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reema

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

hey interesting FF...and calm down itz not bad..

itz really nice!!

cant wait to read more....

continue soon n plz add me in ur pm list!!

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

PART-2
armaan:i did engineering in mumbai and did MBA in london,ujhe aapki leader ke saath appointment chahiye
politician:kyun
armaan:sir,mujhe politics main interest hain,mera papa bhi sab ko madad karte hain aur main bhi sab ko kuch na kuch karna chahta huin
politician:sab main top kiya,itna padha lika hoke,politician hona chahte ho?(said wondering about this guy,he can get a nice job with good salary then y this one)
armaan:sir plz aap appointment di jiye bus
politician:ok,do mahine baad aana(said irritatingly)
armaan:theek hain,sir,time??
politician:theek hain?tum sach much aaoge😲😆(asked shockingly)
armaan:yes,aap plz time bata dijiye
politician:nau baje(who still can believe he is actually coming after 2 months)
armaan:aap note kijiye sir main aaonga do mahine baad
(left the place leaving the shocked politician)
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here are some intro again😆

vijay&ananya:they are muskaan's parents,vijay dont want her daughter to get marry to armaan as he is not settled,ananya like armaan but she want her daughter to be in nice house so she didnt argue with vijay,actually they didnt have much part,but they did come some times,i dont like the name billi so changed it😆

nani:she is armaan's nani,she is upset with vijay and ananya for fixing marraige with other guy not armaan but adjust her self when armaan says he is fine with it,even she didnt have much part but just when i say to get an idea

rahul:he is a police officer,strong,confident,well over confident,true gentle men,he thinks he is always right and others are wrong,he thinks helping poor ppl is making them lazy,he is going to marry muskaan

muskaan:she is simple n confused girl who obeys her father's word and also getting marry to rahul,she likes armaan but she wants a perfect gentle man who gives her gifts,pamper her which armaan is not,she learns indian dance which armaan adores a lot,she always confuse in her life many times,hope she took a right decision of marrying rahul😕
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(armaan went to muskaan's house asusually,his uncle vijay is coming with a guy)
vijay:oh armaan!yeh rahul
rahul:let me guess,u are muskaan's friend
armaan:haan(is he here to see muskaan)
rahul:nice meeting u
armaan:ya me too(with a plastic smile)
(armaan directly goes to muskaan's room,muskaan is taking off ornaments)
armaan:hi muskaan
muskaan:hi,how's meeting(asked still continuing her work)
(armaan now sits on her bed as he is always comfortable from his child hood with muskaan)
armaan:nice,called after two months
muskaan:and u will go?they may just said it bcoz they want to send u out
armaan:ofcourse i will go,i want to try it again if not him,i will try another source
(muskaan tried to cut it there so kept her self quiet,armaan saw the teddy bear which he gifted to muskaan when they are young lying on floor)
armaan:y did u throw my gift?(asked feeling sad)
muskaan:i didnt throw,i just kept there(said defendingly)
armaan:ya,priorities changes some times with time(said in sad tone)
muskaan:oye!dont do much melo drama,it is still my fav teddy bear(said dragging it from his hand)
armaan:so,how is ur hero?
muskaan:have u seen him?(asked thrillingly)
armaan:haan,do u like him(asked curiously)
muskaan:papa ko pasand hain
armaan:i asked about u
muskaan:Armaan!i dont know any thing,he just came na,so dont ask me any thing)
(muskaan cell vibrated and she gets sms)
armaan:have u given ur phone no.?
muskaan:haan(feeling embarresed)
armaan:shall we have coffee?(trying to be normal)
muskaan:now,mood nahi hain
armaan:isiliye toh pooch rahi huin
muskaan:hmmm,change karke aati huin,tum jao
(muskaan closes door and read the sms from rahul ''do u like me madam?''
she replys ''lets see sir'')
(here armaan confronts his uncle vijay)
vijay:nani,kyun nahi aayi?
(armaan doesnt answer anything)
vijay:gussa hi hongi,rahul police officer hain,ache kaandan se hain(armaan sees him angryly)mujhe villain jaisa mat dekho,i am not forcing muskaan
armaan:u dont force her but says things against me and broke her heart
vijay:i should look after future na,it is my duty to give to nice person who can look after her
armaan:how much i want to look after ur daughter(asked irritatingly)
vijay:first u should have a good job,society main naam hona chahiye,u should be rich enough to fulfill her wishes,what u have?haan,i didnt see a confused person like u,if u have any money in ur hand u are ready to give charity same like ur father.
(armaan now started walking outside as he cant take any more,muskaan also comes from her room)
armaan:bye aunty,lets go muskaan
(ignoring his uncle's comment)
vijay:u have a bank balance of 5 lakhs atleast?(pressing the word atleast)
armaan:one min,muskaan
(armaan once stopped and turn back)
armaan:bank balance is is for ppl who cant earn,i can earn any time,i can earn 5 lakhs now,will u marry me with muskaan?(said confidently)
(muskaan started talking him out side before some thing big happen)

p.s.i know it is worst part i cant help it,i am trying to take story as soon as possible,so bear this part,plzzzzz,also comment whether it is good or bad even i know it is not soo good
swetha😊

Edited by bary - 16 years ago

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: x!reema!x
hey interesting FF...and calm down itz not bad..
itz really nice!!

cant wait to read more....

continue soon n plz add me in ur pm list!!

thanks,updated second part,added in pm list😃