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@cutelove1111

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

lovely part.

samrat-benji-gunjan scene was awsome.

can't wait till read more.

cont soon.

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sheela

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

hey wonderful parts ...just read ur ff and if u can plzz do pm me and do continue soon

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Nazimah

@naz17555

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

wow wow wow jen!!!!!! i love it! its soooo beautiful! i really hope samrats realisation happens alot like this!, esp with all the scenes in the present linking to sajans past encounters!

keep it up! wanna read the next part!

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MohitSanayaFan

@MohitSanayaFan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

wow Jenny, u write so well!! 👏 i read your tum se hi one shot before and it was really good!
we got the BenJan and also, Rv-Gunjan scenes in the fan fiction!
i just hope in the Pooja-Vikram pool scene rehearsal, samrat ends up saving Gunjan, just like the first pool scene 😳
i like how Nupur kinda told off Samrat when she saw him! 😆

plz add me to the list!

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raveenamc

@raveenamc

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

wow!

awesome jenny! beautiful!

i dont know wht else ot say... i have no words....

plz plz plz add me to your PM list.... plz!!!!!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

wowow tht was awesome i love it

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Cute_Ash

@Cute_Ash

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Haiyeeeeeeeeee

Uff Jens dii killing me!

Ok Benjan scenes I die for them

And thanku shooo much for puttong them in ur FF🤗🤗🤗

AWieeee Gunjan is luking gorgeous

(Don't think I am crazii But u hvae mesmerised its o well taht I can iamgine it)

Awieeee Even though he is a dhakkan I feel bad for ma sammii!

Threedrops of tears fell in thsi part!

That was sad

Haila last part is gonna be sad n emotional

U will totally think I am saddist but I love emotional scenes

And thankus oo much for making my night a great one!

Keepw riting

Luv u

ash

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jenny1000

@ Mimi: You have been such a major inspiration for even attempting to write a SG FF.🤗 Thanks so much for your lovely comments and this FF is dedicate to you and esp Ria.. Wait till you read the 2nd part, it is more BenJan with a twist of course. The third part has lots of BenJan as far as my brain can think of it.😳

Ooh Jenny di!!! Thank you so much! 🤗

That''s so sweet if you, I'm honestly touched! Oh god, I adoreee BenJan, and I LOVE you for making Benji such an important character here! *hugs*

You cant imagine how happy I am!

I shall read the next part in a bit and post my thoughts 😊

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astha

@Asthuox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

*holding ears*

Sorrieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee for the late comment! 😳

@ Update

Oh my god jenny di, you don't like me now do you?? Oh gosh you literally want me dead! *Runs and hides in a corner* If you keep posting such breathtaking updates
I will seriously die again! Mimi already killed me toh corrections. Im going to die a ghost death! *Asthu goes krazy*

the whole piece was beyond words! With what perfection you wrote it. Absolutely flawless. And I mean it!

*Hugs you tight* Thank you thank you so much so a Benjan scene. Love you for this. Im like craving to watch one in the show atm. The whole shammy thing got me worked up!

One thing I love about your writing skills, you make it quite easy to visualize the whole act. The whole Benjan moments. Aweeehhh to die for. Freaking adorable. And Samrat missing Gunjan and all! Realizing how imp she means to him.
Have you pmed PD the scenes. Your seriously should! Specially the whole sunshine. The Benjan Sam Convo. It's was so cute XD! *Smiles* Doh my heart went out for samrat! His tears are still precious no matter how much of a dakkan he is!

Oh have I mentioned your like another genius I know (beside Mimi) I just love how you' have incorporated all of the sajan scenes from the start into RG play scenes! And Samrat remembering all those golden moments. Fantastic! You're doing a awesome job!

Loving the way you are portraying his side of emotions. Beautifully done!

Oh my *sobs* the ending was quite touching. Very well written! 👏 👏

Love yuuu. Asthu 🤗🤗

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Read part 2 =)

Ooh Jenny di, it was SOO BenJan packed that I forgot SaJan were the main protagonists. LOL

I love BenJan... did I mention that before? =P

They're everything [haha, ironic with your FF title na?] and I LOVE how you're portraying their friendship here! Hugs, holding hands...movie dates AWEEEH!!!! Best friends personified!

And RV-Gunjan together (acting wise?) WHOA! I wonder what Dia's going through... I hope you have an RD track in there somewhere, I'd love to read that =)

Sam's flashbacks were so real and heart gripping =( Poor baby, agreed with Asthu... he may be the worlds biggest dhakkan, but he's still the januable Sam.

My favourite dialogue: " Nahin dude, I guess our paths are different now, we will see you tommrrow"

That was amazingly written! LOVED it!

P.S Benji calling Gunjan sunshine took ME down memorylane. One of my closest di's on I-F calls me that *sighs I miss her =(