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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: bollygirl87

Awesome Neha...

..i don't mind u ending this fan-fic...until...u start another one!!


😆

i did sweetheart its called Khel Khel Main

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Posted: 19 years ago
omg omg omg!!!! pregnant...i seriously cried in the upper half of the part today lol it wus awesome!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 🤗..

Neha u r a sweetheart..muahhh..I knew it ..Kris will have a sis soon..omg u made ma day..beautiful part..so cute!!..very touchy..romantic...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😳😆😳..

It was gr8..our Juliet & FBI Romeo finally live in peace & love..😳😆..lekin yeh 2 our 4 more parts ka kya chakkar hai..?😉😆..anyways m very happy about it neha u can continue this fan-fic more 100 parts if u want i don't mind..😳..

continueeeeee soooonn...

ohh yes Santa Clauss is the BEST..😆..

lots of love

pink😳

P.S:...will start to read ur new fan-fic right now..woderful gift THANK UUUUUUUU

Edited by pretty girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Evee

Neha that was an amazing part!!! very romantic!!

and santa clauses baby?lolzzzzzzzzzz that was hilarious 😆 😆 😆

lol ya, i tried my best to make him look worried and her irratated.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty girl

Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 🤗..

Neha u r a sweetheart..muahhh..I knew it ..Kris will have a sis soon..omg u made ma day..beautiful part..so cute!!..very touchy..romantic...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😳😆😳..

It was gr8..our Juliet & FBI Romeo finally live in peace & love..😳😆..lekin yeh 2 our 4 more parts ka kya chakkar hai..?😉😆..anyways m very happy about it neha u can continue this fan-fic more 100 parts if u want i don't mind..😳..

continueeeeee soooonn...

ohh yes Santa Clauss is the BEST..😆..

lots of love

pink😳

P.S:...will start to read ur new fan-fic right now..woderful gift THANK UUUUUUUU

Lol, your going to have me after this next part. 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Pyaar Ka Pal: Part 52

Kripa was eight months pregnant when she found out that she will have complications during her deliver. She would be delivering almost any day now and Angad is worried. Not for his child, but for Kripa.

Angad is sitting in his room, his head in his hands when Kripa comes in. She closed the door behind her and walks to Angad. She can tell he has been crying for a long time now. She places a shivering hand on his shoulder and he looks up at her. Kripa looks at him for a few seconds and then sits in his lap and wipes his tears.

"I'm sorry I'm heavy," she whispers putting her head on his shoulder.

"No your not."

Kripa kisses him and makes him face her. "Angad don't worry. Nothing can happen to me. I'm not going to leave you like this so soon."

"Kripa, your impossible. I'm so serious, aur tumko maazak sooj raha hai?" Kripa moved beside him and tucked her self under his arm.

"Then don't be serious Angad. No one can part us. And, you know doctors they like to scare us. Don't worry, I'm going to be fine, and so is your daughter." Kripa smiled at Angad, and he finally smiled back placing his hand on Kripa's large belly.

"I love you Kirpa."

"I love you too."

*******

Angad is pacing the lobby of the hospital, he can hear Kripa screaming and crying in pain.

Kripa's labor pains started about three hours ago and she's still there. The doctors are worried they might have to operate her, and maybe they can only save one person. Either Kripa or their daughter. Angad, insists on saving Kripa while Kripa is insisting on saving their daughter. Angad knows well that if anything happens to Kripa he will never be able to love her daughter. She will never get the love, care, and attention that she is suppose to get.

Angad noticed Dadi and Shahid coming his way. But before they could talk to him a doctor came rushing out. "Mr. Khanna."

"Yes doctor?"

"I'm sorry but…"

"But what doctor??"

"We can only save one person. And, you have to decide who."

"That's a silly question of course my wife." Angad yelled. He grabbed the papers from the doctors hand and singed them. The doctors rushed back in and Angad turned to Shahid and Dadi.

"Why is this happening to me? What did I do wrong?" Dadi hugged Angad and he cried.

"It's ok beta. And, I'm proud that you decided to save Kripa. You can have your child again but Kirpa isn't going to come back. Believe in you Angad, and leave everything else to god." Angad left Dadi stood near Kripa's door.

