Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29)

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Deepa

@harshdb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#982

how r u doing'. As I promised, I m here with my comments, though only for introduction part😆

I m wondering if I take this long to comment on single part, then how many days am I going to take to complete the 15 parts😳? But I can't help it' bear with me and have patience to read the comments'😆😉..

very ince introduction. ⭐️

Dude! Where the hell have you been? Your side of the bet was buying pop corn, not growing corn in the fields waiting for it to reap before we can pop it for snacks."

those lines are very simple yet holding lots of humor. love them... i was smiling and grinning like an idiot😆 that too at office. imagine 😳.

The language u used in that part difficult to understand on single reading. I had to re read to understand properly😳😳.

"Trying to be where they should be. Where the girls are." Armaan threw his head back and laughed.

😆😆😆 boys will be boys always... u used it well and in perfect situation...😉
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LSR next?" Can you watch a rose on TV and feel the fragrance?"

superb line 👏👏👏 good logic.

I initially got confused what LSR means thank god u explained in your note'

your note as long as the part is😆 just kidding😊. u gave long note with all the details which helped me to understand the part much better. thanks for that... 😆

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roshni_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

#983

. . . . . . .😍. . . and . .😍 . . . and . . 😍 . . .

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@spln

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Posted: 13 years ago

#984

everyone - quick note to say the chapter IS done - was yesterday itself, but I can't find the kind of internet from where to upload the doc, cause my phone wont let me so advanced :|

Maybe I'll find a decent cafe with internet tom/day after. In the meantime, I'll be writing in the night, so who knows I'll have more chapters to post quick up when I get decent internet/when one I'm back home in 2 weeks =)

so long...!

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 13 years ago

#985

Thank God you didnt come after so many days to tell us that you were not updating at all !

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shriya

@shriya12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#986

NJJJ...hiii! i hope ur story is gng grt(obv it shd b) i looged into IF after ages n frst thng i did is chk urs n Hraika's story...i miss ths plc sooo much...keep updating..miss you..n i sincerely hope u r dng gud..:-)

love shriya

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420589

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Posted: 13 years ago

#987

Im guessing that guy is Armaans dad and his Mums Ex husband!.. Thats my conclusion afta reading their part!..

I Loved the whole part.. Looking forward to the next bit!.. Hope to see yuu soon!.. =))

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

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Posted: 13 years ago

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2 weeks seems too long now.🤢...i am not against ur work (it is ur priority) BUT CAN"T THEY GET ANY DECENT PLACE WITH NET FOR CAMPING??????????...😡

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: spln
Aria - you're olive green again?! 🤔 I was beginning to get cozy about the other name... ! okie, so no PM spams, because honestly, if I was someone on my own PM list, I would be like, seriously, this woman thinks we're still reading this story after her year long breaks?! well she can wish! 😆 Sooo, I decided to be safe and avoid those mental hexes thrown at me 😆

Hey Nj, yes OG again. Cus seriously, that was a bad choice for a change, good riddance😆

I get the thing abt the PM spams, hence why I hvnt sent out any PMs for my new ff. That and half the people seem to hv changed their usernames, its hard to remember who is who!