New AK-AR-RM FF:Pyar ka Bandhan! upd-pg8

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Hey everyone, Im back again with a new FF...

Well i know i've got three pending FFs and there not going anywhere at the momentšŸ˜† but i thought of making a new one, well this one is different because its a true story!

I had this story from loooong back but never wanted to post it but when i went to malawi i thought why notšŸ˜›šŸ˜› Its an awesome story of a family. I want all my FFs to finish together not one by one thats why im starting it now! The updates of this one will be much quicker then the others because i already know whats next, i dont have to think about it! there will be a little fiction to add spices but most of it is true.

I hope you Enjoy itšŸ˜‰!

Summary: well its a story about a Family and there trials in time. Its a story of a woman who spend her whole life with a man who never loved her only accused and doubted her, but she only cared for her five children and spend her life like hell😭. Its a story of a girl and her dreamsšŸ˜. Its a story of a boy who had to sacrifice his studies and enjoyment to look after his familyšŸ˜’. its a story of a girl who always stood up for her family and tried to become the boy of the familyšŸ‘šŸ¼. its a story of a sweet girl who believes Love will find a way but things changeā˜ŗļø. Its a story of a young girl who wants to fulfil her dreams, studyšŸ¤“ and get her prince charming, but when she finds him she tries to ignore it but then....

Its a story of a mother and her five children.

Heres the character sketch:

The Sharma Family:


Anand Sharma:


a very old fashioned man, who doubts any woman talking to a man. he never got along with his wife because he always done shaque. but they lived together for 20 years for there children but when kkussum got married he went to india (his hometown) and a astrologer told him to stay for good and he stayed, he called them after few months but pammi made the decision to live without him now.

Parminder sharma:

Shes joyful, sweet and loved by all. after separation from her husband she made sure her kids never feel that they dont have a father. shes supported them in every way and she means everything to them!

Kkussum Sharma

The eldest daughter of Parminder and suryabhan Sharma. She is sweet, lovable, friendly, caring and very understanding. She always stood by her mother and understood her. She always wanted to be an actress which was impossible because there family was very conservative.

Rahul Sharma:

The only son of Parminder and suryabhan sharma. he was very naughty in his childhood and very funny as well but since surya went away to India leaving his family rahul had the responsibility of his family, he left school at an age of 14 and started to work in there shop with his mother, which was later snatched and he had to work in a company. This made him tough and short tempered.

Gauri Sharma

The tom boy of the house. Very naughty, talkative and always upto something. She always wants to do something for her family. love and marriage were never on her books but one day she has to go!

Riddhima Sharma:

She's sweet, adorable and the naughty one. Kripa and ridz get along very well, when they were small they would play with dolls all day and dream that as there dolls find true love one day they will also! Ridz also got along well with gauri but they would fight alot aswell!

Kripa Sharma:
The youngest in the family so pampered by one and all. shes sweet, cute and mostly reserved. having seen her mom and dad never getting along she decides all man are like that and never wants to get married but deep down inside her heart she always wishes for her prince charming to come and take her away into a world of fantasies that she created with her dolls.


Abhay Kapoor:

Lived his whole life in SA, pretoria with his 2 brothers and mother. Hes kind hearted and down to earth. he and his family has suffered alot. when he was small his father remarried and moved to europe and left his mother to go crazy. Then they all worked, doing small small things like picking bags for people, cleaning, and then they had a small restaurant for black where the mother cooked and the sons served. but now there doing well lifes good, his mother wants him to get married.

Pratham Mittal:

He is a simple man living a simple life, also in south africa, Durban. he lives with his mother, father, 2 brothers and dadi.


Armaan Malik:

He's young and dashing and the naughtiest kid in school, he dropped out of school in class 9, simply not interested in studies... sometimes he can be very boring, hates crowd and his family is also very conservative and dont permit him to go out late nights and stuff, he used to go out alot with his friends in his teenage and also tried huqqa.. but now he is set to get married and set his family, he loves kids! he has two sisters and mother and father. also very rich!

Angad khanna:


he's hot and happening, his life is just awesome, living in malawi. his father is a multi-millionaire so his a spoilt brat. every girls dream... gets expelled from his expensive school and shifts to a cheaper one, but what happens then???



Tell me what you think about it.... Will post the first part tommorrow! Guys this character sketch is on the characters when they are big but the story will start with them being kids!

Luv
Nadz😳
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My other FFs:

Dil ke rishtey; on DMG cast mainly Kash, Kasu and RM!

An FF about relations made by heart!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1146827/ak-ff-chalte-chalte-updates-pg45

Chalte Chalte; on AK (Kyph)

A journey of love from the first meeting to marriage and further.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1143045/dmg-ff-dil-ke-rishtey-part-30-pg-143

Love will find a way; on Radhika-Dev and Ganga-Rishi.

