sis togethr hmmmmmmmmm cnt wait cont soooooooooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#524

Hey,

You have a magical touch dearie! That was such a sweet and touchy update I loved it. I got a little misty eyed too. Great update and I loved the fact that you updated soon too!

Keep updating soon and love the story!

-Pushpi-

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425033

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#525

heyya Swancy!!!
i jst dunno wat 2 say for ur FF..!!
it was so damn gud!!!naa...damn gud is a smal word 2 describe ur FF!!!
d way u put each songs related to d scenes!!
mann...yday nyt i slept aftr hearing d song Right Now Na Na Na by Akon!!!
1more part...ohoo...only 1 more part thn u'll end it!!
no worries u r one of d gr8 writerz...m sure u wil come up w/ loadz more!!!

muahhzz!!
luv ya!!

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rav

@-midnightsun-

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#526

hmmmm can you think of all the different words that would substitute for brilliant... like mindblowing... wicked... awesum... so yh make a list of the words n then you'll know what i thought of the part.... :D... i totally loved it.... n it had all the kisses i wanted.... :P... totally ladoo-licious.... hehe..... love you!!!! P:S: guess this is your definition of mini.... lmao... yh ladoo.... i would love to read another one of ur mini *cough cough* ff's... hehe... did i mention i love ur definition of mini.... mwwaahhhhzzzz... guess who... and bdw... the guess who... trademarked.... haha.... xx

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@guggu

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#527

Updated my reserve on pg 68.. 😃

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#528

hey swancy...
awesome update....so finally the secret is out...and they have even confessed their love ....that was sooo cute...adored it...and sakshi is so mean..she is fully responsible for riddhima's condition...and why her sisters hate her....but now she has armaan by her side...looking forward as to how he is gonna tackle sakshi.....

next part is the last part...well you know it better when to finish this ff...anyways would lve to read a mini ff ...will be waiting for it....

continue soon and thanks for the pm...

loads of love...

Caramel..

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#529

Taming the Unknown ' Promo

"Whatever's lost may never come back"

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"Anjali listen to me please"

"What's there to listen armaan, she killed my father, that bitch" her voice roared through his head.

"NO!" He screamed back. "No she didn't, you wanna know the truth, come on i'll show you"

Armaan grabbed onto her hand, as he led her from her room through to sakshi's room.

"It's now or never, believe me or not. But you have to believe you're own mother" he said as anjali's face grew sober.

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"Rahul! For god sake listens at least"

"Nope, i'm marring you and that's final" they stood in the middle of a temple

"This isn't right" Muskaan said to herself

"Everything it right, in love Muskaan, everything"

Rahul placed slit his finger onto the knife in the temple, as the droplets trickled down, Muskaan looked shockingly into his eyes as whatever was happening now should've have been happening at all.

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"At one place the truth is being revealed

But then at another a whole relationship might be staring

And with both things happening, what will Ridhima do when she realises that it's her father's death anniversary the next day?"

Will everyone realise that they were wrong all along

Or will ridhima have to live that same life forever.

guys so sorry

well actually i don't know wen i might finish writing the next part

but here's a small promo

not big but a tiny one

I might update either on Monday or the next saturday

Thank you