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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Wow this story is now very close to my heart. I actually feel delighted when I read this. I'm very eager to knw wat happened further. Pls cntinue soon.

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wow this story is now very close to my heart. I actually feel delighted when I read this. I'm very eager to knw wat happened further. Pls cntinue soon.

Hi ,

aww its close to ur heart.. makes me feels so nice n speical.. hope it stays like this.. U are delighted reading ..its great to know.. llooks like the story isnt boring at all... Yup will be postign next part in few sec.. hope u like the remaining parts well.. thanks a ton for ur kind encouraging words ...

Bhoomi

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Oh Bhoomi, I luv ur fic. This is really different u c. Aur ye part to bahut hi achha tha. Prachet ne apni dil ki baat Aakruti se kehdi. And I actually felt so bad hearing his story but then Aakruti will manage him. Such a sweet convo btwn husband-wife. I luved this thoroughly.

And yes, I donno wats so special in this fic but I just get glued to it, so 4 me it can never be boring.

Pls continue soon.

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Oh Bhoomi, I luv ur fic. This is really different u c. Aur ye part to bahut hi achha tha. Prachet ne apni dil ki baat Aakruti se kehdi. And I actually felt so bad hearing his story but then Aakruti will manage him. Such a sweet convo btwn husband-wife. I luved this thoroughly.

And yes, I donno wats so special in this fic but I just get glued to it, so 4 me it can never be boring.

Pls continue soon.

Hi Sumaiya,

I am so very happy that u r enjoyign reading my story.. u felt its different makes me so glad.. usually my written stories are simple... Yup ab hai unkey Milaap ka pal ..lol... Prachet has spoken a lot abotu him ..and lets see how Akritu feels now ...husband n wife having a conversation on thei wedding night...😳.. yup Prachet has become stern n rigid and practical in frotn of the world.. but looks like to his wife he wants to be himself..emotional sensitve and isnt hiding his scars n pain....

Am very happy that u loved it and.. so nice to know it isnt boring dear.. will be posting the next part soon in few seconds.. check it out...

luv u

Bhoomi

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Mind blowing Bhoomi Simply awesome You are too good yaar , Thank you vey much for this part.

I am loving it must say its too touching .I m stuck with you now.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Yay, today is a gud day 4 me. U hav posted part (g) also. Again it was awesum. Sach kahu to mujhe aur bhi achha lagta hai ki ye ek poetic story hai and its obviously very difficult to write like this. But u r doing a wonderful job n this poetic touch makes the story all the more special n beautiful. Thnx a lot 4 this n w8ing 4 the next part eagerly.

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

bhoomi awesome update i actually felt bad 4 parchit i hope his thirst 4 love is finally over gr8 part cont soon

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Mind blowing Bhoomi Simply awesome You are too good yaar , Thank you vey much for this part.

I am loving it must say its too touching .I m stuck with you now.

Hi Monika,

Monu am so happy that u liked the poetic story so far... And dont thnak me.. i need to thnak u all for makign me feel like postign it as know soemone somewhere is wantign to read it and appreciates it... U r stuck with this.. it will be over soon dear.. hope u enjoy all the way ...😃

tc Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Yay, today is a gud day 4 me. U hav posted part (g) also. Again it was awesum. Sach kahu to mujhe aur bhi achha lagta hai ki ye ek poetic story hai and its obviously very difficult to write like this. But u r doing a wonderful job n this poetic touch makes the story all the more special n beautiful. Thnx a lot 4 this n w8ing 4 the next part eagerly.

HI Sumaiya,

hehe ya yesterday i had posted bakc to back three parts.. and yup today if time permits me I will be doign the same hopefully... am glad u liked it so much... For me poetic story isnt difficult at al.... actualy if u read my short stoires many have poetic line sin it.. its like Bhoomi' stouch dikhta hai with those line..lol... i started wiht my friends wantign me to include them in the story ..n now purii ki purriii story in poem form😆

U surely have made me feel awesoem by ur lovely comments..hope i stand by it thorugh out the story... yup next part will be comign soon.. hope u like it... luv u

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
bhoomi awesome update i actually felt bad 4 parchit i hope his thirst 4 love is finally over gr8 part cont soon

Yup Prachet has gone thorugh a lot of emotional downfall and stoof up with a feelign of disheartign with none to love... and with Aakritu in his life am sure he will have no regret from the almighty...😃tc

Bhoomi

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