***********

Hours passed and no one would tell them anything. Angad was scared to close his eyes and therefore didn't sleep all night. He had decided if anything happened to Kripa he would die himself. After, years of waiting he got Kripa. No way in hell could he loose her now. And, that to specially for someone he has never seen before. He possibly couldn't love his daughter more that Kripa. The same Kripa who he has loved from almost eight years now. How could he possibly sacrifice Kripa for someone who has never seen, talked to or touched.

Anagd was thinking about this for only one reason. He didn't want to think otherwise. He wanted to say determined about his decisions.

He wiped his tears and saw the doctors come out. Angad quickly rushed to them. "Doctor my wife?"

"Mr. Khanna we could---" Angad didn't let them finish and ran into her room. There he saw Kripa laying on the bed. She was sleeping, she was alive. Anagd knew this because he saw her stomach expand upwards and then flatten again. He smiled and slowly walked to her.

He sat on the bed beside her and slowly caressed her hair. Kripa shifted her head and then slowly opened her eyes. She looked at Angad who was crying.

"I told you I wouldn't leave you so easily!" They both smiled weakly.

Angad bent down and kissed her, "I love you Kripa."

"I love you too." Angad looked at her for a few seconds and then slowly laid down beside her and hugged her tightly crying.

His crying froze Kripa. She realized she hadn't seen her baby. She felt Angad's grip tighten as he cried in her arms. "Angad…" She said in a shakey voice. But, Anagd didn't reply. "Angad…" she said again.

"Angad, for gods sake talk to me." But she only felt him holding her tighter.

"Angad, where is my daughter??" All she heard was Angad crying

I know this is the shortest part in the whole fan-fic but i wanted to leave the suspence. 😛

Neha

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Posted: 19 years ago

Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa slapppppppppp..😡😡..

HOW COULD U DO THIS????😡😡..I WAS SO HAPPY THAT KRIS WILL HAVE A SWEET SIS...I WAS DREAMING ABOUT IT & UUUUUU..U SPOIL IT ALL..U MADE MY ANGUU CRYY😡..

Neha plzzz this is the second time i beg u plzzz plzzz don't kill that sweet, cute ,pure kidd she hasn't see yet the world..U can't do this..u simply can't ...u will end this fan-fic with an Super-duper cute family..& an extra-romantic scene & without any tear in a/k eyes...PROMISE ME..??😊..am asking u too much, kyan??..NO i don't..u have to promise me...

Nehaaaa ....plzzzz...pluz this stupid suspence i will can't sleep & dream about my FBI romeo.

continueee soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by the way..awesome parts..good work😳😆..

lots of love

pink😳😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
oh god neha its almost end and u becoming ekta now. jk. not fair but great part though hope u dotn mind my comments. loved the part continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty girl

Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa slapppppppppp..😡😡..

HOW COULD U DO THIS????😡😡..I WAS SO HAPPY THAT KRIS WILL HAVE A SWEET SIS...I WAS DREAMING ABOUT IT & UUUUUU..U SPOIL IT ALL..U MADE MY ANGUU CRYY😡..

Neha plzzz this is the second time i beg u plzzz plzzz don't kill that sweet, cute ,pure kidd she hasn't see yet the world..U can't do this..u simply can't ...u will end this fan-fic with an Super-duper cute family..& an extra-romantic scene & without any tear in a/k eyes...PROMISE ME..??😊..am asking u too much, kyan??..NO i don't..u have to promise me...

Nehaaaa ....plzzzz...pluz this stupid suspence i will can't sleep & dream about my FBI romeo.

continueee soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by the way..awesome parts..good work😳😆..

lots of love

pink😳😭

well i have another kritika in my life! 😆 Chill girl. You will find out soon. Relax, breath in and out!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: zarna

oh god neha its almost end and u becoming ekta now. jk. not fair but great part though hope u dotn mind my comments. loved the part continue soon.

Of course i dont mind the comments! I love them and cherrish them. You never have to say sorry, and trust me when i mind i will tell u in big bold letters to just shut-up. Dont worry.

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