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Posted: 13 years ago
I know that I have yet to edit my reserved comment box from Chapter 13, but I shall reserve this box all the same.
Reserved! XD
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Posted: 13 years ago

Phewww..finally u updated...and for a part like this every wait is worth...thank u...

strait to the part..short yet one of the most crucial one..so many intricacies and underlying plots...Aman kher...this new character sounds quite intriguing and it surely hold a string on Armaan and his family's past..there is definitely something b/w Armaan's mother but then why she wouldn't hav allowed him to do operation on Minnieand this Dr. Kher and Armaan's relationship with him is so disturbed and turbulent..I am not sure but definitely this Dr. Kher has some right over Armaan..he kind of hinted at the fact...

I loved the washroom scene where Armaan is trying to calm his nerves and prepares himself for the fight ahead. but there is also a kind of stubbornness to prove himself better that that Dr. Aman...this scene also gives the idea that it will not be easy time for AR ahead,

Btw Armaan said Dr. kher is second person in his hate list...so who is the first one?...

I am really feeling sorry for Minnie .i prayed that it won't be her but as it is i now just wish for her safety...she will get well soon under Armaan's care...

And WHAT? u r going to updat 2 morrow???????? my head is spinning.but i will be the happiest person if u did...this time too much wait will just kill me. . . .this part hav left too many big questions to wait for too long.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Another question ...does Armaan's mom is a doctor? if not they why he is so frequent comer to that hospital or it has something to do with that Dr. Aman Kher?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow ... this is like a total new angle to Armaan's story so far. Thanks a bunch for the update. Waiting to read more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you everyone for the comments/likes/reserves so far - you have no idea how fantastic you people are in reviving old ghosts 😆 and oh, that's in a complimenting way! 🤗

Just quickly answering/clarifying things that I noticed in some comments above:

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I feel so sorry for Armaan.
I hope Minie and his mom get well soon. <--- just to make sure you have this right, Armaan's mom is not unwell, she's only stressing about her daughter aka Minnie's fall and Aman merely warned Armaan that lest she takes a timeout on stressing, she will make herself ill.
Plz update the next part soon.



Originally posted by: roshni_A

strait to the part..short yet one of the most crucial one..so many intricacies and underlying plots...Aman kher...this new character sounds quite intriguing and it surely hold a string on Armaan and his family's past..there is definitely something b/w Armaan's mother but then why she wouldn't hav allowed him to do operation on Minnie

^^ so you've got most details right Roshni, but I wanted to correct you on this one, its not Armaan's mother, but the Dean who has not allowed Aman to operate on Minnie. Why - will be answered in time, but hint is that he is disallowed on ethical grounds. =)

but there is also a kind of stubbornness to prove himself better that that Dr. Aman...this scene also gives the idea that it will not be easy time for AR ahead,

^^ Oh I like how you correlate that trait in his character with tough times ahead for AR - two stubborn willed people together can never be easy peasy, yeh?! 😆

Btw Armaan said Dr. kher is second person in his hate list...so who is the first one?...

^^ that too, in time =)


Another question ...does Armaan's mom is a doctor? if not they why he is so frequent comer to that hospital or it has something to do with that Dr. Aman Kher?

^^ Yup, she's a doctor. There was reference to the same in the previous chapter, when Armaan misses the call from home and decides it couldn't be his mother cause she'd either be home sleeping, or in an emergency. And further in this chapter, when he plans to use his mother's reference to get into the OT wing, and yet again, when Aman tells him how the Dean would not allow him, or his mother to operate on Minnie.


Suvarna and Bushra - thanks a bunch you guys! 🤗

Nikhi - I still have a very weak case on complaining about delays. So I'd say you're safe, for now 😆

Edited by spln - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NJ i know you have always been brilliant at writing but this chapter specifically reminded me again how really amazing you are. The language you use is so amazing. And the detachment of the narration makes your writing sound even more sophisticated and 'grown up'. A really high level of writing and vocab and the way you string together words really makes me enjoy reading what you write. Which brings me to the question: english qualifications you possess? if you do? I thought you might be into physics after reading back to newtons laws but your standard of writing skills makes me feel you have some high english writing qualifications or you have used writing as a really good hobby pass time ;P

Honestly i loved this chapter. Even though it may not have been full of lots of various scenes and characters and instead focused on one quite drastic turn of events scene, it was still really enjoyable to read.

Dr Kher already sounds like he has a strong connection with Armaan's story and him being disallowed to take part in the surgery only strengthens my analysis because doctors who may hold any emotional attachment to the patient aren't permitted to take part in the surgery..right?

The communication between Armaan and Dr Kher was really intriguing to read - once again your ability to describe feelings so utterly well especially conflicting emotions really enhanced the scene.

Also Armaan's thoughts when he is refreshing himself is so realistic - its only natural that when one has something like that thrown at their face, they tend to forget all plausible means of being calm and thinking rationally to plan what they do and instead take on emotions, in Armaan's case the issue of the 'what if' guilt.

