NEW AR ff-journey of love ship(part 4-pg 7)21/5

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ok i will pinch my self for opening this topic,but its me finally getting courage and writing a ff on AR,my inspiration is from a telugu movie which i love,so any one find similarities then dont mind bcoz mostly it matches
here is the characters of AR

Riddhima gupta:she is a fashion designer,completed her education and had her own shop,she wants to be an independent woman,also wants to take care of her parents even after marriage,she is ultra modern,traditional,simple,stubborn,temper,naughty,bites her nails when she is tensed,thinks her self as queen some times and gets all she wanted😆 but at the same time she is proffesional,her nick name is ridhz,but in home her mom and dad call her as zidhz(bcoz wo bahot ziddhi hain,so short form) which she dis likes,her parents want her to get marry while she continously dis agrees as she want to own her name,her parents are shashank and padma,she have a sister name nikita,she is studying B-tech,going to complete
k i dont think i can say ridhz character in sketch it self,if i started it never ends so dont misinterpret her character

Armaan mallik:well he completed his MBA,but he want to help people so he want to join in politics and help people but all think that he is wasting his time and education,its not he cant get job,he dont want to do fixed job which turns man in to machine with out heart,he is silent most of times and dont gentle men mannerism,money for luxeries,bcoz of this muskaan,his childhood friend,who prefered rahul over armaan,armaan likes muskaan but still he didnt mind muskaan marrying rahul as he thinks his ambitions are more important,he had only nani(riddhima ki nani from DMG),muskaan parents also decided to marry muskaan to rahul bcoz they thought that armaan cant make their daughter happy,also he never shake hand with girls always salute them in typical style which it self proves that he is not interested in them.
i think i said his character sketch to an extent,ya he didnt have tattoes😆,i try to say from both sides
remaining characters and their nature will be said once i am talking about the character
one more thing both armaan and riddhima have pure hearts and want to help ppl,but the diff is ridhz want to self her self first and then she helps others(logically it is correct,dont u think)while armaan gives what ever he has with out thinking twice and later he him self gets in to trouble(tooooooo good at heart😆)

plzzzzzzzz main aapko warn kar rahi huin,plz say me if it is nice also say me if it is not nice,kam se kam dusre log toh baj jate hain😆
nervously typing,
swetha😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy dear,
nice concept
do continue soon

love Riddss
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riddss

heyy dear,
nice concept
do continue soon

love Riddss


thanks,i will update tommorrow
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Shweta...it sounds nice..
Armaan wanz 2 bcum a politician..n he liked Muskaan! 😲..bt RM r made 4 each oda!
n Ridz wans 2 keep her parents happy..n dusnt wanna marry..cool..
i havent seen any telgu movie..don eva unnersan..so i guess i wont noe d concept b4..
Srry 4 d shrt comment
Update soon
-Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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INDEX
character sketch-page 1
part 1-page 1
part 2-page 3
part 3-page 5
part 4-page 7
Edited by bary - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey Shweta...it sounds nice..

Armaan wanz 2 bcum a politician..n he liked Muskaan! 😲..bt RM r made 4 each oda!
n Ridz wans 2 keep her parents happy..n dusnt wanna marry..cool..
i havent seen any telgu movie..don eva unnersan..so i guess i wont noe d concept b4..
Srry 4 d shrt comment
Update soon
-Aish


thanks aish,i know many dont know telugu and i want to change many bits and translate here
RM are made for each other for sure but here,rahul is some ought different,i hope many likes it,thanks for comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-1
A girl is sitting on the decorated bed with ghungat on her face which is filled with emotions like tension,fear,confusion.....so on,she is our beloved riddhima waiting for her so called suhaag raat😳😆
A guy enters the room and come near her and removes the ghungat on her face to see his beautiful wife,riddhima started the convo before the guy starts some thing which she regret later😆
ridhz:one min,i need to talk to u about some thing(OMG,this is not that easy)
guy:what,do u want to talk about ur love affairs?😉
ridhz:huh??😲 nahi(what's that,is it a way to talk,k ridhz cool,say what u want say)me and my sister are only daughters for my parents
guy:so,do u want me to arrange ur sis marraige?
ridhz:no(cant he wait till i complete)even we are daughter,my father treated us like his sons,never made us feel that we cant do any thing
guy:ok(all this non sense,is that imp now😕😆)
ridhz:studies,job(is he listening,once lifted her head to see his face,ya listening)self confidence,in every thing(oh no,y is he keeping his hand on mine)
guy:so
ridhz:so after marraige also i want to be with them(asked removing his hand from her hand)
guy:so do u want me to be in ur house(asked getting offended)
ridhz:no,its not that,i want to be near our house
guy:so what's problem in that
ridhz:and also we need to take care of them
guy:ya,we will(again keeping his hand on her shoulder,trying his best to cut the topic😆,so said with concern in his voice)did they have any health problems?
ridhz:hmmf(nodding her head quickly to say her disapproval,as the hand on her shoulder making her tense)plz let me say(trying to remove his hand again)
guy:no,let me start(said moving towards ridhz and closing the dist betn them)
ridhz:NO,PLZ,HEAR ME,NOOOOOOOOOOO
(ridhz jerked off suddenly from bed with sweat all over her face,thank god it is a dream,i cant even see his face,i mean i cant picturise any person,what ever,she get off from her bed and started walking towards hall,it is still 5 a.m.
sitting on dinnning table nikita is practising her formulas by reading it loud

