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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys! I'm Mia (short for Lamia)...this is my first ff ever...
i've read soooo many amazing ffs on ar from all the extremely talented fanz....i'm sure my ff stands no chance wid deirs but i'm so inspired writing 1 after reading deirs so just thot of penning down my thoughts...therez no harm so i'm just giving it a try....
CONCEPT:
The story basically revolves around the most popular gang (not the violent types...just a frndz circle) in high skool. All members of the gang have their own personalities and a varried outlook towards their lives....as the stor moves on, a lot more will be unfolded about these characters....
CHARATER SCETCH:
Armaan Mallik (Karan Singh Grover)- Son of the richest industrialist of india but isn't close to his dad...but a complete mumma's boy...very pampered by his mom! Most popular dude of college....the hunk! All girls die over this basketball star...his cute dimples, million dollar smile, those deep sea green eyes jisme dubke laga sakte hai, and his chiselled drop-dead gawjus body add up to make him the most wanted guy in his skool....dusn't know wat career he wants to take up yet....lives life in a total bindaas manner! Believes in living every moment of life to the fullest instead of caring about tomorrow....
His best frnd cum bhai is our very own Atul...he also shares an xcellent rapporrt wid his buddy Rahul...Anji is his hommie and he lyks her the best among the girls in the group....according to him Muskan is also a sweet heart n very bindaas...sumone who can make neone laugh around her with her silly banters....last and the least on his list comes the sweet ridz...he knows that shez the sweetest girl around n thts what gets him anoyed on ridz...he feels that shez all sugary n fake but lil does he know that she's reeli a sweety pie...because of all these factors, these two fight a lot but we'll see if this fight and so-called hatred turns into luv....
Ridhima Gupta (Shilpa Anand)-Daughter of the world renowned neuro-surgeon, Dr. Shashank Gupta....filthy rich but never shows off her wealth! a comlete daddy's lil angel...pampered a lot by her dad. She's a very sweet, innocent and compassionate girl who cannot bear to see neone upset around her. she's very pretty n cute but not the atom bmb shell types...shez more lyk the girl-next-door types...she posseses sumthing that many girls die for but dun have it in them, natural beauty...sweetheart of the college n solves everyone's problems....many boys lyk her n want to go out wid her but yet she's not the most wanted girl of her skool unlike Armaan...but the point is that she usn't want to be one of those so called popular girls filled with attitude n make...she thinks lyk ne other modern girl wud but she also respects her culture n traditions...prefers comfortabe tees n jeans or capris...dusn't wear nething too revealing as her style statement is that always wear things u're comfortable in!
Best friends wid Muskan...both share each n every little detail about their lives wid each ofer n know one another better than they know themselves....Anjali's her elder sister n the bomb of the skool...but they both don't connect on the emotional level since both have completey diff. perpectives about life....Atul is lyk her older brother n pampers her a lot...sheloves him to bits n always supports his decisions....she can always cheer him up wen he's upset over sumthing...Rahul is also her buddyn she's very well aware of the fact that Rahul harboured feelings for her wen he was new in their group but wid time, this turned into thick fiendship....Rahul wud never let any harm cum on ridz as she's his lil doll....Ridz on the other hand always saves him from touble n covers up his ass...and at last Armaan.....ufffff that lil slimy jerk always gets on her nerves...she completely hates his way of handling situation n she thinks that his bigtime ego n attitude will take hm nowhere but down the drain....she alwayz fights wid him but sumtimes just feels this magnetic pull towards him...but she strongly refuses to believe that she's attracted to him....
guys this is it for today...i'll update the other character sketches too depending on yor responses....if i feel that u guys dun lyk this story en i'll stop right here n will try to come up wid sumthing better next time....so guys plz rate n comment....your views matter a lot....both critizism n appraisal are welcome:)
INDEX:
1st Character sketch-pg 1
2nd Character sketch-pg 2
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great character outline! cant wait to read it! plz cont soon! can u PM me when u do continue, if possible?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool character sketch!!! cant wait for more
please update soon!!!!
~anjie
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i loved it count me in...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haha Armaan is a very slimy HANDSOME jerk!😆
Character sketch looks gr8...The group is very well bonded!
Love to see what happens next =)
Continue soon...And pls PM me when u upd8!
-Marisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zhasan2

great character outline! cant wait to read it! plz cont soon! can u PM me when u do continue, if possible?

