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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovebapu18

nice character sketch and intro!!

please do continue soon!!



Hey thanks for Commenting🤗

awww im glad u liked it! im so sorry for the delay but will post next part today!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey wonderful intro.Really interesting. Plz continue soon. Can u plz add me to ur PM list. Thanks



Hey thanks for Commenting🤗

awww im glad u liked it! im so sorry for the delay but will post next part today!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey everyone, I know i havent updated for soooo long but heres the next part, its not all that great but just bear with me assure u the next one will be a little more spicier!

Part 1

I am changing Surayabhans name to anand! Sorry because the face reminds me of anand I don't know why I named him suryabhan. LOL

Anand drops Rahul and gauri to secondary and Riddhima and kripa to Primary. When they get down.

"tum dono kuch bhool rahi ho?" anand tells them smiling as he drops them to the door.

They both turn back and remember, they run back & both kiss him on each cheek.

"Bye papa" they both say before running in.

That was there everyday routine, they used to kiss anand on his cheek everyday… he really loved them a lot!

*******************

Abhay kapoor, he was good looking and still single. He came to Malawi his elder brother's wedding, and while watching the video he notices a girl…

She was too pretty, he's eyes got glued on her… she was dancing in the wedding, in the mehendi party which was only female gathering. But seeing the video he decided to make her his.

They put the talk through kkussum's uncle…

He knew that anand would fuss for her meeting him so he decides to make them meet here without letting anand know.

They meet and talk for two hours… They tell eachother about there lifes and what they do… Abhay was really sweet and calm so kkussum fell in love with him instantly just the way he did. They enjoy each others company and they decide to go further with the relation. He meets anand, pammi, rahul, gauri, ridz and kripa and forms bonds with all of them. They get engaged… after engagement abhay returns to South Africa.

After six months is the wedding, and kkussum and abhay talk everyday on the phone. They do have small small arguments in between like: he forgot her birthday, he couldn't phone her because he was busy etc… but at the end all went well and six months passed.

First wedding in the Sharma house so full to dhamaal, masti was on. Visitors from London, America and Nairobi came, since pammi had a huge family. Anands mother, sister and brother in law had also come.

His sister Ruhi was a typical nand, she never got along with pammi, and she was lazy, but her husband sameer was very sweet, he would video every moment in the wedding house, he loved to take out videos! All the kids loved him, he would joke and play with them they called him sam. Anands mother Menaka- she was a typical saas and always put fire in the house, she loved her grandchildren but hated pammi… for some unknown reason!

The masti and dhamaal was full on, everyday for seven days they would be atleast 100 people in the house.

On the mehendi night;

Riddhima and kripa were playing outside with there friends.

"hey krips" shameera kripa's best friends shouts from the back and they hug. Shameera was kripas best friend but two months ago she shifted to a more expensive school St. Andrews primary school.

"shamz… I'm sooo happy to see you after so long, jabse shift hui hai you don't even come home"

"you know how it goes yaar, life's hectic"

"look at you so small and talking like that" kripa starts laughing.

"anyway, kripz check that guy… he's so cute na? he's in my class" kripa turns to see where she's pointing.

Angad khanna: 10yr old spoilt brat… he was bragging about something to his friends.

Kripa laughs "you find him cute?? Shamz whats up with you choice?" she chuckles.

Shamz gives her a angry glare "Kripzzz…"

"okay okay… so you like him? Look at your age yaar"

"kripz, you're still the same, the world is moving in front… and you're still here… all my new friends have BF"

she nodds her head "yeah I know about that school, anyways so who is he hun?" she raises her eyebrows teasingly.

Shamz blushes "angad Khanna, he's like the most popular guy in class…"

"oooh, angad" she teases.

"shut up kripz, ab tak to I haven't even talked to him" she says sadly.

"oooohhhh, shamz" kripa continues her teasing and shamz hits her arm.

"yahin dekh raha hai, chup kar" kripa turns to look and he was coming towards them. He was a little short and kind of fair, he's hair was gelled up in a style and he was dressed in expensive clothes.

He looks at kripa then at shamz "hi… Shameera right?"