A journey from meeting to friendship to love...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chhoti-bahu-sindoor-bin-suhaagan/1129949/ff-love-will-find-a-way-updated-end-pg13

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INDEX

INTRO - Page 2
PART 1 - Page 5

PART 2 - Page 8
Thank you note: Page 10

PART 3
PART 4



Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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nice character sketch an full family ff good wanna know moreeeeeeee do update soon and pm me if possiable
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add me to pm list
and cotninue soon
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heyy dear,
nice charter skecth
continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely intro dear...
Looking forward to another AK FF...
Pls Pm me when you update
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hey great intro... continue soon..

plzz pm when update next..
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Hey everyone,

Heres the first part of the FF. I was actually gonna start when they were all big then flashbacks but I thought it'd be better to start from start and move on. Its mainly an AK and AR love story, so They'll be more of them! Well all the guys and Muskaan will be introduced later on…. So please wait! In the actual story the age differences are high but I'll reduce them so it can progress faster!

Kkussum- 18 years

Rahul – 14 years

Gauri – 13 years

Ridz – 11 years

Kripa- 9 years

Okay I know rahul doesn't look bigger then gauri and ridz but I wanted him to be there and I guess this was the best role I could give him because muskaan wouldn't fit in the sisters and I wanted RM to be there! He just looks young!

Hope u like it!

INTRO

It was a bright sunny day in Malawi the warm heart of Africa. The sharma's house!

Well lets go in…

It was a average looking house, with nice but inexpensive furniture… Grey cloth sofas, a average size TV, wooden coffee table and wooden side tables, Grey curtains. The dinning area, it was eight seater wooden table, covered with a plastic table cover with fruits printed on it. Lets move to the rooms. It was a five bedroom house.

The first bedroom…

Pammi had just come out of the shower and Grimacing at her husband who was still fast asleep. She gets out and goes to the kitchen.

Kkussum is already there.

"arre kkussum tu uth gayi?"

"haan mom, aap aaram karo maine sab tayar kar liya hai"

She smiles at her caring daughter "tu mera kitna khayal rakhti hai, aur abhi mere aaram karne din nahi aaye… abhi to main jawaan hoon" she says and they both laugh.

The second room is Kkussum and kripas.

The room is nyc and big. There is wooden dresser with goldish formica which contained a cute pic of five of them and a few body sprays, perfumes, body lotion… and a double bed with a golden quilt and two golden heart pillows. Kripa was still fast asleep with the quilt over her head.

The third room was fool of food stuff and junk, being used as a store room.

The last room in the end of the passage…

Inside was two bunk beds, with a small table (being used as a dresser) a mirror on the wall in the middle of the two beds. On the first bunk bed (top) was a 14yr old boy with naughtiness clear on his face even when he's sleeping, the bottom was empty.

Second bunk bed… Gauri on top… she was sleep talking and moving her hands as in punching someone in her sleep. Down was riddhima, sleeping like an innocent angel… half eyes opened…

"Riddhima… Riddhima… RIDZI" kkussum shouts and shakes her a little to wake her up.

"hun… hun… Di aap?? subha hogayi??" she asks innocently as she tries to open her eyes.

"haan, chalo jaldi school ka time abhi ho jayega… jaldi jaake shower karle warna Rahul Guss jayega"

ridz gets up immediately… "oh no rahul gussa to sab ko late hogi" she quickly gets up and rushes to shower.

Kkussum just smiles and nodds her head behind her "gauri…

"haan si am awake… itna loud ridzi ko uthagi to uth hi jaongi na??" gauri is a light sleeper so a little noise and she wakes up, they both smile.

"cha lab jaldi tere kapre nikalle, main prince aur pricess ko utha ti hoon" they both laugh again. Kripz and rahul can sleep as long as no one disturbs them.

She goes to rahul "Rahul…Rahul" she shakes him a little.

"di mera pet bohot dard kar raha hai main school nahi jaa sakhta!" he says in a sleepy tone.

"rahul jhoot mat bol, chal jaldi uth warna papa ko bata doongi"

"okay.. okay uth raha hoon…" he gets up irritated, yawns and goes to brush his teeth.

"three down one to go…" kkussum smiles to herself.

"kripa… Kripa jaldi utho… chalo jaldi" she shakes her harder then the others.

"Di… mujhe bohot neend aarahi hai please thodi der sone do na…"

"kripa late hogayi hai… chal jaldi uth"

"okay.." finally kripa lazily gets up and lazily gets her clothes, still yawning… everyone is done and sitting at the breakfast table, but kripa is in the bathroom doing everything soooo slowly… she's too sleepy… finally she ons the shower and gets fresh. By the time she gets out everyone is done with breakfast and its already time to leave so she goes without breakfast.

"roz yehi karti hai, phir principal mujhe bula ke kehte hain isse kuch khilaya karo, roz ulti karti hai subha ko! Mom please kal isse jaldi uthana" ridz tells her mom irritated, because everyday kripa doesn't have breakfast and only half cup tea, so almost everyday she vomits at school (yellow one🤢🤢) then the principal calls ridz and tells her to feed her.

They all leave for school and anand goes to shop. Kkussum and pammi stay home.

Well that was the intro I hope u liked it! It was just telling you about each of them now tomorrow I'll post the first part!

Luv

Nadz 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice character sketch n nice intro.
Thanks for pm.
update soon.
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nice i loved it armaan is not a spoiled brat? is he rich? can u little expand armaan's sketch? i want armaan to be naughty please hehhehe oloved angad's character

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