hey thnx for commenting...will be continuing in a short while....
will surely pm u...
thnx again....since u were the first one to reply!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: suvi_rox1

hey i loved it count me in...

yeah sure will pm u wen i update which is just about now:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Haha Armaan is a very slimy HANDSOME jerk!😆

Character sketch looks gr8...The group is very well bonded!
Love to see what happens next =)
Continue soon...And pls PM me when u upd8!
-Marisha

great u loved it Marisha....
yuppp Armaan's just one...will meet no one else lyk him...
wat a combe SHJ...hehe
will surely add u to the pm list:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgaddict

cool character sketch!!! cant wait for more

please update soon!!!!
~anjie

will update in a bit:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH 2:
Rahul Mehta (Mayank Anand): He is the son of NRI businessman Suresh Mehta and is xtremely close to his dad....his mother passed away giving birth to him....the only cild so gets whatver he wants but just lyk ridz he dusn't lyk to show off his wealth...very cute looking n the second most wanted guy of skool...blue eyes, sharp nose, spiked up hair, good body, very cute n caring....altogether a completely sweetheart cum hottie!
He is closest to Ridhima n Armaan the most in their group...Ridz was the one t introduce him to this wonderful group of frndz n since then, there's been no turning back for him....ridz is his lil angel now but used to be his secret crush before...now, he harbours no such feelings for her nemore as Muskaan has taken up that spot...Armaan on the other hand is his yaar...the one who he cud do all the guy talks wid...ask him to choose between Armaan n Ridhima, he'll just backout as both of dem r equal to him....Muski holds a very special in his heart....he's her secret admirer but never gets the guts to confess to her as she's the punjab di sherni....they always bicker wid one another! Anji's his buddy but sumtimes gets on his nerves for her rude behaviour towards ridz sumtimes n also oders in general...Atul's his great buddy n he shares a lot wid him:)
Muskaan Chadda (Dhrushti Dhami): Shez da fierce punjaban...no one messes wid the tigress n everyone knows better than to argue wid her....her full khnadan is back in punjab....she got the typical fun punjabi family....acts all tuf n strong frm outside but is very vulnerable frm inside n no one oder that ridz knows about the inner muski....she's bubbly, she's cute, she's chulbuli, but most of all she is a complete joker....har kisiko hasa ti hai....very pretty wid long curly hari...always wears kurtis or tops wid jeans....
Best fwend wid ridz....has to talk wid ridz right after waking up n right before going to sleep....widout sharing all that happens in their life wid each other, they can't go to sleep....luvz ridz to the cre n can never hide nething frm her...She can't stand Rahul or so it seems....in real, she just luvs to fight wid rahul n just needs an uxcuse to start talking to him but will never accept that....she used to think that rahul n ridz are seeing each other as they wud spend soooo much time wid each other but with time, she got rid of the misunderstandings...she dusn't exactly like Anji as she thinks anjali has too much attitude (which is tru)...about atul, she just thinks he's aorable...he's her dost!
Anjali Gupta (Sunaina Gulia): Here comes miss hottie....more lyk miss attitude! she's the babe of the skool...the dream of guys....elder daughter of Shashank but she knows Shashank luvs ridz more den her thus she finds her refuge wid nani....she ahs got a great body, sharp features, n good height...shez the micro mini kinda girls whoo go around wearing sluty clothes...she's all mean n everything to others but deep down shez a softie n only atul knows about that...not even ridz does!
Dating Atul....he knows everything about her.....her lil sis is ridz...although she acts all big n insensitive towards ridz she luvs her a lot....Armaan is her great frnd who dusnt judge her by her rude behaviour....Rahul's her closest frnd after Armaan....she dusn't interact much wid Muskaan despite the fact that shez her sister's best frnd....she thinks Muskaan's wierd n tooo much of a gavaaar:(
Atul Joshi (Pankit Thakkar): son of renowned child specialist, Dr. Omi....he's not his real son just adopted but this bring no difference to their relationship....both luv each other a lot! he's a plant luver....very sweet n humble....always cares for everyone around him....
Armaan is more lyk his bhai than his frnd....luvs him to the core n shares everything wid him....ridz is his younger sister....treats her wid a lot of luv n care....Anji's his bettter half....he knows anji better than neone else...he knows the ral her n is trying to bring her out of the I'm-miss-perfect shell! Rahul n Mukaan r his buddies....if he needs ne sorta entertainment or needs to cheer up his mood, he knows who to go to....
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