She blushes "Yeah" she sticks out her hand, and he shakes it "angad"

"I know that!" "every girl in class is crazy for you"

"I know that" he smirks and gives kripa a blank look. She also returns a 'not bothered' kinda look cause she was so not interested, she was a total study freak… and book worm not the having boyfriends kind… and besides she really thought he was arrogant and a big show off to be 'her' friend. "shamz, I'll see you in a bit yeah" she says as she walks away. Angad and shameera sit and talk.

Kripa is going in annoyed and is stopped by sameer "hey kya baat hai, why is shona so upset?"

"kuch nahi sam uncle… im just hungry"

"oh okay, lets go eat baby" he carries her and tickles her… she laughs and they go to eat. Kripa loved her food, she couldn't live without eating proper food…

next day was sangeet:

all the sisters had planned dances, there neighbor and kkussums friend Harshini had taught them the dance. She was also supposed to dance but ditched them last moment since her uncles were there she wasn't allowed to dance. All the girls were close to her so they behaved as if she were there age. They practiced awara bawre from sapne and harshini was doing the lead.

"you always do that, not fair" gauri told her.

"ya you said you'll dance, now how do we do it alone?" riddhima commented.

"can I dance with you" kripa said childishly.

"no way… you'll spoil the whole dance" gauri panicked.

"no man let her dance, she can be behind and you can lead gauri" harshi suggested

"never mind, you've already ruined it" gauri replied.

"im sorry guys but I cant do it… please just do it!

Kripa watched them everyday and danced with them.

They were supposed to do it like harshi in the middle and gauri and ridz on either sides.

They finally agree and let kripa do it on one side that wont really be noticed!

They do the dance and everyone loves kripa's dance because she remembered all the steps.

Ridz does a play on jhoot bole kawaa kate with a cousin, she was totally embarrassed after doing it because her mami forced her to do it.

The other dance that ridz, kripa and two other cousins do is Bhena from hare Krishna hare ram.

Gauri does dandiya with seven other girls.

Finally came the wedding day:

Kripa met that annoying snob angad again because he was abhay's cousin and was invited.

He was standing outside by the sweets vendors with his friends. Kripa goes out to buy sweets as well. She buys sweets for her and riddhima and turns to leave but he stands in front of her "hi" he smirks, she looks at him angrily "hi" and starts to walk.

"hey tell me you name atleast" he screams, she turns and looks at him, twitches her nose and leaves. He gets really annoyed by her reaction, since all his friends were making fun of him.

Everything ends well, and rukhsati time… gauri, harshi and kripa cry a lot.

Kksussum starts her new life.

[Guys I know I didn't write this part nicely, actually I was just trying to finish up the stories so kripa and riddhima can grow up]


hope u liked it!


Precap: armaan and hiten entry. 4 years leap and more!


I've change armaan's character sketch a little bit because i didnt explain it properly before!

Armaan Malik: He's young and dashing and the naughtiest kid in school, he dropped out of school in class 9, simply not interested in studies... sometimes he can be very boring, hates crowd and his family is also very conservative and dont permit him to go out late nights and stuff, he used to go out alot with his friends in his teenage and also tried huqqa.. but now he is set to get married and set his family, he loves kids! he has two sisters and mother and father. He's father owns two car garages and one shop so he is quite rich!


Do comment/criticise!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great part.. continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part.. continue soon..



Hey thanks for commenting🤗

im glad u liked it!

will do!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice prt. Thanks for pm. Update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy dear,
nice part
kripa attitude was dame good
continue soon
thanks for PM.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awsome part.. Loved it. Plz continue tomorrow. Cnt wait. Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice story, looking forward to Hitens entry. Btw is his name Pratham or Hiten in the story? Please update soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb😊so sweet so Armaan is going to enter😉 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉
"Hold my hand and baby come to me,
I want you to know I gave you all of me.
I will be here for you always and forever,
don't ask me to leave for I will forsake you never.
My love for you is eternal and everlasting,
meeting you I consider to be my greatest blessing.
Let my love shine it's light upon you always,
I will be here for you on the good but especially on the bad days.
So go out now, into the world....
spread your golden wings and fly.
Every time I look up into the sky
and see an angel I will know it is you, flying high."

With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗

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