I wanted to add to one of your other readers points about Armaan's need to show people what he is capable of (ego basically i guess) shows up in the last paragraph where he is determined to display his maturity on the issue at his hands to Dr Kher. Which begs the question why is it he feels he has to show he can do that to Dr Kher particularly? (which i know you will answer in the upcoming, may i add, very surprisingly early update coming ahead)

Riddhima.. i can understand why Armaan ends up arguing with her since anyone with quite the ego will feel challenged by another person with an ego and stubborness to match which inevitably pulls them to fight over that. But there must be something about Dr Kher...

Anyway really well done with this update Naseem Ji =) Looking forward to the next, make it soon please ma'am
Edited by -Aliya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Intriguing ! To say the least! I like this new format.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am glad that minnie is going to be fine.
great update!!!!
waiting for next part!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: addicted2ksg

I really hope little Minnie is okay, I had a feeling she was the one the caller was talking about :/ Armaan's interplay of emotions was touching, any brother in his position would probably have reacted in that very way.



^^ Thank you for your make-happy comments Shruti 🤗 We go back a long way, don't we?! I can't even remember what it was like writing PI, if I think now, sigh! Anyway, so to address your speculation above - well it wasn't Minnie calling him per se, but a call from his home to inform him about Minnie's fall - which would be Shehnaz Bi, since his mother's been in the hospital with Minnie without leaving her for a moment, as Aman told him.

Originally posted by: -Aliya-


Dr Kher already sounds like he has a strong connection with Armaan's story and him being disallowed to take part in the surgery only strengthens my analysis because doctors who may hold any emotional attachment to the patient aren't permitted to take part in the surgery..right?

^^ you're quite on track Aliya - now would you guess what version on emotional attachment he could have to ethically dis-allow him from surgery?! 😎


I wanted to add to one of your other readers points about Armaan's need to show people what he is capable of (ego basically i guess) shows up in the last paragraph where he is determined to display his maturity on the issue at his hands to Dr Kher. Which begs the question why is it he feels he has to show he can do that to Dr Kher particularly? (which i know you will answer in the upcoming, may i add, very surprisingly early update coming ahead)

^^ I'm glad you're picking on the right points and questions to ask. It was the idea of doing single situation updates, because too many don't really leave you that much energy, yeh?! So Armaan's need to show people is also somewhat, a very male trait, as a generic statement, plus let's not forget at the end of the day, he's only a 21 year old undergrad. He can be smarter and mature for his age, but he can't be an equivalent to a real adult, right?! He's the perfectr age to feel like he's grown up and good enough to go, but still make all the probable mistakes of being but mentally an adolescent. Which would explain why someone as focussed and sensible as him spent his bus ride broodiung than working out a plan. It's the inevitable with the rather mild sense of responsibility in his age, as opposed to the counter advantage Aman shows, given his decade plus seniority.


And to answer your other question, formally I'm only a high school graduate on English?! Lol! Given that I'm an engineering graduate and a Ph.D. candidate in Applied Physics now! They don't seem to care so much about our English/ or linguistics as such, with only lasers to talk to, in my lab 😆 but thank you very much - it makes me happy to be mistaken for something else too! ☺️

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RT, Fri - thanks a bunch ladies 🤗

Everyone - just to leave a quick note here, so I still intend to post the part like I said yesterday, but I do have some annoyingly essential but jaded routine errands to run for this evening after work. And then pack in the night for my next fortnight of travel. So just in case you don't see the update tonight, you can be sure it will be there at max by tomorrow evening. That's like my extra delay limit to the max. Meanwhile - very encouraged by the quick replies, so shall keep my word

cheers,
NJ
Edited by spln - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spln



^^ Thank you for your make-happy comments Shruti 🤗 We go back a long way, don't we?! I can't even remember what it was like writing PI, if I think now, sigh! Anyway, so to address your speculation above - well it wasn't Minnie calling him per se, but a call from his home to inform him about Minnie's fall - which would be Shehnaz Bi, since his mother's been in the hospital with Minnie without leaving her for a moment, as Aman told him.


And to answer your other question, formally I'm only a high school graduate on English?! Lol! Given that I'm an engineering graduate and a Ph.D. candidate in Applied Physics now! They don't seem to care so much about our English/ or linguistics as such, with only lasers to talk to, in my lab 😆 but thank you very much - it makes me happy to be mistaken for something else too! ☺️

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RT, Fri - thanks a bunch ladies 🤗

Everyone - just to leave a quick note here, so I still intend to post the part like I said yesterday, but I do have some annoyingly essential but jaded routine errands to run for this evening after work. And then pack in the night for my next fortnight of travel. So just in case you don't see the update tonight, you can be sure it will be there at max by tomorrow evening. That's like my extra delay limit to the max. Meanwhile - very encouraged by the quick replies, so shall keep my word

cheers,
NJ


@ pink : Yea I am also confused at first which stream u r in, Ur writing style and the fluency to play with linguistics is quite contrasting with ur knowledge of science subjects, ( i don't had any intention to hurt any science people )but at the end i am happy that u chose to write at this forum...😊

@ blue : hint is taken and brain had given signals but would rather want to know it from ur writing.😊 .

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