nikita:Actually she doesnt have much part in this ff,but she seems like a little girl to me still like a college student,so i kept her as ridhz sister,she is studying B-tech and had a habit of reading loud her notes so that she can remember it,this habit of her irritates ridhz,even she loves her sis,cute little fights over small things always happen betn sisters,some times ,she also calls ridhz as zidhz just to irritate her,she is called as nikki
ridhz:nikki,pad rahe ho,ya pakka rahi ho(subah subah shuru hogayi,i know dream ka frustation us par nikal rahi huin)
nikki:ma,mujhe ridhzi ne nahi padne ko keh rahi hain(said smiling devilishly)
(riddhima is now sleeping keeping her head on dinning table)
(padma is in kitchen doing some stuff)

padma:she loves her daughter so much and given all the freedom they want and allow them live their dreams,she want riddhima to close her shop where she designs her clothes and get marry soon and settle in her life,but she doesnt force her,but kabhi kabhi emotional black mail jaroor karti hain😆
padma:riddhima beta tum uth gayi
ridhz:nahi ma,main toh abhi abhi jaagi huin(said irritatingly)
(padma smiled at this)
padma:jaldi tayar ho jao,mujhe mandir le jaana hain,roz tumhare papa hi le jaata haina aaj tum le jao(said ordering her)
(ridhz eyes popped out suddenly,no,if i did bath then saree aur itni subah subah saree,nahi😕😆ridhz invloved in her own assumptions,think,ridhz,think)
(shashank listened the convo and felt relief that today he is saved from getting up quickly😆,also went back to sleep again so that he will not be invloved in the emotional black mail)

shashank:he too loves his daughter and made them feel like they are his sons rather daughters,but there is typical father in him also wants to get ridhz to get marry,live with her husband happily,so he always says this to riddhima
(IDEA!!!ridhz went to kitchen and sat on the table there and started like she is going to help padma)
ridhz:ma,if u want lift,i will drop u,thats it,no more arguments,dont say me to bath and tie sarrie,also this is only bcoz dad is doing a lot of work,dont keep rules for ppl who are helping also9hoping her plan works)
padma:riddhima aaj 1st hain,sochlo koi zaroorat padegi(said smiling,not today ''meri beti'')
(marwaan diya,bhootni thought scloding her mom and also her fate)
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riddhima is adjusting her saree in temple for 50th time now😆 even after padma reassured her that she is fine
ridhz:ma mujhe Rs.5000 chahiye(asked requesting,1st ka asar😉)
padma:kyun,tumhe kyun yeh sab beta,shaadi kar lona(phir se shuru hogayi)
ridhz:ma,jab bhi kuch bhi poocho shaadi ki baat par aati ho(said pouting) jab mera collections world famous ho jayegana ab dekh loongi tumhe(now said proudly)
(riddhima praying god closing her eyes,plz god,let me get one customer and i get a deal and my collections become world famous,i will get millions,😕noooo this is too much,just sapna ke liye Rs.3000,shop rent Rs.7000,clothes order ke liye Rs.10,000,plzzzzzzzz)😆

p.s.k,i dont know how u guys feeling,but i am feeling so weird,i dont know how it come,especially my hindi,so all hindi pandits over there,plz say me,so that i can correct my hindi,AR meeting thoda late hoga,plz i also want to write their meeting fast,but i cant help,next part is fully about armaan,plz comment,even it is bad
swetha😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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updated guys,plz comment nahi choon choon ke maar roonga😆
Edited by bary - 16 years ago
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wow yaar relax karo this is the bestest ff pls pls countinue soon 😃
amna

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